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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi

Fantastic chapter dear


thank you GouriπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aa Gale Lag Jaa (1973 film). The film had many popular songs such as "wada karo nehi choroge tum mera sath", "jane tu ya jane na" etc. Sorry for my late reply.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sona29

Aa Gale Lag Jaa (1973 film). The film had many popular songs such as "wada karo nehi choroge tum mera sath", "jane tu ya jane na" etc. Sorry for my late reply.



Haha i wasnt even born than 1973 lol hehehehe...Infact mom and dad didn't even know each other back than hahahaha...I was still in the skies, waiting to be dropped on earth, or maybe i was still in my past life hahahhahah...anyways, enough of my life story lol, i will go and check out on you tube...no idea about songs either...Thank you for replying πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg...
kya idea nikal.
smart and logical.
its really good to see that u did not create any filmy drama.
and ...
FINALLY KABIR SHARMA IS IN LOVE.
he is still unaware but...
awsome.
thank u for pm.
update soon.
keep smiling.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krazykaju

omg...
kya idea nikal.
smart and logical.
its really good to see that u did not create any filmy drama.
and ...
FINALLY KABIR SHARMA IS IN LOVE.
he is still unaware but...
awsome.
thank u for pm.
update soon.
keep smiling.


Thanks kaju:) always appreciate you guys commenting...

Dude that question bothered me, i had heard about this body heat thing in hindi tv serial, and than one of the people here said, it was in old movie too...So I was like if thats the only ilaaj according to indian TV doctors, than why body heat only from man...women can also give lol hahahahhahahhaπŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read both chapters in one go...
And both are mind blowing
First one is quite a thriller
I loved your way of essaying character's emotions in such tough situation
And the second one is actually romantic
I loved the Kabir
He could take advantage of situation but he didn't.

You are an awesome writer

And your knowledge about Hypothermia is completely correct and it must be otherwise kisi ka kam ho jayega..After all, you are a doctor.
Hypothermia occurs in five stages
I remembered a case nearly three years ago. A man has stuck with this problem and he was cured by ECMO.
Body heat jaisa to kuch nahi tha...Even I asked my doctor aunt about it.
She giggled for few minutes and then she finally told me that these things are just a complete bullshit...Agar aisa hone laga na..to koi doctor ke pas nahi jayega

Now,
Update soon and also Pm me nxt part
Thank u so much for PM...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KaYa_licious

I read both chapters in one go...

And both are mind blowing
First one is quite a thriller
I loved your way of essaying character's emotions in such tough situation
And the second one is actually romantic
I loved the Kabir
He could take advantage of situation but he didn't.

You are an awesome writer

And your knowledge about Hypothermia is completely correct and it must be otherwise kisi ka kam ho jayega..After all, you are a doctor.
Hypothermia occurs in five stages
I remembered a case nearly three years ago. A man has stuck with this problem and he was cured by ECMO.
Body heat jaisa to kuch nahi tha...Even I asked my doctor aunt about it.
She giggled for few minutes and then she finally told me that these things are just a complete bullshit...Agar aisa hone laga na..to koi doctor ke pas nahi jayega

Now,
Update soon and also Pm me nxt part
Thank u so much for PM...




Thank you dear...Glad you like my writing
lol, hopefully I know how to treat hypothermia, otherwise, my patient will need Kabir or an old lady πŸ˜†
Actually I just shared because, even in common Indian people, this is the misconception present that when someone's body temperature drops, you should warm their hands and feet...Its the biggest mistake you will ever do in your life...so figured just share it with everyone here, so at least some people know what not to do πŸ˜†

Thanks again for liking the story...
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Hi hi. Shashi Kapoor was my grandmom's fav actor. my parents were in school then. Very recently this movie was shown in a National TV clannel. Thats why I vividly recalled the story.
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Hello guys, its 3 am and i can't sleep because of killer migraine...so figured in dark, I should write the next update...Bare with me, as my brain is overtiring right now...
Part 11:

Kabir and Ananya reached Delhi. Kabir's driver was already present at the airport with his security car right behind his personal vehicle. Kabir just went into his car without giving a second look at Ananya, and left from the airport...Ananya was shocked at his behaviour as she expected him to at least offer a ride to her...Finally, she decided to catch a taxi, and went home...

Next morning, both Kabir and Ananya were back to KKN. Kabir however was not paying any attention to Ananya, he was completely oblivious to her presence. Ananya was in her little cabin doing her work...She wanted to apologize to him for misunderstanding him but, she was just not getting any chance as Kabir was busy.

