Just one word FABππ amazing where do u get such good ideas n conceptπ loved ithank specially for pmπ³π
Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen
Amazing update
CH 1
Awesome !!Haha ! what a first meeting ! and he even has an impression about her as the girl who was demanding extra chocolate at the counter ! ππ Too soon to make impressions about others , right ? ππOoo .. they both are snappy .. Takkar barabar ki hai ! πohkay.. Seems that Kabir is about to trust her .. And wrong signal .π Looks can be deceptive .. Kabir surely got confused when Ananya came to him when maybe he was expecting someone else !πSomeone is falling in love !ππ Sure she herself is going to be a big challenge for him πPakki dosti hai ! Ananya aur Ronnie ki ofcourse π Sarcasm .. really !.. (I like sarcasm alot !π³)Haha ! Ananya , the confident girl is fumbling ! π³πHahahaha! kabir can be .. fun !π he teased her so much .. i can imagine her face ! πWow ! and she got the job !! Sure he couldnt leave a girl as talented as her !Thanks for the pm !!π Great job Karma !Loved the update !Sorry for the late comment ..
CH 2
Amazing !Ananya lost ! Kya ho gaya !π²Oh wow ! Her story is going to be covered ! Lovely ! Things are going so fast ! πAww! maska lagana chal raha hai doston ke beech ..πHeated convo .. oh whats going on ? Thank god here comes Kabir to the rescue !πHaha ! kabir ke samne aake kaun apne shabd nahi bhoolta !πAh ! expectations hurt .. and also leads to disappointment .. yaa, poor Ananya .. But Ronnie hai na ! woh ghar drop kar dega !!πSuperb update ! πGreat going Karma !! π
Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
'Splendid'.The chapters have been crafted out with extreme fluidity.The cases are intriguing.:)eagerly awaiting for the twists and snide sarcasm updates .
Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.:)
It was an awesome update..ππΌI liked it.!
Ah..I love reading cases..very glad that you have brought a case in here too..And well, it was good..
How did Ananya manage to bring Ri to the office..? and Zaara..her inputs will be lot helpful, i guess. But who was at her door..? Sheena?
Amidst all this Ananya and Kabir's scenes were too good..πfrom flirting-shirting to seedha angry young man..to being jealous..wah..wah.! I liked reading the transformations.
Ananya..her banters were cute and her reactions seeing a different Kabir was worth watching (reading I mean).π
Continue soon..thanks for pm.. waiting to know more.
@Shree: I know you are busy but still..Just to remind you I'm waiting for RI update.
Originally posted by: Manyata5
This was every bit of what i call awesome!
Thanks for the pm or else i would have missed such happening update!I owe you one for that..Amazing yaar..I cannot stop thinking who that 'aap' might be!So cont soon and dont forget me this time...Love you
Originally posted by: aaliya9872
I really loved it I can only imagine how the whole scene turns upto be I just loved it a gush of excitement rushed through my nerve while reading ur update eagerly waiting for the next one
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