ALZIA FF : Mujhmein Tera AKS Pt 24 - pg 31 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

pehle tu wedding night de !!!😡 phir aayenge tere comments

and this one in short was WOW ! now i knw the dark secret...it made my eyes moist...really it did im not faking tht part...u knw i wud never fake anything ...bcos ive seen my friends go thru it...well some of them...


Awww!!! I didn't want you to cry ❤️ Par tu pehla isska long comment de... Main phir agla update dungi...

Aur itni pagal kyun hue jaa rahi hai wedding night par???
Mujhe gaaliyan nahi khani!
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Posted: 9 years ago
GAALIYAN KYUN ??
Dont ruin the romance...you promised it...

amaa main toh kya ALL are going mad for the wedding night update...ill copy paste the twitter logon ke upset comments of wedding night update not coming...ruk...gimme sometime...tht VM is out of my mind stilll
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

GAALIYAN KYUN ??

Dont ruin the romance...you promised it...

amaa main toh kya ALL are going mad for the wedding night update...ill copy paste the twitter logon ke upset comments of wedding night update not coming...ruk...gimme sometime...tht VM is out of my mind stilll



Arre... I am giving the wedding night update today itself...
Shant ho jao MAHA RATHIYON!!! SHANT...

Mujhe bas tera long comment pehle chahiye...

Tujhe gaaliyan khaani hai toh dusri baat hai!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
I need to go to gym first...for workout warna gym bandh ho jayega...uske baad likhti hoon ruk
Filhaal chapter 12 pe inka padhle

Farheen -

Nice update shopau di...starting me nizam and razia convo acchi ti...razia ki wedding dress bhut pretty ti...Mirza ka razia ko nikha hote wakt deakne ki koshish but deakh nhi paya...but ye accha nhi kiya mirza jaise hi room me aya ap ne chapter...Khatm kar diya...This is not fare di..."""Ab jaldi se next update deAnd NDZ ka bhi me ap se kal se kah rhi ho...usmai bhi jaldi se mirza and razia ka nikha karwaye...Ap bhut dair me NDZ ka update deti h...""
Ankita -
MTAH ka new chap bohot acha tha,mirza k friendsnizam chacha so sweet and alzia k dresses'. Pr hate ruknu

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohh meri maa gaaliyan aarahi hai haan...they want wedding night chapter...lawl now I knw hw u guys must be feeling when I was taking time for my hawt update🤣
Farheen said ..Ye kya taaa Pir precap me wadding night...Hamare jazbaato k ssath khela ja rha h

I told her to wait aaj hii aane wala hai...

Babe im going to the gym...when im back hope the update will be there...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

I need to go to gym first...for workout warna gym bandh ho jayega...uske baad likhti hoon ruk

Filhaal chapter 12 pe inka padhle

Farheen -

Nice update shopau di...starting me nizam and razia convo acchi ti...razia ki wedding dress bhut pretty ti...Mirza ka razia ko nikha hote wakt deakne ki koshish but deakh nhi paya...but ye accha nhi kiya mirza jaise hi room me aya ap ne chapter...Khatm kar diya...This is not fare di..."""Ab jaldi se next update deAnd NDZ ka bhi me ap se kal se kah rhi ho...usmai bhi jaldi se mirza and razia ka nikha karwaye...Ap bhut dair me NDZ ka update deti h...""
Ankita -
MTAH ka new chap bohot acha tha,mirza k friendsnizam chacha so sweet and alzia k dresses'. Pr hate ruknu


Thankyou Farheen and Ankita!!! 🤗 big huggs!!! i am so happy that you guys are reading and also commenting. THanks to Arshia🤗

I will give the wedding night update tonite itself! And also NDZ update tomorrow! NDZ mein abhi do updates hain Nikaah ke pehle toh thoda sa wait karna hoga!!! But they will be gr8 too I promise

Love
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

Ohh meri maa gaaliyan aarahi hai haan...they want wedding night chapter...lawl now I knw hw u guys must be feeling when I was taking time for my hawt update🤣

Farheen said ..Ye kya taaa Pir precap me wadding night...Hamare jazbaato k ssath khela ja rha h

I told her to wait aaj hii aane wala hai...

