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Ari n Atharva debating on whose more kanjoos
so it was actually our youngest MULTIBILLIONAIRE Ari tricking Rashi into paying his hotel bills..!πŸ˜†
leaving THE CHAIRMAN tag behind he is going to the party as Rashi's very own crazy moron Ari.. its gonna be fun reading d next chapter
just remembered d moment usne Rashi ko Arihant ka actual meaning bataya tha .. Bechare Yash ki toh jamkar dhulai honi hai... poor him..!
Ronnie's songs selection are all great
Ruknu without plotting is something like jalebi without chasni... eatable but no taste..
all the best to them for Operation Maalgaadi Hatao... hope if not in 13th century then atleast in 21st century their plan works πŸ˜†

update soonish..!!

P.S.: I was just reading all the chapters again
So GKL works for Ari n is also an old friend of Trisha
If I remember it right somewhere GKL said to her something like chairman wants to meet you. so is it that Trisha n Ari knows each other formally from some earlier point of time???
n ya all the best for your exam πŸ‘πŸΌ
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yr ash i have a request, plx arira ko jab bhi alzia yaad ayen i want it be in bhatinda, at qila mubarak πŸ˜ƒ pretty plx 😳
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Originally posted by: ..radiance...

Ari n Atharva debating on whose more kanjoos
so it was actually our youngest MULTIBILLIONAIRE Ari tricking Rashi into paying his hotel bills..!πŸ˜†
leaving THE CHAIRMAN tag behind he is going to the party as Rashi's very own crazy moron Ari.. its gonna be fun reading d next chapter
just remembered d moment usne Rashi ko Arihant ka actual meaning bataya tha .. Bechare Yash ki toh jamkar dhulai honi hai... poor him..!
Ronnie's songs selection are all great
Ruknu without plotting is something like jalebi without chasni... eatable but no taste..
all the best to them for Operation Maalgaadi Hatao... hope if not in 13th century then atleast in 21st century their plan works πŸ˜†

update soonish..!!

P.S.: I was just reading all the chapters again
So GKL works for Ari n is also an old friend of Trisha
If I remember it right somewhere GKL said to her something like chairman wants to meet you. so is it that Trisha n Ari knows each other formally from some earlier point of time???
n ya all the best for your exam πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thanks a lot dear for liking it.πŸ€—
And Trisha had told GKL that she would love to meet the Chairman someday because she wanted to know that who was it whom GKL admired and feared.Otherwise,the Chairman's identity is top secretπŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: overactor

yr ash i have a request, plx arira ko jab bhi alzia yaad ayen i want it be in bhatinda, at qila mubarak πŸ˜ƒ pretty plx 😳

Apka huqum sarakhon par!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Chapter-14

Itni bhi kya jaldi hai?Sabra naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai.Khair chodiye.Hum bhi kisse pooch rahen hain.Sabra kis chidiya ka naam hai yeh aap kya jaane,Subedaar Sahab.',she said playfully.

Sahi kaha aapne.Hum toh thaire ek mamuli se subedaar.Humein inn sabke ke bare mein kya pata?',he said.

Mamuli?Aap mamuli kabse hogaye?Pehle humein apne dil mein qaid kiya aur phir inn chaar deewaron ke beech.',she said.Her tone had a hint of sarcasm.

Humein yeh karna pada.Aapne hamare liye aur koi raasta hi nahin choda tha.Aapne khud hi hum dono ke beech itni saari pathreeli deewaren khadi kardi thi.Unn deewaron ke saamne inn chaar deewaron ka koi matlab nahin.',he said.

Humne deewaren khadi ki thi?Maana ki hum bohot taqatvar hain par yeh karna hamare bas ki baat nahin hai.Agar hoti bhi toh aisa karne se pehle hamari saansen na ruk jaati!!',she said!!!

Toh phir kisne khadi ki woh deewaren?Ab yeh ilzaam bhi aap taqdeer par lagayengi!!!',he said.She smiled sadly.

