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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

aw snap phir woh beech mein ruk gayiiiπŸ˜’

arrey zaalim...ab milwa bhi do dono ko...

now i realized one thing...inn dono ka asal wala consummation sirf tab hoga when he actually confesses his love to her...am i right ?πŸ˜‰ i think ur saving the best part for that best moment...

haaye najaane kab realize karega woh...aur kab bolega usko πŸ˜’

ohh well as much as i said it...she needs time etc etc...and now main hii roye jaa rahi hoon for not allowing him to continue πŸ˜†

kya karey dil hai kii maanta hii nahi...😳

but on a very serious note...I REALLY WANT THEIR CONSUMMATION TO TAKE PLACE WHEN HE CONFESSES HIS LOVE TO HER. that moment will just be epic...everything will be epic...i dont know how u plan to do it...after a fight sequence...after a scary encounter...though after a fight if he confesses and then wen they do it...it will be hawter and more romantic...dont u think haaye main bhi kya sapne dekh rahi hoon

now about this update...
IT WAS HAWT...WILD SORT OF...HE LIFTED HER ...that was unexpected...man this guy is an aggressive passionate lover 😈
tooo tooo tooo passionate...tooo sensual

i can hardly even imagine no matter how wild i let it run...ki najaane aage jaake kya hona wala hai...specially during 'THAT EPIC' moment...☺️

razia gave him a love bit OMG 😲...digging her nails in his back...he was TOPLESS !!! UFFF !!! that was WOW ! 😈 and he liked that pain ??☺️

also hey...how the hell that bas***d could see her ??? camera lagwa diya kya uske bathroom mein...ya bahar binoculars se dekh raha tha 😑
that means he saw her changing also ?? 😑

isne galat aadmi se panga liya hai boss 😑 Iqtiaar is gonna SLAUGHTER him...

btw i wanted to ask one thing...will u be making razia a working woman ?? coz i really want to see her that way...i dont wana see her u know...being a housewife...i want her to be little bold and independent slowly...off course...she will always find her true solace peace and security in his arms at the end of the day...but i want her to do something for herself for her personal satisfaction as well...think over it haan...

and their dinner dinner...how could i forget...

he made her sit on her lap and the way he calls her baby, baby for everything☺️...never forget to write that too okay ?
it was sooo adorable...Iqtiaar is MY DREAM MAN NOW...already...i dont need to read further abt his transformation into realizing his love for her to make him my dream man... he has already passed the test today with more than distinction

update soon shona...im waiting for more and more...hope kal hii ajaaye wapas ! precap left me excited...bt i dont knw why tht one line of lailas "see u in office tmrw" made me insecure again🀒

i knw u told me not to doubt her but still...the woman in me is like that only...i am a very very possessive lioness

updateee sooon haaan please...kal only if possible

hugsssπŸ€—


Well I'll reply to ur comment in detail later...

But for now.. YES RAZIA IS an extremely independent girl... it will be revealed slowly... I have already given certain hints πŸ˜† but u will catch them only when iqtiaar does!!! 🀣

Plus the consummation is a looonnnggg way to go... it can't be over night πŸ˜” But I know my readers very well... toh thoda toh teasers dene parenge na... aur Razia aur Iqtiaar ko bhi apni feelings express karne do...☺️ ☺️

I do have something similar planned for their consummation but still slightly different... You will see πŸ˜ƒ

And ya??? how did you get to know my nickname??😲? its actually Shona... that's what my friends call me... Mujhe toh ab tumse dar lagne laga hai??? Tum koi antaryami toh nahi hona yaar???

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Posted: 9 years ago
hehehe i felt like calling u shona bas thts it...ill call u that only from now on 😳
chalo more than anything else im satisfied to hear tht she will be independent...and its true we notice only when iqtiaar notices πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
πŸ˜ƒ
OOO OOO TERRRIII...!!!!!! πŸ˜›
Special dedication to ME... HAAAYEEE!!! Itna pyar na do hume...ki hum khushi k mare bed se hi kood jayen...!!!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
I LUUUVVV UUU SHOPAU ...meri jaan !!! 😳 😳

Ooo... Shopau..apke reply aur special dedication ne hume ekdum MEENA KUMARI yaad dila di... mtlb bahut emotional ho gaye...yaar !!! And sach me hum din bhar me 20 baar wo vm dekhte hain... aur har baar aankhen nam ho jati hain... I don't no kyuuu...??!!! Hume to aisa lgta h jaise ye gaana Laal ishq..inhi k liye bana hai...!! Apne itna acha set kiya hai...!!! Hum kitni tareef kare hum smjh nahi paa rhe hain...!!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

