AlZia SS 'Andekhi mohobbat' Part 5 pg 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Yee kya?!! Mirza didn't recognize mautarma... very bad miyan😆... ab too mautarma aap koo choregi nahin..😆
wonderful chapter... i am loving this story... it sounds interesting... loved their cute nok jhok..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
First of all,it was as usual AFSAW👏
Awww,Sonu meri jaan,Jo mujhe show mein dekhne ko nahin mila woh tumne yahan dikha diya🤗
Yesss,Altu budhe ki naak ke neeche se apni Shehzadi cum Mohatarma ko leke faraar hogaya👏👏 Way To Go,Mirza.Though I would have loved to see tharki buddhe ki pitaayi but this is also good😆

Aur ye kya,Altu itna confusing kyun hai?😆 Ek baar decide kyun nahin kar deta ki Shehzadi chahiye ya Mohatarma😆(Though,eventually,usse dono mil jayegi😆)

And,I also loved the part when Razia was getting jealous of herself😳😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Shopau

Continue soon... I want an overdoze of Azia in this SS...

Hating the current track on tv right now :(

I want updates like Razia's dream sequence on TV...

Plz plz plz :D:D:D:D

Love
Shopau


sure dear thank u 😳

Originally posted by: Sshardivfan

awesome part continue soon...


thank u

Originally posted by: Roxelana

nice work, keep writing.😳


thanks lucy 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

Yee kya?!! Mirza didn't recognize mautarma... very bad miyan😆... ab too mautarma aap koo choregi nahin..😆
wonderful chapter... i am loving this story... it sounds interesting... loved their cute nok jhok..😳

😛 😉 mohtarma and shehzadi r going to hate each other😆

Originally posted by: Astoria

First of all,it was as usual AFSAW👏

Awww,Sonu meri jaan,Jo mujhe show mein dekhne ko nahin mila woh tumne yahan dikha diya🤗
Yesss,Altu budhe ki naak ke neeche se apni Shehzadi cum Mohatarma ko leke faraar hogaya👏👏 Way To Go,Mirza.Though I would have loved to see tharki buddhe ki pitaayi but this is also good😆

Aur ye kya,Altu itna confusing kyun hai?😆 Ek baar decide kyun nahin kar deta ki Shehzadi chahiye ya Mohatarma😆(Though,eventually,usse dono mil jayegi😆)

And,I also loved the part when Razia was getting jealous of herself😳😆



Altu is going to be much more confused 😛 ash 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Razia smiled

Razia; wo aap hamen mehel se bahar haath pakad k to laye the bhool gye aap

Altunia; haan sach keh rhi hen aap, pta nhi aaj kal hamare saath kya kya ho rha he, kahan aap aur kahan

Razia; kahan?

Altunia; wo mohtarma, chodiye

Razia was irked he wasn't even saying her name with respect or enthusiasm he seemed bored and this broke her heart, she wanted him to love her the real her, not the princess she was by birth, in her anxiety she didn't realize when her bangle cut her finger.

Razia; aah

Altunia; kya hua shehzadi?

he got worried and stopped

Razia; kuch nhi chudi toot k lag gai kuch nhi hua

Altunia; dikhaiye..aapka to bht khoon beh rha he bht jal rha hoga na

Razia had tears in her eyes, Altunia tied his handkerchief over her finger.

Altunia; itni choti si chot pe aansoo agaye aapko, itna bhi nazuk nahi hona chahiye shehzadi, zindagi kya kya mod dikhati he, hamari sirphiri mohtarma ko to kitni choten lagi kitna dard bhi hua pr wo to apna dard zahir tak na krti, aur aap hum jese ajnabi k saamne apna dard ese byaan kr rhi hen, hum aapki kamzori ka faida uthayen to?

Razia started laughing, she recalled the time when she was hiding her pain and he asked her to show it.

Altunia; aap has kyun rahi hen shehzadi?

