Alzia SS 21 century 'Mere khwabon ka Malik' part 8 pg 11 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: MEERA37

Hii this is awesome updateπŸ‘ so now he know mohtarma address pata nahi ab kya kareinge hamare Ikhtiyar πŸ˜ƒ aur please next update lamba hona chahiye aise hi fast fast update kiya karye 😊 please aur mohabbat ki nishani ka update kab mile ga

update lamba bhi ho to aapka comment to chota hi hoga na
plx aap bhi update soon k ilawa kuch likha kijiye plx 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: overactor

update lamba bhi ho to aapka comment to chota hi hoga na
plx aap bhi update soon k ilawa kuch likha kijiye plx 😊

Sorry next pakka lamba hoga😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Mashallaha bhut khoob likhti h ap...
cute raxia to ek dum diwani h malik altunia ki...
aur ho bhi q nhi...
mirza k khayalo me to bus razia hi razia ti...
bechare zaroon aur ittefaq preshan ho rhe te...Arre unhone to razia ko bhabhi maan liya...
Mirza razia ka library me milna...Awww...
razia bhi na darr gyi khuch bolne nhi diya mirza ko...
OMG...yaqut mojhe lagta h iska bhi whi haal hoga jo apke malik hearts wale SS me hoya h...
mirza bhi kamal h apni mehbooba ka ghar bhi pata kar liya aur unhai waha se jaldi le bhi jayege...ab mirza iktiyaar mirza banke pataye ga razia ko...
such me bhut khobsoorti se likha h apne
next chapter jaldi update kijiye ga... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shazia stared at RAzia, quietly as she moved around her small kitchen, doing dishes, cutting vegetables and cooking them. She was annoyed and that made her work quickly

Shazia; RAzia! hosh main aao

Razia; kya hosh main aayen aapi, usne hamen aaj, humen to dar sa lag rha he, aur uski ankhen, uski ankhen ab hamare khwabon me aa kr humen pareshan kr rhi hen

Shazia; wese uski ankhen theen kamal ki , ajeeb si chamak thi unme

Razia; aapi! yahan hamari jaan pe ban ayi he aur aap hen k, humen lagta he humen abu ko sb bta dena chahiye

Shazia stood up and held her shoulders

Shazia; nhi nhi nhi, khalu ko kuch btane ki zarurat nhi he, tumhen kya lagta he khalu us gunde mawali ka kuch bigad lenge? police bhi na kuch nhi krti tujhe pta he, aur phir khalu tumhari shadi kisi namune se krwa denge, phir dekhti rehna apne Altunia k sapne

Razia; to ab hum kya kren aapi? aap hi btaiye

Shazia; tu akeli mat niqal ghar se, aur jab bhi wo dikhe na tu aise guzar ja jese tune dekha hi nhi

Razia; aapi wo sirf dekhta kab he, wo to gale pad jata he

Shazia; dekh Razia, apni hifazat tujhe khud krni hogi, teri madat koi nhi kr skta abhi

Razia; aapi bas dua kijiye k ab wo hamen kahin na dikhe

Ikhtiyar was busy planning how to impress her.

Ikhtiyar; tum niqamme doston se acha to hta hamare kuch dushman hte

Zaroon; miyan tum na hamesha humse khafa hi rehna

Ikhtiyar; hum ja rhe hen

Ittefaq; kahan?

Ikhtiyar; uske mohalle main, humse usse door rha nhi jata, abhi wo kahin to jayegi na

Zaroon; rokne se rukoge to nahi tum, jao hum aate hen peeche

Ikhtiyar made a face and left his house, he got into his shiny black sports car and drove off. He reached the old library and saw her standing at the bus stop opposite it. He parked his car and rushed to her, but she got into the bus, helplessly he got into the over-crowded bus too. She was standing uncomfortably, a guy behind her, Ikhtiyar made a face and pulled the guy back and took his place. He didnot speak, he just stood behind her, and smelled the air around her, he looked at her with love, his desires running wild, he wanted to hold her and kiss her, and never let go off her, but he was helpless for now, the place was too crowded and he didn't want to harm her dignity. The driver hit the brakes too hard and Ikhtiyar bumped into her, Razia was about to bump into the guy infront of her but Ikhtiyar held her from her waist. Razia got furious she turned and was shocked.

