Alzia SS 21 century 'Mere khwabon ka Malik' part 8 pg 11 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Babygirl287

Wow very nice update 😊
Razia ne kya bola tha " wo bs dekhta kaha hai,wo to gale pad jata hai" 😆 😉 sach me mirza bs dekhne walo me se ni action krne walo me se hai 😉
Wah mirza k to that bhat hi kamal hai,sports car 😃
Mirza raz ko bas me kisi bande k bagal me b ni skta,side kr k kareeb chala hi gya 😊 or wo kan me "hum ajnabi..." Wali baat uff
Oho raz b na mirza se bhag rhi hai bt bhag k kaha jaegi? Pakdi gyi 😉 mirza ki bato se humare gal laal ho gye,raz to bach hi sakti thi 😃 😳 chalo mirza ko smile to mili badle me
Abhi to bs mirza ki aankhe dikh rhi hai bad me pura mirza hi khwabo me aayega 😉 😊
Ek question hai,raz to library se ghar ja rhi thi na? To mirza ne usko library k pass kyu choda?

aapke qs ka ans ss me hi hai 😊 read again to know
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: MEERA37

Sonu hamesha ke tarha is baar bhi mujhe words nahi mil rahe aapki tareef kaise karu bus scene ke bare me kya kahu pata nahi ye razia ikhtiyar se dur kyu bhaag rahi hai par ikhtiyar zaroor use mana hi lenge aakhir kar ikhtiyar jo tehre mujhe ikhtiyar ke bolne ka aur aap ke likhne ka tareeka mera favorite hai and this line hum aapki ruswai ka sabab kabhi nhi banenge mohtarma,kabhi nhi ye sun kar to razia ko man hi jana tha pata nahi ye ladki kab manegi aur haa please ab ek hot update dijiye is sab dil se likha hai i hope aapki short comment ki shikayat dur ho gayi ho kyu ki maine is baar koshish ki hai lekin sab dil se likha hai and again please update soon aur koshish karu gi next comment aur lamba ho.

abhi se hot update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awesome Sonu.. Aapki visualization bohot acchi hain ... Mirza Rocks! Aur Razia as cute as ever.. Nice to see a refreshing story now.. Keep it up! Aapse tips lete rahenge..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: SenRazia

Awesome Sonu.. Aapki visualization bohot acchi hain ... Mirza Rocks! Aur Razia as cute as ever.. Nice to see a refreshing story now.. Keep it up! Aapse tips lete rahenge..

thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Yaaar...all these shades of Altunia...just why are u making me fall in love with this shade namely Ikhtiyar ??😭😭
He is so flirtatiously romantic and hell protective at the same time...

howww howww ??????

the bus scene was my favorite...even more than him pushing her into the car...

he just stared at her with love peeche se ...aur phir pakad bhi liya so that she doesnt bump into anyone...yaar mujhe bhi koi aisa possessive var miley😭

ek toh itna ameer hone ne bawajood he climbed into the rugged middle class bus...for her😲 aise pyaar karne wale kismat walon ko hii miltey hai sach mein...

ah what what ...?? yeh gaal sharam se laal hone chahiye🤣🤣 u nail the flirting man 🤣

Razia is falling for him...i can feel it...she gave up arguing...blushed...could feel the honesty in his eyes...OMG his eyes do talk right...anyone can get lost into them in a jiffy...TURNED BACK SMILED AND WAVED ???😲...YES YES she is falling for him...that too strongly...🥳

but the highlight was...her drawing his eyes..wapas lemme quote what i said earlier which u royally ignored as my punishment for a short comment 😵 but im editing my last line ----->