Razia; kuch nahi bas yunhi

Altunia; aap ko hum le kahan jayen? Delhi to wo budha ajayega

Razia; jahan aapka dil chahe wahin le jayie

Altunia; ek ajnabi pe itna bharosa theek nhi shehzadi

Razia; aap ajnabi to nhi hen

there was an awkward silence

Razia; matlab aap to wahi hen na, jisne Delhi ki subedaari jeeti thi

Altunia; to? bas kaafi he aapke liye? ek aap hen aur ek wo mohtarma, itni baar unki jaan bachai phir bhi unhe hum pe bharosa na hua

Razia; kya tha us me esa? ek aam ladki hi thi na bas

Altunia; yehi to ajeeb tha unme, wo aam ho k bhi kuch khas theen

Razia made a face and was again jealous of herself "ye ho kya rha he razia hum baar bar khud se hi jal rhe hen" she thought

Razia turned to look at him and she saw an arrow heading towrads them

"mirza!!!" she yell and lowered his head, the arrow passed away.

Altunia was shocked, he didn't tell her his name

Altunia; shehzadi aapko hamara naam?

Razia; wo sb chodiye, peeche se sultan ki foj a rhi he

Altunia; ab hum kya kren, laden ya ghoda dodayen?

Razia; aap teer andazi kijiye hum ghoda dodate hen

she took charge and started riding herself, Altunia was in shock, but he started aiming arrows at their enemies

Altunia; aapko itni achi ghud sawari bhi aati he

Razia; haan chodiye wo sb aap dushmanon pe dhyan dijiye

the enemies were too many and were over powering them, they had to get off the horse, Razia grabbed a sword too.

Altunia; aap?

Razia started fighting , Altunia was amazed as he fought, her moves were familiar

"ye ladne ka andaz? jese hum khud ko hi..ye to sirf hum ya hamara koi shagird.." he thought as he fought. They easily over powered the guys send by yaldoz and they got back to their horse after doing with them all

Altunia; aap ko ladna kisne sikhaya? wo bhi ese

Razia smiled

Razia; dunya ke sabse ache ustaad ne

Altunia; humen milaiyega zarur, acha aapko bhi ladna ata he na, mohtarma to aapse jal ke khaaq hojayengi, aap unse bahaduri me kam nhi, aur wo shehzadiyon ko kamzor kehti theen.

Razia made a face.

Razia; nahi hamen ladna nhi ata

Altunia; kya?

Razia; hamara matlab..wo..wo hum..humen to ladna bilkul pasand nhi, bas wo hamare bhai jaan jabran hamen thoda bht sikha diya ta k hum apni hifazat khud kr sken agr zarurat ho to, hamen to bas sajna sawarna pasand he

Altunia; badi ajeeb hen aap, khair chodiye aap theri shehzadi, aapki hifazat k liye to kitne log honge, hamari mohtarma to akeli thi

she smiled when he said "hamari".

Razia; haan to akeli niqalna bhi nhi chahiye aurton ko, hamari nani to hamen maar dalen esa krne pe

Altunia; ama yehi to farq he aap shehzadiyon aur hamari mohtarma me, wo bekhauf sherni see, aap sharm me lipti see, wo nazron se bhi ghayal krde, aap parde me sharmayen, wo aag si bhel jaye , aap jharne si behti, kuch aisi ada he unki ke wo maut ke saamne bhi dat jayen aur aap..aap to kaante ke chubhte hi sehem jayen.

Razia blushed, she felt proud of herself just because he praised her.

Razia; haan par hamen zarurat hi kya he is sb ki

Altunia; ama jisne bhi aurat ban ke janam liya man museebaton ko qismat me likhwa k laai ho, ek aurat se ziada kisi ki zindagi dushwaar nhi hti, khud ko hi dekh lijiye ek sultan ki aap pe gandi nazar kya padi, hogai na bebas, isiliye har aurat ko hamari mohtarma jesa hona chahiye, bekhauf, nidar ladaka, dil me gande khayal aane se pehle hi talwar aar paar krden wo to

Razia's eyes filled with tears, she was bound and couldn't do anything even after all the training.

Altunia; kya hua aap..aap aise rone kyun lagi?

