ALZIA FF : Mujhmein Tera AKS Pt 24 - pg 31

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~Mujhmein Tera AKS~


This is a AlZia FF in the 21st century: Please read the PROLOGUE below - ( given both in hindi and English translation )


Razia's Monologue: -


Main Razia Khan aur yeh hai meri kahani.

Main 2 saal ki thi jab mere Abbu, Mr. Khalil Mallik, ki Brain tumor ki wajah se death hui. 8 saal ki umar tak main apne dadajaan, daadi jaan aur Amma, Begum Qutub, ke saath rehthi thi. Par phir Amma ne dusri shaadi kar li, Mr. Altamush Khan se. Dad(Altamush Khan) ek bohot acche insaan hain. Unhone kabhi mujhe apni beti se kam nahi samja, par najaane kyun Mom aur Dad shaadi ke kucch saalon ke baad se hi humesha jagharne lage. Unki kisi bhi baat par soch nahi milti thi. Aur har roz kisi na kisi baat par jaghre... Amma kehti hain ki Dad bohot acche hain bas kabhi galti dad ki hoti toh kabhi amma ki... aur ladhaiyan toh har shaadi shuda jodhhe mein hoti hain. Main sochti hoon ki agar mere abbu Khalil; zinda hote toh kya unka aur amma ka rishta bhi aisa hi hota? Kya har husband wife ka rishta aisa hi hota hai? Kya isi rishte ko pyaar kehte hain? Kya mera aur mere Husband ka rishta bhi aisa hi hoga?
Main Razia Khan aur yeh meri kahani!

Iqhtiar's Monologue: -


Main Iqktiar-ud-din Mallik (Altunia will be known as Iqtiar throughout this FF) aur yeh meri kahani.

Mohabbat kise kehte hain, yeh toh nahi pata. Par shaadi kise kehte hain yeh pata hai. Shaadi do logon ke beech ka ek aisa rishta hain jisme pyaar ho ya na ho, compatibility hona bohot zaroori hai. Agar woh dono ek dusre ka nazariya samajh sakte hain toh they are the perfect couple!

He didn't believe in love. She didn't believe in the institution of marriage!
All she needed was a companion who could provide her with immense love. He could provide her with everything but love!
All he needed was a companion who could provide him with commitment. She could give him her everything except her commitment to their relationship!

'What you wish is what you get but not always do you realize that what you got is what you have always wished for! '

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I, Razia Khan and this is my story. I was 2 years old when my biological father, Mr. Khallil Mallik, died due to Brain tumor. Till the age of eight I lived with my paternal grandparents and mom, Qutub Begum. But then Mom got married to Mr.Altamush Khan. Dad (Altamush Khan) is a wonderful human being. He never made me feel that I am not his real daughter and has loved me just like he would have loved his own daughter. But still for some reason Mom and Dad, never really got along well. Just couple of months after the wedding they started having ugly fights. Never did they agree on any topic. And therefore, they fought almost every day. But mom always told me that Dad is a very good person and fights are a part of every couple's life. I wonder if it really true? Would it have been the same with Keshav papa and mom too? Is it true for every husband and wife's relationship? Is this is what they call love? Will it be the same for my relationship with my husband as well?
I Razia Khan and this is my story!

Iqhtiar's Monologue:
I Iqktiar-ud-din Mallik (Altunia will be known as Iqtiar throughout this FF) and this is my story. Love, is something I have no idea about. But I do know what marriage is. Marriage is not just an alliance between two families but an understanding between two individuals that they have to spend their life together always committing to each other. They may not be in love but should be compatible. If they are compatible and can understand each other's vision towards the important phases of life then they are the perfect couple!

He didn't believe in love. She didn't believe in the institution of marriage!
All she needed was a companion who could provide her with immense love. He could provide her with everything but not love!
All he needed was a companion who could provide him with commitment. She could give him her everything except her commitment to their relationship!

