Originally posted by: princess200
first things first...here is that para
He was about to call Altamush again, maybe the tenth time, with some random excuse to know how long were they taking to reach the temple, when his eyes fell on his angel.
oooh and many characters coming up haan...cant wait how they all will help bringing these two closer...
aah yes past experiences do change ur perceptions very strongly😔...so have mine
waiting waiting waiting eagerly as ever 😃
Thanks Thanks Thanks for the correction...And Me to waiting for ur UPDATE!!!!UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
Originally posted by: lionsroar
Ooo thankuuu sooo sooo sooo much..
For the dedication...
Update padhne se phle hi pagla gye hm to..!!!
Now the update...
" Aag Dono taraf barabar lagi hai..."
Ha... Pyar to karta hai WO razia se...
That is for sure... Bas realize nhi kr RHA..
Ya use pata hi nhi h ki pyar wali feeling kaise hoti h...!!!
Thoda gussa aya..the way he shouted on her..
Aur WO b sharab peekar...
Pr.. Mirza h...mafi to bnti h...
Barish be Sara gussa dhul diya unka...
Thnk goddd...!!!
Dargah part was the BEST...
My favourite... Was..
" only he knew. How many times he practiced sorry in front of the mirror..!!"
I luv it... Soo cuuute...
And fir God me utha liya...
He s unpredictable.. Kahi b kch b kr Sakta h..
Even in DARGAH...
Romance chalu h miyan ka...
But razia Darling k liye thoda bura feel ho Raha h..coz WO unhe bata nhi skti..ki how much she loved him...
Pata nhi KB smjhenge miyan...
But still ye jankr chilled out hue ki engagmnt nhi tuti...!!
Aur Ab ye Shanichar YAQUT yaha b aa gaya...
Sala khi peecha nhi chodta...!!
BT CHLO ap be introducintroduce liya h to kch badhiya hi socha hoga...
End me.. As always...
Lots && lots of pyaar...
But agla update jldi aa jaye to
BALLE BALLE...!!!!
LUVV UU
Shivangi..
Originally posted by: princess200
Insh'Allah by tomorrow night it should come...if at all nahi hua coz tmrw is the weekend kickstart here...then ill will come by friday afternoon 😃
~Mujhmein Tera AKS~
Part 9
He stood leaning next to a pillar, his eyes continuously following his angel wherever she moved around in the Dargah. He wanted to apologize to her. He really did. But he didn't know if she would even believe him now. He was lost in his thoughts when he heard a familiar voice.
Jamal: Hey Bro!
Iqtiaar turned around to see his friend from London, Jamal-ud din - Yakut, fondly known as JY standing next to him.
Iqtiaar: JY? Dude where have you been all this while?
JY: Being an Architect is a tough job Iqtiaar!
Iqtiaar: yeah yeah!
JY: anyhow, where's Bhaabhi Jaan?
Iqtiaar: She's right there. Razia? He called for her. Razia came close to them smiling and greeted JY.
Razia: Hello! She said smiling.
JY: Hey!
Iqtiaar: Razia this is JY, Jamal my friend from London and JY this is my Razia.
The my' caught Razia's attention. Shazia came to them along with Chanda.
Shazia: BTW Razia, you should befriend JY immediately, after all he would be more of your in-law once you are in London then the rest of us. After all, Chhote Nawab stays more with JY then any of us.
JY: Absolutely Aapi. Me and Laila!
Razia: Laila?
JY: yeah! The three musketeers: Me, Iqtiaar and Laila. I am sure Laila will too be very happy to meet you.
Razia smiled warmly as a pang of jealousy filled her.
Shazia and Razia were called by Nani for some work and they excused themselves. Thus Iqtiaar thought it to be important to introduce Chanda too to JY.
Iqtiaar: JY, this is Chanda, Razia's best-friend. She too stays in the UK but in Manchester... I suppose. He looked at Chanda to confirm to which Chanda nodded smiling.
JY: Oh really? Then we all are gonna have a lot of fun together after Iqtiaar's wedding.
Chanda smiled warmly.
Chanda: By the way, are you a lawyer too?
JY: oh No! I am an architect.
Chanda: No you must be kidding, I am an Architect too.
JY: Wow, that's great. Which company do you work for?
Chanda: ARB Corp.
JY: oh yes, that's a very good firm. I too have worked in it for about two years or so, but now I have my own business.
