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Razia was getting ready to attend the courtroom when Zubruddin came to her.

Zubu: ammi dekhiye na us Yaqut ko subah subah hamara mijaz khrab kr rha he

Razia; zubbu ab kya krdiya unhone?

Zubu; humne shanti se kaha tha hamare liye jalebiyan le k aaye, pr wo le aya

Razia smiled

Zubu; aap has rhi hen ammi, sab sahi kehte hen aap us Yaqut ki bht tarafdaari krti hen aur hamari bilkul nhi

Razia picked him up and settled him on her lap, she kissed his cheeks,

Razia; acha ghussa mat kijiye hum use 100 kode marwa denge theek he?

Zubbu; so kode? so kode se usko saandh ko kuch nhi hoga ammi 500 kode marwaiyega

Razia; phir to marjayega, phir aapki ami k kaam kon krega?

Zubbu; hum koi acha dusra banda le ayenge, jo badtameez na ho, aapko to pta he na ammi, badtameeziyan mirza ko bilkul pasand nhi

Razia was shocked, how did he?

Razia; zubbu? aapne abhi kya kaha?

Zubbu; badtameeziyan mirza ko pasand nhi

Razia; pr aap, ye jumla kahan suna aapne?

Zubbu; kahin nahi ammi humne khud se keh diya

Razia got tears in her eyes, "Badtameeziyan Mirza ko pasand nhi" the words echoed in her ears, she could hear him saying it, she could hear his voice in her son's voice, she hugged him tight.

Razia; zubbu, aap..aap

Zubbu; hum bilkul apne abu jese hen, hamen pta he ammi, ab saza ...

Razia; humne kaha na hum saza de denge, ab aap ja k Fatima se kahiye wo aapko jalebiyan khila degi

Zubbu; theek he ammi, hum Fatima se keh denge, pr hum jalebiyan aapke saath hi khayenge, aapko bhi bht pasand hen na

Razia kissed him again, and he kissed her cheek too.

Zubbu; ammi aap roya mat kijiye, hamen acha nhi lagta

Razia; jee meri jaan

he went away.

Razia went to the courtroom and was informed of the problems in Bhatinda, the people were not satisfied with the governor and wanted him replaced, Razia decided to call all officials from Bhatinda and make the decision after looking at all aspects.

Razia; wese Yaqut aap k khayal se kon behtar hoga Bhatinda ki subedaari k liye

Yaqut; kuch keh nhi skte Sultan, pr humne Ikhtiar-ud-din ka naam bht ziada suna he

Razia; unka naam to kabse hamare zehen me bhi he, suna he bht hi umda ladake hen aur siyasi samjh bhi kafi ziada he unhe

Yaqut; humne bhi kuch esa hi suna he Sultan, aur to aur, kuch logon ki manen to, Iktiyar-ud-din akele hi pura qila fatah krna jaante hen

Razia; hmm, esi baat he to unse milna hi padega, ye Bhatinda ka mamla haath se niqalta hi ja rha he jald hi qaboo na paya to badi museebat hojayegi

Yaqut; hum abhi paigam bhijwa dete hen Sultan

Razia; behtar hoga.

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Altunia smiled as he read the royal message that was meant for him

Altunia; dekho zaroon miyan, bulawa aya he Delhi se, aur wo bhi khud Sultan ne khat bheja he

Zaroon; maan gaye tumhen miyan, tumne to sab apne man mutabiq kr dikhaya

Altunia; so to hai ab pta chalega Razia Sultan ko, k usne kis toofan ko khud bulawa bheja he

Zaroon; to miyan phir hum bhi unhe khat likh den k hum aa rhe hen

Altunia; haan bhej do, keh do hum 3 din me pohonch jayenge

Altunia was staring at the piece of paper, he seemed to be lost in it

Zaroon; miyan, tumhari mohtarma bhi to delhi ki rehne wali thi na?

Altunia; haan zaroon miyan, pta nhi kyun ye khat dekh k humen unka ehsas ho rha he, jese unhi ka bulawa aya ho, pta nhi kyun pr is me se hamen hamari mohtarma ki khusboo aa rhi he

Zaroon; hoskta he wo abhi bhi Delhi me hon aur tumhen wapas miljayen?

Altunia; hum gye to the unhe dhundne pr kash tumhari baat sach ho zaroon, hamari mohtarma hamen mil jayen

Zaroon; InshAllah

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Razia was staring at the letter that came from Bhatinda, she was getting wierd thoughts

Razia; esa kya he is khat me, itna ajeeb sa ehsas kyun ho rha he hamen.

