21st Century Razia Sultan (AlZia) SS - Duaa Jaisa Ishq - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: princess200

although i dont reply much here...i do read ur updates...ill definitely do or read or see anything related to ALZIA for solace from a stressful day or ongoing stress lol... so even if i dont comment pls dont assume im not reading or something...and ya many ppl whom i know of do read this SS as well bt dont comment or like ...so yeah...we all do read so do continue

and abt this update...yes it was deep and an unexpected shock 😭

Ya sure I understand.. but it is only my love for ALZIA and people like you that keeps this going! Thanks a lot! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 20
Mirza rushed in. For him, Nasir was not just a friend, but the brother he never had. He looked ravaged, with almost blood spurting from his eyes. Razia hadn't the power to call him, she was devastated. He was called by a servant at the house. He ran up to Razias room, and saw the cold body of the man there. He almost fell, and was about to enter. In the room he saw a lady crying over his body. And then he saw Yaqut standing next to her. The sight of Yaqut angered himeven more. He was walking towards Razia. Razia raised her hand and told him to stop. Mirza was taken aback. He walked a step ahead and Razia turned around. He saw her like never before. Red eyes, the tip of the nose red from crying, and the teeth gritted. She growled,"Mirza, don't take a step ahead. Move back now!" One of the servants came to take Mirza away, but Mirza moved his hand away. "But Razia," he pleaded. "Just Go!" , came the order from the other side. As Mirza turned, he could not believe his ears and eyes, and turned away dejected. He didn't see a smile light up on two peoples faces though.
He came to the ground floor and a servant brought some water to him. He thought of throwing the water away, but drank it instead. He asked the person,"Why is your Razia madam so angry?" The man with his eyes down replied,"Sir, she is very sad. When Yaqut Sir and Fatima Maam came to meet her, she was fine. She was asking for someone named Mirza to be called." Surely the servant didn't know who he was talking to, Mirza thought. He continued,"But after that, she called me and said not to allow that person to enter. She said that because of him she could not be with her brother in his last moments. But I don't know, when entered, why she stopped you. Shah madam told her that in his last moments Nasir was yelling Razia, Razia but nobody was paying attention. To be honest Sir, I didn't hear anything. But that's why she is angry. " Mirzas heart bet faster than before. He walked put of the house and sat in his car and waited for everyone to get out. He would then confront Yaqut and Shah, and even Razia.
Fate had a twist ahead for them.
Hope it was good!!
Edited by SenRazia - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It is a good piece of work... please continue it... every work on alzia in this forum is just amazing.👏 I love it. I dont come online very much bt i read all the updates. I loves to read any work on alzia... and abt this update it was amazing bt shocking..pehle maine ye socha that why razia is telling him to stop, but now i understood bt yrr ye isme mirza ki kya glti h.
Yr ab age kya hoga i cant wait. Continue and update sooon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinegirl100

It is a good piece of work... please continue it... every work on alzia in this forum is just amazing.👏 I love it. I dont come online very much bt i read all the updates. I loves to read any work on alzia... and abt this update it was amazing bt shocking..pehle maine ye socha that why razia is telling him to stop, but now i understood bt yrr ye isme mirza ki kya glti h.