One day Altunia will come in her dreams in the veil n then his veil will be off revealing Ikhtiyars face to her n thats when she will complete her drawing n will be ADMITTING her love for him... #JustMyGuess

ayii ladki...Razias last convo to shazia sounds familiar u knw😉😉. samajhne wale samajh jayenge but as long as u know what im talking about its fine😆

unke saamne hum bebas ho jaate hai...unki giraft mein woh humein qaid kar lete hai aur hum wohi karte hai jo woh chahate haii☺️...ya allah aise romantic words shes already using for him... ❤️ and yaani she has already started surrendering to him🤣

also that reveals kii he does have a very strong dominating side which will pop up more clearly soon...actually his act of pushing her in the car and all already made it kind of clear...OMG I LOVE YOU🤗🤗

although i know ur traits better than anybody...this SS is still turning out to be a beautiful surprise for me...one lifetime isnt enough to love u really🤗
Edited by princess200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: princess200

Yaaar...all these shades of Altunia...just why are u making me fall in love with this shade namely Ikhtiyar ??😭😭

He is so flirtatiously romantic and hell protective at the same time...
bcoz im helplessly in love with him too

howww howww ??????

the bus scene was my favorite...even more than him pushing her into the car...

he just stared at her with love peeche se ...aur phir pakad bhi liya so that she doesnt bump into anyone...yaar mujhe bhi koi aisa possessive var miley😭

ek toh itna ameer hone ne bawajood he climbed into the rugged middle class bus...for her😲 aise pyaar karne wale kismat walon ko hii miltey hai sach mein...

ah what what ...?? yeh gaal sharam se laal hone chahiye🤣🤣 u nail the flirting man 🤣 i know 😎

Razia is falling for him...i can feel it...she gave up arguing...blushed...could feel the honesty in his eyes...OMG his eyes do talk right...anyone can get lost into them in a jiffy...TURNED BACK SMILED AND WAVED ???😲...YES YES she is falling for him...that too strongly...🥳

but the highlight was...her drawing his eyes..wapas lemme quote what i said earlier which u royally ignored as my punishment for a short comment 😵 but im editing my last line ----->

One day Altunia will come in her dreams in the veil n then his veil will be off revealing Ikhtiyars face to her n thats when she will complete her drawing n will be ADMITTING her love for him... #JustMyGuess i got distracted u know why 😊 an u'll see how she admits it😛

ayii ladki...Razias last convo to shazia sounds familiar u knw😉😉. samajhne wale samajh jayenge but as long as u know what im talking about its fine😆

unke saamne hum bebas ho jaate hai...unki giraft mein woh humein qaid kar lete hai aur hum wohi karte hai jo woh chahate haii☺️...ya allah aise romantic words shes already using for him... ❤️ and yaani she has already started surrendering to him🤣

also that reveals kii he does have a very strong dominating side which will pop up more clearly soon...actually his act of pushing her in the car and all already made it kind of clear...OMG I LOVE YOU🤗🤗 his dominating side would grow wait and read

although i know ur traits better than anybody...this SS is still turning out to be a beautiful surprise for me...one lifetime isnt enough to love u really🤗 love u too

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Razia and Shazia were going to the library when Ikhtiyar met them outside, he was standing with his back supported on his car.

Shazia; lo agaya tumhara hero, MASHALLAH gaadi to dekho, aur wah bhai tashan bhi kamal hen, hum to ise dargah me aane wala gunda smjh rhe the

RAzia; aapi!

Ikhtiyar saw them and walked towards them, he bend forwards and did an "adab", Shazia smiled, Razia looked away.

Ikhtiyar; aap ko koi dikat na ho to hum aapke saath library me sirf beth skte hen?

Shazia; haan haan kyun nahi zarur aayie

Razia looked at her in anger, Shazia made a face that she would handle it

Shazia; wese bhi kaam to Razia ko hai hum to sirf iska sath dene aye the aap se kuch baten hojayengi to man laga rhe ga

Ikhtiyar; banda aapki khidmat me hazir hai

they went inside and sat on a table together, Razia brought some books and started making notes.

Shazia; haan to..hum hen Shazia, Razia ki khala zaat behen, hamare ami abu lucknow me rehte hen aur hum yahan padhai ki wja se, aur aap?

Ikhtiyar; hamara naam hai Ikhtiyar Mirza

Razia dropped her pen and looked up, Shazia was shocked too.

