Alzia SS - Chapter 8 UPDATED Death is not the end, its a new beginning - Page 11

Originally posted by: ISHANI222

alright...i've started to type it kal tak ho jayega...will update in noon...

yeh tu friday se keh rahi hai😡😡 "i started typing kal tak aajayega"

MAGAR AAYA NAHI

AB AGAR KAL NAHI AAYA NA TOH DEKHLENA KYA KARTI HOON😈

Originally posted by: Shopau

CHAPTER 4 -- COMMENT

AWESOME! FANTASTIC .... FANTABULOUS..👍🏼. AMAZING..⭐️.. MINDBLOWING..🥳. I AM RUNNING OUT OF WORDS👏

"Iss tadap mein bhi ek sukoon hai Zaroon Miyan" said Altunia smiling dreamily. "Ishq badhta hai mera unki na-na se" he said looking at the moon.

Altunia ke dialogues are killing me ...🤢 I am dead already lost in his dreams...

Brilliant ! Its locked so tight that even an elephant like Zaroon wont be able to open it unless the lock outside is not broken" I burst out lauging reading that ...Don't underestimate Zaroon Miya! His capabilities will come to ur help soon!

Arrey nahi khul raha...matlab nahi khul raha hai Mohtarma !" said Altunia in the fake tone of shock fighting the burning urge to laugh😆

Me too trying my best to fight the burning urge while sitting in office.🤣

"Hum aaj bhi wohi Mirza hai, jissey aap deewano ki tarah mohobbat karti thi. Humein Mirza' se Subedar Sahab' bulakar, aap hamare aur aapke darmiyan jo mohobbat thi aur hai, usko badal nahi sakti" he said running his fingers through her long hair

NO WORDS!!! 😳 ☺️

He had controlled his burning urge to crush her underneath himself today...

Loved the update Arshia!!! tumne toh LOOONNNGGG Update likhne ke saare records hi todh diye!!!! Ab mein Kya karun???

CHAPTER 5 COmment coming up in a while!!! Boss aa gaya!

Loads of Love and huggs🤗

YAAAY u liked it 🥳🤗

amaa chapter five was also so long...usko bhi split karna pada...i like describing thoughts and feelings...maybe thts why it gets too long...nevertheless the hottest update ever from my side is coming up soon...😳

Originally posted by: lionsroar

Are yar... hme to sare updates chahiye.. pr fir bhi... i know.. its tough ek sath itni sari stories likhna... but dont worry... is baar no shikayat.. bs roz ek kahani ka 1 chptr hi update kr diya kariye... hm khush aur SANTUSHT ho jaynge... again...thnk uuu vry much for your reply... im on satwe aasamaan...!!! thnkuuu &&&& take care... pura ..1 ton... pyarrr... apke and apki mind UDAAAUU stories k liye..!!!

kar lenge jee...pehle iss SHRAVANI KO BATAO...late updates aur intezaar karna arshia ko pasand nahi hai😡😆

Arshia.. Yar shrawani Ji to exams me busy h..
Ap hi hamara khayal kr lo...

Originally posted by: lionsroar

Arshia.. Yar shrawani Ji to exams me busy h..
Ap hi hamara khayal kr lo...

why is he so cute and adorable 🤗 i love this desperate ALtunia😆 the way he pulled her away was brilliant and the last part was ☺️

Originally posted by: overactor

why is he so cute and adorable 🤗 i love this desperate ALtunia😆 the way he pulled her away was brilliant and the last part was ☺️

alzia's cute knok jhoks are the best⭐️ the war ones and the flashback ones both 👏 ab jaldi se hot update de do

sorry for the late comment yr, i was too tired to read yesterday 😭

Originally posted by: princess200

koi nai yaar...tune pada toh sahi...tere comments bohot chote hotey hai magar 😡 tere SS pe iska badla lungi main😈😆

aajayega hot update...bas some days more...im trying to make it more hot 😈

Originally posted by: overactor

yr i was speechless 😆

Arshia...kaha hai yaar...
Aur ye shrawani to lgta h sach me Ab exams k baad hi update dengi...
Ufff kitna tadpati hain hm logo ko...
Kya maza milta hai...??

Par plss... Aap to mehrbani kijiye...
Luuvvv with order...my lord..
Shivangi..