Babe im going to the gym...when im back hope the update will be there...



Tu gym Jaake aa... Main abhi likh rahi hoon.
Aur phir mujhe dono updates ke liye tujhse separate LOOONNNGGG COMMENTS chaiye!!!😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
U knw I always give LONG SEPERATE comments na... !!!
I din go to gym...full tha...so ghar pe hii cardio kar liya. ..full of sweat. ..but came to give farheens comment on wedding chapter

Chapter accha taa but mirza aur razia ka romance shuru hota to shazia aapi a gyi...mirza razia ka dance...


Also I conveyed ur reply to them :)

Naha ke aane de ruk phir karti hoon comment😡

Tu meri jaan nahi hoti toh kabka pitaayi kardi hoti tera


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

U knw I always give LONG SEPERATE comments na... !!!

I din go to gym...full tha...so ghar pe hii cardio kar liya. ..full of sweat. ..but came to give farheens comment on wedding chapter

Chapter accha taa but mirza aur razia ka romance shuru hota to shazia aapi a gyi...mirza razia ka dance...


Also I conveyed ur reply to them :)

Naha ke aane de ruk phir karti hoon comment😡

Tu meri jaan nahi hoti toh kabka pitaayi kardi hoti tera



Isiliye toh hum kehlaate hain Zaalim ❤️

Mere yahan electricity ka thoda problem ho raha hai... Kal se power nahi hai... Aur inverter on - off hoye jaa raha hai... Electrician aaya hua hai... toh thodi der mein Update kar rahi hoon :)

Full of EMOTIONAL ROMANCE!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
YOUR LONG DETAILED COMMENT CHAPTER 13

Some sentences...i cant stop reading again and again

I don't want to lose you. He whispered still looking away, his voice cracking.

Please, please I need you in my life beside me, always!

Thank god! I finally got that smile back. He chuckled. And I have to tell you this, don't you ever, ever do this again to me.

Your eyes, they talk to me. Don't let them be void of your feelings ever again.


One lined sentences...one million feelings...cartloads of emotions...weighing so heavy...😭😭


Sometimes the smallest things u tell to people can mean the world to them...😭


Koi mujhe bhi yeh sab keh de yaar...😭😒


Tu sirf romantic aur masti wali hii nahi hai...deep down ur very emotional and caring...🤗


Rona aagaya yaar iss chapter pe...mere dil ko chu liya...kuch iss tarah that this actually goes down as one of ur most beautiful updates...🤗and i know for sure the next chapter is gna be more beautiful than this...since u said...'emotional romance' 😳


I WANT TO HUG IQTIAAR LIKE RIGHT NOW...His horrifying past...No less than Razia's horrifying past...and present. They both come from broken homes. And they realize and know the pain associated with it. Which is why i know they BOTH will give their best shot to make this marriage work...get over their insecurities, commit and love each other to the fullest and live happily ever after...😳
And the journey towards that starts NOW 🥳Im so eager to read how these two will get over their own pieces of insecurities...specially Iqtiaar ...he already does love her...like hell...hes way to afraid to admit it... (i must have said this for the zillionth time now 😆)

Hey nice saari yaar !! U too really have a good choice of clothes ive noticed that 😊 i can almost imagine the real cute razia wearing it...looking gorgeous as ever !

DUDE THE SONG !! HE SANG FOR HER HE ACTUALLY DID SING FOR HER !!! THIS MAN IS A DIE HARD ROMANTIC...RATHER YOU ARE...COZ U MADE HIM LIKE THAT...👏

You are doing one very wrong thing u know...the character sketch of this Iqtiaar ur giving is making me increase the demands for the kind of guy i want !! 😆

He kissed her hand just above the pink ring IN FRONT OF EVERYONE ...OMG !!!!! 😳☺️

SHOPAAAU I LOVED THIS UPDATE SO MUCH !!! JEEYO MERI JAAN JUG JUG JEEYO !! YOU ARE MAGIC ! YOU ARE A DARLING !🤗🤗
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