Yaqut entered

Yaqut; Sultan ghazab hogya Lahore k subedaar ka qatl hogya he aur wahan dushmanon ne hamla krdiya he, hamen kal subah hi niqalna hoga

Razia; lekin Yaqut, do din me IKhtiyar-ud-din a rhe hen unka kya, aap jaiye Lahore aur koshish kr k sb suljha lijiye

Yaqut; Sultan, mamla paicheeda na hta to kya hum aapse kehte? aap se guzarish he aap chaliye

RAzia; theek he aap tayari kijiye

Yaqut left, RAzia looked at the letter again

RAzia; aapse milne k liye hum itne bechain kyun ho rhe hen, akhir kya waja hoskti he

she folded the letter and then put it in her big box, where all her valuable things were kept.

Zubu came to her with sleepy eyes

Zubu; ammi wo Yaqut keh rha tha aap kal ja rhi hen

Razia; haan zaruri kaam he zubbu, aap humse wada kijiye aap kisi ko tang nhi krenge

Zubbu; nahi krenge ammi

RAzia; aur sab ka khayal rkhenge

Zubbu; jee ammi

RAzia; aur zubbu, hamare ek khas mehmaan aa rhe hen Bhatinda se, aap unka khas khayal kijiyega, mehman nawazi me koi kami nahi honi chahiye

Zubbu; ami aap befiqr ho k jaiye Mirza sab sambhal lega

Razia; shabash, ab so jaiye aaj hum aapko apni godi me sulayenge

Zubbu smiled heavily and curled up in her lap, he put her head on her chest and she started swinging to and fro, she kept playing with his hair, and then she was lost, lost in familiar memories, when she used to play with the exactly same hair, the head on her lap and the mischievious smile on his face,,,,

~FlashBack~

Razia was sitting alone inside the small wooden house, it was freezing outside and she felt chilled, she had no warm clothes and nothing to lid a fire, the house was a weak one and she feared it would fall if the winds got stronger, she wrapped herself in the tiny blanket and shivered.
Altunia entered the house with a lantern in his hand

Altunia; bahar bht ziada thand hogai he mohtarma, aur raat itni andheri hai k kuch dikhai bhi nahi de rha, aaj to bhul jaiye aap, kal hi ho payega kuch

Razia; Mirza hamen bht sardi lag rhi he, aap, aap kuch kijiye na

Altunia; ama tum ladkiyan bhi na, ese kaanp rhi ho jese kabhi sardi ko mehsoos hi na kiya ho, tumhare ghar me kya kambalon ki khan thi

Altunia had no idea that she was a princess, he thought she was a regular girl who had faced the wrath of weather since birth, but Razia had never experienced it, her palace was always warm, she never knew Delhi and its surroundings become so cold.

Altunia saw her lips turning blue, she was shivering badly, she sat down with her and put his arm around her shoulder, she rested her head on his chest.

Altunia; apne haathon ko zor zor se ragdiye, sardi kam hogi.

She rubbed her hands as he said, the winds were slowing down and came to a complete hault in sometime, only a soft breeze blew and Razia felt better, Altunia made her some tea and after drinking it she felt quite warm, he lay down then resting his head on her lap and taking her hand into both of his, and kissing it gently.

ALtunia; humne aapse wada kiya he mohtarma, aapko aapki manzil tak hum zarur pohchayenge

Razia smiled and brushed his hair with her fingers.

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Razia wiped the tears and kissed Zubu's forehead.

Razia; ya mere maula, meri mushqilon ko kam kr, ta k me apne shauhar ko dhundne pe ziada dhyan de skun, ek maa aur ek sultan ka farz nibhate nibhate ek begum ka farz to hum pura krna hi bhool gye, hamare shauhar ne hamara tab saath diya jab hum bilkul akele the, aur aaj wo akele honge aur hum chah kr bhi unka sath nhi de pa rhe

she rest her head in the crown of her bed and sleep took over...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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i know the update is short plx dnt kill me πŸ˜† the next one would be long, bcoz its time for daddy son to meet πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bilkul Altunia pe hii gaya hai...🀣
yaqut ke naam se hii chidd hai🀣
yaqut bechara sirf jalebi lekar aaya usmein bhi he got so angry hahaha

