ALZIA FF : Mujhmein Tera AKS Pt 24 - pg 31 - Page 3

Part 4

Qutub entered Altamush's study with a servant on her side. She asked the servant to keep the tea with the kettle on the table and leave.

Altamush: What is it?
He said the moment the servant left the room.

Qutub: It's your morning tea. I thought we could have it together.

Altamush: I know that it's tea. I am asking why you are here.
Qutub bent down and made the tea to serve it to her husband.

Altamush smiled a sarcastic smile and continued.
Altamush: Am I in heaven? Is it really you Qutub or am I dreaming?
He taunted her seeing her so affectionate towards him.

Qutub: its high time now Altamush. It's high time that we...

Altamush: What do you want from me now?
Altamush didn't let her finish and interrupted.

Qutub: Razia's happiness.
She said with tears in her eyes. Altamush immediately looked at her giving his full attention.

Qutub: It's high time we see things beyond our differences. We married each other for our children Altamush, so that we could give them a complete family and to give them love of both the parents. But what has happened was not something either of us ever wanted.
Qutub tried to reason.

Altamush: Are you accusing me of treating Razia like a step-daughter? How dare you? She is much more than a real daughter to me. Do you understand?

Qutub: I know that and I can never question your love for Razia. But we both know that our relationship has affected Razia in worse ways than both of us could ever think of.

Altamush looked down with shame in his eyes. He loved Razia more than a real father would. And that was the truth. But their family circumstances had almost ruined their children's childhood specially Razia's.

Qutub: We should think about her future now.

Altamush: What do you mean?
Qutub looked down hesitating for a bit.

Qutub: I think we should get her married now.

Altamush: What? Are you out of your mind Qutub? She's just a young girl.

Qutub: No Mr. Altamush Khan, she's a 24 year old young woman; A woman who deserves to be happy. She's a woman who deserves a man, a companion and a friend. She deserves someone who would always keep her happy no matter what. And she deserves a husband who would love her so much that she would even forgive her parents for never giving what she deserved all throughout her childhood!!!
She literally shouted those words out.

Altamush slowly turned towards Qutub, and for the first time in their 16 year old marriage he saw not his wife but a mother. A mother who just wanted her daughter's happiness.

Altamush: But...

Qutub: I know a daughter never grows up for her father. She always remains the same little doll for him. But we need to accept this reality.

Altamush: Hmm, Do you have someone in your mind for her?

Qutub: Yes!

Altamush: Who?

Qutub: Iqtiaar, Iqtiaar Ud-din Mallik.

***

The phone in the Mallik house rang and OSMAN received the call.

OSMAN: Yes?
OSMAN: May I please know who is on line?
OSMAN: I will just transfer the call to Begum Sahiba. Please hold on.

Shamshad Begum (Nani): Hello!

Altamush: Good Morning Mrs. Mallik. How are you?

Nani: Altamush? Oh! What a pleasant surprise, we all are very well. How are Qutub and your family doing?

Altamush: They are doing well too. Qutub and I were very happy to see Iqtiaar this morning, that too after so long.

Nani: Oh! Had he come to your residence?

Altamush: Oh yes! We were pleasantly surprised to see him. We were unaware of his stay in India.
He turned over to look at his nervous wife standing beside him, waiting for her husband to come to the point.

Nani: Yes. He is currently in Delhi itself. Actually Iqtiaar spends about two months in Delhi every year.

Altamush: Actually there is something important I wanted to speak to you about this time...
He said hesitantly.

Nani: Regarding?

Altamush: Regarding Iqtiaar and... my daughter RAZIA!

***

Qutub knocked on Razia's door and entered. Razia immediately hid the magazine she had been reading with Iqtiaar's interview article in it.

Qutub: Razia beta?

Razia: Yes Ammi! She said hiding the magazine behind her smiling at her mom.

Qutub: Beta! We are expecting some guests in the evening for dinner. I hope you don't have any other plans.

Razia: No.

Qutub: Good. Dress well tonight. I want my princess to look the most beautiful tonight. She said kissing Razia's forehead.

Razia: Ammi? She asked confused at her mom's reaction.

Qutub: I am so sorry sweetheart. I never wanted such a life for you. I am so sorry for last night. But I am sure my princess knows that Ammi and dad will always love her.

Razia nodded in a yes trying to calm her mom down.