Chanda: Oh wow, which department were you in?
As Chanda and JY got busy with their professional talk Iqtiaar moved away to look for Razia. He saw her standing near Qaazi Sahab and worshiping with her hands raised in front of her. A smiled formed on his face to see her calm. She had been looking so stressed out since the morning. Just then he felt a tap on his shoulder and saw JY and Zaroon standing on either side of him.
Zaroon whistled and JY stood there with a million dollar wide smile on his face.
Iqtiaar: What Now?
Zaroon: I know you are too engrossed in looking at Bhabhi like that but don't you think there are other important issues that need your concern at the moment?
Iqtiaar: What do you mean?
JY: He means that there is a very important event which needs to be organized.
Iqtiaar gave JY a questioning look with his one eyebrow raised up. Iqtiaar: And what is that?
JY: Your Bachelor Party! He whispered in Iqtiaar's ears in a comic manner.
Iqtiaar: WHAT???? He shouted making everyone turn around towards the three of them.
Shazia smiled and looked at them in a questioning manner to which JY and Zaroon smiled foolishly while Iqtiaar looked away embarrassed.
Iqtiaar: Have you gone MAD JY?
JY: No in fact this is the first step towards SANITY from INSANITY for every man.
Iqtiaar: Oh SHUT UP. And stop this bullshi*t.
Zaroon: Miya Miya Miya! Please Miya. This kind of an opportunity comes in a man's way only once in a lifetime. Come to think of it Dude. He said as if it was a life turning event, exaggerating his every word.
Iqtiaar just kept staring at Zaroon with his arrogant expression without saying a word looking totally unconvinced with what Zaroon had just said.
JY: Fine! don't listen to us. But be at this address sharp at 10 pm this evening. He said making Iqtiaar hold a piece of paper which looked something like an entry pass to a pub or club, and left with Zaroon leaving Iqtiaar standing there shocked.
Iqtiaar: I am not going anywhere!!! he murmured and threw the pass away on to the ground.
***
JY stood near the Dargah stairs talking to someone on the phone when he saw Razia approaching him. He waved to her to greet her and tried to cut-short his phone call.
JY: yeah! Fine see you soon then. Yes I'll make sure everything's ready on time. Bye
Razia: Hi. She said once he was off the phone call.
JY: sorry, I was on the phone, talking to Laila.
Razia smiled.
JY: She's landing in Delhi tonight.
Razia: SHE? Razia asked rather surprised.
JY: Yes, Laila; Our friend; remember?
Razia: Hmm. Actually I didn't remember her name. Therefore I was a bit confused.
JY: oh yeah! I should have introduced us in a better way before. Never mind, so I am Jamal, JY! He said with warmth and a friendly fun way.
Razia giggled happily.
JY: And Laila is well "u'll know soon".
Razia smiled warmly and nodded like an obedient student trying to remember all Iqtiaar's friends' names.
JY: And Iqtiaar, well your fianc, is DONNY to all of us.
Razia: DONNY? She had a shocked expression on her face with her eyebrows shot up and her lips forming an O'.
JY: yeah Donny. Didn't you know?
Razia shook her head for a no with her mouth still open wide.
JY: well it's a secret then. Don't let anyone know. Alright?
Razia: Promise. She said swearing on herself with her right hand pinching on her neck.
JY made Razia come closer and whispered the secret in her ear which made Razia laugh uncontrollably.
Iqtiaar had been looking for Razia to try and talk to her once more so that he could apologize to her when he saw Razia standing with Jamal away from everyone and giggling and laughing out loud with him. Though he couldn't deny that she looked more beautiful than ever and that for some reason every time he saw her she looked more beautiful than the last time, he couldn't even ignore the strong emotion of jealousy that he felt at the moment looking at them both. He just realized that she never looked this gorgeous and cute when she was with him. Was it that she looked better with JY and not with him? No! Never! She was HIS fianc. She couldn't have looked better with anyone else. Forget about better, no one could look good and complement her except him. But then why did she not look so happy when she was with him? Why did she never smile and be herself around him? Maybe because he had never tried to make her feel comfortable around him. She was his fianc, his responsibility and it was his friend who could make her laugh and feel happy within the first few hours of meeting her. It was like a tight slap on Iqtiaar Ud-din Mallik's face. His ego was deeply hurt. He fisted his fingers and walked away with gritted teeth and lips pressed together.
