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this ff is of my fav. lovely couple razia and mirza but it is a 21st century love story.
razia was standing infront of the mirror looking at herself. "Ur the best razia! u can do anything." She thought to herself. "Dad I'm going to impress you today!" She stepped outside her room. She saw her father sitting on dining table reading the newspaper. She took a cup of tea for her dad and as she was gonna give to him razia tripped and the cup fell on her father. "YOU STUPID GIRL! Look what you have done. You have ruined my Armani suit. Thats why I always wanted a boy and not a girl. U r bad luck for me!" razia was on the verge to cry but she held her tears back as she showed herself as a strong girl who never cries. qutub begum "Stop it already. You just keep hurting her. Lets go razia from here." razia went to her room with her mother. " Mom its okay I am not crying, Do u see tears. I am used to this. But today its going to change becauz u know that dad is sign a very big deal in a company and I will go to the office and get the the deal and surprise dad. He will then be happy with me and love me." "Okay beta but if your father says anything to u, u will come to me and I will scold him." "Okay Ma." razia went to her father " Dad can i do the presentation of the deal. Please!" "What??!! Y should i let u do the presentation. U r just a girl what can u do?? I will not let such a deal slip through my hands do u get it! Now leave" razia left the place sadly. But soon an idea struck her head.

In the meeting room

iltutmish khan is sitting on one side and on the other side is sitting a handsome business tycoon. The owner of the Singhania group of companies. Yes he was none other than THE altunia mirza. He was waiting for the meeting to start. Suddenly the door swang open and there she was standing out of breathe. altunia was mesmerized by the sight he saw. He never saw such a beauty in his life. Her hair, her eyes,her lips evrything was just beautiful. He was awestruck. He was lost in her. Suddenly a voice knocked him of from is dream world. " What are u doing here?" said iltutmish. "Dont u know that an important meeting is going on?" " I know dad but I told u at home also that I want to do the presentation and I do have the capabilty as I am an awesome student and i rocked the MBA." mirza could not help but smile. He thought to himself " How can a girl act like this when her father is scolding her." The he spoke out " Mr.iltutmish let her do the presentation. I want to see her 'Capability'." A smile spread across her face.
iltutmish: Okay then Mr.mirza just as u wish. Start the presentation razia.
"What type of name is razia. So historical yet nice. This name suits her alot." mirza thought to himself. " Okay ladies and gentlemen my name is razia." Then she started the presentAtion and evryone was quite impressed. The presentation was over. "I must say Miss.razia that you have skills and it was a very good presentation. So Ms. razia I have decided that the deal goes to ur company. Congratulations." A big smile appeared on her face. iltutmish also got happy. "So dad my work here is done and I felt good while doing this presentation. Bye everyone." mirza got a little angry becauz he wanted to see more of her and she was talking about leaving. "Yes razia u r done here and now u can return home." said her father.
MIRZA: "No no Mr.iltutmish. Im not ready to sign the deal."
iltutmish:"What??!!! But why"
MIRZA: "I will only sign the deal if razia is in the project and she has to be made the head of this project or else Mr.iltutmish Im sorry we would not be able to do the project togather.
ILTUTMISH: Okay okay. razia will be there in the project as head.
MIRZA: Okay then the deal is finalised and I will take ur leave now.
ILTUTMISH: Well Mr.MIRZA Im keeping a party for the celebration of this deal do come.
MIRZA with a serious face:Of course I'll surely come.
And the last time he looked at razia and he went away. razia slipped through that place and hurried home as she knew trouble was waiting for her in the dining table. She went inside her room. She knew her father would burst at her becauz she was given the credit for the deal only. "razia be ready for the danger thats coming..."
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Precap: razia and mirza dance in the party.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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yaaay one more SS...and the present day style...nice i liked it πŸ˜ƒ
waiting for more
u made a tiny error dear...in one of the first paragraphs you wrote jodha instead of razia hehehe
and when mirzas entry came you wrote Veer instead of mirza.

keep writing i loved it so far. update soon πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: arshia200

yaaay one more SS...and the present day style...nice i liked it πŸ˜ƒ
waiting for more
u made a tiny error dear...in one of the first paragraphs you wrote jodha instead of razia hehehe
and when mirzas entry came you wrote Veer instead of mirza.

keep writing i loved it so far. update soon πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰

upps! no proof raeding pata nahi dimag mein kya kya chal ta rehta hai i'am going to correct it
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razia entered her house. She looked around to see whether anyone was around or not. Phewww! No one was around. She was about to enter her room when she heard her father " Wow! razia after commting a grave mistake you are running away. Where was this scare when u barged into my office and stole my client? Huh? Answer me!" razia kept quite and slowly turned around Nd went inside her room and closed the door. " How dare you? You will surely pay for this razia!"