Qutub: I was utterly wrong when I thought that Altamush and I will bring both you and Rukn-ud-din happiness. But I don't know why after meeting him today, something inside me tells me that he will always keep my darling happy!

Him' and he' caught Razia's attention. She immediately looked at her mother who was smiling back at her.
Razia: WHO are you talking about?

Qutub: Don't you know? She said raising an eyebrow at her daughter. I am your mother Razia. I have given birth to you. You can't hide anything from me. Ah! Not even that MAGAZINE in your hand. She said with a wide smile on her face.

Razia became rooted at her place. Her face was pale out of shyness and she really wanted the ground to crack and herself to fall in it.

Qutub: I know you LOVE him Razia.

Razia: Ammi?

Qutub: Yes! I do know. All these years, I haven't missed even one smile on your face that immediately formed on the slightest of mention of his name. Every single time there was a mention of his or his work, the glow that I saw in your eyes, I will not forget for the rest of my life sweetheart. And all those magazines and newspapers that went missing from your father's study; I know they are all in the last shelve of your cupboard.
She said winking at her daughter.

Razia immediately hugged her mother.
Razia: I love you mom, I really love you a lot.

Qutub: I know. Mom knows everything. Now stop being so emotional, I don't want my princess to look sad in front of her in-laws tonight. Keep smiling. And be ready to confess your love to him today. Its time!

She kissed Razia's forehead and left the room.

Razia was on top of the world. Her dreams were coming out to be true. Soon she would be his; in his world and happy.
But there was still a problem!

Razia: Confess? Tonight? No way! I can't do this. What would I tell him? What?
She smiled and shied away to herself.

Please play the song now and read on: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K57aFHAyWC4

Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginnu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai

Razia stood there shying, trying her best not to smile and control her thoughts. She took the magazine and opened it back to the page with his photograph. She couldn't control her smile any longer and smiled widely falling on her bed.

Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginnu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai

She went to her cupboard and took out all the magazines and newspapers out of the last shelve. She kissed each and every clipping of his multiple times and then took all the collages that she had made from the cut-outs into her embrace tightly as if hugging him.

Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno, meri khamoshiyan
Raat se hai lambhi kahin, dil ki yeh dastaan
Kaise kahoon

She lied down back on to the ground and remembered her meeting Iqtiaar the night before. She sang as if to tell him that her love for him was just not a night long. She asked his photograph how she should tell him. "Kaise kahoon?".

Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai

She ran towards her sliding door to the terrace and danced along with the curtains talking and singing to them.

Lehar sapno ki kaise ginnu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai

The wind blew and she closed her eyes feeling his presence like she always did in her dreams. She ran towards her stuff toys.

Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno, meri khamoshiyan
Raat se hai lambhi kahin, dil ki yeh dastaan
Kaise kahoon (kaise kahoon)

She sang to each one of them as if singing to Iqtiaar and pulled on a face in front of the third one on "kaise kahoon?"

MUSIC: She ran to the shower and took a long bath playing with bubbles and the water. She washed the soap of her body using her hand shower and came out wearing a white bath robe.

Tumse mujhe yeh kehna tha woh keh raha tha humdum
Ho saamne toh kya kahoon, kya kehna tha humdum
Kaise yeh, jazbaat hain
Iss dil mein toh, din raat hain

Using her hand she removed the steam of the mirror and looked at her image in it while shying and singing the above lines.

Honthon pe kyun aane se yeh sharmaate hai

She sang while putting her lip gloss.

Aankhon mein kyun yeh har gadi aa jaate hain

She put her eye makeup. She then stood in front of her wardrobe confused to choose her dress for the evening.
Singing the following lines.

Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginnu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai

MUSIC: She suddenly felt two strong arms around her waist. His hot lips in the nape of her neck travelling towards her ear. He bit it slightly before singing further.

Hum kyun kahe, joban kahe, ik baat hai jaana
Dhadkan kahe, dhadkan sune, woh raat hai jaana
Dil bole bin hai bolta
Sab raaz hai yeh kholta
Jab khwab hai, jazbaat hai, ehsaas hai
Toh kehna kya, toh sunn na kya, awaaz hai

He looked deep into her eyes and sang the answer to her questions. He turned her towards him and gestured how his heart can hear her hearts beating. And how all her secrets have been revealed mercilessly to him by her heart. She will never need her words to express her love from him.

Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginnu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai
Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno, meri khamoshiyan
Raat se hai lambhi kahin, dil ki yeh dastaan

He took out a red saree off the hanger and turned her back towards him. He took of the bathrobe off her shoulders which dropped down to her feet. Razia closed her eyes feeling just him. He draped the saree on her and just as his hands moved in to tuck in the pleats, her eyes shot open.

Kaise kahoon

She stood there in the dressing room clad in a beautiful red lehenga with gold dupatta. ALONE.

Will Iqtiaar say yes to the marriage?

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Originally posted by: arshia200

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though i have a feeling he will say no first😔

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Part 5

The arrangements for leaving to the Khan Residence were at full swing in the Mallik mansion. Shazia took care of each and every bit of the preparation. She was in command of the servants: KHURRAM, OSMAN and HASSAN.

She wore a beautiful white sharara and looked simple yet elegant. Suddenly her cell phone rang and she picked it up.

Shazia: Yes Zaroon? Where have you both reached?

Zaroon: We are 15 minutes away from home. Are you sure I should not tell him the real reason for our coming back home? He whispered looking back at Iqtiaar on the driving wheel.

Shazia: No Way! Don't you even dare. Give me a missed call when you are at the main gate. Bye.

Zaroon: Bye.

Zaroon looked back at Iqtiaar and gave him a cheeky smile.

Iqtiaar: What? Who was it?

Zaroon: Miya it was Aapi. He said still smiling sheepishly.

Iqtiaar: Then why are you smiling? She isn't well, right? How is she now?

Zaroon suddenly remembered the excuse they all had made up in front of Iqtiaar. The same and famous excuse - Shazia is not well.

Zaroon: OH, Oh! Yeah! She isn't well. He said changing his expression suddenly to a serious and sad looking one.

Iqtiaar: What the Hell... He said making a face at Zaroon.

Zaroon: Miya, its green signal, please we should hurry up, Aapi is not well (JHOOT BOLA!!! )

Iqtiaar started to drive again towards the Mallik mansion with a clear expression of ANGER on his face.

***

Nani: Shazia? Is everything done?

Shazia: Yes Nani, everything is done. In fact I have already asked HASSAN to put everything in the car. And all the things which we will be presenting to Razia as the shagun are kept on the dining table. Also Zaroon had just called up, they both will take about 15 minutes more to reach back home. So I think we should get ready for our drama' now. She said with a glint of mischief in her eyes.

Nani: Ah! Qabacha and Uzma?

Shazia: Mamu jaan is on an important call with a client and Mumani is just coming, she's getting ready.

Nani: Always the same story. She said completely annoyed with her daughter in-law.

Shazia: Nani we really need to hurry up now. Iqtiaar will be home any moment.

Nani: Okay, common let's go to your room.

***

Iqtiaar and Zaroon entered the mansion looking extremely worried.

Iqtiaar: KHURRAM, where is Aapi?

KHURRAM: She is getting ready for the evening! He said not realizing that it was Iqtiaar asking the question and there were a set of dialogues which had to be said in front of him. Zaroon gave KHURRAM a deadly look.

Iqtiaar: What?

KHURRAM: Ah! I mean she was getting ready for the evening when she fell down the stairs. She's in her room right now. (JHOOT BOLA!!! )

KHURRAM said with a sorry face looking down. Iqtiaar immediately moved towards Shazia's room. Zaroon followed giving KHURRAM his piece of mind.

Zaroon: Oye, Over acting? Didn't you rehearse your dialogues?

KHURRAM: I did Zaroon Miya, but nobody remembers anything in front of Iqtiaar Sahib!

Zaroon shook his head in irritation and moved towards Shazia's room.

***

Iqtiaar entered Shazia's room and saw Nani sitting with Shazia on the bed.

Iqtiaar: Aapi? Aapi, what happened to you?

Shazia: Nothing Chhote Nawab I am fine. It was just a small accident. I was getting ready quickly so that we all could reach on time to Khan Residence and I fell down.

Iqtiaar: Aapi how could you be so irresponsible? And why is going to the Khan residence important any way?

Nani: Because of you Chhote Nawab! All this is happening only because of you. Shazia is always worried about you and keeps thinking about your future the whole day. That is the reason she's never able to take care of herself and works absent mindedly. (JHOOT BOLA!!! )

Zaroon couldn't control and chuckled.

Shazia: No Nani, it's not like that. I am sure once Chhote Nawab gets married I wouldn't have to be so worried about him.

