Originally posted by: ..radiance...
Ye misunderstandings .! Inhi ne toh inn dono ko ek saath kiya , pta nahi ab kya kya gul khilayengi ye ..!
So happy to watch a strong Razia or rather read 😆.
N ya I love Pankh/razia in pink n blue d most. Thnks 4 using d same.
Originally posted by: cuteshravani
oh! yes i read it and u know what u encouraged me so much but really the passion u have presented in nek dil zaalim is really awaesome and destiny is nothing compared to that... plz update soon your ff.
chapter 13
After the meeting with Suryabhan, mirza somewhere felt relaxed.A burden had been removed from his heart. ! Walking past the park, razia's eyes caught something and she immediately remarked "Chiii!!!" mirza, who was behind razia, increased his pace and came to her "What happened?" he said in a worried tone. "Its nothing. Just that the couple sitting on the bench are kissing publicly." mirza chuckled and glanced at the couple once. The girl was sitting on the boy's lap and they both were lost in the kiss. Love was evident between them. They had no tension about the world or people around them. They were just two souls madly in love with each other.
mirza could picturize razia and him sitting so closely with each other, her rosy lips on his. Her divine smell, her long black hair falling on his face, her cute smile and not to forget her hazel eyes. Just the thought of it send down shivers to mirza and he smiled. razia on the other gave a confused looked to him, who was smiling sheepishly at her. Before she could speak he spoke out "razia, you see, the couple over there are madly in love with each other. They neither care about the world or the people in it. The thing what matters to them is that they have each other and they don't give a heck to anything. This is called true love. Being carefree in love proves to the fact that how much you love your mate." mirza spoke in a soft tone leaving razia surprised. Her mouth was slightly open and her eyes were protruding. "Don't look at me like that! It seems like you will swallow me up just about now." razia "Are you okay mirza? I mean you are saying that about love. I mean is something wrong? You can definetly share it with me if you want to."
mirza laughed at razia's reaction to his words. He slowly moved closer to razia. He moved his face closer to hers. His lips brushed against her ears. Her divine smell reached his nostrils and he was lost in it. mirza spoke in a low tone "You are not the only one who knows about love." He slowly moves his face away from razia and began walking forward. razia was left behind and was lost deeply in her thoughts. " What does that suppose to mean? What is with him? Is he in love? And that to with ME?" razia smacked her hands on her forehead and cursed herself for her foolish thoughts. "Wouldn't that be good if he loves me?I mean a wife deserves to be loved by her husband. Does he love me?" these thoughts came rushing back to her but she was adamant that nothing in the world could make her believe that mirza is in love with her. She matched her pace with mirza and without saying a word to each other both of them reached the hotel.
"Aadha ishq aadha hai
Aadha ho jayega
Kadmo se miloka
Vada ho jayega.
Aadha ishq aadha hai
Aadha ho jayega
Kaadmo se miloka
Vada ho jayega."
mirza had his lunch on the hotel's restaurant and razia had her's on the room itself. mirza went out after lunch for a conference. He told razia to get ready by sharp 7 as he would be picking her up from the room. There was no time to take rest. razia had decided that she would try to look her best as she wanted to see mirza's reaction. She wanted to confirm whether he was really in love with her or not. Just to clear up the doubts. razia picked up a dress from her suitcase. She went inside the washroom and found a note waiting to be read.
"razia I want you to wear a dress chosen by me. Its inside my suitcase, wrapped in a pink wrapping paper. Hope you like it.
XOXO"
razia smiled faintly and threw the dress she had picked and almost ran to mirza's suitcase. She opened it up a saw a gift neatly wrapped inside the suitcase. It had a card sticked to it. razia read out loud "For My razia." She carefully opened the wrapping paper and saw a black sari inside it. It was beautiful! "He wants me to wear a sari!" She found a note attached with the sari.
"This Sari would look stunning on you. But something is missing. Check the bedside drawer and you will find a red box.
XOXO"
razia was enjoying the notes game. She immediately went to the bedside and opened the drawer. It had a red box inside it, just as mirza had mentioned in the chit. She opened it up and found a pair of earrings studded with Diamonds. "Perfect."exclaimed razia. She felt like a princess at the moment. "Is it a trick? Am I falling into his trap?" Her heart and mind wrestled with each other. Finally her mind won over her heart. "He is probably doing this to win over my trust so that later he can shatter it into pieces. Let him play whatever he wants to play. I will just go with the flow."
mirza swiped the card and entered the room. He was too excited now! He couldn't wait o see razia in that black sari. He entered the room and his breathing stopped. His heart stopped beating and his eyes were fixed on the beauty in black. The black net sari looked beautiful on her and the earrings made her look even more hot. her waist was exposed, her hair left open and she had minimal make up. He could just take her up in his arms and kiss her senselessly. "You look beautiful razia! You made the sari and the earrings look even more beautiful. They suit you a lot.." He stuttered in his sentence. He was married to a Goddess of beauty. How silly of him that he was irritating and plotting against this pure soul just because she had slapped him in front of a group of people! Shissh mirza! "I think we better get going. Your friend has been waiting for us for the past fifteen minutes." mirza took his coat and both of them left for the restaurant downstairs. Just before the lift reached the lobby mirza put his arms around razia's waist. " Just to make sure that you are only mine. I mean that your friend over there doesn't consider you as a friend. I just want to make him understand that you are married to me and that you are only mine." mirza gave out his explanation in a protective tone. razia thought to herself "Go with the flow." She spoke " You don't have to give me an explanation mirza. Im ok with it."