'What you wish is what you get but not always do you realize that what you got is what you have always wished for! '

***

INDEX

Part 1 - Scroll Down

Part 2 - Scroll Down

Part 3 - Pg 2

Part 4 - Pg 3

Part 5 - Pg 4

Part 6 - Pg 5

Part 7 - Pg 6

Part 8 - Pg 9

Part 9 - Pg 11

Part 10 - Pg 12

Part 11 - Pg 13

Part 12 - Pg 14

Part 13 - Pg 16

Part 14 - Pg 18

Part 15 - Pg 19

Part 16 - Pg 22

Part 17 - Pg 24

Part 18 - Pg 26

Part 19A & B - Pg 27

Part 20 - Pg 28

Part 21 - Pg 29

Part 22 - Pg 30

Part 23 - Pg 31

Part 24 - Pg 31

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Interesting FF...plz update ur next part...
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~Mujhmein Tera AKS~

Part 1

It was raining cats and dogs that night. There was news of a possible thunderstorm and by now Razia was sure it had already shown up. Razia looked out of her window to see how bad it was. That's when she heard the noise again, that of a glass bottle shattering on the ground. This was the third bottle. Razia guessed it so as this was the third time she was hearing the noise tonight. Dad was again drunk and her parents had got into an ugly fight again. Even though she was witnessing such nights and incidents constantly from the past 15 years her fear had only increased. She shivered and held herself in almost a protective manner hearing what felt like banging of door or something. Though she couldn't perfectly make out what was the issue they both were fighting about tonight, she could hear her mom crying and shouting between her cries where as her Dad constantly abused her mom. She looked back at her bolted room door probably the 5th time or maybe it was the 10th to make sure it was locked from the inside. Dad was in a habit to get Razia into the discussion as he knew she was Qutub's weak point and therefore Razia had strict instructions from her mom to keep her room locked at night especially if she could hear them both fighting. It wasn't long before her parents would find a reason to involve her in their "so called discussion" and the last thing she wanted was to witness them both fighting and abusing each other in front of her, at this hour of the night. She tried to distract herself and took out one of books from what looked like a rack full of love stories.

Razia sat on her bed with her knees folded and kept the book on her lap. She opened the book on the page where her book mark was and started reading from where she had left it. Suddenly there was a bang on her door. What she had feared had come true. Mr. Altamush Khan was furious at Qutub and demanded Razia to immediately open the door. Razia froze as she heard another deadly knock on the door. It was pushed with so much of force that she feared the door might just break. Her mind stopped working and sub-consciously she started moving towards the door. Razia slowly unbolted the door digging her fingers in the book in her other hand. She was dead scared to face her parents right now. The moment she opened the door, her father got hold of her left elbow and dragged her in front of her mother.

Qutub: Altamush, leave Razia!

Altamush: No I won't. She too has the right to know what a double faced woman her mother is.

Razia couldn't control her tears anymore. The room was filled with the smell of alcohol due to the shattering of the bottles on the ground. Moreover, her father was standing right next to her and he was way too drunk. As both of her parents again got busy with their no end to it' fight, Razia found the perfect escape and ran outside the Khan mansion into the front lawn.

There was a mix of emotions reflecting on her face which were of pain, anger, helplessness and being scared. Her brain had stopped working long time ago. She just wanted to erase all the memories of the last evening the same way as she had been doing all these years to find some peace. Her legs kept walking on their own wish as if they already knew where to go without any command from her already dead brain. She had already come out of the premises of the Khan residence and was walking aimlessly on the road. It was raining heavily and she was drenched head to toe. But she didn't care. Her head was spinning and there was severe headache that she was suffering from.

Razia reached the nearby caf cum book store where she came almost every evening whenever she needed to get out to avoid becoming the focal point in her parents' discussion'.

Nizammudin Chacha, the owner of the caf in city center, was in the process to close the caf when he saw Razia standing across the road drenched in water.

Nizam Chacha: Oh! My dear... Razia? Is that you my child?
He asked adjusting his spectacles while trying his best to recognize Razia. Razia walked across the road to Nizam Chacha with her arms crossed across her chest in order to save the already wet book from getting wet.

Nizam: Oh my goodness Razia you are shivering so badly!
Nizam Chacha said as he hurried back into the caf dragging Razia along with him.

Razia: I am so sorry Uncle. I forgot to get an umbrella along with me in hurry. And I couldn't save the book from getting wet in the rain.

Nizam: Oh no my dear! The book is not a problem. All the books in here are yours. You can do whatever you like with them. Especially with the ones which are in the love stories section.
Nizam burst out into a heavy laughter saying this trying to cheer up Razia.

Razia smiled between his tears hearing this. Razia, since the age of 16 (i.e. for the past 8 years; she is 24 now) had been coming to the Nizam Chacha's cafe almost every day. This was her hideout where she would come to get peace and get away from the ugly truth of her life. She everyday would just go and sit in one corner of her favorite section of love stories and enter the world of fiction, dreams and fantasies.

But today was different; because of the weather she was having unbearable pain in her head.
Razia: Uncle? Can I please go and rest for some time in some corner?