Iqtiaar: Aapi RELAX! Please don't start again.

Shazia: No Chhote Nawab I won't. What is wrong with us all wanting you to get married?

Iqtiaar: Oh! So now I get it. All this is some new drama of you all.

Everyone became serious and knew that now it was simply impossible to convince Iqtiaar for this marriage. He hated it when everyone used Shazia's health as a way to get Iqtiaar do things according to their wish. And to top it all lies never went down the throat of Iqtiaar Ud-din Mallik, The lawyer.

Shazia: Yes it is!!! The soft spoken Shazia almost shouted and stood on her feet in front of everyone making it very clear that indeed it was a drama.

Iqtiaar looked extremely angry and was looking straight in Shazia's eyes. But Shazia still held confidence in her posture. It was very clear with her attitude that no matter what Iqtiaar will have to agree with her today!

Nani: Shazia?

Iqtiaar: Nani I want to talk to Aapi. AlONE.

Everybody present in the room was very much aware of the tension in the room and quietly exited the room leaving Shazia and Iqtiaar to talk.

***

After an hour or so;

Iqtiaar and Shazia came out of the room to be welcomed by inquisitive faces of the Malliks. Each one of them had the same question written on their face.

Uzma: Iqtiaar Beta? Are we all going to your friend's house or no?

Nani: Uzma!

Qabacha: Iqtiaar Beta, Please try and understand, we all are thinking in the best favor of you.

Iqtiaar: I do understand that Mamu jaan. And that is why I am ready to go to the Khan House.

Everyone had smile on their faces.

Iqtiaar: But, I have a condition!

Nani: Condition?

Iqtiaar: Yes and my condition is that I won't say yes to this proposal until I get to talk to Razia alone.

Everybody chuckled and sighed a relief but Shazia didn't look too happy/convinced with Iqtiaar's announcement about the condition.

Nani: That's it? For sure you can meet her. She said smilingly. Now should we proceed to the Khan residence?

***

Razia stood in front of the dressing table making sure everything was perfect. Her saree; makeup; earrings; everything was just perfect. There was a knock on her door and she came to see who it was. It was a lady servant of the house.

Servant: Razia Aapi, Begum Sahiba has asked you to get ready quickly, the guests have come.

Razia: Tell her I am ready. The servant nodded and left.

Razia closed the door and turned her back to lean on it as she sighed a relief. But the very next second she was nervous as hell. She didn't know how to react and was shivering. Razia walked around in her room and finally sat down to take long breaths to calm her senses down.

Razia (self talk): Razia just relax. Everything would be fine.

Next: Razia gets scared of Iqtiaar!

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PART 4

Pehli baat toh...itna short updates whyyy😭 dil maange more
Razias mom reminds me a hell lot of my mom...in this part 4 update i mean...no matter what and how i try and hide it from her...she will suddenly spill the beans of my harkats in front of me🤣 at the right moment offcourse...this is one of the reasons why i could never plan a surprise bday party for her till date...but that later...
she LOVES him...shes CRAZY abt him...right ? But what abt him ??
Except for him feeling bad for shouting at her in the previous update...issey zyada he has no feelings towards her right...And btw i thought razia didnt blive in a happy marriage na ...she just blives in love...hai na ??? then ab itna why shes dancing...ah maybe the feel of getting to be with someone u crazily love makes u forget ur past thoughts...but u are a brilliant writer i am sure u will remove her fear of marriage out in someway or the other 😉

PART 5

oooh toh sab Iqtiaar se itna darte hai kya...tht to convince him they have to rehearse dramas and all🤣 you have made this man an interesting personality in ur FF here...i totally love it...
My personal fav was...Zarooon "Oye overacting ? rehearse nahi kiya kya" 🤣 Ur too good in yaar Shopau🤣

And then tht final phase of tension of meeting ladke walas...ughhh i hate tht kind of tension...atleast she is meeting the one she loves for the rishta thingy...so the wonderful feeling of 'nervousness' ...koi aur hota toh...ugghhh jo feeling aati hai na...koi mujhse pooche

tu kamaal hai yaar meri jaan...but meri yeh bohot badi shikayat hai that ur updates get over in a jiffy...whyyy yaar...thoda aur lamba likho na😭

update soon update soon update soon !!! I cant wait to read why shes scared of Iqtiaar...kiss viss toh nahi karne gaya na ukso🤣
dying to read it now...dying to knw what he will wna talk to her abt...tht too ahem...alone😉