***
Iqtiaar sat in his room looking at his wall clock again and again. It was half past eight in the evening and he was still in his track pants and sweat shirt with a grumpy and glum face.
Iqtiaar: Should I go? He asked himself.
Donny: Ofcourse you should. If she can laugh and be with JY as if you didn't even exist in this world, then you can for sure go to YOUR bachelor party.
Iqtu: No you should not! It was because of you that she was so unhappy. What is wrong if JY could make her feel lighter and a bit happy? Stop acting like a possessive husband and trying your stupid business tit for tat antics on your angel.
Donny: Don't listen to this fool Iqtiaar. You should go!
Iqtu: You should NOT!
Donny: you should!
Iqtu: No you should not!
Iqtiaar: SHUT UPPP!!!!!!!!!! Yes I WILL GO!
***
Iqtiaar took a shower and came out wearing his towel tied on to his waist. His hair was still wet and dripping water on to his chest with the smell of fresh shower all around in his room. He took his colon and wore it on himself when he heard his phone buzzing on the vibration mode. It was JY and there were already seventeen missed calls from him. He picked up the phone.
Iqtiaar: Yeah?
JY: How much more time are you going to take to reach here? And don't tell me that you aren't coming.
Iqtiaar: I am coming. But there's a problem.
JY: What?
Iqtiaar: I threw the entry pass in the Dargah somewhere.
JY: I knew you would do something like that. That's why I bought an extra pass. Now come soon we all are waiting for you.
Iqtiaar: Fine just an hour. Bye
Iqtiaar changed into a black trouser and a transparent black shirt which made his toned body look even sexier. He gelled his hair and took his phone and car keys and left for the venue.
Iqtiaar reached the venue at half past ten and called JY to come out as he was waiting there. JY came out and gave Iqtiaar his pass.
JY: you go inside; I am coming in a minute.
Iqtiaar: where are you going?
JY: client call. Have to attend this one.
Iqtiaar: At 10:30 pm?
JY: At 10:30pm India time and 5:00 pm UK time; remember!
Iqtiaar: Uh oh! carry on.
Iqtiaar went inside and to his utter surprise the lights went off making everything around him dark. He was planning to look out for Zaroon somewhere but now he couldn't even figure out a thing.
Play this song in the background now: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bY0O3n-3q3w
Just then a beam of red colour light fell on his face as the music started. All he could see around was beams of red colour lights on different platforms with shadows of what looked like of girls in some lacy and leather lingerie or so. It took him a minute to adjust his eyes to the light in the pub.
And then he saw a Laila next to a royal looking chair with a metallic chain her hand. But before he could process anything going around him, he felt someone blind fold him and push him on to a chair which he guessed was the same near which Laila was standing. His hands were tied down behind and he couldn't move an inch off the chair.
Yeh.. raat ruk jaye
Baat tham jaye..
Teri bahoon mein
As the blind fold got removed off his eyes, he saw Laila and some other girls dancing in front of him sensuously around poles.
Khwaishein jagi hain
Pyase pyase labon pe
Sii..
Khud ko jala doon
Teri aahon mein
Laila came close to him and traced her fingers on his face which she licked as they touched his lips and then showed an expression of getting burned.
Aagosh mein..
Mere aaj samah jaa..
Jaane kya hona hai kal
Aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se
Aa ja zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se jile...
She hovered over to him moving her upper torso in circular motions just in front of his face. She pulled her head back making her open hair fall on her back and her color bone and neck inches away from his lips. She slowly moved away from him and danced around the pole.
Music:
Yeh jahan..
Saara bhool kar..
Jismon ke saaye tale
Dheemi dheemi saanse
Chale raat bhar
Pal do pal
Hum hain humsafar
The abhi dono yahan
Honge subah jane kahan
Kya khabar
She made him sip the wine and took the glass away before he could continue drinking. His handcuffs were opened and she made him get off the chair putting his hands around her waist. They danced together with her falling on to his chest.
Aa ja zara
Khud ko mujhme mila ja..
Jane kya hona hai kal
Aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se
Aa ja zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se jile...
Music: Iqtiaar left her and went to the bar counter to make a drink for himself while Laila took it as the perfect opportunity to get changed. She came out wearing a black satin sheet tied around her body with her hair left open.