*comments to be continued I am out* couldnt resist writing this butπŸ˜†
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awww I'm finding zubbu too cute ...πŸ˜› Toh kya hua agar Mirza nahi hai razo ke saath ... Zubbu is there & he is filling Mirza's place in razia's life ...πŸ˜† He is a xerox copy of Mirza his talking style, hair, eyes everything...& his dailogue also "Mirza ko badtameezi pasand nahi" that was too cute...😳 He is a link between alzia that will keep them together always even when they are away from each other ... he is always reminding razo of Mirza with his cute little little things πŸ˜›

So even razia doesn't know ikhtiyar uddin is none other than Mirza ...her husband ...πŸ˜ƒ..Now waiting for father son milaap...πŸ˜ƒ
Loved the way alzia can feel each other ...😳 Sirf khat padhkar they could feel there's something wrong with it πŸ˜›

Nice update sonu πŸ‘ zubu is damn cute & adorable πŸ˜›
Update next part soon ...😳
Edited by Naaz695 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess200

Bilkul Altunia pe hii gaya hai...🀣

yaqut ke naam se hii chidd hai🀣
yaqut bechara sirf jalebi lekar aaya usmein bhi he got so angry hahaha

*comments to be continued I am out* couldnt resist writing this butπŸ˜†

baap beta mil k yaqut ki bajane wale hen πŸ˜† i so love playing with yaqut's character🀣
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Originally posted by: Naaz695

awww I'm finding zubbu too cute ...πŸ˜› Toh kya hua agar Mirza nahi hai razo ke saath ... Zubbu is there & he is filling Mirza's place in razia's life ...πŸ˜† He is a xerox copy of Mirza his talking style, hair, eyes everything...& his dailogue also "Mirza ko badtameezi pasand nahi" that was too cute...😳 He is a link between alzia that will keep them together always even when they are away from each other ... he is always reminding razo of Mirza with his cute little little things πŸ˜›

So even razia doesn't know ikhtiyar uddin is none other than Mirza ...her husband ...πŸ˜ƒ..Now waiting for father son milaap...πŸ˜ƒ
Loved the way alzia can feel each other ...😳 Sirf khat padhkar they could feel there's something wrong with it πŸ˜›

Nice update sonu πŸ‘ zubu is damn cute & adorable πŸ˜›
Update next part soon ...😳

aage dekhna mirza and chotu mirza k milan pe mirza kese shock pe shock khata heπŸ˜› πŸ˜†
thank u naazu πŸ€—
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OOO THIS CHOTU MIRZA IS SO CUUUTE...!!! I LOVE HIM YAAR 😳 πŸ˜›

THIS LIITLE MIRZA ... JUST MAKE ME HAPPIER THAN EVER... !! And the most funny part- ye chotu mirza bhi KHUNNAS khata hai.. UNCLE JI se !!! hehehe... Even ye to Mirza se bhi aage hain... He cannot even bear YAQUT bringing JALEBIYA for him... JIYO BETA...!!!! Wo Uncle hain bhi isi layak...!!
AND AND AND. .. My FAVOURITE part was- Zubbu - " apko to pata hai na Ammi... BADTAMEEZIYA MIRZA KO PASAND NHI...!!! "
OOO my cuuutuuu mirza... ye dialogue hi to Hmre Mirza Altunia ku nishani hai...!!! And Sonu ji... U just nailed it..by adding this one... HATS OFFF !!!! Razia k sath hm bhi emotional ho gaye the on this part... It was beyond GOOD !!! And finally Mirza is coming to Delhi. Aaah !!!

Waiting EAGERLY for this BAAP-BETA MILAN !!!
SUPERLY EXCITED to see Mirza shocked on seeing his CARBON COPY...!! hehehe... Mirza get ready to meet Ur Mohtarma and ur little DITTO badmash & Super AKDU mirza urf Zubbu..!! SIZE] πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

[SIZE=4]But pls.. mirza ko razia se bina mile mat jane dijiyega... par ha this PITA-PUTRA will get enough time for get together ... Aur phir dono mil k us UNCLE JI ki lenge... kayde se..!!! Oohoohooohoo... !! Ab intezar nhi hota...
Razia darling... tmhra wafadar uncle ji yo gaya... smjho..!! hehehe...
πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

