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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

CHAPTER 14

UNRES//

I feel oddly satisfied everytime i read ur update..and with this one a bit more...Their Romantic equation was perfecccttto !
😳
Ill repeat it again...think we both do understand a girls nature quite well specially when shes been through a lot...and shes not ready to give up her virginity just yet...coz ohh yes it is a VERY BIG DEAL for her...AND IM SO GLAD IQTIAAR UNDERSTOOD THAT. 😊

When a guy understands that...hes the most perfect guy a girl can ever get...other flaws reduce or fade with time...no one is ever gna be perfect in the true sense...but most important of them all is that HE does understand her central emotions.

Yes ill be honest i was a BIT disappointed coz...No consummation πŸ˜† we all r crazy romantic people na we crave for more and moreπŸ˜† but no complains as such bcos i totally understand why😊 and offcourse with time woh bhi ho hii jayega...πŸ˜‰

me personal fav was iqtiaar removing her necklace and off course embracing her in bed...caressing her to sleep 😳 SO VERY SWEET...HOW VERY CARING...Again u are spoiling me...again u r making me increasing my demands regarding the kind of qualities i want in my guy...as it there were so many crazy demands 🀣 ur every update makes me add more πŸ˜†

Ohh hes a very smart person...hes way to sharp to notice even minute things like tears in her eyes from a distance, scared expressions on faces, talks being covered in lies. Perfect Lawyer. Yes i am 100 percent sure now...HE WILL BE THE ONE TO TAKE AWAY EVERY MINUTE PAIN FROM RAZIA'S LIFE. AND SHE WILL BE THE ONE TO MAKE HIM REALIZE WHAT IS THE FEELING OF BEING IN LOVE ...SHE WILL MAKE HIM BELIEVE IN LOVE.

This is the journey of marriage...definitely there are gonna be ups and downs both...love and fights both...passion and aggression both...i am very scared abt the downs they will be having but excited at the same time to see how they resolve it...ending up ahem having a round of hot passionate romance to make up for it πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

not to forget her hatred for alcohol...and well he drinks yes...so...lets see how that goes down as well...

Ohh damn...they r not sitting together in the flight 😡 London flight is for 8 hours ...shit 8 whole hours...not with each other ...hope he finds a way out of this πŸ˜’

I am veryyy excited abt the London scenes...I have been to London and stayed there for quite sometime ...i have a family there...and will be going again in a few months...You will be taking me back in my own memories of tht majestic city !!

UPDATE SOON LOVE...


I SALUTE YOU TODAY...FOR BRINGING OUT WHAT A MAN SHOULD BE LIKE TOWARDS HIS WOMAN. HOW HE SHOULD TREAT HER ESPECIALLY ON THEIR VERY FIRST NIGHT WHICH IS A DAMN IMPORTANT NIGHT FOR HER...FOR THEM...HOW IMPORTANT IT IS FOR HER THAT HE UNDERSTAND HER...TO SHOW HER THT HE CARES AND SHE WILL BE FOREVER SECURE IN HIS ARMS. 😳

Love u girl...update soon !! πŸ€—







You guys are spoiling me like LITERALLY!!!! But I don't quite mind being spoilt this way...

I am so so so HAPPY that you guys liked the chapter... And u feeling " oddly satisfied " I know the feeling... I can't tell you how satisfied I am to have read this comment from you.

Felt like a cool breeze after all those tense moments while writing the update!!!

Let me tell you I feel so in sink with you and love reading your comments the most since I know you will understand and relate to my writing the most...

I don't know if I have said this before but Its solely because of you that I returned to this forum and writing and I greatly want to thankyou from the bottom of my heart. The more I share my thoughts with you I realize that we truly are sole sisters!!!πŸ€—

And you are right I really don't know there are guys like Iqtiaar any more anywhere???

And yes he's really very smart... u'll realize it more and more as the SS progresses. And I promise there will be more ups then downs in this FF. I really want to make a point via this story... it's not just a FF for me... the story is really close to my heart. Almost a DREAM...

