ALZIA - NEK DIL ZAALIM... Pt9 - pg10 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
So happy to finally get to read d next part..!!
U r an amazing writer.
Mirza aur Razia ko superb portray kiya hai.
Razia ka kamre k liye ladna n Mirza ka nikaah declaratn were d best part
Update soon..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Read part 3 and 4 together
Its lovely
The story is very well written
And the language is and epitome of perfection
Emotions are well portrayed
Keep it up
Thanks for the PM
And sorry for my late reply
Keep writing
-Manu-
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

NEK DIL ZAALIM


PART 5

Razia paced to and fro in the room restlessly thinking of an escape from the marriage ceremony to take place in four days. "No he can't do this to me. No way" whispered Razia to herself.

Altunia: Nikaah hone toh dijiye Mohatarma... hum aapke saath aur bohot kucch karsakte hain.

Razia turned around to see Altunia enter back the room as he had changed to his night clothes. He wore chocolate brown silk pants and a brown robe with gold border, which had intricate kadhaii done over it. His robe fell loose down his torso revealing his oiled chiseled chest all the way down his waist.

Altunia: waise aapko dekhkar lagta ki aapka raat yahin bitaane ka iraada hai?

Razia folded her arms across and looked away tilting her chin to an angle. Altunia: Na.. Na .. Humme koi aitraaz nahi hai... duniya ki fikar karne ki aadat toh waise bhi aaphi ki hai. Mirza ki nahi!

Razia: Hum kapde baadal kar aate hain! She walked across the room crossing Altunia when he caught her hand pulled her back to him. Razia looked at him irritated and wriggled to let go off her hand free.

Razia: Haath chhodhiye humara! Altunia's eyes which were playful a minute ago had become dark and intense.

Altunia: Agar aap ab bhi yeh soch rahi hain, ki apni izzat ki duhaai dekar aap hummein zaalim mehsoos karane mein Kamyaab hojaaeengi, toh aap galat soch rahi hain mohatarma. Mirza ki nazron mein aapka woh takht hai jo chand gairon ki be-buniyaad baaton se neechha nahin hosakta.

Razia: Achha??? She said with a sarcastic smirk. Aaj toh bohot badhhi badhhi baatein kar rahe hain janaab.

Altunia's eyes formed a frown on his forehead. Razia: Tab kya hua tha, jab aapne dusron ki BE-BUNIYAAD baton par yakin kar Dilli par humlah boldiya tha??? Tab aapki nazron par parde gir gaye the kya??? She asked firmly.

Altunia's mouth formed a thin line. Razia: huh! Jaayiye Janaab, woh din aur the jab aapki chaashni me ghulli hui baatein sunkar yeh Razia moam ki tarah pighal jaati thi, lekin ab aapke ander ke toofan ne isse itni hawa de di hai ki yeh kshama khud bhi jalegi aur aapko bhi jalaa dalegi.

Her eyes were spitting fire and she with a jerk freed her hand. Razia: Zara Sambhal kar raheiyega! With this she took out a gold night robe out of her trunk and moved to the other side of the jaali wall to the dresser to change.

Altunia looked over his shoulder towards the jaali wall to see Razia across brushing her curls using her fingers, pulling them over one side. Altunia: Iss Kshama ko toh Parwana bohot pehle hi jalte hue dekh chukka tha Mohatarma. Ab iss kshama ke saath jalkar bhi dekhlenge. He whispered to himself with his eyes fixed on her creamy white bare back as she tried to pull open her dori on her lower back.

***

Razia struggled with the dori when she suddenly froze as her eyes met those on the other side of the Jaali. His sweet nothings might not have any effect on her now, but his eyes filled with raw desire for her definitely did. She could swear she could burn under the heat of his gaze. Altunia slowly started to move towards the dresser with his eyes still fixed on Razia's flushed face. Razia lowered her eyes as strange emotion took over. She took in a deep breath to calm herself down when she felt the tips of his fingers on the nape of her neck. Razia moaned slightly as he traced the length of her back and reached the small of her waist. With one swift pull he opened the dori, her fingers were struggling with for so long, and made Razia shiver as she dug her nails in her palm holding the corner of her dress. Altunia's hands reached her shoulders as he pulled down the sleeves down her arms. He bent down and kissed the nape of her neck. Razia tilted her head to the other side to give him more room. Altunia smiled slightly at her humble consent and deepened his kisses nibbling her neck and shoulder. His hands moved down to her waist again and he wrapped his hands around her waist under the dress. Razia threw back her head on his shoulder feeling his hands on her navel.

