Originally posted by: federized2210
Oh God! This was beautiful!!!!
U have great skills in writing!U should write more often :)God bless!-Anuradha❤️
This is bad...bad...so bad...
Gosh WHYYY???
Why did it have to end????!!!!!
Okay...let me control myself.
*takes a deep breath*
Hi! I'm Aru :)
This can be regarded as my first official post in this forum.
The thing is...that I've been looking for a suitable thread for my first post to become a member of this forum family.
But I was confused until today.
I came across a story and I thought I'll start there. But I had to run to catch up with my schedule.
I came back at night and came across your story. And I inclined to start here before any other place...
Coz simply...this story was tooo gooddd!!!
I loved every bit of it!
Especially the morning...Kabir at Ananya's house...oh my Yess!!!
And I have to say that I'm a forever fan of the dangerously close scenes of my fav pairs:-KaYa or PrAja or JIly or HInny for that matter. Oh I loveeeddd that scene!!!
One thing...it was so exciting to see Ananya's physical and mental place all over the place and to see Kabir see her in that very dishelved state was...oh geeezzz!!!
And what he says to her makes me go..."oh my...awww...haayyee...I'll die..."
And then, the call was a lead???? Oh My Gosh???!!!!! What happened after thisss???
Oh why did it end???
It will be right if I say that this is one of the...or maybe...The best KaYa fiction I've come across???
Oh well...you know better ;)
Much love
-Aru :) :*
Originally posted by: NRGANATRA
Awsome os...
Loved it
Do write more
Originally posted by: yoginisahakari
Amazing
Would love to read more
Love and prayer
Yogini
Originally posted by: Manyata5
its so amazing and fantastic.
i loved it. it was totally tremendous. so beautifully written and described.
keep writing and if possible then plz pm me.
Originally posted by: SuperChillz1
Hi Aru 🤗 Welcome to the forum! :)I am humbled.I was apprehensive about posting this os actually. But then, KaYa are so amazing, i couldn't stop myself. I feel really happy that you liked every bit of the story. Kabir's character is such that he can make anyone swoon over him 😆 and the dangerously close scenes are no different.I had it planned as a OS, but then, your post set my brain cells working. if I get the plot correct, I might continue this.Love,May
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