Shazia; (whispering to Razia) ye kuch ziada ittefaq nhi ho rha

Razia tried to focus on her work.

Ikhtiyar; aap dono ese chonk kyun gai?

Shazia; kuch nhi bas wese hi..haan to aapka naam Ikhtiyar hai

Ikhtiyar; haan humare ghar me bas ammi aur hamara bhai hen, humne MBA kiya hai harvard university se, aur feroz oxford se law studies kr rha hai

Shazia smiled, Razia tried to look at him, he caught her gaze she looked away.

Ikhtiyar; dekhiye hum aapki behen k saath kuch...hamaa matlab...hum sach me...

Shazia's phone rang and she got up

Shazia; hum aate hen

she went away to attend her call, Ikhtiyar kept staring at Razia, who was trying hard to concentrate. Shazia came back

Shazia; humen jana hoga zaruri kaam he

Ikhtiyar stood up too

Ikhtiyar; aap ja rhi hen to hum yahan nhi rukenge, mohtarma ko humara unse akele milna pasand nhi

he left with Shazia.

Razia tried hard to focus but her mind was glued to the thought that his name was "ikhtiyar", she somehow finished her work and checked the time, it was late, the sun had set and she knew she had to walk alone to her house.

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Ikhtiyar was standing under a tree, it had started to rain unexpectedly and he didn't want to sit in his car and miss the glimpse of her, the street was deserted and only rain drops and occasional thunders were audible, after a while he saw a girl running and yelling "bachao" he removed his jacket and ran towards her. To his surprise, it was Razia, running to save herself, her hair messed up, her dupatta gone, she saw him standing shocked, and she ran into his arms, she was scared and shaking

Razia; hamen bacha lijiye...wo gunde

he hugged her back, one hand on her head, at once he understood the situation, his blood boiled, he clenched his hand, his body started to shake in anger.

Ikhtiyar; aapko kahin haath lagaya unhone?

he asked with his teeth clenched, his voice sharp

Razia; nahi..wo hum library se niqle to unhone humen dekha hamare peeche lage aur hamara dupatta pakda, hum bhage to wo unke paas reh gya

3 men arrived

man 1; chod de ladki ko wrna tujhe kaat dalenge

Ikhtiyar pulled Razia behind and stood infront of her.

Ikhtiyar; shuqr mna tune humari jaan ko haath nhi lagaya wrna tera kya kya katta tujhe smjh bhi nhi ati

the men came forward to fight, he was on fire, he quickly over powered them, hitting them hard, breaking their bones.

Ikhtiyar; Razia police ko phone kro

Razia was trembling, she didnt do anything. Ikhtiyar beat them black and blue, and all fell on Razia; feet.

Men; maaf krna behen

Ikhtiyar pulled them away from her

Ikhtiyar; ainda kisi ladki ko cheda to ankhen bhi niqal lunga, dafa ho yahan se

he went to Razia and cupped her face,

Ikhtiyar; kuch nhi hua hum hen na, humare rehte aapko koi chu bhi nhi skta

he picked up his jacket and covered her up with it,

Ikhtiyar; aapne police ko phone kyun nhi kiya?

Razia; police humse bayan maangti itne chaqar police station k...hamare abu ki izzat

Ikhtiyar punched his car in anger making a dent

Ikhtiyar; aap ladkiya, ye dunya ajeeb he jiske saath galat ho usi ko galat therati he

Razia looked down.

Ikhtiyar; chaliye hum aapko ghar tak chod aayen, ab hum aapki nhi sunenge

Razia nodded, he escorted her, as Ikhtiyar entered teh narrow lane that led to her house he was shocked, the whole lane was full of mud, they entered the area of houses, one house close to the other, the house lights were off by then, most of the families slept, Ikhtiyar took her to her house

Razia; abu ghar pe nahi hen wrna hum apko andar..

Ikhtiyar; koi baat nhi aap andar jaiye hum chale jayenge, bht raat ho chuki he

Razia smiled and went inside, she rushed to her window and stared at him walking away.