Hum aur kar bhi kya sakte hain.Taqdeer bhi kamaal ki cheez hai na.Iss par har koi ilzaam lagata hai aur yeh chup chaap sun jaati hai.Isse jo karna hai bas wahin karti hai.',she said.

Yeh aap keh rahi hain?Aap?Jisne kabhi apni taqdeer se jung karke usse apne ghutnon pe laya tha?Jisme itni himmat thi ki woh apne haq saare zamaane se lad gayi?',he asked.

Himmat toh ab bhi hai.Aur qabiliyat bhi.Bas unn buland iraadon ki kami hai.',she said.

Baat ko ghumayie mat!! Pehle hamare sawaal ka jawab dijiye.Kisne khadi ki hum dono ke beech woh deewaren?',he asked.

Aap abhi tak deewaron ke baarein mein soch rahen hain?Achcha yeh toh bata dijiye kin kin deewaron ka ziqr kar rahein hai aap?',she said.

Pehle shahi guroor ki deewaren.',he said and moved towards her.

Phir farz ki deewar.',he said and took another step.

Siyasat ki deewar.',he said while taking his third step.

Aur phir...uss insaan ke saath aapki dosti ki deewar.',he said and took his fourth step.He stopped there.There was an awkward pause.And he was still two steps away from her.

Ruk kyun gaye aap?Inn sab deewaron ko toh aap gira chuke hain.Phir bhi hamare beech yeh do kadam ka faasla kyun hai?',she said in a soft voice.

Hamare beech bachi inn do deewaron ko girana aapke haath mein hai.',he said.

Ab yeh kaunsi do deewaren bachi hai,Subedar Sahab?',she asked.

Pehli deewar ko aapki maafi gira sakti hai.',he said.

Hamari maafi?Ab hamari maafi ke koi maayne nahin rahe.Shauhar hain aap hamare.',she said turning her face away.

Dekhiye hamari taraf!! Kya aapne humein maaf kardiya hai?Khata humse hui hai.Aur iss khata ki ya toh humein maafi mil sakti hai ya phir sazaa.',he said.

Sahi kaha aapne!! Aapko sazaa milegi.Aur aapki sazaa hai hum.Sirf hum.Maaf kiya humne aapko.',she said.

He held her shoulders and pulled her close.Their eyes locked with each other.Both could see each other clearly in each other's eyes.Her hair touched his face.He was lost in its fragrance.

Agar yeh hamari sazaa hai toh hum zindagi bhar yeh sazaa khushi se bhuktenge.',he came closer and nuzzled her face.She turned her face away.He grinned.

Ab toh sirf ek hi deewar bachi hai.Woh bhi tod dijiye.',he said.

Kaunsi deewar?',she asked.

Sharm ki deewar.Yeh jhijhak ki deewar.',he said.She turned to face him.They could feel each other's breaths now.They did not even blink.After a long moment,they closed their eyes and came closer.Then,their lips met.

Rashi slowly opened her eyes.She felt extremely weird.It was 4:00 AM.She tried to sleep again.But sleep eluded her.She walked out to the balcony and looked up at the sky.The stars were shining brightly.Like always.Then,her thought went back to her dream.That dream.It was different from any other dream she ever had.It was not even like a dream.It was like,like a distant memory.She tried to remember that dream again but she could not.She had witnessed a man and a woman sharing a romantic moment.But the strange thing was that she could feel a strong connection to both of them.Not only could she see them and hear them,but she could also feel what they felt.Especially that woman.She could not remember their faces.It was completely blank.In a span of moments,she forgot their words too.But those feelings.She could feel a deep attachment.She felt as if she was a part of their conversation too.

Whoever those two were,it is evident that they were deeply in love with each other.',she thought to herself.When she thought about love,she felt a pang of pain.She was reminded of Ari.It hurt her a lot to think about him.But she could not stop thinking about him no matter how much she tried.Tears flowed out of her eyes.

Ari,you wicked one!! I am shedding tears over here thinking about you and you must be sleeping peacefully at Delhi.I pray that tumhe sukoon ka ek lamha bhi naseeb na ho.',she thought angrily.

