Originally posted by: Swatishubh
Relished the beauty of this epilogue! Loved it so much that i do want to read more and more from this family. Aazu, luv ya sweetie, for your mind penning down your heart.π Overwhelmed by your sweetness to the story π€
-- Frankly, after writing the epilogue of this story, this song is ringing in my mind- "Tum jo na aate toh achha tha, dil na lagaate toh achha tha, tum jaate-jaate jaana... Humko deewana kar gaye..."π... Now I too feel like having more from this family... But there isn't any purpose stretching this story in no particular direction...π
Cud very well acknowledge kabir's situation tackling the little kid, Karan π His tiny bits are so tender that anyone wud smile with him. π Such a cuteness, that i loved him and huggies. I amused myself when he observed, Pehle mummy ache se tie kar deti thi... Ab toh wo apne lace bhi aapse hi banwaati hain..."..He has observed, but have no idea ever why mommy is like this! I'm fond of him π
-- As I was saying to Babita- seeing kinder garten kids for like 13 years, I have come across many utter cute encounters with kids, whose mothers are expecting... And they have such adorable answers that sometimes I laugh my heads off after school, or sometimes smile that off amusedly...
Would love to share the recent one... A kid of class KG.II ie, U.K.G... I asked her, beta, why haven't you done your homework?
SHE: Meri mummy ki tabiyat kharaab hai...
ME: OH! what happened..?
SHE: Unko soojan aa gayi hai...
ME: Kahan?
She: Peit mein...
I WAS LIKE...π€£
But she didn't forget to add: Ab mere papa meri mummy ko utha nahi paate jaise pehle kar paate they...π
They have no idea whats going on, but their observations are awesome...π
The times have reached when she is expecting again, and kabir is helping her in every chore. Her habits have changed and her moods swings, gave me goosebumps to relive some moments. π Loved your way of explaining the changes she is feeling in herself, so natural. π
-- @ red... Please enlighten us with some of your experiences... Humare Veerji ki aapne kaise waat lagaayi, zara humein bhi toh pata chale...ππ
As to rest of them, I really have no personal experiences... Never had any chance to talk to any expecting one in such details... All I know is what my mother used to tell about hers...π
The way you have made the little kid solving the problem of the couple at manav's show, it was so adorable to learn from the kid of four. Winning every heart, and making his parents anger and uncomfortable at the same time. "Papa meri mummy ko aise hi manaate hain..." π darling of every eyes.
-- Hehehe... That kid himself is such an adorable... Nobody can resist his cuteness... Par bechaare ke papa had such puppy expressions in his eyes, dreading- Ye bachha agar ab kuch aur bola toh meri biwi aaj mujhe baahar couch par sone ke liye bhej degi...π
The family is complete today and Ananya feels satisfaction that she cud give her hubby what he desired. And kabir feels bliss from God fulfilling his desires, his wish and dreams. Loved this couple so sweetly living their life with all the hurdles crossed sharply with their minds and winning the hearts of each other, every time.
-- Indeed... God blessed them with what they wanted... But that's God's decision... Ye sab Kismat ki Luck hai, ismein kya shaq hai... What ever he gives, gives for a reason... Anyways, they are happy, content and satisfied...π
His Lady love has given him the happiness all cos he was able to give her the joys of life. Beauteous! Aesthetic, dignified and grand story i find in this one And in your words, Exquisite indeed! π Luv ya for all your endeavor essaying the magnificent and a lovely story presented to us. Aazu, this SS will remain in my heart forever!
-- This story is carved in my heart too... A few stories that are very close to my heart for various reasons, like "Mere Jeewan saathi" and "Pappa jaldi aa jaana" on KTLK Forum, This story on Reporters forum, Socho ke Jheelo ka Sheher ho on Qubool hai Forum... They hold such beautiful memories in my heart, that I shall remember them always with love...π
Having someone to love is family. Having somewhrere to go is home. And having both is a blessing!
You took my heart with you π
-- Beautiful words Bhabhi... And I have a family here at this place also, A brother, a Bhabhi, a sister... You guys ahve given me unwavering support, and I shall remember that forever...
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