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Posted: 9 years ago

thank you πŸ˜ƒ
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omg...
soo intense part.
jealousy, anger, ignorance all in one part.
superb.
i can clearly imagine kabir's expression by ur discribtion.
awsome part.
and the ending...
left us on cliff hanger.
plz update nxt part soon plzzz.
thank u so much for pm.
keep smiling.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krazykaju

omg...
soo intense part.
jealousy, anger, ignorance all in one part.
superb.
i can clearly imagine kabir's expression by ur discribtion.
awsome part.
and the ending...
left us on cliff hanger.
plz update nxt part soon plzzz.
thank u so much for pm.
keep smiling.


Thanks Kaju, glad you liked it :)
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uff ananya went to the party without kabir
god that singhania 😑
kabir saw them but didn't say anything amazing 😲
kamina singhania how dare he talk abt Ananya like that 😑
ananya was surprised that kabir didn't say or do anything 😲
god ananya again did some stupid
how could she go to met that kamina without thinking
karib exposed singhania now want to revenge on ananya 😑
at least ananya left chit for kabir
kabir was scared for ananya
thank god he got her
oh god now what kabir will do to save ananya?
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
i really like it...what will kabir do now..hmm.
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

uff ananya went to the party without kabir
god that singhania 😑
kabir saw them but didn't say anything amazing 😲
kamina singhania how dare he talk abt Ananya like that 😑
ananya was surprised that kabir didn't say or do anything 😲
god ananya again did some stupid
how could she go to met that kamina without thinking
karib exposed singhania now want to revenge on ananya 😑
at least ananya left chit for kabir
kabir was scared for ananya
thank god he got her
oh god now what kabir will do to save ananya?
continue soon



lol hahahah I love your response everytime...you get so involved into my story...thank you πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DracoM

i really like it...what will kabir do now..hmm.



will update soon, read and find out hahahhahhπŸ˜†





Anyways, Hope no one copies my storyyy, and I can finish this story here...
i get so upset, when people copy other people's work and than put their name on it...cheaters kahike lol
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HI guys, i know i left you all on cliff hanger, and it must be really annoying to not know whats going to happen next...So I am going to give a short update today to get your curiosity to rest πŸ˜†
here it goes

Chapter 10

Kabir gets shocked understanding what the old lady was trying to imply...He knew she was asking him to sleep with her, thinking he was Ananya's husband...

Kabir just couldn't think...

Old lady: beta zyada mat socho, jitni der karoge, utna is ke liye khatarnak sabit hoga...
Kabir (thinking): Oh damn, how do I tell her that I am not her husband...I can't do this to Ananya, especially when she is unconscious like that, without getting her permission, I can't touch her...No way...But than she is going to die, oh man what should I do?
Old lady: Beta main samajh sakti hoon, main bahar chali jaati hoon, taki tum akele mein iska ilaaj kar sako...
Kabir: rukiya maji...aap itni thand mein bahar kaise jayenge...idhar door door tak koi jagah nahin hai jahaan aap itni thand mein reh payenge...
Old lady: beta meri chinta mat karo apni patni ko bachao...
Kabir: aapne mujhe beta kaha hai, toh ek sach aapko batana chahta hoon...yeh meri patni nahin hai...agar honewali patni bhi ho, fir bhi aap samajh sakti hain ki aap joh keh rahi hai woh mumkeen nahin hai...
Old lady looked at him shocked but she appreciated his honesty, and said: beta main samajh sakti hoon, par is ladki, yeh joh koi bhi hai tumhari, iski jaan bachane ke liye garmi ise dena zaroori hai...
Kabir: maji agar aap bura na maane toh mein kya aap ko ek bete ki tarah ek request kar sakta hoon (sorry dont know how to say request in hindi guys)...
Old lady: bolo beta
Kabir: Maji isko sharir ki garmi ki zaroorat hai, par meine kahin padha tha ki jinko thand lag jati hai, unke sirf trunk (dont know hindi for trunk area) ko garmi milne par unki jaan bach sakti hai...toh agar aap bura naa mane, toh garmi toh koi bhi de sakta hai, yeh zaroori toh nahin ek ladkaa hi ek ladki ko garmi deπŸ˜‰...kya aap isko apni beti samajh kar, apni garmi denge...kya aap Ananya ko aapke sharir ki garmi denge maji please (with hopeful eyes)...

Old lady was very impressed with his sincerity, and his smartness...And she agreed to give Ananya her warmth...Kabir told her exactly what to do, as he had learned about it from reading books...

Kabir was about to leave outside but, old lady stopped him...
Old lady: beta tum yehin raho, bahar bahot thandi hai...mein samajhti hoon yeh tumhari biwi nahin hai lekin tum apni jaan ko jokhm mein nahin daal sakte...
Kabir had to listen to her...
So when the old lady started to undress Ananya's back area, Kabir turned away from both the ladies, and just looked out the window...

Old lady laid next to Ananya, and wrapped herself, and Ananya in a blanket and laid there for a while next to her...Soon Ananya's body temperature started to normalize...and old lady dressed her up...And covered her with the blanket...Now Ananya was breathing normally, and her face was turning nice and pink like circulation had returned to normal...

Old lady went to sleep on the dry grass that was lying in her hut...She asked Kabir to sleep but, he didn't do so...He stayed up all night looking at Ananya, and looking after her...