Somewhere at that time in the very same city,a young man was unable to sleep.He was alone in his luxurious solitary mansion.Well,there were his staff present over there but he had no one with whom he could share his feelings.In other words,he had no family.He sat on his couch and thought about his life.His entire life.He remembered how his parents had always dissuaded him from dreaming big.From taking risks.But he listened to his own heart.He was determined to leave his comfort zone and create a niche for himself.Actually,not only create a niche but to conquer the entire world.He wanted to soar that high above the clouds and beyond the Sun so that nothing could ever harm him.And he had done it.He had struggled like anything.He had tasted failure but that only made him more stronger.In other words,he had burnt himself completely and had risen from the ashes till he achieved his aim.Just like a phoenix.Today,he was one of the most powerful,respected and feared people in the world.Feared too.It was because he had learnt something from his experiences.If you don't make others fear you,then you end up fearing them.But even after winning everything,he had lost his parents to a car accident.They could not live long enough to watch their son fulfil his dreams.They could not live to be proud of their son.He had resolved that while he had become Arihant Saxena,the Chairman Of Phoenix,he would never lose the Ari in him.Finally,he had become successful in merging the two facets of his personality.

At last there was her.Last but certainly not the least.Rashi.His Mohatarma.The most unplanned,unpredictable thing that ever happened to him.He had turned away from love.But love had not turned away from him.It had taken him over like a tsunami.But he could not understand one thing.It had been so sudden.So quick.He was sure that his feelings for her were genuine.But can true love happen so soon?

There are a lot of things between us.I admit that.But we have to meet,Mohatarma.We have to.I know that you feel the same.We need to sort a few things out.My eyes will not rest until they have seen you,Rashi.I have never been restless before.But this wait is making me.You will be happy if you know this.I know that you must be cursing me right now.I accept these curses like the divine blessings.We will meet,Rashi.We sure will.',he said as if she could hear it.

The next morning Ira aunty arrived with Tina and Falguni.The party was to take place the day after that at The Opal,Sydney.As they entered the Agarwal Mansion,they were greeted by an elated Trisha.

Trisha di,it's so nice to meet you.',said Ira aunty.

Yes,Ira.I feel great too.And Tina,dear,I must say that you look so good.And this lovely lady must be Falguni.I have a heard a lot about her.You know what Ira,let the girls go their respective rooms.I will ask Frank to show them their rooms.You come with me to meet Alok now.We will chat for a while.',said Trisha.

Umm,aunty.If you don't mind then can we please meet Rashi first?',asked Tina.

Of course,dear.Rashi is upstairs in her room.Ronnie must be there too.You go and meet her.Frank will show you the way to her room.And Frank,tell someone else to take their luggage to their respective rooms.',said Trisha.

Sure,Ma'm.',said Frank.The girls followed him upstairs and Trisha went with Ira to Alok's study.

Rashi was sitting in her room and Ronnie was doing his usual job of irritating her.

Mehendi laga ke rakhna,doli saja ke rakhna, lene tujhe yahaan se,aayegi Maalgadi behna.',Ronnie sang merrily.

Bro,aapko mujhe irritate karne mein mazaa aata hai kya?',Rashi asked angrily.

Aata hai.Bohot mazaa aata.Tumhari situation meri samajh mein nahin aa rahi hai,apni superfast Ari Express ko bhool kar tum uss Maalgadi par dhyan de rahi ho.Kamaal hai!!',said Ronnie.

Bro,main abhi tak Yash se mili bhi nahin hoon.Decide karna toh door ki baat hai.And I haven't forgotten Ari.',said Rashi.

Oh!! So,you admit that you still think about him??Caught in the act!!',said Ronnie slyly.

I never said that.',said Rashi.Then,there was a knock on the door.

Come in',said Ronnie carelessly.The door opened and Tina entered along with Falguni.Ronnie's eyes went out of their sockets.