AND YES I ALSO WANTED TO TELL U THAT... Ap agla vm...CHADARIYA JHEENI pe banaiye... Pata nhi kyu...whenever I listen to this song..Hume hamesha ALZIA ki hi yaad ati hai... !! Ap isi pe vm banaiye aur is baar unke horse riding scenes aur sword fighting & latest romantic scenes bhi add kijiyega... lkin wo first meeting wala scene zarur rkhiyega...!!! I just love it...dearly... 😳 πŸ˜ƒ

Now... the chapter... Ooo Ikhtiar... he's so daaarling... I LOVE HIM .. And hamari razia ...she's so cuuute... and maasuum...!! A perfect pair... The way he always put his hands on her waist ... hum to KAAYAL ho gaye... I luv razia blushing on his crazy actions...!! And our Laila... she's also a darling one... infact all friend s of Ikhtiar are kamaal... . !!! Dost ho to aise... πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Auuur... wo KAMINA ... Haramkhor... !! Saala... itna bada wala...mtlb... sach me razia ko khi se dekh rha tha...!!! Saale ...wait & watch... Ikhtiar..will tear u in pieces !! Tukde tukde krega tere... Ikhtiar... maar daal use... !! 😑 😑 😑

But akhir me... everything went HOOOT and peacefully... Razia abhi bhi dar rhi h...but I think..she's right on her side... phli bar me sab nervousiya jate hain...!! But my Ikhtu is so understanding and caring... !! Kitna smjhta hai razia ko... I hope unka pyar jldi parwan chadhe...!!! And he accepts his endless love for Razo...!!! 😳 πŸ˜›

And now... Mera tujhse hai pehle ka naata koi... yuhi nahi dil churata koi... Jaane tuuu... yaaa jaane naaa...!!!

MY BHAR BHAR KE PYAAR FOR MY WRITING ANGELS... Shopau and Arshia...!!! LUUUVVV UUU πŸ˜ƒ 😳

SHIVANGI...UR CUTE RABBIT... Arshu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
haha Shivangi tu sahi mein meri choti si Rabbit haiπŸ€—β€οΈ
ur comments cant compete with anyone's comments AT ALL !!

Meena Kumari aur woh sabπŸ˜†

you rock girlπŸ˜ƒ

stay the way u are always πŸ€—
Edited by princess200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
My comments part 2 FOR CHAPTER 16---->

Sorry yaar i cant resist writing more and reading it again and again...haha leh maine phir sorry boldi...πŸ˜†
sorry for telling sorry nowπŸ˜†πŸ˜³

I read the whole romance sequence plenty of times now...and i realized that more than it being something hawt and sensual...it was a deep connection...something that could be only felt mentally...not physically as such...there was no lust...no raw desire...it was a heart to heart bonding...it was PURE ! At first when i read it i was excited,...partly coz u updated a chapter n thts how i feel even before reading it...and partly coz u gave hints on hw its gna be...i called it hawt...sensual...and what not...coz thts what i really felt that time...but as i read it more slowly and more number of times...it melt my heart no end...i could almost feel what razia felt...being so emotionally broken and not being able to take so much at one time...yet trying her best to...slowly and slowly go further until she can take no more for the day...awww... *moist eyes but happy eyes*


this bonding of theirs is so beyond love...its beyond a marriage...it is special...it is sacred...it is respect. The way he kneels down in front of her...this is the 2nd time hes done it...the way he embraces her while blasting someone else off on the other side...still holding her close...the way he makes her feel SECURE and SAFE in his arms...the way she finds solace and peace ONLY IN HIS ARMS...

THIS IS SO PERFECT...I JUST CANT DESCRIBE HOW MUCH IVE ACTUALLY STARTED TO PRAY FROM INSIDE TO GET A GUY LIKE IQTIAAR...

i understood the message that u are trying to convey with this story...i understood its deep hidden meanings...its much beyond physical and emotional love...which will become clearer to me as ur updates come...

you always bring tears in my eyes...happy tears and tears of prayers to get a guy like him...i love u...i love u just so much...i dont know what life would be like without you and ur stories...im so glad and i thank god for bringing you in my life...you are bound to become someone who has taught me great life lessons...very soon...