She tried several times but completely failed as Kabir was busy with one meeting after another. Finally it was an evening time, Malvika came into Kabir's cabin. Malvika used to former owner's daughter was still working as senior exec at KKN. She had her eyes set on Kabir as she knew about his wealth, his reputation, his success and achievements...She just wanted to impress him at any cost, and be involved with her..

She came into Kabir's cabin, and started to do small talks with kabir. Kabir wasn't interested but, as soon as he saw Ananya coming towards his cabin, he also started flirting with Malvika. He was in no mood to forgive Ananya, or even let her talk to him. He was quite pissed off and disappointed that she thought of him like that. He knew he didn't give her the right impression, and his image was not that great either, but, still for her to think that he would take advantage of her when she was unconscious was way beyond what he could handle...

Kabir was doing full on flirting with Malvika, when Ananya entered his cabin.
Kabir didn't even acknowledge her presence, and continued to talk with Malvika.
Ananya: excuse me sir...Its quite late, I just need your signature on this file before I leave...
Kabir: (looked in her direction) can't you see Ms. Kashyap I am busy here with Malvika. come later.
Ananya: But sir, its very late...
Kabir: (looked at her with anger) maine kahaa na baadmein aayega...
Ananya: (got very angry for his behaviour) fine sir, but just to let you know, this is the file for next project meeting which is to happen early tomorrow morning...when you get free, just sign it at your own convenience, I am leaving...She left the file on the table, and left...
Kabir was shocked at the way she behaved with him in front of Malvika...He just watched her leaving opened eyed...
Malvika: (sensing the tension) I will take your leave Kabir, see you tomorrow...
Kabir: (he just nodded and to himself) how dare she behave like this with me...first she makes a mistake, doesnt apologize, and give me attitude...what does she think of herself?

Ananya on the other hand went home. When she was alone at night, lying on her bed thinking.
Ananya (to herself): pata nahin apne aap ko samajhte kya hai...subeh se unse maafi mangne ki koshish kar rahi hoon, aur mujhe mauka hin nahin de rahe hain...aur upar se us chipkali se chipak rahe hain...manti hoon meine overreact kiya, par ismein mera bhi toh dosh nahin hai...unka behavior bhi toh aisa hi raha hai, aur unki reputation bhi...chalo chodo, I should sleep, warn subeh subeh lecture sunna padega...and she went into deep slumber...

For next few days
Ananya tried to apologize to him but, all in vain. And Kabir was busy flirting with Malvika or other women that came for meeting him. This was not going unnoticed by Ananya, and she was trying really hard to ignore this all...She just couldn't figure out why she was being affected so much by him...she just didn't know what can she do to fix all of this...
She was becoming more easily irritated, and not talking to her friends much, not being her chirpy best...

Finally, few weeks later, her best friend Trisha, decided to confront her .
Trisha: Ananya, yeh tujhe kya hogaya hai?
Ananya: Kya matlab?
Trisha: yehi joh baat baat pe gussa ho jana, akele rehna, kisi se theek se baat nahin karnaa...jabse tu us trip se aayi hai, tune hum mein se kisi se baat nahin ki hai theek se...tujhe pata bhi hai ki office mein kya ho raha hai?
Ananya: kya ho raha hai Trisha, kooch bhi toh nahin...
Trisha: idiot, Ronnie is getting married day after tomorrow...tera dhyaan kidhar hai?
Ananya: (shocked got up) kya? Ronnie, mera best friend is getting married, or mujhe hi nahin pata?
Trisha: yehi toh, tabhi toh mein pooch rahi hoon, ki tera dhyaan kidhar hai?
Ananya finally told her about the whole misunderstanding, and about her confused state of mind as to not sure why she is being affected by Kabir's behaviour...
Ananya: Chal chod, Ronnie kahan hai, mujhe usse congratulate karna hai...
Trisha: chalo der aaye durust aaye...btw kisko yeh pata nahin hai office mein woh kisse shaid kar raha hai, it will be a secret okkay...
Ananya nodded, and hugged her...

Both went to Ronnie...
Trisha: Chal yaar mein chalti hoon mujhe evening report padhni hai
Ananya and Ronnie both bid her good bye...
Ananya (chirping): kyon be, mereko bata nahin sakta tha, personallly aake, ki tu shaadi kar raha hai?
Ronnie: haan, par tu konsa acche mood mein thi...jab dekho tab sabko kaatne ko dodti thi...(smile)
Ananya: I am sorry yaar, mood thoda off tha, ab sab theek hai...I am so happyyy for youuu (she chirped), and hugged him tight...smiling and playing, and talking with him...