Khwaab hoon
Main toh makhmali..
Palkon mein le ja mujhe
Maine diya mauka tujhe ajanabi...hi...
He was making a drink for himself when she took the glass of his hand and made a drink for him herself. She made his hand trace around the soft cloth of her dress and rubbed her nose with his making him smile.
Hosh mein
Aaye naa abhi
Ik duje mein hi kahin
Khoyi rahe teri meri zindagi..
Khamoshiyan dhadkanon ki
Suna.. jaa
Jane kya hona hai kal
Aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se
Aa jaa.. (Aa jaa..)
Jo pal mile
Naseeb se jile..
He picked her up in his arms and she left her hold on him making her all weight fall on him. He turned around in cirles holding her in his arms and then put her down on her feet but still held her close in his arms.
Raat ruk jaye
Teri bahoon mein
Aagosh mein
Aaj mere samah.. jaa
Jane kya hona hai kal8
Aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se
Aa, aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se jile..
Iqtiaar and Laila burst out laughing with Laila in Iqtiaar's arms.
Iqtiaar: I can't believe that just happened between us. Laila is it really you or am I way too drunk to recognize the dancer. He said between his laugh trying to calm down and level his breathing.
Laila: No Donny, Its really me.
Zaroon came to them with a drink in his hand and raising a toast to Laila.
Zaroon: way to go Laila! If you would have done this in front of a prisoner, he would have spit out everything right there and then. Believe me!
Laila giggled at his comment.
Iqtiaar: yeah right, thanks for ruining my bachelor party. You are the biggest turn off I have ever met in my life. He joked with her.
Laila: Hawww! You are such a loser Donny. She said smacking him on the shoulder.
Iqtiaar smiled and pulled her in a hug warmly.
Iqtiaar: But on a serious note, now for sure I know why you are such a successful criminal lawyer. And why in general women turn out to be more successful while dealing with criminals. He said winking at her and teasing her further.
Laila: Just shut up will you? Just because you couldn't be daring enough to take criminology and went on to become the corporate servant that you are doesn't mean...
JY: okay okay guys, just stop it now. I can't handle this Law stuff anymore. You both are in a pub for god sake not in the court. So just STOP fighting.
Zaroon: Point to be noted my lord!
Iqtiaar: Point to be noted? He asked Laila in the drunk state to which she nodded.
Iqtiaar: Alright so the decision is taken, POINT NOTED.
JY: Ya Allah! All four of them burst out laughing and moved towards the bar.
***
As all four of them proceeded towards the bar, Laila excused herself to go and change. The guys went in and ordered drinks.
After a long time drinking, chatting and making fun about Laila's dance, Iqtiaar continued.
Iqtiaar: I just don't know from where Laila gets all these ideas.
Zaroon: No Miya, don't say that. That dance was really Hot!
JY and Iqtiaar threw out the beer out of their mouth on to the bar table not able to control their laughter and burst out into fits; JY even coughing due to the sudden reaction.
Laila came back wearing a green formal dress with a white waist belt and her hair tied back into a pony. That was her look which she carried 7 days a week, 365 days a year; The look of a professional hardcore criminal lawyer. She wasn't a girl who loved pink or liked dressing up like s**ts and dance in nightclubs partying with her boyfriend. She was a lady who held her head high at all times. She didn't even remember the last time she was emotional about something. She knew what she was taking about when she spoke business. And her profession was bloody serious to her. She was a classy lady yet just another tom boy at heart. Maybe that's why she was the heart of her friend circle group.( JY, Iqtiaar, Zaroon and Laila, and three more characters to be introduced)
Laila: Hi guys, what's up? She announced her entry as she reached the three men drinking as if there was no tomorrow.
Iqtiaar and JY turned around towards her and seeing her come back to her Laila Hussain the lawyer look, made them remember the scene some time back in the pub. They both exchanged a serious look; their lips sealed together and then burst out laughing making Laila give an expression of extreme irritation.
Laila: Okay fine! It's over now. She said as she slapped her purse on to the table and sat between Zaroon and Iqtiaar, opposite Jamal.
Zaroon: By the way if Bhabhi would have come tonight and had seen you dancing with Donny like that, I really doubt if the wedding would have been taking place anytime soon.