(Skipped to the party)

Every girl in the room was staring at mirza, who wore a black suit over the blue shirt.. He looked amazingly hot! The girls were all drooling over him. But after awhile all the attention went to the pretty girl who entered the hall. She was wearing a white sari with a pair of diamond earings. She was wearing minimal make up but looked elegant. mirza's eyes were fixed on that girl. razia felt a bit awkward as everyone present in the hall were staring at her. After her iltutmish entered he had an evil smirk on his face. He had a plan on his mind. mirza went up to razia "Wonderful party isn't it?" razia replied "Ji.. Party toh kaafi acchi haai." "
mirza: Aapki izzazat ho toh, let's dance?
razia after a little hesitation: Sure why not. Chaliye.
mirza took razia's hand in his and went to the dance floor.
The song started:
Khwaabe hai tu...
Neendh hu mai..
mirza twirled razia around N brought her close to him. They looked at each other's eyes.

Dono mile,
Baate bane..
Rooze yeh hi...
Mangu dua
Teri Meri
Bate bane
Bate bane...

A sudden current passed down both their spine. razia looked away. They were both so close to each other. Every eye present in the hall were staring at them in awe..

Mai range sharbato ka
Tu mithe ghaate ka paani.
Mai range sharbato ka, tu mithe ghaat ka paani..

They were both interrupted by iltutmish. "razia I would like to introduce you to someone. razia yeh hai ali kuli. Tumahri Shaadi hai isse 2 days Mei."
razia's eyes grew wider and she was on the verge of crying. Her father hates her so much that he is making her marry to this stranger. mirza spoke in a low tone " well congratulations to u Miss razia and ali quli.." razia just gave a smile. She knew she had to accept this guy as it was her father's wish and maybe after this her father would love her.
razia: I'm going to the washroom. Mai 5 minute mai aayi.
She was unknown to the fact that a man, who was attracted towards her when she came in the party, was following her. When she was close to the washroom she felt a pair of arm wrapped around her tightly from the back. She wasn't able to see his face. mirza saw this and couldn't control his anger. The electricity went away and it was dark. mirza beat up the man and the man ran from there. The electricity came back and razia turned around and she saw mirza leaving. Her nose flared in anger. mirza did this! razia went back to the party and slapped mirza really hard in front of everyone. mirza was hell shocked and so was everyone " Tumhari itni himmat Mr. altunia mirza! What did you think u can run away?? No.. Tum ek Larki ke saath yeh Nahi kar sakte. U tried to touch me how dare you? U worthless man!" razia then left the room leaving mirza in need of revenget. mirza to himself " Miss razia Tum pachtaogi.. U will have to pay for this.. Nobody insults MIRZA like this.." He was hungry for revenge.

Precap: A big twist which changed RAZIA's life forever...

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The upbeat of the rap music pierced through MIRZA's ear drums as he sat on the bar stool gulping down his tequila shot. The only thing on his mind was RAZIA. Not that he was thinking about her because he liked her, he hated her. No one insulted MIRZA like this. He needed revenge. He was thirsty for revenge. An idea hit his head and brought an evil grin on his face. " aab Dekho RAZIA kya hota hai.."

Everyone in RAZIA's family was making preparations for RAZIA's wedding which was in a day. RAZIA was the only one sad in her house. She wanted to run away but she couldn't. Her mother brought I her wedding dress. It was a red lehenga with golden embroidery. Her mother knew something was wrong. ILTUTMISH on the other hand was finally happy that he was getting rid of RAZIA.

Soon the wedding day came. RAZIA wore the most expensive jewellery. She looked more like an angel from above. Her mother was so proud of her.

The MUSLIM PRIEST called RAZIA. Tears weld up. She didnt want to get Married with a man whom she doesn't even know. She was on the verge of crying. Her mother and her friends took her to the HALL. There her Dulha sat with the sehra in front of THE PARDHA . The wedding procedures started.THE PRIEST asked razia kya aapko ye niqiah qubool hai?? she said yes. then the priest asked the dulha kya aapko ye niquhah qubool hai?? yes was his answer.

"Aaj se aap dono shohar aur bivi huye. Jayye aur aashirvaad lijiye."
"Hum kissi ke saamne Jhuk the Nahi maulvi sahab" RAZIA frowned as her husband spoke. He removed the sehra while saying. "Congratulations MRs. RAZIA ALTUNIA MIRZA." N there MIRZA was standing with an evil smirk. RAZIA froze.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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why does he hate his daughter 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
so this was his evil plan. mirza ki pitayi 😭😭

pyaar bana lo yaar baap beti mein

update jaldiiiπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omggg yaaay chalo atleast they got married

p.s - i somehow knew it will be him shes marrying...
this is a bit like madhubala story
RK marries her for revenge and falls for her then
will be interesting from mirza and razia point of view 😳😳😳
update karo aur jaldiii
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshia200

why does he hate his daughter 😭
so this was his evil plan. mirza ki pitayi 😭😭

pyaar bana lo yaar baap beti mein

update jaldiiiπŸ˜ƒ

NO NO I THINK U TOOK IT ALL WRONG THE EVIL PLAN WAS NOT THE MIRZA'S PITAI BUT THE MARRIAGE FIXING WITH ALI QULI... AND HATERED BETWEEN BAAP BETI IS THE MAIN TRACK
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Originally posted by: arshia200

why does he hate his daughter 😭
so this was his evil plan. mirza ki pitayi 😭😭

pyaar bana lo yaar baap beti mein

update jaldiiiπŸ˜ƒ

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