HuGSSS🤗

haaye Razia ki mom ne toh mujhe meri maa ki yaad dila di.. pata nahi unhe bhi kaise sab pata chal jaata hai... even my first crush.. mujhe aaj bhi nahi pata ki unhe ye sab kaise pata 😆

Originally posted by: arshia200

unres//

PART 4

Pehli baat toh...itna short updates whyyy😭 dil maange more
Razias mom reminds me a hell lot of my mom...in this part 4 update i mean...no matter what and how i try and hide it from her...she will suddenly spill the beans of my harkats in front of me🤣 at the right moment offcourse...this is one of the reasons why i could never plan a surprise bday party for her till date...but that later...
she LOVES him...shes CRAZY abt him...right ? But what abt him ??
Except for him feeling bad for shouting at her in the previous update...issey zyada he has no feelings towards her right...And btw i thought razia didnt blive in a happy marriage na ...she just blives in love...hai na ??? then ab itna why shes dancing...ah maybe the feel of getting to be with someone u crazily love makes u forget ur past thoughts...but u are a brilliant writer i am sure u will remove her fear of marriage out in someway or the other 😉

PART 5

oooh toh sab Iqtiaar se itna darte hai kya...tht to convince him they have to rehearse dramas and all🤣 you have made this man an interesting personality in ur FF here...i totally love it...
My personal fav was...Zarooon "Oye overacting ? rehearse nahi kiya kya" 🤣 Ur too good in yaar Shopau🤣

And then tht final phase of tension of meeting ladke walas...ughhh i hate tht kind of tension...atleast she is meeting the one she loves for the rishta thingy...so the wonderful feeling of 'nervousness' ...koi aur hota toh...ugghhh jo feeling aati hai na...koi mujhse pooche

tu kamaal hai yaar meri jaan...but meri yeh bohot badi shikayat hai that ur updates get over in a jiffy...whyyy yaar...thoda aur lamba likho na😭

update soon update soon update soon !!! I cant wait to read why shes scared of Iqtiaar...kiss viss toh nahi karne gaya na ukso🤣
dying to read it now...dying to knw what he will wna talk to her abt...tht too ahem...alone😉

HuGSSS🤗

Originally posted by: ..radiance...

haaye Razia ki mom ne toh mujhe meri maa ki yaad dila di.. pata nahi unhe bhi kaise sab pata chal jaata hai... even my first crush.. mujhe aaj bhi nahi pata ki unhe ye sab kaise pata 😆

mujhe lagta tha Altumash doesnt like Razia but he loves her too

i like your song selection...

sab Iktiar se darte hain 😆 he is so sweet n caring brother

I love him yarr

update soonish...!! cant wait to know ki Razia k ghar kya hoga aage..!! 😊

Originally posted by: Shopau

Sabse pehle toh THANKS for ur COMMENTS... They are lovely 🤗🤗

I guess due to writing two FFs simultaneously ... my updates have become shorter... So since I am in flow of writing AKS at the moment I will give a big long update tonight and then a long update of NDZ tomorrow!😃

And yes You'll know of Iqtiar's feeliing's very soon... he's not really in love with her. Moreover he doesn't believe in love more of which will be revealed later...

Coming to Razia's behaviour. U need to understand that she is quite the Opposite of Razia Sultan. This Razia is an extremely emotionally weak personality. Who hasn't really experienced love and affection. Though her parents are nice people and do love her... it's one thing to love and another to express it. 😔 So she has grown up in an environment where she has seen her parents fight, speak to each other loudly etc. almost each day. Its not that she hasn't seen happy marriages... its just that she believes happy marriages are only when the two people are in love with each other...otherwise it would fail like in the case of her parents.

Also to escape such torture over the years she has formed a dream world (which is quite natural to do) where she thinks of Iqtiaar in a certain way and believes that he is exactly like that. Trust me when I say she hasn't met him for nine long years... people change or rather evolve with time.

So now she thinks that maybe even he like her... and thus is happy to get married to him, thinking of it to be an escape from her current torturous life!!! Also she really couldn't ever imagine to actually get married to him... so she isn't thinking too much at the moment. Just that something like that is happening is enough for her at the moment. Hope it makes a bit of sense now.

Coming up with a LOOONG update soon!

Kiss bhi karvadenge...sabar rakho!!!

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