Both were unaware, that a pair of eyes were observing both of them from a little distance. It was none other than Kabir Sharma...He was outraged seeing Ananya in Ronnie's arms...Talking away, smiling...
Despite the fact that he was angry at her, he wanted her all to himself...He felt like only he can have Ananya and no one else...And his eyes were spitting fire, and he decided to go into his cabin...Despite the anger, he didn't want to talk to Ananya...so he decided to call in Trisha...

Kabir (in a sweet tone): So Trisha how are you doing?
Trisha: I am well sir (smiling her cute smile) aaj aapne mujhe yaad kiya?
Kabir: kyon tumhe yaad nahin kar sakta, you are one of my best presenters...
Trisha: Well thank you sir...well tell me sir, what can I do for you?
Kabir: kooch nahin I was just very impressed with your work, and I was thinking about giving you a raise...
Trisha: (jumped in excitement and gave a big smile) oh thank you so much sir...
Kabir: you deserve it dear...
Trisha was about to leave...just than
Kabir: Oh btw Trisha, whats going on outside...I heard some news about Ronnie...is it true? I would personally like to congratulate him if its true...
Trisha: Oh haan sir, Ronnie is getting married...
Kabir: oh so than it is true, who is the lucky girl, if I may ask...
Trisha: (thinking for a bit, agar sir ke dil ki baat janni hai toh, Trisha kaam pe lag jaa) Sir woh actually Ronnie is marrying Ananya sir (looking at and observing his facial expression)
Kabir was shocked, and if he had anything in his hand, he would have broken it at that time...Kabir masking his emotions
Kabir: thank you Trisha, you may leave now...
Trisha: ok sir, do congratulate them both (smirked and left his cabin)

Kabir in his thoughts
Kabir: how can she marry Ronnie...no way she can't...but why can't she...its not like she likes me or anything...lekin fir bhi Ananya, I won't let you marry that Ronnie...tum sirf meri hooo...no one, and no one can take you away from me...

Kabir drank all that night...remembering Ananya...imagining her in front of him...caressing her face...Ananya smiling, and running away from him...in disheveled state, completely drunk, running after his imagination...

Kabir: Ananya, mein tumhe kisi aur ki nahin hone dunga...
Ananya's image smiles and disappears
Kabir: (shouts) Ananya, Ananya, Ananyaaa...

Next morning...Kabir gets to the office all determined, but, doesnt find ananya in her Cabin...

Kabir: (call the help) where is Ms. Kashyap?
Help: sir, woh aaj nahin aaye hain...
Kabir: ok tum jao
just than Malvika enters
Kabir: Malvika, Ms. Kashyap abhi tak kyon nahin aayi hai...
Malvika: Oh Kabir, I forgot to tell you, Anaya, Trisha, Richa, and Ronnie all have taken 3 days off for Ronnie's wedding...We all are invited tomorrow for the wedding...
Kabir was shocked, that he thought that he would talk to Ananya today, and make her his but, all in vain...He didn't know what to do...
Next day was the wedding...

All arrived at the venue...Kabir was dressed in gorgeous black sherwani with blue embroidery on it...he looked like a greek god...

Kabir was looking for Ananya everywhere...but couldn't see her anywhere...
Just than Trisha arrived...
Trisha: hello Kabir sir, how are you today?
Kabir (looking here and there): hmm I am good Trisha (absent mindedly)
Trisha :(looking at his condition) sir aap kisiko dhoond rahe hain?
Kabir: nahin toh...
Trisha: ok sir, btw sir (smartly indirectly telling him Ananya's location), Ananya will be called soon for the wedding...I need to go get her soon, she is actually in the bridal room upstairs...But before that, I need to give something to Panditji, excuse me sir...
Kabir just nodded, and quietly sneaked out from there...

Kabir quickly went to the top floor of the house where Trisha said Ananya was...Kabir saw bunch of girls coming downstairs...
Girls talking to each other, and laughing, and saying chalo chalo jaldi hi shadi shooru ho jayegi...

As soon as all girls left, Kabir quietly went up the stairs, and went to the only room that was present...He saw Ananya entering the room before him...the door was left open...he sneaked into the room...

Ananya's back was facing him, and her face was facing the mirror...She looked gorgeous in pink lehngaa...Kabir sneaked behind her, and just than Ananya saw his reflection in the mirror...Ananya quickly turned to face him,
Ananya: aap? and before she could finish, he lifted her on his shoulders...and marched out through the back door to the house...