Razia; aap?

there was another harsh break and RAzia was lost balance, she held him for support and he supported her by grabbing her waist. She looked in anger, he smirked.

Razia; dekhiye yahan bht log hen, hamare sath ched khani ki na to pitwa denge aapko

Ikhtiyar; arre humne ched khani kab ki aap to khud hi hamari bahon me gir padi

Razia; chodiye hamen

she pushed him and turned her face.

Ikhtiyar; aapko is bakwas bus main aane ki kya zarurat thi, banda aapki khidmat me hamesha hazir hai, humse kaha hta hum le chale aapko

Razia; hum ajnabiyon k ehsan nhi lete

He leaned closer to her and whispered in her ear

Ikhtiyar; hum ajnabi kahan hen mohtarma, hum to aapke dil ki dhadkan banne aaye hen

Razia's heart skipped a beat, she got down at the stop and before he could get down, she got into another bus, he was unable to chase her.

Ikhtiyar; ya Allah kyun hamara imtihan le rhe hen aap, hamen hamari hoor de k bhi nhi di, ye kahan ka insaf he

Razia reached did her work and was waiting at the bus station again

Razia; ya Allah ab wo sirphira na mile hamen

Suddenly she was pulled and pushed into a car, and before she could react, he closed the door, the door of his sports car was that which opened upwads and she wasn't familiar, he got into the car and drove off.

Razia; ye kya badtameezi hai, aap hamare peeche kyun pad gye hen? Allah k waste hamen chod dijiye

Ikhitiyar; chod hi to rhe hen, ghar tak

Razia ; dekhiye hum..hum aapko kese smjhayen

Ikhtiyar; aap kuch mat smjhaiye, aap bas thandi hojaiye, aapke ye ruksar garmi me aur laal hojate hen humen acha nhi lagta

Razia was confused

Ikhtiyar; ye ruksar sharam se laal hone chahiye na

Razia's mouth opened,

Razia; dekhiye gaadi rokiye aur hamen jaane dijiye

Ikhtiyar; hum aapko ghar pohncha k hi manege

Razia gave up, he smirked, she adjusted her dupatta, she wore a simple yellow color shalwar kameez with a plain chiffon dupatta.

Ikhtiyar; hum sach kehte hen, humne aapsa haseen dunya me koi nhi dekha

Razia blushed unwillingly

Ikhtiyar; yehi, yehi laali dekhni thi aapke galon pe

they had reached the library

Razia; yahin rok dijiye na, is se aage gaye to hamari ruswayi hojayegi,hum ek lower middle class family se hen, aap nhi jante kitni baten

Ikhtiyar stopped the car

Ikhtiyar; hum aapki ruswai ka sabab kabhi nhi banenge mohtarma, kabhi nhi

Razia looked at him, she was lost in his eyes, she could feel the honesty, she looked away, he opened the door for her and she got out

Razia; shukriya

she said and walked away, Ikhtiyar waited for her to turn, she didn't turn for long, and then just before she entered the narrow lane, she turned and smiled. He saw that and waved, she turned away and walked quickly.

Ikhtiyar smiled and got back in his car.

Razia was at her house , staring at her drawings again, Shazia came over. Razia told her everything

Shazia; tune kuch nhi kiya?

Razia; pta nhi aapi hamen kuch krna to chahiye tha, pr...hum..pta hhi kya hogya hamen

Shazia; itna acha moqa tha use pitwane ka

Razia; aapi wo...humen nhi pta kya masla he, bas hum kuch nhi kr paye

SHazia; ye kya nayi tasveer banai he tumne? dikhao to

she snatched the drawing from her, the drawing had only a pair of beautiful eyes, the face hidden by a veil and head covered in a turban.

Shazia; ye ankhen? kahin dekhi hui lagti he...ye to...usi sirphire ajnabi ki ankhen?