It was morning time...And the sun's rays entered the hut through the little window. Kabir was holding Ananya's hand sleeping in a sitting position...The old lady woke up first, and she saw the image of Kabir and Ananya, and had smile on her face...She went near Kabir and caressed his head, and Kabir woke up...

Kabir: maji aap, uth gaye?
Old lady: haan beta, ek baat bolun?
Kabir: ji kahiye
Old lady: bahot pyaar karte hona usse? bahot naseeb wali hai yeh ladki, ki usse tum jaisa caring ladka mila...
Kabir: nahin maji aisi koi baat nahin hai...
Old lady: smiled (her old eyes could see what he couldn't feel or see), beta main bahar jaake lakdiyaan leke aati hoon...chai banane ke liye...tum tab tak haath mun dhoke, woh joh saamne mere pati ka kurta padaa hai woh pehen lena...tumhare kapdo pe daag lag gaye hain beta...
Kabir nodded, and old lady went out the hut...

Ananya was still sleeping, Kabir looked at her once, and than decided to change his shirt into a kurta as he didn't know how long will it be before Khurana arrived, and his clothes were pretty messed up...

There was no other place to change so, he decided to change there as Ananya was sleeping and the old lady was not there...

He took off his shirt, and just than Ananya woke up...

First thing she noticed, was Kabir's bare back in front of her...and she quickly looked down, and noticed her clothes were changed...She put 2 and 2 together, and made a shocked face...she marched to where Kabir was, and with force turned him around, with tears in her eyes...and slapped himmm, slapped him hard...

Ananya: How could you do this to me? aap mere saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain?
Kabir was flabbergasted...He didn't know what just happened...
Kabir: Ananyaaa???
Ananya: aap ne mre saath...looked down, looked at him, with teary eyes...aap aisa kaise car sakte hain?
Kabir: kya keh rahi ho Ananya?
Ananya: (pointing finger at him) shut up Kabir Sharma, just shut up...mein tumhare samne nahin juki, tumhare advances ko nahin approve kiya, toh tumne mere saath yeh sab kiya? behoshi ki halat mein tumne mera fayda uthaaya??? hitting him on his chest multiple times, crying...how could you????
Kabir: par Ananya meine aisa kya kar diya?
Ananya: kya kar diya??? mere kapde??? aap ka shirt??? aap, aapne meri izzat ke saath khilvaad kiya behoshi ki halat mein?? aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain (tears tears) ...aap toh hai hi womanizer, par mein un women mein se nahin hoon, joh aap ke isharo pe nachti hai, joh aapke isharo pe aapke saath kooch bhi karti hain...Kyon kiya mere saath aisa???? kyon??? she was about to slap him again, and just than the old lady entered...

Ananya looked towards her, and just froze in that position...

She quickly brought her hand down...Kabir just walked out of the hut, giving Ananya a hurt look, without saying anything taking his shirt...

Old lady: Uth gayi betaa tum? kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai?
Ananya: aap?
Old lady: beta yeh meri jopdi hai...woh joh bahar khada hai, woh tujhe leke behoshi ki haalat mein aaya tha...
Ananya looked outside...
Old lady: Beta tum bahot nasseb wali ho ki tumhe aisa ladka milaa...than she told Ananya the whole story about what happened...and added, beta agar woh chahta toh mere kehne par tumhe bachane keliye raat bitaa sakta tha...par uske jaisa insaan maine apni zindagi main nahin dekha...usne mere haath jod ke mujse kaha ki mein tujhe apni sharir ki garmi deke bachalun...woh chahta toh dekh sakta tha sab kooch, par usne tujhe choova tak nahin...aisa ladka milna muskheel hai betaa...

Ananya was shocked to hear what the lady said, and looked outside towards Kabir with tears in her eyes...

Ananya (to herself): yeh meine kya kar diya? Kabir sir ne toh meri jaan bachayi hai, aur meine unhe kya kooch nahin sunaya???
She just walked out of the hut to talk to him, and Khurana and his team arrived searching for both of them...

Kabir started talking to Khurana, while Ananya looked on...Kabir and Ananya thanked the old lady individually...And started marching out of the jungle...

All throughout the walk, Kabir didn't look even once towards Ananya...Ananya was looking at him and walking, trying to find a way to apologize to him, but, Kabir completely ignored her presence, and continued walking...Khurana dropped both of them off to their flight, and Kabir and Ananya headed back to Delhi...Kabir was sitting at a different place than Ananya in flight, and she couldn't talk to him...And both reached Delhi in same flight but, as complete strangers...


To be continued...


I hope this will help you all sleep hahaha...


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luv

Ridhi

BTW guys: Being a doctor
Hypothermia is not treated like the way they show in hindi serials and stuff...And someone told me it was also shown in hindi movie, which is not recommended at all...In hypothermia you should never warm patient's feet and hands first, if you do this you will send them into shock and kill them...You should always make them dry, and warm their trunk first, and cover their head and their neck...It will allow blood to circulate to vital organs like heart, brain etc...You never warm hands and feet first...and always cover the person with warm blankets, and if they are conscious give them warm fluids...but not too quickly and rush them to hospital...this body heat shit only works in tv shows lol

Edited by paagalbandar - 9 years ago
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Great going!! Keep up the great work
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Originally posted by: vanillaflowers

Great going!! Keep up the great work



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