Nizam: Sure dear... why don't you take a quick nap on your favorite corner sofa and I'll get you a cup of hot steaming coffee?

Razia: Thank you Uncle. She said so and moved towards the Love stories section.

***

Razia took out another novel from the book shelf and rested back on the couch with her legs kept on the coffee table. She adjusted the cushion behind her neck and made herself comfortable. She started reading one of her favorite author, Jane Austen's novels, Pride and Prejudice. Though Razia had already read the novel multiple times she just took it because she was in no condition to read. No matter how hard she tried to concentrate on the text in front of her, she couldn't wash away the memories of the emotional torture she had been going through. Didn't she deserve love and care from her parents? Didn't she deserve a normal life of every young teenage girl, which she was deprived of that too very conveniently without an explanation from anyone?

She looked at the novel in her hand and thought that all these years she had spent her teens reading these love stories. Whether it was just an excuse to not accept the ugly truth of her parents' relationship or her heart truly believed that one day her Mr. Darcy' too would come her way; she didn't know. But she was sure of one thing that somewhere reading these stories the pain in her heart became less. They were soothing to her soul and to her existence. Like a drug, she needed them to make her heart keep beating. She slowly drifted to sleep with these thoughts.

Razia felt a warm and soft hand on her forehead and therefore slowly opened her eyes. Her eyelashes felt heavier than ever. She saw Nizam Chacha sitting beside her on the couch with a cup of hot coffee and her favorite brownie.

Nizam: So, reading pride and prejudice? But why again?

Razia: Just like that...

Nizam: Hmm, were you dreaming about your Mr. Darcy?

Razia shook her head shying away. Uncle Nizam smiled warmly seeing her shy.

Nizam: Razia, I have this faith my child that one day your Mr. Darcy' would come to you and take away all your sorrows leaving only love for him in your heart and true happiness for your togetherness forever and ever.
He said with tears in his eyes and lost in his thoughts and wishes for Razia.

Razia: But do love stories have a happy ending in real life as well Uncle?

Nizam: you would know it for yourself dear!
I think you should drink your coffee now before it cools down. And I would be leaving now. Your Aunty must be waiting for me at home. Why don't you rest here only tonight or may be come with me to my house?

Razia: No Uncle I would be okay here itself.

Nizam: Okay Dear, then the spare key to the caf is at its place in the 1st drawer. Take care of yourself.
Nizam Chacha kissed Razia's forehead and left for his home.

***

It was as early as around 4 am in the morning when Razia woke up from her sleep. The headache had reduced a lot and she was feeling much better. But she still seemed disturbed. She got up and washed her coffee cup putting it back into the kitchen shelf. She arranged back the books she had taken off the book shelves and took the keys to the main door and closed the door locking it from the outside.

It was still raining outside and dark. But she needed to be home before her step brother reached. He generally used to be back early in the morning and Razia at any cost had to reach back home before he did. Last night's incidents were still afresh in her mind and she kept walking back to her home lost in her thoughts. She was worried about her mom now. Last night she was so upset that nothing was making any sense to her but now the reality had struck. Her mom was alone in the house with dad in a drunken state. What if he had tried to hurt her? Will she be okay? What would be the condition of the house by the time she'll reach back home? Fear took over her and she stood rooted at her place like a statue. She was so scared. She had become immune to everything around her. Her senses were not working anymore; her ears had become deaf and her eyes blind. The only thing she could see or hear was her mother in tears and her cries.

Suddenly a high beam of light fell on her face which made her come out of her thoughts. A car at an extremely high speed was merely inches away from her. She was shocked beyond words and didn't know how to react. That's when she felt two strong arms around her waist and her face hit something as hard as rock. Her feet were not on ground anymore and she clutched on to those strong arms as if to her very last breath.

Moments later she felt her back hit the wall but not with much force. She slowly opened her eyes only to find a large figure towering over her. The man who she hadn't seen yet, now only had his one hand securely on her waist while the other he had used to support the wall so that Razia couldn't get hurt. She slowly moved her face off his shoulder but in the process felt his rough stubble on her left cheek. The feeling was oddly sweet to her. It awakened some strong desires in her which she only allowed while reading the most intense of all love stories. She had never felt the same ever before due to someone real. But was he too for real? Or she was again dreaming?

She moved her face back in order to look at the most handsome man she had ever seen in her life.

Next: Iqtiaar -ud-din Mallik

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This story is extremely close to my heart readers. I hope this sweet yet passionate love story will touch ur hearts in some way or the other.