Surprise.',said Tina and she hugged Rashi and Ronnie.

Tina,Falguni,you are here!!',said Rashi and she hugged both of them.Ronnie came near Falguni.They almost hugged but then they refrained from doing so and shook hands.

You should have told me the time of your arrival.I would have come to receive you guys.',said Ronnie.

Yes,Ronnie bro.You would have come with a garland right?',Tina said as she winked at Ronnie.Ronnie's face went red.

Shut up,Tina!! Okay,so you guys carry on.I,I have some work.',said Ronnie and he left the room.

Rashi,there is another good news.Guess who is coming to Sydney for the party tomorrow?Nikki!!! Okay,before you get confused,let me tell you that it's Nikhil.Ronnie bro and I invited him to come here.Isn't that amazing???',said Tina.

Of course,Nikhil is coming here.It's a really good thing.',said Rashi nervously as she looked at Falguni.Falguni had a solemn look on her face.Suddenly,Tina squealed in delight.

Look,talk of the devil and the devil appears.Nikhil has called.Sach mein,he will live for a hundred years.Girls,please excuse me for a moment.',said Tina and she left the room.

What will you do now,Falguni?He is coming.',said Rashi.Falguni smiled.

I can't do anything Rashi.I have to stop running away and face the truth once and for all.Only then I will be able to move on in life.',said Falguni.

It's not going to be easy for you to do it Falguni.',said Rashi.

I know that it's not going to be easy.But it's not impossible either.I have to do it Rashi.I have to do it for myself.And I am glad that I have a caring friend like you.',said Falguni.

Rashi smiled.If Falguni could do it,then so could she.She compared her situation with Falguni's.Falguni's problem was tougher than hers.Yet she was trying to face it instead of running away.Her heart was filled with admiration for Falguni.She had to give it a try.Nothing is impossible.Maybe,someday,she would make it too.

Alok,Trisha and Ira were sitting in his study with glasses of wine.Alok was telling Ira about the party and about Yash.

So,Jeejaji,tell me more about this boy whom you have chosen for our Rashi.',said Ira.

Ab kya batayein hum aapko,he is a gem.Yash is his name.I have met him many times.Wonderful young man!! And his family.They are one in a million.Bohot sanskaari aur salaj parivar hai.',said Alok.

Only time will tell that.By the way Ira,nothing has been decided yet.It's just a casual meeting.If Rashi refuses,then the matter ends then and there.Baat khatam.',said Trisha.

Trisha dear,I know my daughter very well.She will like him.',said Alok.

Trisha di,it's a good thing that you are getting such a nice boy and family.You should be happy.I was planning to look for a groom for my Tina but it seems as if she has already found someone for herself.',said Ira.

Tina is only 22.She should focus on her career now.And Alok,I know my daughter better than you.She will not agree to get married.',said Trisha.

Lagi shart?Ira stands as the witness.',said Alok.

Done!!',said Trisha.

By the way,I have to tell you something else.Rajesh and Uma have called their family astrologer from Varanasi.Pandit Sarpmani Maharaj.',said Alok.

Pandit what??',asked Trisha.

Pandit Sarpmani Maharaj.He is a very famous astrologer.Probably the best.',said Alok.

He maybe the best,I don't care.But why are they calling him here?',asked Trisha.

To match Rashi's horoscope with Yash.',said Alok.

Mr Alok Agarwal,since when have you started believing in all this stuff???',asked Trisha.

No,Trisha.You don't realise but Pandit Sarpmani Maharaj is a very knowledgeable..',he began but Trisha had already stormed out of the room.

Looks you will have a tough job convincing her,Jeejaji.',said Ira.

I certainly will.',said Alok as he shook his head.

All the best to you for that.',said Ira.

GKL arrived at the restaurant where Atharva was waiting for him.Atharva had called him up and told him to meet him urgently.As soon as he had sat on the table,Atharva spoke to him.

Listen I won't waste anymore of my precious time over here.I will come straight to the point.Find out everything about Rashi Agarwal,the daughter of Alok Agarwal of the Opal hotel chain.And everything means everything!!',said Atharva.