Yr ab age kya hoga i cant wait. Continue and update sooon

Sure, I will continue. Thanks!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 21
Mirza tried calling Razia, but she didn't pick up the phone. Maybe she was upset and refused to talk with anyone, or maybe was being avoided by her. He hoped it was not the latter. He could not control himself and rushed to Razias office. With his fastest car he went to the place and he climbed up the stairs fast and stopped on Razia's cabins floor, panting. He walked towards Razia's cabin and pushed the door, but he did not see Razia. Instead, he saw Yaqut standing there with a file in his hand. Mirza asked in a cold voice,"Where is Razia?" Yaqut looked up at up and gave a wicked laugh. "Why, do you ask Mr.Mirza?" Mirza fumed at him he went straight in front of him and put his hands in his pocket and said,"Listen, whatever I ask you, just answer. Don't question me." Yaqut put the file he was holding down on the table and said,"She is at her home. She had come to office to collect some documents, but I sent her back. You know, now a days she listens to me more than you." Mirza took out his hands from his pocket and held Yaqut by the collar. He said in a gruelling tone looking straight into his eyes,"DARE YOU! Dont even try to take my Razia from me. You won't, anyways. Because you can't." Yaqut removed Mirzas hand from his collar and replied,"Why can't I? If you think I can't, go to her now and ask who she loves MORE- me or you." Mirza fumed up and rushed out of the office. Climbing down, he sat back in his car and wiped the tear that almost escaped down his cheek. He drove straight to the Khan Mansion.
Since Mirza had become a regular visitor of the house, Mirza was not stopped at the gate. But when he tried to enter the house and was asked for verification, the guards stopped him on seeing that he was THE Mirza Malik whom Razia had forbidden from entering. He got angry and threatened to sue all the guards, and as the guards were scared of losing their jobs, they let him in. Mirza walked up to Razia's room, and gulped before he entered. He knocked on the door and Razia looked up from her laptop with her tear swollen eyes, only to see him. She shut her laptop and walked up to him around her circular bed. "Who asked you to come here? Who let you come in?", she asked. Mirza tried to calm Razia down by touching her on the shoulder, but she moved away. Mirza asked her,"What happened? Why are you so angry on me? I know that it might have been wrong of me to take you out that day, but trust me, how would I know? Nasir was like a brother to me .. We shared a major part of our life together. And you think I don't feel for him? Why?" Razia walked towards her bed and sat on it with a thud. She burst out crying. Mirza couldn't resist himself seeing her cry and so he went and sat next to him. Razia didn't object this time. She said,"i couldn't do anything for my brother. I lost him. Even my father is in the ICU now. Had I not gone out that day, maybe things would have been different. I don't know Mirza what to do. i don't know." Mirza took her hand in his and calmly replied,"Don't worry. I will find out who did this. Surely. Razia, tell me. Do you trust Yaqut?" Razia looked at him. She asked,"Mirza, do you think I love HIM?" She started sobbing again. Mirza felt angry at himself for asking this question. How could he distrust her? He knew it would be stupid to apologise this time, and so he got up and before coming out just said,"I know you will only love me Razia. And so I will too."
As he walked down the stairs, he heard a noise coming from one of the store rooms. Curious, he walked towards the room and stood near a small window which was almost open. He peeped in, and saw two men and a woman standing there and talking. The woman said,"We have been successful. now just a small thorn left to uproot." The man standing next to her added,"Yes, Ammi. And this time, I want to do it myself." Who was he calling Ammi? The second man stated,"Shah ji, after what you hd done for me in my past, after my fathers death, I can only thank you. And this is just a small trick. " Mirzas brain clicked. It was Yaquts voice. But who were the other two? Who was the Ammi? Mirza repeated the word to himself, when he realised the lady had also been called shah. SHAH. Shah Khan she was. And her son Firoz. So they were behind all this! Mirza was about to enter the room, but he thought to himself to better catch them red handed than like this. The Mirza that walked out of the house that day was completely changed - He had now become ruthless for his love.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 22
Mirza on the next day after finishing his official work spotted of to his house. Things had not been going well lately. As if an imaginary carrier had been created been them. A sense of formality had come in between them. Mirza was scared of losing his possession now. His mother had warned him against faking to much for her, but he refused to listen. After having dinner, he went to meet Altamash Khan in the hospital, for that was where he had to be shifted given his serious condition. Altamash was very happy on seeing him and said,"Son, Razia had come here just a few minutes ago. Please take care of her. She is emotionally broken. " Mirza held his hand and pronged that he would do so. Whilst he was coming out, he saw Yaqut speed off in his car towards some place. Mirza couldn't mid that face, and so he jumped into his own and went after him. After a large number of twists and turns, Mirza reached a desolate house. He saw Yaqut walk in. Mirza tip toed inside and saw Shah sitting there with Yaqut standing next to her. She had a bottle of some kind in her hand. Looking closer, Mirza recalled he had seen the same bottle somewhere. But he didn't get it then. They were talking about something, but Mirza couldn't risk going inside and listening to what they were saying. As they walked out, Mirza stood behind one of the old boxes lying around . He walked in, and was extra careful not to touch anything. Nor had he committed a crime, nor was he going to, but still he felt he was doing something wrong. Never had he thought that his love for someone would bring him so close to death, so many times.
Mirza picked up the little bottle lying down left by Yaqut and the others with his handkerchief and saw the label. It read - Rat Poison. Mirzas brain clicked. He had seen it in Razias house itself!!! The day he was walking out of Razias house after Nasirs death, he had seen it lying on the ground. Such was his mental state then, he didn't even care to see it. But now, it had become a big clue for him to solve the mystery that had ruined his life. 'Should I inform the police?' He thought. Suddenly a thought came up on Mirzas Mind. He took out his cell phone and searched for Zaroon Afroze, his friend in the CBI. Their conversation went something like this:
M: Zaroon! Are you free now?
Z: Yes Mirza. Go ahead. Why do you sound so frustrated?
M: Dude have you heard about the death of Nasir Khan, scion of Khan s?
Z: Yes dude. And I think I am getting a hold on that case bro. It seems to the department as a high profile murder.
M: That's because it is.
*Silence*
Z: Why do you think so?
M: Zaroon, Nasir was my childhood friend and her sister, I am dating her . Razia Khan. I had taken her to meet my mother, and when we came back on the same night we found him dead. And because of poison.
Z: Poison! What poison?
M: Rat poison.
Z: How do you know bro?
M: I am on this case alone. I have promised Razia that I will find her the killer. Z: Man, you're a good lover. But tell me, have you informed the police?
M: No. It is her dads wish that the Police stay out of this. But dude, I need your help to solve this case.
Z: Present here anytime for you. Tell me, what do I have to do?
M: Meet me at the CCD shop near your office in 10 mins. I will hand over to you the first piece of evidence I collected.
Z: Sure. But Mirza, please be careful with all this.
M: I will.
He cut the phone and went to begin his quest to win his love back. Love can make people do things they never thought they could... Good or bad..