Lets see where I can take this ...

THANK YOU AGAIN ARSHIA!!! LOVE YOU SO MUCHπŸ€—β€οΈπŸ€—


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Astoria

You know what Shopau,I must admire the manner in which you arrange the sequence of eventsπŸ‘

I am overwhelmed after reading it.The song matched with the scenes and of course my favourite character Ikhtiaar.This character has always intrigued me.Loved how he understood Razia's feelings😳

It was superb.In my words,AFSAWπŸ‘πŸ‘

BTW,I am catching up with Nek Dil Zaalim too.I missed quite a lot.

Stay happy and keep updatingπŸ˜ƒ


THANKS ASH! Glad to hear that you like my writing style and the updateπŸ˜ƒ

will be coming up with More if IQTIAAR's lovely scenes expressing his character more!!!

Hope you like NDZ as wellπŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shopau




You guys are spoiling me like LITERALLY!!!! But I don't quite mind being spoilt this way...

I am so so so HAPPY that you guys liked the chapter... And u feeling " oddly satisfied " I know the feeling... I can't tell you how satisfied I am to have read this comment from you.

Felt like a cool breeze after all those tense moments while writing the update!!!

Let me tell you I feel so in sink with you and love reading your comments the most since I know you will understand and relate to my writing the most...

I don't know if I have said this before but Its solely because of you that I returned to this forum and writing and I greatly want to thankyou from the bottom of my heart. The more I share my thoughts with you I realize that we truly are sole sisters!!!πŸ€—

And you are right I really don't know there are guys like Iqtiaar any more anywhere???

And yes he's really very smart... u'll realize it more and more as the SS progresses. And I promise there will be more ups then downs in this FF. I really want to make a point via this story... it's not just a FF for me... the story is really close to my heart. Almost a DREAM...

Lets see where I can take this ...

THANK YOU AGAIN ARSHIA!!! LOVE YOU SO MUCHπŸ€—β€οΈπŸ€—




Ohh nahi yaar kya thanks and all bol rahi hai pagal apne dost ko😳...thankful main hoon that you came back...that u relate with my thoughts and emotions. I feel like there is a friend somewhere ...somewhere sitting in some corner of the world...behind the laptop screen..who understands...who knows what it feels like when this happens and when that happens...and the desperation for WANTING something to happen...so tu thanks MAT BOL...Thankful toh main hoon in ways words cant express how glad i am to have u back...when i first inboxed you, you checked it i guess after 3 days...in those three days i only know how many times a day i would open IF to see if u replied...that time i was new to it so i didnt know how to figure out if a person has read ur inbox or no...and i didnt know ill be receiving an email regarding the same 😊

btw more comments come from ur twitteriites regarding chapter 15...ill copy paste it just after this...

love u girl...always stay the way you are
hugs to my #SoulSister πŸ€—

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Posted: 9 years ago
ANKITA ON CHAPTER 15


Wow nice update... Mirza to shocked ho gya raz k cont.questions questions se

"Ankita " 2h 2 hours ago
Mirza ka bedroom bada acha tha or bathroom b...laila ka gift,OMG...raz bechar
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200



Ohh nahi yaar kya thanks and all bol rahi hai pagal apne dost ko😳...thankful main hoon that you came back...that u relate with my thoughts and emotions. I feel like there is a friend somewhere ...somewhere sitting in some corner of the world...behind the laptop screen..who understands...who knows what it feels like when this happens and when that happens...and the desperation for WANTING something to happen...so tu thanks MAT BOL...Thankful toh main hoon in ways words cant express how glad i am to have u back...when i first inboxed you, you checked it i guess after 3 days...in those three days i only know how many times a day i would open IF to see if u replied...that time i was new to it so i didnt know how to figure out if a person has read ur inbox or no...and i didnt know ill be receiving an email regarding the same 😊

btw more comments come from ur twitteriites regarding chapter 15...ill copy paste it just after this...