But why?',asked GKL.

You are not supposed to ask questions.Just do as I say!!And don't you dare tell about our meeting to anyone.',Atharva snapped at him and left.GKL glared at him.This Atharva was infuriating.

Rashi.Trisha's daughter.Why is Atharva curious about her?Is he doing it on the Chairman's orders? Should I tell Trisha about this?No!! I am dealing with Phoenix.Even a small mistake can cost me a lot.I have to be careful.There is something fishy.I have to find out.',thought GKL.

Atharva was driving to Westfield Sydney Central Plaza where he was supposed to join Arihant.

Ari is not only my friend but my brother as well.He is dearer to me than my own family.I know that he is capable enough to look after himself but I have to convince myself too.It's the first time that he has fallen in love.Miss Rashi Agarwal,make sure that you don't even think of breaking my friend's heart.I know that if his heart breaks,then he will destroy the world.But I will finish the one who tries to do him wrong.',thought Atharva.

At the Westfield Sydney Central Plaza,Arihant was roaming around with a can of Coke in his hands.Nothing in that mall had interested him so far.He was waiting for Atharva to arrive.But then his eyes fell on a watch.

Meanwhile,Yash had entered the store where Arihant was.He was with his mother.

Maa,you do your shopping.I will just roam here.',said Yash.

Yash beta,we are here to shop for you.Not for me.',said Uma.

No,Maa.You will do your shopping first and then you can select something for me too.',said Yash.Uma kissed her son's forehead.

Okay,beta.But you look something for yourself too.',said Uma.

Yash looked at the different things.Then he came upto a beautiful watch.He put his hand on it.But at the same time,someone else did too.The two men faced each other.Yash stared at the green eyed man in front of him.

Sir,I think that there is some mistake.',said Yash.

Yes.You have made a mistake.This watch's mine.',said Arihant.

But I ...',Yash paused.The green-eyed man was intimidating.

Jo mera hogaya so hogaya.Leave it.',said Arihant in a cool and calm yet commanding voice.Yash quietly left the watch and went away from there.

Dude,what happened?Who was that guy?',asked Atharva who had joined Arihant.

How will I know?',Arihant shrugged.

Later,Yash was sitting with his mother.He narrated the entire story to her.

But beta,why did you leave the watch?You liked it a lot.',said Uma.

Maa,yes,it is true that I liked it.But you know that I don't like to fight with anyone.Aur agar unn janaab ko uss watch se khushi milti hai toh unhe woh rakhne diya.At least,main kissi aur ki khushi ka kaaran toh ban paya.',said Yash.

Uma started sobbing.She took a bit of kajal from her eyes and put in on her son.She hugged him

Zaroor maine pichle janam mein punya kiye hongey jo mujhe tum jaisa beta mila hai.Mere bachche ko kissi ki nazar na lage.',said Uma

Arihant and Atharva were having dinner and discussing that matter.

Well,Ari.Tu agar chahe toh poore mall ko khareed sakta hai.Uss bechare ko rakhne deta woh watch.',said Atharva.

It's not about a watch Atharva.It's about winning.The philosophy of the world is survival of the fittest.It has always been so.',said Arihant.

You are a unique piece my friend.You really are.',said Atharva.

And this unique piece is reserved only for my Mohatarma.',said Arihant with a smile.

Author's note:So,friends.Here is Chapter 14.Sorry for any spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.Hope you guys like it.

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Ohh Ash i cant tell you how much i loved and adored that dream/ pichla janam flashback you put there... My heart felt so heavy and happy at the same time...smiling at their convo...getting a watery feel in my eyes...Their love...so pure and so divine. 😳

Altunia's step by step of breaking walls and closing in to her. It was so romantic ! ☺️...this was a big 'awww' moment for me...i almost said it out loud here in office...πŸ˜†


Pehle humein apne dil mein qaid kiya aur phir inn chaar deewaron ke beech.'


