Alzia SS - Chapter 8 UPDATED Death is not the end, its a new beginning - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Ooo
Nnnhhhiii...
Mtlb itne intezar k bad bhi bas itna hi...
Oooffooo..

Pr... Phle to thnkkkuuu sooo
Muuuccchhh...
Hme ye update dedicate krne k liye...
Apka bahut bahut shukriya..mohtarma...!!!

Lkin hm is forum ki new reader nhi h...
Bahut purane reader h..bas I'd nhi banayi thi Aur phir post krna smjh me nhi at a tha..
Pr Ab aa gaya h .. And I m sooo happpy..
Ki ap logo se hmri baat hoti h...!!!

I'm dancing right nowww...!!!
Ab chapter ki bat krte h...
Fir se apne hmra dil uchaal diya...
WO line.. " Ishq badhta h mera apki na na se.."
Ye hmri mirza ki sabse favourite shayri h..
I just luv it ..
Aur kya tareeke apnata h wo... Mtlb had h ..

Aur haa zaroon k upar gussa was the most funny part.. "Dekhiye kaise roz aurto ki jamat laga kr baith jati h .." I luv it ..
Ab rzia darling kaise bachengi ...
Mirza is on FIRE...
Oofooo made jaa rhe h age ka soch soch k...

Plsss plsss...
Jaldi...jaldi ...likhiye na...

But akhir me...
Ittu sa nhi...
ekdum bhar ke hmri trf se luuuv shuuuv...
Te chapter purana...
Luv from
Shivangi..
Or lionsroar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Astoria

Yeh kya hai??? Bada wala chocolate bar dikhakar ek choti si toffee pakda di???😆 Yeh toh galat baat hai.😆 Anyway,this one is fabulous too👏

It looked like it was getting close to sunset. The scorching sunlight did not seem so scorching now. The loo wasn't blowing anymore. On the contrary, a cool breeze had taken its place. Strange ! Was it nature's way of showering its affection on two lovers for whom perhaps time was running out ?

This part broke my heart.I feel very sad when I am reminded that they have very less time left😭

Liked their playful exchange of words.Mirza got delighted whereas Razia got irritated😆 These two remain true to their nature.

So,Altunia wanted to remincise their romatic moments together😳
Finally,Raz too admitted that it was the most beautiful night of her life too.

The Bhatinda Palace FB was superb.He took her from among the rest of the ladies😆

Waiting for the next part eagerly😳 Mujhe mera bada wala chocolate bar chahiye😳😆


Amaa aapka chocolate bar update was coming upto almost 8000 words...isiliye usko split karna pada...im obsessed with jotting down the feelings, the thoughts and the environment properly na isiliye...Aapka chocolate bar almost bann chuka hai...aajega kuch hii dino mein...😆

and abt the disappointment in the beginning...ab hum kya karein mohtarma but whilst giving romantic updates i myself cant forget that the theme is 'death' here
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: lionsroar

Ooo
Nnnhhhiii...
Mtlb itne intezar k bad bhi bas itna hi...
Oooffooo..

Pr... Phle to thnkkkuuu sooo
Muuuccchhh...
Hme ye update dedicate krne k liye...
Apka bahut bahut shukriya..mohtarma...!!!

Lkin hm is forum ki new reader nhi h...
Bahut purane reader h..bas I'd nhi banayi thi Aur phir post krna smjh me nhi at a tha..
Pr Ab aa gaya h .. And I m sooo happpy..
Ki ap logo se hmri baat hoti h...!!!

I'm dancing right nowww...!!!
Ab chapter ki bat krte h...
Fir se apne hmra dil uchaal diya...
WO line.. " Ishq badhta h mera apki na na se.."
Ye hmri mirza ki sabse favourite shayri h..
I just luv it ..
Aur kya tareeke apnata h wo... Mtlb had h ..

Aur haa zaroon k upar gussa was the most funny part.. "Dekhiye kaise roz aurto ki jamat laga kr baith jati h .." I luv it ..
Ab rzia darling kaise bachengi ...
Mirza is on FIRE...
Oofooo made jaa rhe h age ka soch soch k...