AND YA DONT U EVER DARE STOP GIVING US THE TEASER ROMANCES HERE N THERE WITH EVERY UPDATE...JUST THE WAY THIS WAS..
.sure im waiting for their consummation...but this...this was something more...more which words cannot express...whatever i could express on it i tried my best...yet my heart is filled with sooo many things tht i still wna write down here...bt cant find the right words for it...so let them be unsaid...let me just feel them...😊

I LOVE U SHONA...UPDATE SOON...πŸ€—



Edited by princess200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
and ya i almost sang laal ishq in my mind...the BGM of it mostly...but stopped mid way...this music ill play only when they consummate...coz i knw its gna be way too emotional and heart touching as such...tht i might even cry my eyes out 😊
also VM ka request..even shivangi said she wants chadariya jeeni re jeeni...from badlapur...when i re-read my Vm requests to u i realized even i had said chadariyaa as well...and laal ishq too jo tune poori kardi...

but take ur time...no hurry...hurry is only for AKS UPDATES πŸ˜†
Edited by princess200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

<font size="3"><font color="#336600">haha Shivangi tu sahi mein meri choti si</font><font color="#0000ff">Rabbit </font><font color="#336600">haiπŸ€—β€οΈ</font>
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<font size="3"><font color="#336600">ur comments </font><font color="#ff0000">cant compete with anyone's comments AT ALL !!</font></font>

<font size="3" color="#336600">Meena Kumari aur woh sabπŸ˜†</font>

<font size="3" color="#336600">you rock girlπŸ˜ƒ</font>

<font size="3"><font color="#660000">stay the way u are always</font><font color="#336600">πŸ€—</font></font>


Meri jaan... apke replies bhi has no competition... !!!
πŸ˜ƒ 😳 luvvv uuu and ap bhi stay like this. forever...lovling..and DAAARLINNG...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lionsroar

πŸ˜ƒ
OOO OOO TERRRIII...!!!!!! πŸ˜›
Special dedication to ME... HAAAYEEE!!! Itna pyar na do hume...ki hum khushi k mare bed se hi kood jayen...!!!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
I LUUUVVV UUU SHOPAU ...meri jaan !!! 😳 😳

Ooo... Shopau..apke reply aur special dedication ne hume ekdum MEENA KUMARI yaad dila di... mtlb bahut emotional ho gaye...yaar !!! And sach me hum din bhar me 20 baar wo vm dekhte hain... aur har baar aankhen nam ho jati hain... I don't no kyuuu...??!!! Hume to aisa lgta h jaise ye gaana Laal ishq..inhi k liye bana hai...!! Apne itna acha set kiya hai...!!! Hum kitni tareef kare hum smjh nahi paa rhe hain...!!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

AND YES I ALSO WANTED TO TELL U THAT... Ap agla vm...CHADARIYA JHEENI pe banaiye... Pata nhi kyu...whenever I listen to this song..Hume hamesha ALZIA ki hi yaad ati hai... !! Ap isi pe vm banaiye aur is baar unke horse riding scenes aur sword fighting & latest romantic scenes bhi add kijiyega... lkin wo first meeting wala scene zarur rkhiyega...!!! I just love it...dearly... 😳 πŸ˜ƒ

Now... the chapter... Ooo Ikhtiar... he's so daaarling... I LOVE HIM .. And hamari razia ...she's so cuuute... and maasuum...!! A perfect pair... The way he always put his hands on her waist ... hum to KAAYAL ho gaye... I luv razia blushing on his crazy actions...!! And our Laila... she's also a darling one... infact all friend s of Ikhtiar are kamaal... . !!! Dost ho to aise... πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Auuur... wo KAMINA ... Haramkhor... !! Saala... itna bada wala...mtlb... sach me razia ko khi se dekh rha tha...!!! Saale ...wait & watch... Ikhtiar..will tear u in pieces !! Tukde tukde krega tere... Ikhtiar... maar daal use... !! 😑 😑 😑

But akhir me... everything went HOOOT and peacefully... Razia abhi bhi dar rhi h...but I think..she's right on her side... phli bar me sab nervousiya jate hain...!! But my Ikhtu is so understanding and caring... !! Kitna smjhta hai razia ko... I hope unka pyar jldi parwan chadhe...!!! And he accepts his endless love for Razo...!!! 😳 πŸ˜›

And now... Mera tujhse hai pehle ka naata koi... yuhi nahi dil churata koi... Jaane tuuu... yaaa jaane naaa...!!!

MY BHAR BHAR KE PYAAR FOR MY WRITING ANGELS... Shopau and Arshia...!!! LUUUVVV UUU πŸ˜ƒ 😳

SHIVANGI...UR CUTE RABBIT... Arshu...



Your comments are one in the million!!!!🀣

I don't usually have a clue on how to react on ur comments but have a wide grin on my face everytime!!!! πŸ˜ƒAur hum tumhe abhi itna pyaar denge ki tum MEENA KUMARI ko bhi hara dogi... RABBIT!!!πŸ˜†

I have already started to plan the vm for you on ur desired song... Arshia bhi KHUSH... Tum bhi KHUSH and Main bhi KHUSH!!!πŸ˜†

Yes all of Iqtiaar's freinds are DARLINGS... aane wale updates mein toh prove ho hi jaayega!!! Aur tum zarra Arshia ko samjhao Shivangi ki Laila par shaq karna kam kare... 🀣

Hum bhi NERVOUSIYA gayye the update likhte waqt toh Razia ko kaise blame karein... But she will slowly overcome her fear...
Iqtiaar samjhaata toh hai... par woh bhi insaan hi hai... kahin apna patience na kho baithe

I love you too MERI JAAN... πŸ€— πŸ€—

I am updating, hope you like the update!!!

