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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok... Your ff is amazing! I ead all the parts in one go, and I'm just awestruck... You're an amazing writer!!! If it's possible, plz PM me with the next update, and please continue as soon as possible!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jazzi7

Ok... Your ff is amazing! I ead all the parts in one go, and I'm just awestruck... You're an amazing writer!!! If it's possible, plz PM me with the next update, and please continue as soon as possible!


Thank you jazzi...please send me a buddy request, that way its easier for me to send all pm's together...



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Posted: 9 years ago
Ananya ruined the whole room
But kabir tackled her in his own way
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ananya ruined the whole room
But kabir tackled her in his own way
Continue soon dear[/QUOTE

Thanks Priya, I will try to update in few hours...my brain works when others sleep lol 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wah kabir , Tumne office bhi purchase kerliya, now this story became more interesting. Thanx to Miss Ridhi.
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Originally posted by: KochharDeepak26

Wah kabir , Tumne office bhi purchase kerliya, now this story became more interesting. Thanx to Miss Ridhi.



Deepak tu kyon padh raha hai yeh story, I am feeling so embarrassed...yeh sab tum logo ke liye nahin hai...upar se tere messages on whasapp about everything you are reading, is making me blush😳 Dayaa karo prabhu meri khadus, unromantic wali image hai aap sab ke dimaag main...mat bigaado usko is story ko padh ke...😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice Ridhi. I really liked this story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting for the update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi guys I am back...I will try my best to write a romantic one but, feeling embarrassed lol

Part 14:

After the dinner, Kabir went into his huge cupboard and grabbed a t-shir, wore it and went out the room. Ananya quickly finished her dinner, and thought to freshen up as she was still wearing that Lehenga from the wedding, and was feeling uncomfortable in it...And it was a good time as Kabir was not in the room...

She quickly rushed into a lavish Bathroom that was size of a big hall, and she decided to take a nice bath...After taking the bath, she quickly wrapped herself in a white towel, and went out because she had left the Lehenga outside, and she didn't have change of clothes...

As she walked to the bed in a towel where the Lehenga was lying, just than Kabir entered the room with ladies night dress in his hand...He just couldn't believe his eyes, seeing Ananya in front of him in a towel, and water dripping from her hair...He just starred at her, and couldn't take his eyes off of her...Ananya too was shocked to see him there, and was frozen in the position she was in seeing him there with her eyes wide open...

Kabir was finding it very hard to take his eyes off of her, both were lost in each other's eyes, and were frozen in their positions...

Note: Song playing (from movie Gunah (watch it only if you are old enough l...its too bold as it represents the feelings of Kabir and what he wants to do to Ananya seeing her like that, and to some extent also Ananya's fear as to what he could do: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8giuUOxlThA)

Kaisi hai yeh deewangi (Kabir's line in his thoughts)
Kaisi hai yeh dil ki lagi (Ananya's line in her thoughts)
Kaisi hai yeh deewangi (kabir while staring intensely at her)
kaisi hai yeh dil ki lagi
dil kehta hai yehi ruk jaye pal, tere mere pyaar kaa
Saajnaa, Sajnaaa

Ananya looks away from him, and looks down...as she is unable to deal with his intense gaze...Kabir knew if he stayed there, he was going to lose control...so he walks out the door and locks the door from outside...and he stands on the other side of the door, his back towards the door from outside, rubbing his hand through his hair, and trying to face his demons...and calming himself down...Ananya is standing on the other side of the door, her back is to the door, and she also breaths heavily and thinks about what could have happened...

(Both going through lot of emotions on either side of the door, and breathing heavily, while song plays in the back ground depicting their emotions)
Har tarf ek tufaan sa hai kaise sahil milega...
Bekhudi bhi bachayegi kab tak, kab talak dil jalega...
manaa mushkeel hai aashiqui...
yeh ishq hi to hai zindgai,
dil kehta hai yehi ruk jaye pal,
tere mere pyaar kaaa...
Sajnaa, Sajnaa...

Ananya quickly changed into the gown that Kabir had in his hand when he had come in, and decided to sleep before he came in...She was very nervous with what just took place, and she could read his eyes, and his inner turmoil through his eyes...She just didn't want to face him, so she lied down, covering herself, but, as she lied down, and turned off the lights, she felt his presence, and she was very nervous and scared about what could take place...She quickly pretended to sleep (just like in the song)...Kabir was just standing behind her close to the bed, while she laid on the opposite side in the gown brought by him, and pretended to sleep...he just stood there and watched her intensely, not being able to take his eyes off of her...

(song continued to depict their emotions)
Darde dil mein kitna mazza hai, deewane dil jante hain...
dil deewane hote hain, kehna nahin mante hain...

He thought she was sleeping, and so he sat on the bed beside her...
Song continued to play:
Dube rehte hain pyaar mein, khoye rehte hain khayal mein,
He came close to her face, and he caressed her face with his hands...
Dil kehta hai yehi ruk jaye pal, tere mere pyaar kaa...
Sajnaa, sajaannna...
And as he kissed her forehead but, when he did that, she tightened her eye lids, and grabbed on to the pillow cover tightly...And that didn't go unnoticed by him...He understood she was still awake...And understood her nervousness and fear, and whispered to her "I am sorry" and moved away from her...

And slept on the other side of the huge bed facing away from her...
Ananya looked at his back, his eyes were still open on the other side...It was hard for him to control but, he did, and dozed off to sleep...While Ananya stared at his back for a while, smiled realizing how gentlemanly he was, and went off to sleep...


To be continued...


This is a short scene guys...
I just wanted to show that sometimes words may not be spoken, words may not be expressed, words may not be felt as much as the silence between two people...sometimes Silence speaks louder than the words...


I know don't kill me... lol


Just leave your comments, likes etc...and to get the feel of this scene, just hear the song in the back ground and feel the lyrics lol...dont see it, otherwise, it will ruin it lol :D



Edited by paagalbandar - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
You are really testing patience of my Kabir 😆😆😆...such a tease 😛😆 really wonder how he is controlling himself 😛😆 must be a man of steel 😆😆😆😆 & seriously a gentleman 😆😆 though that doesn't get him away from what he did 😆😆😆😆 kidnapping miss kashyap 😛😆😆😆

wonder whats next day ooops I mean next UD gonna bring for them 😛




p.s --All the best for a good teasing by best friend aur?? 😆😆😆 my support to you 😛😆
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