Alzia SS 'The Malik Of Sultan's Heart' last part pg 32 - Page 25

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Posted: 8 years ago

πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ Thanku So much for this much awaited update.
But... This was very short 😡

Still the wait was worth it.. πŸ˜†
First of all... badi jaldi thi inlogo ko dilli jeetne ki.
Ek do saal shaadi ke bita lete toh kuch chala jaata...
phir ladte aaram se jung..
😑

Altunia; aapko lagta hai humen parwah hai? The Attitude ... 😎

Yaar... Yeh log.. matlab kahin bhi.. In open , under a tree... πŸ˜†
Koi dekh leta toh... 😳 That mango part... so cute πŸ˜›
And for the first time...I loved Razia for ignoring the Siyaasat, jung n all...
And just living the moment with him.
😳 πŸ€—
I wish they had spent a long time like this... in each other's arms , ignoring the world. πŸ˜’
Now... I think the story will soon turn to the battle part

But this update... was amazing , hawt , beautiful , lovely. 😳
πŸ€— πŸ€—
❀️ ❀️

Will be waiting for the next update Roger πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lionsroar


πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ Thanku So much for this much awaited update.
But... This was very short 😡

Still the wait was worth it.. πŸ˜†
First of all... badi jaldi thi inlogo ko dilli jeetne ki.
Ek do saal shaadi ke bita lete toh kuch chala jaata...
phir ladte aaram se jung..
😑

Altunia; aapko lagta hai humen parwah hai? The Attitude ... 😎

Yaar... Yeh log.. matlab kahin bhi.. In open , under a tree... πŸ˜†
Koi dekh leta toh... 😳 That mango part... so cute πŸ˜›
And for the first time...I loved Razia for ignoring the Siyaasat, jung n all...
And just living the moment with him.
😳 πŸ€—
I wish they had spent a long time like this... in each other's arms , ignoring the world. πŸ˜’
Now... I think the story will soon turn to the battle part

But this update... was amazing , hawt , beautiful , lovely. 😳
πŸ€— πŸ€—
❀️ ❀️

Will be waiting for the next update Roger πŸ˜†

Arre this was the last part yr i dnt have the heart to writw their death scenes
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: overactor


Arre this was the last part yr i dnt have the heart to writw their death scenes



Hainn... Sachii πŸ˜ƒ
Sach kahe toh... I was not waiting for that scene also..
And its the LAST PART ... 😲
SO ... OFFICIALLY ... BYE BYE story. It was great...
It had the most romantic night of Alzia 😈 😳 😳
And how can I forget... The dialogues mahn.. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ€— πŸ€—
Big big huggs to you.. Thanku so much for the story.
So now ... We have to wait for Mere khwabon ka malik πŸ˜ƒ
You are surely one of the best writers I have known. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Luv uuu ❀️
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Posted: 8 years ago
aise hi randomly start se story padhni shuru ki and now I so wanna comment again for all those awesome chapters...

First
Mirza ki feelings main samajh sakti hun jab aapka koi aziz apna attention aur time batne lage kisi aur ke saath...
saamne waale insaan ki koi galti ho ya na ho, usse kabhi kabhi kaccha khane ka mann karta hai... 😑

"chote miyan aap bhi humari jagah kisi aur ko de denge kya?"
the two people Mirza love the most in Firozi mahal, Razia aur Yasir, so much of insecurity of them going far from him...

Second
yeh unn chapters mein se hai jo maine bohut baar padhe hain... like 3 baar, 4 baar, 5 baar, ... ohh oh .. I lost the count..
poore chapter mein I was blushing like there's no end to it
Mirza ki practice, Kaneezon ka (hum jaisa) haal πŸ˜†, Razia ka Mirza ko dhakna aur phir jalkukdi bolna..!
likhte waqt bhi blushing nahi ruk rahi... 😳

Edited by ..radiance... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..radiance...

aise hi randomly start se story padhni shuru ki and now I so wanna comment again for all those awesome chapters...


First
Mirza ki feelings main samajh sakti hun jab aapka koi aziz apna attention aur time batne lage kisi aur ke saath...
saamne waale insaan ki koi galti ho ya na ho, usse kabhi kabhi kaccha khane ka mann karta hai... 😑

"chote miyan aap bhi humari jagah kisi aur ko de denge kya?"
the two people Mirza love the most in Firozi mahal, Razia aur Yasir, so much of insecurity of them going far from him...

Second
yeh unn chapters mein se hai jo maine bohut baar padhe hain... like 3 baar, 4 baar, 5 baar, ... ohh oh .. I lost the count..
poore chapter mein I was blushing like there's no end to it
Mirza ki practice, Kaneezon ka (hum jaisa) haal πŸ˜†, Razia ka Mirza ko dhakna aur phir jalkukdi bolna..!
likhte waqt bhi blushing nahi ruk rahi... 😳


aww so sweet of u dear, jitni baar padho utni baar comment kro i'll be the happiest πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: overactor


aww so sweet of u dear, jitni baar padho utni baar comment kro i'll be the happiest πŸ€—


Aise toh pura thread khatam ho jayega lekin meri comments nahi..πŸ˜†
seriously maine yeh story itni baar padhi hai, except the last chapters...
the more i read, the more I adore it 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Third & Fourth

Atigin smiled😊,

Razia fumed😑,

Altunia smirked😎,

Yaqut stood with no expressionsπŸ€”
🀣
I so wish I was there in darbar at that time...

"arre Sultan kya kr rhi hen aap? hamari izat pe ese waar mat kijiye"
This is so like the Mirza.. Janab ko dher saari dant padne waali hai par majaal ki wo thode serious ho jayein..! πŸ˜†

"Rang di chunar humne ishq k rang se, wo waqt door nhi jab mehbooba bhi rang jayegi"
amazing line..!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..radiance...

Third & Fourth

Atigin smiled😊,

Razia fumed😑,

Altunia smirked😎,

Yaqut stood with no expressionsπŸ€”
🀣
I so wish I was there in darbar at that time...

"arre Sultan kya kr rhi hen aap? hamari izat pe ese waar mat kijiye"
This is so like the Mirza.. Janab ko dher saari dant padne waali hai par majaal ki wo thode serious ho jayein..! πŸ˜†

"Rang di chunar humne ishq k rang se, wo waqt door nhi jab mehbooba bhi rang jayegi"
amazing line..!

bhar do thread kise parwah hai πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: overactor

bhar do thread kise parwah hai πŸ€—

okay then πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fifth

"Sultan ye kya harqaten hen, maana k aap sultan hen pr hamari bhi koi izzat hai k nahi, ese din dahade aap"
😲
🀣
oh my god... inn janab ki addayein, I keep falling for him again and again...!!

Pata nahi Razia Sultana kaise control kar leti thi apne emotions ko...

humara toh sirf padh ke hi haal behaal ho jata hai..
☺️
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