Humein yeh karna pada.Aapne hamare liye aur koi raasta hi nahin choda tha.

Aaash you romantic little doll !!πŸ€—

i just loved those lines...cant express how much. The way u made them talk was equal to the real Mirza-Mohtarma cute convo 😳 i could hear their voices in my head.

Coming bak to the 21st century...

The idea of not only you, but everyone who are writing a 21st century SS/FF of making MIRZA a filthy rich guy, people scared of him, strong, dominating personality...yet an extreme die hard romantic. Well in ur SS the romantic side of Ari is yet to be seen but as much as i have read this SS and understood it...and because hes a version of Altunia..sorry i mean HE IS Altunia...i know for SURE hes gonna be an EXTREME die hard romantic guy 😈☺️ jo saari haddein tod dega apni Mohtarma ko apna aur sirf apna banane ke liye

ALL YOU 21ST CENTURY WRITERS...YES ALL OF YOU HAVE SPOILT ME BIG TIME ! Do you know how much my demands of the kind of personality and qualities i want my would-be partner has increased ?? People think im nuts ! I actually describe it now to them that he should do this and that for me...πŸ˜† This is all tum logon ki gustaakhi !πŸ˜† Kyun banate ho Altunia ko aise ? Aur kyun woh khuda aur Altunias nahi banata ab ? πŸ˜’

Yippy im so happy Falguni has arrived for Ronnie...

and i cant help being annoyed with this ALOK yaar...He's so hell bent on getting his daughter married to that Yash...for what ?? its ur daughter who has to decide if she CAN spend the rest of her life with anyone for that matter...uff indian parents ! πŸ˜† cant blame them...they also dont want a good rishta going out of hands and as i said before...they dont make such men anymore ! still...the thought of this Yash itself annoys me..for obvious reasons 🀣 trisha and ronnie better play their games...AND FAST 😑

Omg ! Yash and Aris first encounter. Anjaan hii sahi but first time hii itna faadu tha ! And dude jaisa maine chaha tha tune Yash ko bilkul waisa banaya hai...A COMPLETE ZERO 🀣 Kinda like...jo mard hii nahi hai...like they say na hes not MAN enough to fight. He even reminded me a bit like Yudishtar...Dharamraj...always on the path of righteousness, ek thappad ka jawab apna doosra gaal aage karke dena types...AHIMSA preacher... Sorry if im being mean...hes a soft hearted fellow, calm, doesnt wana get into fights wala and all i know...but im sorry even before seeing the shades of Mirza in all ur SS and even on TV...i ALWAYS wanted my dream partner has to be a strong kadak personality...and well Yash is completely the opposite...i was laughing my head off...wen his mom applied kalaa tikka and all to him...i think hes gna be a BIG sissy 🀣

Atharva is that possessive abt his friend ?? hmm...expected it...but if im not wrong Atigen did betray Altunia in the end right and teamed up with Moiz after Razia was captured by Altunia ? right ? Whatever that might be...i really HOPE Atharva does not EVER ditch Ari !


Ohh i loved this update ASH πŸ€— now that ur exams are over please update sooner ok ! 😳

Here are ur hugs πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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Ohh Ash i cant tell you how much i loved and adored that dream/ pichla janam flashback you put there... My heart felt so heavy and happy at the same time...smiling at their convo...getting a watery feel in my eyes...Their love...so pure and so divine. 😳

Altunia's step by step of breaking walls and closing in to her. It was so romantic ! ☺️...this was a big 'awww' moment for me...i almost said it out loud here in office...πŸ˜†


Pehle humein apne dil mein qaid kiya aur phir inn chaar deewaron ke beech.'


Humein yeh karna pada.Aapne hamare liye aur koi raasta hi nahin choda tha.

Aaash you romantic little doll !!πŸ€—

i just loved those lines...cant express how much. The way u made them talk was equal to the real Mirza-Mohtarma cute convo 😳 i could hear their voices in my head.

Coming bak to the 21st century...