Ananya: chodiye mujhe, moving her legs in the air, but all in vain...
Kabir not saying anything and just carrying her out threw the backdoor, walking through the back lawn, towards his car...Ananya struggled to free herself but, nothing worked...

Meanwhile, the shadi was in full swing...The bride had arrived at the Mandap and the pheras were taking place at the front lawn...Everyone was busy in the wedding, but, only person who knew the commotion that was taking on the other side, Trisha, was smirking thinking what might be happening between Kabir and Ananya...She probably didn't imagine that Kabir would go to the extent of forcefully taking Ananya from the venue...

Kabir put Ananya in his car, and left from there from the back door...Ananya yelled, screamed, tried to stop him in every which way possible, but, the loud noises of the wedding, covered all her sounds...And no one felt her absence as all were busy.

Kabir arrived at the Sharma mansion with Ananya...Ananya was not willing to get out of his car, so, Kabir lifted her up on his shoulder again, and took her inside...He took her to a room, and dropped her on the bed, and closed the door...Ananya tried to get out of his grip but, he was too strong...
Ananya: Kabir sir, yeh kya badtameezi hai, please mujhe chod dijiye...
Kabir still holding on to her hand, to prevent her from hitting him, starring right at her face...
Ananya: mujhe chodiye (struggling to get of his hold), leave me, mera sab wahaan intezzar kar rahe honge...chodiye mujhe...
Ananya had no clue why Kabir was behaving this way with her...
She thought it was may be because of her previous behaviour in jungle with him...
Ananya (struggling, kabir just looking at her face intensely): please sir, agar aap yeh sab jungle walii baat ke liye kar rahe hain, toh I am sorry...I didn't mean it, it was all a misunderstanding...please sir mujhe jaane dijiye...
Kabir (finally spoke up): shhh, ek dam choop...
Ananya was scared...
Ananya: sir please mujhe shadi main hona zaroori hai, sab kya sochengeee please sir...
Kabir: Shadi, shadi, shadi...(holding her by both her hands, bringing her closer) tum kisi aur se shadi nahin kar sakti, suna tumne??? tum sirf meri ho, sirf mera hak hai tumpe...meine tumse kahaa tha, main tumhe paakar hi rahungaa...tum apni marzi se mere pass aaogi, aur mujhe chahogi...lekin...
Ananya (shocked): sir???
Kabir: (bringing her more close) lekin tumne hamesha mujhse door jane ki koshish ki...kyonnn????..abbb bas...kaha tha tumse ki tum kisi aur ki nahin ho sakti hoo, kahaa tha na???..kahaa tha tumhe, ki agar mein chahun toh tumhe, sharma mansion mein ked kar sakta hoon, hamesha hamesha ke liye apni bana kar rakh sakta hoon, aur koi bhi kooch nahin kar payega...kahaa thana???
Ananya (couldn't understand the reason for this outburst, and was quite scared as to what Kabir was going to do): sir, please...please mujhe jaane dijiye...woh sab meri raah dekh rahe honge...please sir...
Kabir: tumhe un sab ki raah karne ki fikar hai, aur mera kya?
Ananya : But sirrr...
Kabir: But vat kooch nahin, ab tum yaahan rahogi, mere pass...koi tumhe mujhse nahin chin sakta...mein tumhe is sharma mansion mein apne paas rakhungaa...sirf mere pass...(he left her)
and went out the room, closing the door behind him...

Ananya banged on the door, and called out to him...
Ananya: Sir, sir, please sir...please sir mujhe jane dijiye...aap jaisa soch rahe hain waisa bilkul nahin hai...please sir...(banging on the door)...she banged for quite sometime, but, Kabir didn't answer...and she cried and went to sleep...

To be continued...


Hi guys, i hope you like this chapter...leave your comments, and likes and feedback...


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Ridhi


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Posted: 9 years ago
Trisha Darling yeh kya kiya πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ...my poor Kabir ...mirchi lagi kabir ko...
Lolz...its rightly said when in love dimaag kaam karna band kar deta hai...atleast ek baar miss kashyap se pooch toh lete kabir saab woh shaadi kar bhi rahi hai ya nahi ...trisha ne kaha aur maan liya πŸ˜†

Wonder what Mr.Kabir will do next ...is gonna b his wedding next after Ronnie πŸ˜† πŸ˜† & will miss kashyap will ever forgive him for going bonkers like this & kidnapping her
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