Plsss plsss...
Jaldi...jaldi ...likhiye na...

But akhir me...
Ittu sa nhi...
ekdum bhar ke hmri trf se luuuv shuuuv...
Te chapter purana...
Luv from
Shivangi..
Or lionsroar...


Thank u Shivangi !! 😃
Yeah Mirza is on fire...dekhte jaao aage kya kya karta hai 😳
u mite be an old reader but forum pe toh nayi nayi likh rahi ho na...isiliye 😳
keep in touch with us here...ur too sweet...next update jaldi aajayega dont worry bas thoda aur likhna hai...before the end of this week ull have it 😃
hugss !🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
NAHI AAYEGA...

GUYS IF U WANT AN UPDATE TELL HER TO UPDATE HER DESIRE CHAPTER 25 FIRST...

AND A LONGGG NAUGHTY MIRZA ONE
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: princess200

NAHI AAYEGA...


GUYS IF U WANT AN UPDATE TELL HER TO UPDATE HER DESIRE CHAPTER 25 FIRST...

AND A LONGGG NAUGHTY MIRZA ONE

😭 😭 REVENGE -EH??? FOLLOW GANDHIVAD...KOI EK THAPAD MARE TO DUSRA GAL AAGE KAR DENA CHAHIYE...IN THE SAME WAY U SHOULD UPADTE DOUBLE ON MY BEHALF...I WANT AN UPDATE...😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
NO😡

ITS VERY SIMPLE...GIVE UR UPDATE N ILL GIVE MINE...

I ALREADY GAVE MY CHAPTER FIVE

HIGH TIME U GIVE URS...IM WAITING SINCE 9 DAYS NOW


NO MORE ARGUMENTS ON THIS😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Are yar... hme to sare updates chahiye.. pr fir bhi... i know.. its tough ek sath itni sari stories likhna... but dont worry... is baar no shikayat.. bs roz ek kahani ka 1 chptr hi update kr diya kariye... hm khush aur SANTUSHT ho jaynge... again...thnk uuu vry much for your reply... im on satwe aasamaan...!!! thnkuuu &&&& take care... pura ..1 ton... pyarrr... apke and apki mind UDAAAUU stories k liye..!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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alright...i've started to type it kal tak ho jayega...will update in noon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER 4 -- COMMENT

AWESOME! FANTASTIC .... FANTABULOUS..👍🏼. AMAZING..⭐️.. MINDBLOWING..🥳. I AM RUNNING OUT OF WORDS👏

"Iss tadap mein bhi ek sukoon hai Zaroon Miyan" said Altunia smiling dreamily. "Ishq badhta hai mera unki na-na se" he said looking at the moon.

Altunia ke dialogues are killing me ...🤢 I am dead already lost in his dreams...

Brilliant ! Its locked so tight that even an elephant like Zaroon wont be able to open it unless the lock outside is not broken" I burst out lauging reading that ...Don't underestimate Zaroon Miya! His capabilities will come to ur help soon!

Arrey nahi khul raha...matlab nahi khul raha hai Mohtarma !" said Altunia in the fake tone of shock fighting the burning urge to laugh😆

Me too trying my best to fight the burning urge while sitting in office.🤣

"Hum aaj bhi wohi Mirza hai, jissey aap deewano ki tarah mohobbat karti thi. Humein Mirza' se Subedar Sahab' bulakar, aap hamare aur aapke darmiyan jo mohobbat thi aur hai, usko badal nahi sakti" he said running his fingers through her long hair

NO WORDS!!! 😳 ☺️

He had controlled his burning urge to crush her underneath himself today...


Loved the update Arshia!!! tumne toh LOOONNNGGG Update likhne ke saare records hi todh diye!!!! Ab mein Kya karun???


CHAPTER 5 COmment coming up in a while!!! Boss aa gaya!

Loads of Love and huggs🤗
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