Next day Razia told Shazia everything

Shazia; kya pta usne khud gunde bheje hon tujhe impress krne k liye

Razia; aapi? kya keh rhi hen aap...aap ne unki aankhon ka ghussa nhi dekha, wo jhoot nhi ho skta

Shazia; oye hoye..kuch kuch ho rha he shayad tere dil me, unke liye

Razia; aapi

she hid her face

Razia; aapi humen nhi pta

she moved a paper to her, she picked it up and stared at it

Shazia; to mohtarma ko uske Malik Altunia mil hi gye?

she blushed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hahahhahaha yeh iska peecha kahin nahi chodta...🤣
post graduation from Havard...check
amazing car - check
style - check
loves her like crazy - double check
stalking her - double check
izzat for her - now that was a surprise,,,,i mean i knew he respects her...but itna zyaada ki...mohtarma doesnt like me being alone with her...hence im also leaving😲😲
now u know me i like a little rebel in a man but i couldnt help go weak in the knees on this😳

and i loved the way she found solace in his arms in the midst of so much fear and danger 😳

baarish mein intezaaar karey apne mashook ka deewana
saving her from the goons didnt catch me much although i know it was her trigger for the love to blossom in her heart ...but thats all coz u already had told me abt it loong bak🤣

still it bragged my fav line moment in it - Ikhtiyar; aapko kahin haath lagaya unhone?

he asked with his teeth clenched, his voice sharp

and
shuqr mna tune humari jaan ko haath nhi lagaya wrna tera kya kya katta tujhe smjh bhi nhi ati

yo and they fell on her feet ...hahhaa 😃👍🏼

shes falling for him...or as u explained...finding altunia in him...jo bhi kar rahi hai...im loving it...waiting for her to actually end up drawing his face...

shes in love with altunia but willl find him in ikhtiar...yeah i get it...i hope someday even i do😭

jaldi continue kar😡...aur itna chota update mat dena😡

🤗

P.S - i have hopes for a rain kiss too😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess200

hahahhahaha yeh iska peecha kahin nahi chodta...🤣

post graduation from Havard...check
amazing car - check
style - check
loves her like crazy - double check
stalking her - double check
izzat for her - now that was a surprise,,,,i mean i knew he respects her...but itna zyaada ki...mohtarma doesnt like me being alone with her...hence im also leaving😲😲
now u know me i like a little rebel in a man but i couldnt help go weak in the knees on this😳

and i loved the way she found solace in his arms in the midst of so much fear and danger 😳

baarish mein intezaaar karey apne mashook ka deewana
saving her from the goons didnt catch me much although i know it was her trigger for the love to blossom in her heart ...but thats all coz u already had told me abt it loong bak🤣

still it bragged my fav line moment in it - Ikhtiyar; aapko kahin haath lagaya unhone?

he asked with his teeth clenched, his voice sharp

and
shuqr mna tune humari jaan ko haath nhi lagaya wrna tera kya kya katta tujhe smjh bhi nhi ati

yo and they fell on her feet ...hahhaa 😃👍🏼

shes falling for him...or as u explained...finding altunia in him...jo bhi kar rahi hai...im loving it...waiting for her to actually end up drawing his face...

shes in love with altunia but willl find him in ikhtiar...yeah i get it...i hope someday even i do😭

jaldi continue kar😡...aur itna chota update mat dena😡

🤗

P.S - i have hopes for a rain kiss too😳😳

not the trigger for love, trigger for her to see altunia in him😛 razia loves altunia and she will look for him only for now,😛 drawing to she will make soon😉 and kiss ki fiqr mat kr tu, jb humne 13 century me kisses di beshumar to ye to ahem 21 century hai😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome vm...ab aur kya kahu aapki tareef me mohtarma kuch kehne layak chora hi nahi aapne 😉...after all mai is song ko zara bhi like nahi karti thi but ise dekne ke baad ab ye mera favorite song hai...🤗
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