mirza was surprised. Did she just say that? Has she started to get feelings like im getting for her? Time will tell mirza. He thought to himself. The lift door opened and the couple got out of it. mirza saw Suryabhan standing by the counter. He let out a grin and thought to himself "I'll show him to whom razia belongs." razia went up to Suryanhan and spoke "Hey Surya! Sorry we kept you waiting." mirza spoke in between " The thing is that my wife and I got busy in something."Emphasizing on the word busy. razia felt a bit uncomfortable and spoke " I think you better get inside the restaurant. Im starving!" mirza " Yeah sure razia." They entered the restaurant and mirza said to the manager "I had reservations on the name altunia mirza." The manager gave out a friendly smile " Yes sir, Your table for three is ready." The maanger directed them to the table. They made themselves comfortable. Suryabhan and razia were going through a flashback of their college times. The laughed and giggled together. mirza was loving the way she was laughing and her cute giggles. On the other hand he was hating Suryabhan's laughs! "Aisey bhi koi hasta hai." spoke the jealous husband. His plan was not working. razia was totally ignoring him as if he was invisible.
She was giggling away with Suryabhan and Suryabhan was giving him such looks as if mirza was disturbing them. Intruding them in their privacy. As if mirza was the friend here and Suryabhan-razia the married couple. mirza clenched his fist in anger. Just then an idea clicked on his head seeing the couples heading towards the dance floor. mirza got up from his seat and asked for razia's hand. "May I have the pleause to dance with you My love?" A blush crept up on her face. She put her palm on mirza's and he prtoctively held it. He caressed her hand with his thumb and looked at Suryabhan who was burning in jealousy. mirza grinned. He eyed the manager and he nodded. As mirza and razia reached the dance floor, the lights around them dimmed. mirza pecked his lips on razia's hand. The manager played the song which mirza had asked for. The music played.
(This is a very nice song and I think this goes with the update. This is from the movie Raaz 3 Zindagi se churake. Those of you who have not heard this song can hear it on the given link. Hope You enjoy it!)
"Zindagi se chura ke
Zindagi mein basa ke
Zindgaani banaya hai tujhe"
mirza took razia's hand in his hand. He put her other free hand around razia's bare waist. razia hesitantly kept her hand close to mirza's chest. They started dancing in tune with the song.
"Roothe rab ko mana ke
Aasmaan ko jhuka ke
Zindgaani banaya hai tujhe"
mirza swirled razia around. Her hair was hitting his face on and on as he kept swirling her around. His eyes were fixed on razia.
"Tu mila jis tarah saba mile
Tu mila jis tarah sila mile
Tu mila jis tarah duaa mile, bakhuda
Tu mila toh jaise main jee gaya
Tu mila mukammal main ho gaya
Tu mila toh phaila hai noor sa bakhuda"
razia was about to fall when mirza tightly held her up. He slowly brought her closer to him. The space between them was decreasing every passing second. mirza lifted razia in his arms. His face and razia's face were really close now. His lips brushed against her ears. razia closed her eyes. Love was in the air.
"Zindagi se chura ke
Zindagi mein basa ke
Zindgaani banaya hai tujhe
Mehfoos tu mehsoos kar"
"Tere paas hoon main sada
Tujhse nahi ho sakta main
Pal bhar bhi ab judaa
Ab saath hain hum iss tarah
Aankhon ke sang palkein
Aa waqt ko yeh baat hum
Ik baar phir se kehde"
He put her down and they started dancing in rhythm. Every eye in the restaurant were fixed on the heavenly couple. Suryabhan glared at them. His anger was rising every passing second. mirza moved his face closer to razia's and pressed a kiss on her cheeks. razia's cheeks flushed into red.
"Saare ghum se chupaake
Har nazar se bacha ke
Zindgaani banaya hai tujhe"
razia rested her head on mirza's chest and closed her eyes. Both of them were lost in the song. mirza had completely forgotten about Suryabhan. His concentration was fixed on razia and he was loving it.razia moved her face from mirza. They both shared an intense eye lock. Their eyes were filled with love. mirza moved his face towards razia's face. They were like the couple in the park. They didn't care who was watching them or what would they say, they were just lost in each other and wanted to stay like this forever.
"Tu mila jis tarah sabah mile
Tu mila jis tarah silah mile
Tu mila jis tarah dua mile bakhuda
Tu mila toh jaise main jee gaya
Tu mila mukamaal main ho gaya
Tu mila toh phaila hai noor sa bakhuda"
They were about to kiss but came back to their senses when they heard people clapping around them. mirza didn't budge from his position. His eyes were fixed on razia. He slowly put his lips on her forehead. His heartbeat stopped. His mind screamed to him "YOU ARE IN LOVE MIRZA AND YOU HAVE FOUND YOUR HEART IN RAZIA."
CHAPTER 14 : SCROLL DOWN
Oh Thankyou So much Love!!! Will update soon 😃BTW I am still waiting for your comment on Nek Dil Zaalim 😉Coming to the update ... It was AWESOME 👏I loved Mirza's reaction to the Waiter... I would have done that too if I was at Mirza's place... umm as in Razia's place!! I can't quite be in Mirza's Place -- gender issues you see!Razia refused to the HUG - Me dancing just like Mirza's heart. These small things can make a huge difference in one's relationship ... specially if ur partner is the possessive kinds ☺️Update Soon!!! Can't wait for more...
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