Love
Shopau

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Posted: 9 years ago
nervousiyaa🀣
gosh shes one in a million really🀣

you both areπŸ€—

i can only stop shakk karoing on Laila if Iqtiaar tells shes like his little sister OR if she and JY get married ...only then haan...not otherwiseπŸ˜†

and omggg yeh kya cue de diya tune...

" Iqtiaar samjhaata toh hai... par woh bhi insaan hi hai... kahin apna patience na kho baithe"

OMGGG...i am sensing a fight very soon enough on this physical intimacy thingy...i dont blame him...guys have tht blazing desire which they hide deep within themselves waiting for permissions from their respective soulmates as i described in "Death is not the end" but IF they lose their patience..kabhie kabhie volcanic erruption ho jaata haiπŸ˜’

bt after the outburst i knw for sure Iqtiaar will make up for it...hes a darling...UPDATE SOOON !! BEFORE LATE AFTERNOON...coz uske baad mujhe kaam hoga...
Edited by princess200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

My comments part 2 FOR CHAPTER 16---->


Sorry yaar i cant resist writing more and reading it again and again...haha leh maine phir sorry boldi...πŸ˜†
sorry for telling sorry nowπŸ˜†πŸ˜³

I read the whole romance sequence plenty of times now...and i realized that more than it being something hawt and sensual...it was a deep connection...something that could be only felt mentally...not physically as such...there was no lust...no raw desire...it was a heart to heart bonding...it was PURE ! At first when i read it i was excited,...partly coz u updated a chapter n thts how i feel even before reading it...and partly coz u gave hints on hw its gna be...i called it hawt...sensual...and what not...coz thts what i really felt that time...but as i read it more slowly and more number of times...it melt my heart no end...i could almost feel what razia felt...being so emotionally broken and not being able to take so much at one time...yet trying her best to...slowly and slowly go further until she can take no more for the day...awww... *moist eyes but happy eyes*


this bonding of theirs is so beyond love...its beyond a marriage...it is special...it is sacred...it is respect. The way he kneels down in front of her...this is the 2nd time hes done it...the way he embraces her while blasting someone else off on the other side...still holding her close...the way he makes her feel SECURE and SAFE in his arms...the way she finds solace and peace ONLY IN HIS ARMS...

THIS IS SO PERFECT...I JUST CANT DESCRIBE HOW MUCH IVE ACTUALLY STARTED TO PRAY FROM INSIDE TO GET A GUY LIKE IQTIAAR...

i understood the message that u are trying to convey with this story...i understood its deep hidden meanings...its much beyond physical and emotional love...which will become clearer to me as ur updates come...

you always bring tears in my eyes...happy tears and tears of prayers to get a guy like him...i love u...i love u just so much...i dont know what life would be like without you and ur stories...im so glad and i thank god for bringing you in my life...you are bound to become someone who has taught me great life lessons...very soon...

AND YA DONT U EVER DARE STOP GIVING US THE TEASER ROMANCES HERE N THERE WITH EVERY UPDATE...JUST THE WAY THIS WAS..
.sure im waiting for their consummation...but this...this was something more...more which words cannot express...whatever i could express on it i tried my best...yet my heart is filled with sooo many things tht i still wna write down here...bt cant find the right words for it...so let them be unsaid...let me just feel them...😊

I LOVE U SHONA...UPDATE SOON...πŸ€—





I can't help but tell you that I was slightly disappointed πŸ€” with ur comments last night... SINCE I WAS actually EXPECTING THIS COMMENT which you gave me this morning...

That's why I didn't comment in detail then πŸ˜” ...

But now I will... πŸ₯³

You know I expect these kinda comments only from you... and this reply is coming straight from heart ❀️ πŸ€—

So yes the bond they share or which they are currently bonding is almost SPIRITUAL!!! Can't be explained easily but you defined it correctly ... SACRED and BEYOND LOVE OR MARRIAGE...

I know you won't believe me again... but I had actually written an FF on the same concept around 2-3 years back on another couple and the tag line of that FF then was BEYOND LOVE AND COMMITMENT...

I felt a weird feeling when I read these words coming from you in this update!!! 😊

And Razia is going through and have gone through a lot which will be revealed in the coming update maybe after two updates or so...

I would suggest that you read these updates again at that time... will tell you when πŸ˜†

I know what you are feeling hunnie... Words aren't needed...

I am just happy that the update could connect to you in some way!!!

Love
urs Shona
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