SS - Mistakes happen - Chapter 5 (Page 31) Updated - 04/07/15 - Page 6

Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

Hi Aru 🤗 Welcome to the forum! :)

I am humbled.

I was apprehensive about posting this os actually. But then, KaYa are so amazing, i couldn't stop myself. I feel really happy that you liked every bit of the story. Kabir's character is such that he can make anyone swoon over him 😆 and the dangerously close scenes are no different.

I had it planned as a OS, but then, your post set my brain cells working. if I get the plot correct, I might continue this.

Love,

May

Originally posted by: tina_1234

Nice shot

Thanks a lot! 😊

Originally posted by: Aru_A

Awiee...Thank You May.

I...before I begin, I have to say that I looovvveee your name... May...it's so beautiful...

Oi!! Don't be apprehensive about sharing art...never...

Art speaks for itself, it isn't misted by criticism and appreciation...

A piece of art speaks for itself...and it should never be suppressed...

Because Art is the voice of heart...and the voice from the heart can't be judged...

now...

Oiii!!! You know what...you remind me of my time, when on my other BKVPMP forum, I used to write all sorts of stories for our favourite favourite pair PrAja played by RoSal. At that time, I used to get many such reviews, and to many of them, I replied with this, "But you know, its PrAja who are so amazing. Anything you write on them becomes marvelous itself." And after ages, you remind of the same when you say "But then, KaYa are so amazing, i couldn't stop myself. " *giggles*

Well, credit is yours, you wrote such a wonderful story that I liked every bit of it. And let's not talk about Kabir Sharma. I'll end up wasting a lot of time dreaming and praising every minute detail (you don't know me yet. If I catch hold of something, I go in the very depth of it. I'm super descriptive...)

Holy heavens!!! That's amazingg!!! I'll so wait for it! Do let me know ;)

Aru 🤗 Thank you so much for your kind words. 🤗
I am continuing this OS. chapter 2 coming soon 😉
I had never actually written a story in my life until recently. Actually it was IF that compelled me to start penning down my thoughts. About being apprehensive, its just that I felt that way knowing I am not that good and don't have much experience about writing. so whenever I get an idea, I am not really sure if I should post it or not. But that won't happen from now on. Thanks to you 😳
Did I really remind you? Oh my! I guess since these are my early days of writing and you are already a pro :)
Why not Mr. Kabir Sharma? We are already head over heels over this particular suave, dashing gentleman. And time spent over dreaming about this guy can never be a wastage *wink*
I am still not over the tie-loosening, rolled up sleeves persona of Kabir ☺️ 😉

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

Aru!!
is it u, old friend ?? good god ! looks like i am having a good reunion on this forum. May, let me introduce Aru. she is a fantastic writer and has written amazing rana pratap stories. i loved reading them so much that i was forced to watch the show for a while just to understand the context.
And Aru, I hope u remember me. 😃. so u watching reporters from the beginning ? plz write here also and hang around with us whenever u find time.

Chalo then, Aru welcome! 😉 😆 You, me and Shreya can all write and gush about this guy 😆 A story from you, when is it coming? Quickly write something and that'll be our sweetest treat 😆😉

Aru !
yahan par novel likh li kya !😆
yes, I more or less read most of your ff s regarding praja, ie during roshal days. and yes because of your wonderful dreamy sketches of their young love, i started watching MP. esp praja scenes. and i continued to watch until they got married. after that when the leap came, i frankly speaking got a shock seeing the person they chose for adult pratu. and moreover i never got over Roshal. so stopped watching the show. but i used to hover around the forum for your stories re. then something very life changing happened. we ( my husband and I) emigrated to USA, he got selected as a resident doc in NYC Hospital.
first few months went in blur, and when i settled down enough to watch shows again and browse IF , i got attracted to some other forum.
but as u can see, I have not at all forgotten you. and seeing ur post on may's thread. i jumped up in glee. its like seeing ur post after ages. and that too on a show forum, that i am following. nothing can be more good !
i really wish u write here too ! and yes i will again find my post on feedback column. that is a promise.
even if u r that busy to write a story, which u r at present, just drop in my thread or May's, whichever u find convenient , and have some gupshup. and i shall visit MP forum to read the anniv post, abhi !
love u tons !
Shreya

Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

Chalo then, Aru welcome! 😉 😆 You, me and Shreya can all write and gush about this guy 😆 A story from you, when is it coming? Quickly write something and that'll be our sweetest treat 😆😉

May !
kya anamsanam bol rahi hai ! we r not here to gush about this guy...we r on business here, remember ! and as soon as we finish it, we know a certain fathomless green pool is waiting for us plunge in...so the plan is, kyu naa hum aru ko bhi kidnap kar ke lejaye waha ! waise, she is a historical show girl...a Maharana Pratap veteran...so i belief she can handle it quite fine.😆. she is busy with studies, i know. and she has to build career and all, but how much harm could befall with wallowing in grassy green meadows.
it z really not that tough to block the gibberish and look for the green apples😳..hihi !

now aru will scratch her head, and pull her lovely tresses pondering what on earth is she talking about...green apples, meadows, pool ?? since when has she developed keen interest on mother nature...is she into photography then ?? lolz !!

This was a nice OS
I really liked the part where he was sitting in her home and eating Paratha. I want to see it onscreen ❤️
The apology was sweet

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

May !
kya anamsanam bol rahi hai ! we r not here to gush about this guy...we r on business here, remember ! and as soon as we finish it, we know a certain fathomless green pool is waiting for us plunge in...so the plan is, kyu naa hum aru ko bhi kidnap kar ke lejaye waha ! waise, she is a historical show girl...a Maharana Pratap veteran...so i belief she can handle it quite fine.😆. she is busy with studies, i know. and she has to build career and all, but how much harm could befall with wallowing in grassy green meadows.
it z really not that tough to block the gibberish and look for the green apples😳..hihi !

😆 I end up forgetting the main reason 😆 I just can seem to forget this guy while on the other hand the green pool is beckoning me to plunge in. 😆
I am sure Aru can bear the deep green meadows 😉 Lets take her too 😆