Laila: I don't think she should have any problem. I mean if a girl can't trust HIM, someone who literally preaches commitment then I really doubt she can ever be secure in her relationship.
Iqtiaar's expressions had become a lot harder with the discussion. Only he knew how he was trying to control himself from smashing the beer mug on to the ground. DESTINY! A guy who had wanted nothing in his life else then commitment from his would be wife was getting married to a girl who was least bothered about his take on relationship and marriage. Rather she was happier laughing and having fun with his male friends then to be even bothered if her fianc would be around looking for her. He fisted his hands on to the beer mug to cool himself down. Jamal noticed his change of behavior.
Laila: And I am sure even Donny wouldn't be jealous of any of her male friends? What say Donny? She said putting out her hand towards him for a high-five.
Iqtiaar remembered the afternoon episode when she stood next to the tree in the Dargaah laughing and giggling with JY. He gritted his teeth together and murmured: She can do whatever she wants. I don't care! He said as if she was least important to him.
Laila: See, I knew it!
While Laila thought of it to be Iqtiaar's understanding nature towards Razia, JY could very well figure out that there was a major problem with that statement Iqtiaar had just made.
JY: You don't CARE or you don't MIND Donny? He said with a slight sarcastic smile on his face.
The atmosphere on the table suddenly changed as even Zaroon and Laila could make out that there was a point in what JY was saying.
Iqtiaar chuckled the most sarcastic manner ever as he took a sip of his beer. Laila looked down towards her finger nails uncomfortably.
Iqtiaar: I DON'T CARE. He said stressing each and every word looking straight in JY's eyes. His voice was hoarse and spoke death.
JY maintained his slight serious smile as Iqtiaar looked at him as if he'll kill him any moment. Laila kept her gaze on her neatly manicured nails not even daring to look up at her friends.
Zaroon sensing the tension tried to calm Iqtiaar down. Zaroon: Miya...
But before he could continue saying anything else Iqtiaar suddenly smashed his beer mug on to the ground still looking at Jamal. Laila shivered as she least expected something so aggressive coming up.
As the people in the bar looked shocked towards their table, Iqtiaar confidently got off his chair and started to walk out. He seemed completely unaffected with the fearful eyes on him when a firm voice made him stop in his tracks.
JY: Donny? Wait. He said with utmost seriousness.
Iqtiaar didn't turn around but made an extremely irritated and frustrated expression. JY walked towards him made him face himself.
JY: you know you've never behaved in such a way before with me. But still I am not angry at you. His voice was calm and soft.
JY: In fact I pity you. Yes Mr. Iqtiaar Ud-din Mallik, I pity you.
Iqtiaar smirked at him to which JY responded the same way.
Iqtiaar: Pity? I think you should think about your own wellbeing first before interfering in other's personal matters.
Laila: Zaroon please stop them. She whispered to him, they both standing next to the table away from Iqtiaar and JY.
JY: You are very lucky to have her in your life Donny. Don't let trivial issues ruin your beautiful relationship. Razia is a...
But before he could continue Iqtiaar grabbed hold of his collar and shouted.
Iqtiaar: Don't you even dare take her name out of your filthy mouth. STAY AWAY FROM HER!!!
Laila couldn't take it anymore. She rushed to the two of them and pulled Iqtiaar away.
Laila: Oh stop it Donny! And for god sake come out of your misconceptions.
Iqtiaar: Laila you just stay out of it.
Laila: No I will NOT. She shouted at her highest pitch.
Laila: I thought you understood Razia and her feelings. But I was wrong. I was so wrong. You don't even have the slightest of idea of what she's all about. Do you have any idea what all has she done for you not even once thinking about herself? And here you are insulting her in front of your friends by doubting her commitment towards your wishes? She said full of disgust towards her best friend.
Iqtiaar looked away still not believing Laila.
Laila: Look at me when I am talking to you. She said angry and irritated with his behavior.
Laila: It was Razia who planned this Bachelor's party for you!
***
Next: Iqtiaar in Razia's bedroom in the middle of night!
Now u guys better write loonggg comments or else forget any more updates from me!!! I am sorry to write this but its hurting when u spend so much of ur time and energy and recive nothing... Also I am cutting down on my pms... so if u don't receive pms from me from now on don't be surprised!
Thanks
Shopau
Originally posted by: cherrynicolem
Amazing update
Hope they pour out their hearts soonThanks for the pm
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