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Edited by Shopau - 9 years ago
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Aww poor soul yaar...coming from an almost brokem family. But mirza to the rescue. I know.ull call him ikhtiar here but for me he will be mirza only...
So they r two opposites ppl who want things from their partners which the latter can never provide...will be very interesting to read. U gave us an amazing start to this story...im eager to knw how he will bring happiness in razias life and vice versa

Continue soon
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Woah! This reminds me so much of many Wattpad stories. I absolutely love this new concept and the fact that Razia isn't from a normal conventional family but rather one that is broken makes this story even more fascinating! I appreciate your wild imagination😃& Not to forget, our own very Mirza is here to save the damsel in distress! hehe.

So Mirza is rich, huh?😆😉

I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!


This is me when I think about Mirza. LOL


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hey this is reallygood story ... it makes me so happy to find a 21 century ff of aliza. It is also a really good start. please try to hurry with the next chapter cause i can't wait. 😊
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~Mujhmein Tera AKS~


Part 2


Razia couldn't believe her eyes. It was him. It was really him, Iqtiaar-ud-din Mallik. The only man she had ever dreamt about. Since the age of 12, if there was anyone whom Razia imagined as the prince charming in all the love stories she had read till date, it was him. If there was anyone whom she loved from the bottom of her heart, anyone for whom she could leave everything behind, even her dreams and even her existence, it was him. If there was anyone who could touch her soul only with one smile to her, it was him. And today amidst her sorrows was standing her greatest joy; her first crush and her first love.

Iqtiaar: Are you Okay?
The deep masculine voice fell on her ears and she came out of her trance.

Razia: huh?

Iqtiaar: Are you okay?
He asked again.

Razia: y..yes! I..I am fine.

He slowly left her and made her stand on her feet. But Razia didn't have enough energy to balance herself. Before she could fall down Iqtiaar caught hold of her by the waist again and pulled her towards him. His masculine scent was having an extraordinary effect on her. Even in her wildest dreams she had not thought of meeting him like this. She didn't know how to react. Any which ways her mind was too pre-occupied with a lot of other concerns since last night. And to add to it, she was seeing him after nine long years in the middle of nowhere. Her nervousness and anxiety were at their peak.

Iqtiaar: Ah! Do you live somewhere close by?

She looked at him shocked. Wait a minute why was she surprised? Did she expect him to recognize her even after nine years? The last time she had seen him she was just 15 and he was 19. Today he was a 28 year old successful lawyer, and she was just nothing in front of him. Nothing!
But still the pain in her heart returned. It was as if something broke inside her. Something like her ONLY HOPE! The HOPE that one day she will live with him happily ever after.

Iqtiaar: Excuse me? May I please know where do you live?

Razia: y..yes by the...
God what was she doing? No way was she going to tell him her address. If he finds out her address, he wouldn't even take a second to recognize her.

Razia: I just told you that I am okay. I can go by myself.
She tried to get out of his hold. But she had too much of weakness. Iqtiaar maintained the pressure of his hold on her waist supporting her body posture.

Iqtiaar: No way am I going to leave you here in the middle of the road alone. If you don't want me to take you back home then I am going to take you to the hospital.
Saying this he dragged her to his black SUV parked across the road and shoved her into it.

Razia sat in the car zipping her lips as by now she had known that the more she would speak to him the more information about her would she be giving out to him. She wasn't sure what would be the condition of her house at the moment and the last thing she wanted after a night full of drama was Iqtiaar getting to know the real truth of her family.

While Iqtiaar drove the car to the nearest possible hospital, Razia sat next to him fully aware of the sexual tension she was going through. Though she was more worried about making sure her identity is not revealed to him, she could not ignore the serious affect his presence was having on her. She was already feeling wet and the warmth his body heat was radiating wasn't making the situation any easy for her.

In order to calm her senses, she closed her eyes but all she could feel was the deeply rooted essence of her love towards him that she had protected from all the evils in the world for the last 12 years.

***

Razia was 12 when she first met the handsome, cute and the warmest hearted boy in the world; Her 16 year old, elder step-brother's best friend, Iqtiaar Ud-din Mallik. Her brother was a very popular boy in his school and had plenty of friends. All his friends were rich brats and believed in having fun. Razia never had a very good relationship with brother. He was Mr. Khan's son from his first wife Shah Turkan, who had died in a car accident after which he had married Qutub, Razia's mother. Her brother taunted her and made her feel inferior to him at every given opportunity. But she ignored. She was supposed to be always remaining in her room when his friends were home without the knowledge of anyone. Though his friends had a fair idea that he had a younger sister and had met her casually once or twice, nobody really knew her or gave a damn. Neither did Razia give a damn about any of them except ONE.