The idea of not only you, but everyone who are writing a 21st century SS/FF of making MIRZA a filthy rich guy, people scared of him, strong, dominating personality...yet an extreme die hard romantic. Well in ur SS the romantic side of Ari is yet to be seen but as much as i have read this SS and understood it...and because hes a version of Altunia..sorry i mean HE IS Altunia...i know for SURE hes gonna be an EXTREME die hard romantic guy 😈☺️ jo saari haddein tod dega apni Mohtarma ko apna aur sirf apna banane ke liye

ALL YOU 21ST CENTURY WRITERS...YES ALL OF YOU HAVE SPOILT ME BIG TIME ! Do you know how much my demands of the kind of personality and qualities i want my would-be partner has increased ?? People think im nuts ! I actually describe it now to them that he should do this and that for me...πŸ˜† This is all tum logon ki gustaakhi !πŸ˜† Kyun banate ho Altunia ko aise ? Aur kyun woh khuda aur Altunias nahi banata ab ? πŸ˜’

Yippy im so happy Falguni has arrived for Ronnie...

and i cant help being annoyed with this ALOK yaar...He's so hell bent on getting his daughter married to that Yash...for what ?? its ur daughter who has to decide if she CAN spend the rest of her life with anyone for that matter...uff indian parents ! πŸ˜† cant blame them...they also dont want a good rishta going out of hands and as i said before...they dont make such men anymore ! still...the thought of this Yash itself annoys me..for obvious reasons 🀣 trisha and ronnie better play their games...AND FAST 😑

Omg ! Yash and Aris first encounter. Anjaan hii sahi but first time hii itna faadu tha ! And dude jaisa maine chaha tha tune Yash ko bilkul waisa banaya hai...A COMPLETE ZERO 🀣 Kinda like...jo mard hii nahi hai...like they say na hes not MAN enough to fight. He even reminded me a bit like Yudishtar...Dharamraj...always on the path of righteousness, ek thappad ka jawab apna doosra gaal aage karke dena types...AHIMSA preacher... Sorry if im being mean...hes a soft hearted fellow, calm, doesnt wana get into fights wala and all i know...but im sorry even before seeing the shades of Mirza in all ur SS and even on TV...i ALWAYS wanted my dream partner has to be a strong kadak personality...and well Yash is completely the opposite...i was laughing my head off...wen his mom applied kalaa tikka and all to him...i think hes gna be a BIG sissy 🀣

Atharva is that possessive abt his friend ?? hmm...expected it...but if im not wrong Atigen did betray Altunia in the end right and teamed up with Moiz after Razia was captured by Altunia ? right ? Whatever that might be...i really HOPE Atharva does not EVER ditch Ari !


Ohh i loved this update ASH πŸ€— now that ur exams are over please update sooner ok ! 😳

Here are ur hugs πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

Thanks you very much for liking it ArshiπŸ€—
About men like Yash well,I must say that I share your views to some extent.According to me an ideal partner should be someone who has the guts to face the world.Who is strong and reliable.I am not saying that I want a dominating MCP.But I want someone who treats me like an equal.But he should have the strength and will to fight the world too.And someone who gives me my space and is understanding.If I have to cite an example then I would say someone like Karna from Mahabharat.Or someone like our Altunia.Though that's never gonna happen.πŸ˜†πŸ˜­

Alok,well,he wishes for Rashi and Yash to get married becoz he thinks that Yash can keep her happy.If Rashi refuses,then he will certainly not pressurise.But he has his hopes highπŸ˜†

I don't know much about the Altunia-Atigin story apart from the facts that both of them were close buddies,both of them were nobles,both had the name Ikhtiaruddin and Atigin instigated Altunia against Razia.I never knew that he dithched Altunia at the end😲

Thanks once again ArshiπŸ˜ƒ




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Posted: 9 years ago
By dominating i meant...not the ones who dont let their wives do what they want...

But those who are ...Romantically-dominating.😳...ah it has a deep meaning...its different from different people's perspective...lets just reserve that bit for my imaginations and fantasies alone πŸ˜†
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