Razia nodded,

Razia; aapi pta nhi jabse humne unhe dekha he, unki ankhen hamara peecha hi nhi chod rhi

Shazia; kahin wohi tumhara Altunia to nahi

Razia got pissed

Razia; aapi khabardar, hamare Malik ko yunhi kisi se mat jodiye aap

Shazia; acha acha baba maaf krdo

Razia; pta nhi aapi, smjh nhi ata, hum unke saamne itne bebas kyun hojate hen, jese wo humen...humen apni giraft me qaid krlete hen aur hum..hum bas wahi krte hen jo wo chahte hen

Ikhtiyar was staring at the sky lying on top of his car

Ikhtiyar; esa kya he Razia, jo tumhari trf hamen kheenchta he, tum to jese hamare dil ka hi khoya hua tukda ho, jise paa k dil ne theek se dhadhakna seekh liya

he closed his eyes, and imagined her face.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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One day altunia will come in her dreams in the veil n then his veil will be off revealing Ikhtiyars face to her n thats when she will complete her drawing n will be in love with him... #JustMyGuess lesse how well I know u jaane jaa

Res...for detailed comment...love uπŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Bhut khoob... πŸ‘
shazia razia convo bhut acchi ti...
razia apni sari baate shazia se share karti h... 😊
razia bhi na ussai iktiyar se milna bhi accha lagta h aur darti bhi h...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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mene to itna bada comment diya ta... 😭to ye itna sa q aaya h... 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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mirza to diwane ban gye h...bichare zaroon aur ittefaq ko niqamme dost ka darja de diya...mirza razia ka intezar karte h...aur wo dikh bhi jati h to bina bataye us k peeche bus pe chad jate h...bus sence very beautiful...matlab aisa lag hi nhi rha ta ki me koi story padh rhi ho ...ap ka har sence ko explain karna itna accha h ki lagta h samne hi serial chal rha ho...razia bhi na ek to khud mirza ki bahon me gir gyi aur hamare mirza par chedkhani ka ilzam laga rhi ti..lakin mirza bhi kam nhi beata liya na apni car me aur ghar tak chodne gaye...iktiyar said:hum such kahte h ,hamne apse haseen aunya me koi nhi deakha ...ye sun kar to razia bushing karne lagi..razia k dil me iktiyaar h but wo manna nhi chati h...aage aur maza ane wala h update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sonu hamesha ke tarha is baar bhi mujhe words nahi mil rahe aapki tareef kaise karu bus scene ke bare me kya kahu pata nahi ye razia ikhtiyar se dur kyu bhaag rahi hai par ikhtiyar zaroor use mana hi lenge aakhir kar ikhtiyar jo tehre mujhe ikhtiyar ke bolne ka aur aap ke likhne ka tareeka mera favorite hai and this line hum aapki ruswai ka sabab kabhi nhi banenge mohtarma,kabhi nhi ye sun kar to razia ko man hi jana tha pata nahi ye ladki kab manegi aur haa please ab ek hot update dijiye is sab dil se likha hai i hope aapki short comment ki shikayat dur ho gayi ho kyu ki maine is baar koshish ki hai lekin sab dil se likha hai and again please update soon aur koshish karu gi next comment aur lamba ho.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Wow very nice update 😊
Razia ne kya bola tha " wo bs dekhta kaha hai,wo to gale pad jata hai" πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ sach me mirza bs dekhne walo me se ni action krne walo me se hai πŸ˜‰
Wah mirza k to that bhat hi kamal hai,sports car πŸ˜ƒ
Mirza raz ko bas me kisi bande k bagal me b ni skta,side kr k kareeb chala hi gya 😊 or wo kan me "hum ajnabi..." Wali baat uff
Oho raz b na mirza se bhag rhi hai bt bhag k kaha jaegi? Pakdi gyi πŸ˜‰ mirza ki bato se humare gal laal ho gye,raz to bach hi sakti thi πŸ˜ƒ 😳 chalo mirza ko smile to mili badle me
Abhi to bs mirza ki aankhe dikh rhi hai bad me pura mirza hi khwabo me aayega πŸ˜‰ 😊
Ek question hai,raz to library se ghar ja rhi thi na? To mirza ne usko library k pass kyu choda?
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