BUT EK SHIKAYAT HAI... Aap k updates itne short kyu hain..??? PLSSS give a LONG ONE next time.. Waiting for it..!!
LOVE & HUGGS TO OUR CHOTU MIRZA &&& OVERACTOR...
FROM
Arshia ki RABBIT urf SHIVANGI ...
πŸ‘ 😳 πŸ˜›
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Originally posted by: lionsroar

OOO THIS CHOTU MIRZA IS SO CUUUTE...!!! I LOVE HIM YAAR 😳 πŸ˜›

THIS LIITLE MIRZA ... JUST MAKE ME HAPPIER THAN EVER... !! And the most funny part- ye chotu mirza bhi KHUNNAS khata hai.. UNCLE JI se !!! hehehe... Even ye to Mirza se bhi aage hain... He cannot even bear YAQUT bringing JALEBIYA for him... JIYO BETA...!!!! Wo Uncle hain bhi isi layak...!!
AND AND AND. .. My FAVOURITE part was- Zubbu - " apko to pata hai na Ammi... BADTAMEEZIYA MIRZA KO PASAND NHI...!!! "
OOO my cuuutuuu mirza... ye dialogue hi to Hmre Mirza Altunia ku nishani hai...!!! And Sonu ji... U just nailed it..by adding this one... HATS OFFF !!!! Razia k sath hm bhi emotional ho gaye the on this part... It was beyond GOOD !!! And finally Mirza is coming to Delhi. Aaah !!!

Waiting EAGERLY for this BAAP-BETA MILAN !!!
SUPERLY EXCITED to see Mirza shocked on seeing his CARBON COPY...!! hehehe... Mirza get ready to meet Ur Mohtarma and ur little DITTO badmash & Super AKDU mirza urf Zubbu..!! SIZE] πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

[SIZE=4]But pls.. mirza ko razia se bina mile mat jane dijiyega... par ha this PITA-PUTRA will get enough time for get together ... Aur phir dono mil k us UNCLE JI ki lenge... kayde se..!!! Oohoohooohoo... !! Ab intezar nhi hota...
Razia darling... tmhra wafadar uncle ji yo gaya... smjho..!! hehehe...
πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

BUT EK SHIKAYAT HAI... Aap k updates itne short kyu hain..??? PLSSS give a LONG ONE next time.. Waiting for it..!!
LOVE & HUGGS TO OUR CHOTU MIRZA &&& OVERACTOR...
FROM
Arshia ki RABBIT urf SHIVANGI ...
πŸ‘ 😳 πŸ˜›


haha sorry yr i said na this was the buildup for the next part to next lamba hoga 😳
raz to gai jung krne filhal to abhi sr jr mirza milab time he πŸ˜›
thank u shivu (can i call u shivu plx) 😳
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haha sorry yr i said na this was the buildup for the next part to next lamba hoga😳
raz to gai jung krne filhal to abhi sr jr mirza milab time heπŸ˜›
thank u shivu (can i call u shivu plx)😳



[SIZE=3]AAAHAAA..!!! ARE BILKUL JI... AP BILKUL HME SHIVU BULA SAKTI HAIN ... infact pehle hmre school friends bhi hme isi naam se bulati thi... Thnku hmra purana naam yaad dilane k liye...
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Baby Mirza is adorable...πŸ€—

hes gone wayyy to much on his daddy...looks wise also attitude wise also...batameeziyan pasand nahi hai and all haan junior mirza πŸ˜›

his love for jalebis...best part...he getting annoyed with yaqut...so like his dad πŸ˜†

i cant wait for mirza junior and senior to take yaquts case left right and centre🀣

All though this is a FF...you still kept their true characters intact...ek paigaam se hii almost pehchaan liya ek doosre ko...haaye issey bolte hai na ishq

my fav part was the sardi wali flashback...jab yeh hii itna romantic tha ...tht it melt me ...toh aage aage tu pata nahi kya likhne wali haiπŸ˜†
magar ek hug ke bajaiye...aur bhi tareekein hai na warm feel karwane ke liye...ahem woh kyun nahi karwayi πŸ˜†

expecting it soon haanπŸ˜‰

bechara yaqut...karta toh kuch nahi hai magar bila wajaye sab usko apne apne gusse ka shikaar bana rahe hai🀣

poor lad he just got the jalebis for the prince and look at the prince's reaction 🀣 ohh well for sure i know now no DNA no blood group tests are required...he is MIRZA...uska total xerox copy hai🀣

jaldi baap bete ko milwao aur yaqut ki bajaao

update soon...πŸ€—
Edited by princess200 - 9 years ago
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