Loved MIrza's confusion between mahotarma and shehzadi...π...
Aww razo blushing listening to her own tariifπ... mirza gets shocked seeing sehzadi's fighting skillsπ
loving the story further.,. gr8 work and cont asapπ
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Loved MIrza's confusion between mahotarma and shehzadi...π...
Aww razo blushing listening to her own tariifπ... mirza gets shocked seeing sehzadi's fighting skillsπ
loving the story further.,. gr8 work and cont asapπ
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Soldier; bhago miyan ye deewana waqai hum sbko ek jhatke me maar dalega, Sultan ko dusri malika miljayegi pr hamari biwaiyon ko dusra shauhar nhi milega
π€£This update was AFSAW till infinity.π And Razia's last sentence was completely apt.Now he has to choose between Mohatarma and ShehzaadiIss update ko mila 11/10.ππ
God how can i forget about that motel...π... receptionist see jhooth kahe diya...and subha mein breakfast... aye haye.. bara hii cute hain apna mirza...π³... kash humein bhi aisa koi mil jayein..
chor yaar riu...π... sab ki murad thorri hii naa poori hoti hain...
ab apni dukhbhari kahani koo bazoo mein rakhte huyin update pe dhyan de...π
i agree with ash... the soldier part was best and hilarioua... they are r8... budha can have so many mallikas but their biwiyan can't have more sauharsπ
and last scene... wowπ³, razo was so r8... abtoo bechara mirza mahotarma aurr shehzadi ke beach mein sandwitch ban jayega!!π
wonderful blockbuster update as usual...π
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Originally posted by: bhabhijaan
Sonu aap ki sense of humour toh kamal ka hain π
Mujhe bhi Ash aur Ria ki tarah woh soldier ka dialogue pe bahut haasi aayi.πMirza toh aapne dil ki do hissen toh nahin kar baithe..ek shehzaadi ke hogaya aur ek mohtarma ke liye.π Banda confusion mein phas gaya.Waise your fic makes me miss AlZia carefree days when she was just his mohtarma. Mirza ko bhi har cheez mein Mohtarma hi yaad aati hain. So cute.Awesome and very fun and witty update. Continue soon.π
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