Razia; wo bas aapki baten, hum agr bahadur hte sb jaante, bekhauf hte tab bhi hamar hi majboori ka faida Sultan utha hi lete

Altunia; ama kamal krti hen aap, be buniyaad sharton k aage kabhi nhi jhukna chahiye chahe phir jo ho

Razia; pr unhone humse waada liya tha bina btaye k wo humse maangenge kya

Altunia; ab bhi bewaqufi to aapne ki na, aisa wada kiya hi kyun? jab pani ki gehrai ka pta na ho to usme yun kashti nhi utarte

Razia; pr ab to hum zabaan de chuke hen na

ALtunia; aapki zaban qayam he shehzaadi, aap wahan se bhagi nhi hum aapko utha k le aaye hen, aur ese me, aapki zaban bhi bach gai aur aapki jaan bhi choot gayi us budhe se

Razia; pr?

Altunia; yunhi 2-3 din aap hamare saath in junglon me rahengi to wo kun zehen budha aapko galat samjh k aapko paane ki hasrat chod dega

Razia smiled.

Razia; aap sach me bht zaheen hen Mirza
Altunia; wo to hum hen hi, Allah meherbaan, kisi dilnasheen ne mirza ki tareef to ki, wrna mohtarma to

Razia blushed.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
First of all,AFSAW,AFSAW AND AFSAW👏
This update was a relief after the sad episode😭
Yaar,but I have one doubt??😕
Ishq ne Mirza ko itna nikamma kardiya hai ki woh apne hi fighting techniques ko nahin pehchaan saka???😆
Razia seems to be enjoying it a lot😆 Mirza baar baar anjaane mein usike saamne usiki taareefon ke pull baandh raha hai😳
So,Mirza's Mohatarma is Bekhauf Sherni,haan!!!!😳
Yeh Mohatarma-Shehzaadi ke confusion ko diye 10/10👏

But the main question is-Who is Mirza's true Love? Mohatarma or Shehzaadi?😉😆

Jaan ne keliye,keep on reading Andekhi Mohabbat by Sonu😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Astoria

First of all,AFSAW,AFSAW AND AFSAW👏

This update was a relief after the sad episode😭
Yaar,but I have one doubt??😕
Ishq ne Mirza ko itna nikamma kardiya hai ki woh apne hi fighting techniques ko nahin pehchaan saka???😆
Razia seems to be enjoying it a lot😆 Mirza baar baar anjaane mein usike saamne usiki taareefon ke pull baandh raha hai😳
So,Mirza's Mohatarma is Bekhauf Sherni,haan!!!!😳
Yeh Mohatarma-Shehzaadi ke confusion ko diye 10/10👏

But the main question is-Who is Mirza's true Love? Mohatarma or Shehzaadi?😉😆

Jaan ne keliye,keep on reading Andekhi Mohabbat by Sonu😃

let the story unfold 😳 mohtarma shehzaadi confusion would grow more😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Loved MIrza's confusion between mahotarma and shehzadi...😆...
Aww razo blushing listening to her own tariif😛... mirza gets shocked seeing sehzadi's fighting skills😆
loving the story further.,. gr8 work and cont asap👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Sonu this SS is so superb. 👏
It so funny how he constantly keeps comparing Shehzadi to Mohtarma and Razo shifts between being jealous of herself to feeling proud that he keeps complimenting her. 😆
Mirza doh khasti mein shiwar..ek shehzadi ko kisi aur ka hone nahin denge aur mohtarma ko bhi nahin bhul sakte.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhabhijaan

Sonu this SS is so superb. 👏

It so funny how he constantly keeps comparing Shehzadi to Mohtarma and Razo shifts between being jealous of herself to feeling proud that he keeps complimenting her. 😆
Mirza doh khasti mein shiwar..ek shehzadi ko kisi aur ka hone nahin denge aur mohtarma ko bhi nahin bhul sakte.

Thanks bhabhi jaan🤗 read my previous one too😳 mirza is gonna be in a mess and razo would start envying herself lol
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