Next part tmrw!!
Hope you liked it!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey dear ! Your story is lovely. Though I never commented but I was always following it.. Alzia par likhi koi bhi story main jaroor follow karti hun
aur tumhari story toh kabil-e-tarif hai..!
great work..!
I wish Mirza loads of wishes for his quest to win his love back..👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely story. ..
Beautifully written. ..
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Part 23
"Rat poison it is," said Zaroon when he tested the sample at his CBI office. What he was doing was not allowed officially, but for the sake of his friend and the latter's love anything could be done. Mirza thanked his friend for his time and let him keep the sample. He didnt want to carry anything with him, to be the subject of suspicion. The case had already taken up massive heights. It was being discussed everywhere, and Razias close friends knew who had done it, ofcourse. But their condition was the same as Mirzas's , they couldn't say anything without any evidence. Mirza drove out of the place. It had been a long tiring day for him. After meeting Zarroon at the coffee place, he went to the CBI office secretly with him and tested the sample, something which took more than 5 hours. Now in the wee hours of the morning, he thought of going to his office and having a small nap there itself. So he did.
On his office table there were a few unopened files, a laptop and a photo frame which had a picture of the Mirza who was ever smiling and cheerful. Because of Razia. Now that she was crying herself, how could he be happy? He didnt even visit the gym for a past few days, and that took a toll on his health. Tired, he put his head down and slept, trying to find peace ib his dreams.