The one who may not have ever spoken to her but always gave her warm smile to her unlike the others who like her brother looked down upon her. He was Iqtiaar Ud-din Mallik. In the next three years Iqtiaar became more like a family member than just a friend. Mr. and Mrs. Khan were fond of him as they thought that he was the only sensible friend their son had. And for Razia he became a part of her dreams every single night. But three years later when Iqtiaar turned 19, he went abroad for his higher education as a lawyer and Razia never saw him again. But all these 9 years she didn't lose even one chance to find out any kind of news about him. Any Damn thing! All these years she silently heard conversations about him between her brother and Parents whenever he used to share any piece of information about him with them. She somehow got hold of his profile on a social networking site and followed his day to day routine like maniacs. She probably knew more about him then he knew about himself. He was a successful lawyer in England and was written about almost every day. She had read and re-read all the possible articles, journals, newspapers, had seen videos and interviews about him and followed every single update on his blog. She was truly, madly and deeply in love with him. And today he was sitting right next to her and claimed to have not known her. DESTINY!

***

The car came to a halt as Iqtiaar pressed the breaks. Razia came out of her memories and looked towards Iqtiaar.

Iqtiaar: We have reached the hospital. Let's Go!

Razia slowly nodded her head and followed him inside the hospital. Iqtiaar got everything arranged and the nurse took Razia along with her. She dressed up Razia's wound on her left hand which she had got due to the accident. Razia had accidently rubbed off her left arm on to the stone wall due to which the skin had torn away. Moreover she seemed mentally disturbed about something and had high fever too. It was when Iqtiaar started signing the formalities when he realized that he didn't know anything about her. Not even her name. He went to look for Razia and found her sitting on a bench crying.
He didn't know why but her tears made him feel like hell. On the other hand the practical side of him just couldn't understand her. Ever since he had met her, her behavior was weird beyond explanation.

She slowly turned her face towards him. Her eyes full of tears and that's when she ran and flung her arms around him.

He didn't how to react. What was she so disturbed about? And before he could make any sense of her actions, she pushed him away and ran out of the hospital premises, leaving him stunned.

***

Next: Iqtiaar to know who Razia really is?

Hi guys thanks for your comments... Specially Arshia and Diyar-e-Dill.

Nek Dil Zaalim update coming in a while...

Lots of Love

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Ahaaan so shes already crushing on him from the past 12 years 😉
but it still tears me up to think that shes got no love from anyone inside her house yaar...no wonder she doesnt blive in marriages...

So our stud mirza is a rich shot hot shot and all qualified haan
btw whats razias qualification ??

im sooo disappointed in idiot mirza tht he didnt recognize her😡

and she hugged him and ran away😭 itni broken...shit yaar...im feeling so teary eyed right now😭

hahahhahahahhahhaa sexual tension 🤣🤣 itni badly shes crushing on him kya ??

im so eager to read more specially the part as i mentioned yesterday when he fills her life with happiness that she deserves

UPDATE REAL SOOON
iM LOVING IT SO FAR...
HUGSSS🤗
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Originally posted by: arshia200

Ahaaan so shes already crushing on him from the past 12 years 😉
but it still tears me up to think that shes got no love from anyone inside her house yaar...no wonder she doesnt blive in marriages...

So our stud mirza is a rich shot hot shot and all qualified haan
btw whats razias qualification ??

im sooo disappointed in idiot mirza tht he didnt recognize her😡

and she hugged him and ran away😭 itni broken...shit yaar...im feeling so teary eyed right now😭

hahahhahahahhahhaa sexual tension 🤣🤣 itni badly shes crushing on him kya ??

im so eager to read more specially the part as i mentioned yesterday when he fills her life with happiness that she deserves

UPDATE REAL SOOON
iM LOVING IT SO FAR...
HUGSSS🤗


The whole FF... is about how these two will find the real meaning of LOVE and COMMITMENT with each other. See... He wants COMMITMENT and she's sotta already committed to him for the last 12 years...

And yes she's madly, and insanely in love with him... All her feelings coming to the front after hiding them for so long... as she suddenly have him right in front of her when she least expected him ...

THANKS FOR ALL THE LOVE AND COMMENTS ARSHIA

Nek Dil Zaalim coming soon 😉
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