love u girl...always stay the way you are
hugs to my #SoulSister πŸ€—



I so feel there was some kind of a destiny play that happened that day... I had logged in to IF probably after 4-5 months... and u had commented 3 days back... Almost like I just came to see ur pm 😲 Aur main tere chapter 15 ka bhi reply kar rahi hoon pad lena πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shopau

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Shivangiii!!!! OMG... Its my fortune to have got readers like you and Arshia who have supported and motivated me so much to write these FF's. πŸ€—

Tum ro paddhi???? Nahi ro mat sweetheart... though I feel good that it touched you this much... par please phir bhi rona mat... KEEP SMILING!!! 😊

Aur tum bilkul emotional aur dramatic ho sakti ho humaare saath... Hum sab hi aise hain... Aur hummein shivangi bhi aise hi pasand hai. DRAMATIC AUR BINDASSS!!!

I am so so so GLAD πŸ˜ƒ that you guys have liked the wedding sequence I cannot tell you... I was HELL worried thinking that I would end up disappointing you guys BIG TIME!!! Happy that you loved it so much and could understand Razia's Pain.

And writing angel??? ME oh my GOD its an honor! Thankyou so so so MUCHπŸ€—

Also if you have any requests for any Alzia vms?? do tell me I will surely make one for you 😊

LOVE YOU!!!

SHOPAU



she will forever remain a bubbly rabbit yaar πŸ€£πŸ€— love u Shiv
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Posted: 9 years ago
WHAT ??? YOU HAD LOGGED ON AFTER 4 TO 5 MONTHS ????😲

YES !! THEN IT DEFINITELY WAS DESTINY ! πŸ€—

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

First First First...i HAVE TO tell u this before i forget AGAIN

When u gave a one line precap called "wedding shopping and wedding"

That time itself i was gna write in the comments that hope she wears LINGERIE for him that night...🀣

but i totally forgot...and it slipped out of my mind only after that...until NOW...after this update came...I WAS LIKE OMG !! DID SHE READ MY MIND THAT TIME ??? IS SHE ANTARYAMI ?? this is the SECOND WISH of mine that i FORGOT abt and u fulfilled it (first was laal ishq VM which i am still high on just saw it again 20 mins back)😳

CAN I JUST GIVE U LOTS OF TIGHT HUGSS NOW ??

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Now coming bak to the update from the start...Thank god their seats got booked together...ooo and i like the effect razia has on mirza 😳 leaving him stunned...filling him with unnamed desiresπŸ˜†πŸ˜ˆ...just her mere presence is enough for tht ...ADORABLE ! 😳 and hawt also😈

Oooh now i get it who u are gna pair Laila up with...u gave me the cue here...JY na ?? πŸ₯³ finally ! i was still insecure with this girl...poore grp mein woh ek akeli ladki...aah not judging but kisina kisike wife koh toh problem hogi na...wife nahi magar mere jaise possessive reader ko toh hogi na 🀣 thank god aaj tune meri insecurity waqai mein door kardi πŸ˜†

and razia is finally opening up slowly slowly to him haan...bombarding him with so many questions...AND i couldnt help but notice that how very very very understanding he is as a hubby😳 so busy in his work yet answering her questions in detail and with patience...i knw he wants her to open up...bt shayad agar koi aur hota toh important kaam ke waqt theek se jawab nahi deta...u know how men r na πŸ€” But IQTIAAR !!! hes a darling πŸ€— hugging her from behind while she is watching the skyline...☺️ making her get used to his touch ☺️ HE IS SO UNDERSTANDING AND CARING YAAAR !! why they dont make men like him anymore πŸ˜’

This BAR ...special BAR in their house ...i have a strange feeling its gna play a BIG role in their fights...πŸ˜’ dunno what ur planning bas meko aisi feeling aarahi hai...she hates alcohol na...n he drinks...well not like a drunkard but he does drink a few pegs na...enough to make u a bit high if not completely off senses...πŸ€”

Nice spanish aunty...sweeet...i like her 😳

OMG nassir and ATIGEN ? i rememeber very well u saying two more friends and i was waiting also for it...bt i had no idea ull call them nassir and atigen...yaaay...and bromance time yipppyyy

so atigen is his mentor...yo ! and nassir like his brother...closest brother..friend...bestie...