"Maybe he thinks I dont love him anymore," said Razia. Yaqut stood in front of her in her cabin trying to put up a sympathetic expression. He thought to himself,'There is so much of this idiotic thing called love between these two.. Shah was right.. This world has only one emotion- Hate. And soon that will be the only thing between them. ' Razia paused to whatever she was saying and sighed. Yaqut in his most sensitive voice said,"Razia Maam, if you dont mind, I would like to say something. " Razia told him to continue. "Maam, when I am ever sad or something, I visit my Guruji. He always says, that when a human is unhappy it means he or she needs another human being. And then, he hugs me. I feel like I am on top of the world. Now, if any loved one of yours , like Mirza Sir would be here, he could have given you a hug but.." "You can give me a hug if you feel it will brighten my mood," said Razia, withiut even contemplating what result it could have on her future. Yaqut congratulated himself mentally And said," I hope it does." Razia rose from her chair And Yaqut hugged her lightly. She smiled. Yaqut looked at the person who stood outside, peeping through the curtains, and the camera clicked. Yaqut let go of her and asked her,"DO you feel better maam?" She nodded.
Mirza was woken up by the constant beeping of his phone. He got up and checked who And what was being sent to him. He opened the messages. After going through them, he looked up slowly with his red eyes and yelled. The office had not started yet, or people would have come into his cabin thinking he had been murdered. Such was his groan. He stood up and kicked his table and threw everything away, even the smiling Mirza. He told himself,"Mirza, show Razia what big a mistake she is doing. Show her who truly loves her. And show the world what can happen if anyone does anything with Mirza Malik ". He yelled the last line and sped out of his cabin with a new mission.

Sorry for late upload And mistakes!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 24
Razia completed her remaining files and sat on her desk, lifeless. The work she loved so much seemed so boring to her. The lifeline of her days was lost. Mirza. She knew it was not completely his fault, but then had he not taken her away she could have saved Nasir, she thought. And now when he suspected her of having cheated on him, she was very upset. Her phone rang. She didn't have a look at the name and answered,"Hello, who is this?" "You don't know who I am now?" came the reply from the other side. She brought the phone from her ear to in front of her and saw the name. Mirza Malik. She immediately said,"Sorry, I just didn't see the name. " There was an awkward moment of silence between the two. Both had lots of things to tell each other, but they just couldn't. Mirza stated,"Razia, why are you doing this to me?" Razia took in a moment to understand why he was asking such a thing and replied,"What Mirza?" Mirza laughed. This irritated Razia even more. Mirza started crying over the phone and said,"Don't you love me Razia? Then why are you with that Yaqut always?" Razia couldn't control herself on hearing Mirza cry and so she stated crying too, but when she heard that Mirza was accusing him of cheating again, she fumed and replied,"MIRZA!! I am not cheating on you! I don't know why you don't trust me!" "So wait, Ill show you. Cut the call and see the images I sent you. I got them from a source unknown." He cut the call and send Yaquts and Razias images to the latter. Razia saw the pictures and kept telling herself,'NO! NO! This can't be true. Someone can't be doing this to me! " She placed her hand over the mouth in shock. What was happening with her? She didn't know. Mirza called her again. This time, she immediately started,"Mirza, I don't know who did this. All I can tell you is what you think is not true. He just.." Mirza interrupted," I don't Razia what to say or what to understand. All I know is (Sobbing in between) , I am finding evidence to prove to you that Shah Khan and Yaqut are involved in the poisoning of Nasir Bhai. You prove to me that Yaqut is no one for you." Razia couldn't believe what she heard. Mirza now wanted her to prove that she was a woman of virtue, that she was pure and untouched. There is no greater insult for a woman than to be asked to prove she is pure. Now Razia was fighting between the two things she honoured the most in her life - Her love and her respect. And she had to prove Yaqut was a good person, but could she?

THANKS.. IN THE FOLLOWING PARTS WE WILL HAVE ALZIA MEETS..STAY TUNED!
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