btw Shopau im reaallli sorry for asking u this ...but why is Zaroon staying in Iqtiaars house ?? did i miss something ?? lag toh aise raha hai hes iqtiaars real brother or cousin bro...really sorry if i missed something ...bhool gayi main,,,,bata de na phir se πŸ˜’

OMG AND THE TUB FILLED WITH AHEM AHEM ROSE AND WATER ...AND CHAMPAGNE 🀣 LACY RED LINGERIE 😈 ITS GNA BE A HAWT AFFAIR I GUESS...pata nahi phir se what u planning tu badi chupi rustam hai...considering razia still needs time...pata nahi yeh raat ka romance kis level tak jayega...yaa hoga bhi nahi romance kya pata coz ur PRECAP gave something else not romance to look forward to in the next update 😡

OMG !! AND PRECAP...ab inka koi dushman paida hogaya kya ?? pls tellme its one of their friends only pranking them...

agar dushman hua toh woh gaya boss...razia ka naam le liyaa ab toh Iqtiaar uske tukde tukde karke cheel kawwon ko khila dega 🀣


lovellly sweeet adorable enjoyable update...i was smiling throughout at their cuteness...specially whenever he holds her by the waist...never stop mentioning THAT ONE LINE haan pls...

LOVE YA MANY HUGSSS

UPDATE SOOONNN ...TMRW ONLY PLEASE !!




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SABSE PEHLE TOH TU YUN HI MUJHE AISE LAMBE LAMBE COMMENTS DETI RAHA KAR...

Khabardar jo aisi baat pe bhi sorry kaha πŸ˜›

GOD!!! there is definitely some kinda DESTINY / TELEPATHY / ANTARYAMI scenario going on here...

I have this WIDE SMILE on ma face πŸ˜ƒ which is reaching till my ears πŸ˜† LOL

HUGGS From my side too πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— TIGHT ONES... Jhuppiee...

Yes Laila and JY are paired together... Actually in this Story all the couples have their own love story giving a different perspective to love and relationship.

Whether it is Nassir and Fatima, JY and Laila, another couple which I cannot reveal right now
And most importantly Iqtiaar and Razia...

So ya there are all of these sub-plots with different equations of love which you will read...


And yes the BAR and certain other things will prove to be little points which might create problems 😲 or rather those points might actually become solutions to their problems 😊 ... You will again have to wait for it.

And your querry... Yes ZAROON is Iqtiaar's younger cousin brother... he is Qabacha and Uzma's son in this FF... while Shazia is Iqtiaar's real sister.

So that's why there's a room for zaroon in the Mallik Penthouse.πŸ˜ƒ

And coming to the next update ... I will try and update it tonight...
Both NDZ and AKS are in the making... but I guess I'll find it easier to update AKS as I am still in the flow of it... So the update will have SUSPENSE and will be SENSOUS AND HOT + might be a little cute and romantic aswell...
Too much coming up!!!!!

And trust me ... I will definitely never forget to MENTION THAT ONE LINEπŸ₯³


Love
Shopau
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Posted: 9 years ago
GIVE ME THAT TOO MUCH WALA UPDATE TONIGHT ITSELF PLEASE
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by princess200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was soo good... i cant really tell you how much i loved this one 😳
best portion n d part I loved always in this FF is whenever Ikhtiar wraps his arms on her waist...
this sweet small gesture of him speaks a lot...
like thoda sa possesssive, thoda sa like keeping her close to him, thoda sa making her comfortable admist the changes she's witnessing, n thoda sa like silently telling her I m there with u always, through all up n down, u will always find me beside you holding hand in hand

I love NasUnia a lot ... I was so sad when CVs killed Nasir just after single scene of them together...!
they were like 'brother from another mother'...
waiting eagarly for his entry!
n THE PRECAP... gosh! what's happening ...
but I know Ikhtiar sambhal lega! πŸ˜ƒ
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