Razia: Mirza!!! She moaned uncontrollably with extreme pleasure. Her eyes were dizzy and her head was spinning unimaginably.

The Mallik's eyes flew open with a desire he hadn't ever felt for anything before. He had not heard her address him this way for months or maybe ages or so it felt. He almost felt desperate to hear her address him that way. Moan his name that way or rather beg him uncontrollably to pleasure her again and again. Altunia: Kya kaha aapne???

Razia: huh??? She opened her eyes dizzy and breathing heavy confused at his question. That's when she saw their reflection in the mirror across the wall. SHE ... in his ARMS... Half naked ... Flushed and dizzy... full of DESIRE.

She saw him nibbling her ear lobe, giving her love bites all over her neck and shoulder... mumbling something. As shame took over her more and more... there was still a part of her, which could not help but feel heated and filled with desire for him. It seemed strange but she liked what she saw in the reflection of the mirror.

Altunia: Dobara kahiye... hum sunna chahtein hain! He whispered continuing to dwell in her. Razia blinked her dizzy eyes twice looking in the mirror. She sighed and turned her face to him cupping his face in her palm to make him look into her eyes.

Razia: Humme hamari mohabbat lautta saktein aap??? She asked innocently.

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Next: The night continues!

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Shopau

Edited by Shopau - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Their night..!! No words ..
Waiting 2 see hw their nikaah ceremony goes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
OMGGG OMGGG OMGGG
WHYYY WHYYY WHYYY DID U STOP IT THERE 😭
IT WAS HAWTTT HAWTT HAWWTTT😳


Apne innocent readers ko tadpana bhi koi aapse seekhe !😳😳
These dialogues...these perfectly described moments...those intense line "nikah hone toh dijiye hum aapke saath aur bohot kuch kar sakte hai"
Iss shama ko parwane ne bohhot pehle jalte huye dekh liya tha ...ab iss shama ke saath jalkar bhi dekh lete hai
haaayeee😃

seriously yaar the cvs need to pick some tips from you. atleast for the romantic scenes...
the way u described was so perfect that i thought i am actually seeing all this happening in front of me.

you promised lamba waaala update i was so lost in this that mujhe aisa laga ki yeh shuru hotey hii khatam hogaya...😭 ohh god u have no idea how badly i am craving for more right now

ab yeh bhi kehna padega kyaa yaa khud hi samajh jaao ab... UPDATE THE REST SOON !!!
This time im damn serious about the update coming real soon and its your fault only...your amazing chapter 5 gave me soo many feels and emotions at once that i cant help re-reading it and craving for more and more and more and for some reason this smile on my face is just broadening more n more

UPDATE FAST !!!!
love uu !! HUGSSS🤗🤗
Edited by arshia200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: arshia200

OMGGG OMGGG OMGGG

WHYYY WHYYY WHYYY DID U STOP IT THERE 😭
IT WAS HAWTTT HAWTT HAWWTTT😳


Apne innocent readers ko tadpana bhi koi aapse seekhe !😳😳
These dialogues...these perfectly described moments...those intense line "nikah hone toh dijiye hum aapke saath aur bohot kuch kar sakte hai"
Iss shama ko parwane ne bohhot pehle jalte huye dekh liya tha ...ab iss shama ke saath jalkar bhi dekh lete hai
haaayeee😃

seriously yaar the cvs need to pick some tips from you. atleast for the romantic scenes...
the way u described was so perfect that i thought i am actually seeing all this happening in front of me.

you promised lamba waaala update i was so lost in this that mujhe aisa laga ki yeh shuru hotey hii khatam hogaya...😭 ohh god u have no idea how badly i am craving for more right now

ab yeh bhi kehna padega kyaa yaa khud hi samajh jaao ab... UPDATE THE REST SOON !!!
This time im damn serious about the update coming real soon and its your fault only...your amazing chapter 5 gave me soo many feels and emotions at once that i cant help re-reading it and craving for more and more and more and for some reason this smile on my face is just broadening more n more

UPDATE FAST !!!!
love uu !! HUGSSS🤗🤗



Will Update real fast...
Update ko hawt banna ne mein time bhi toh lagta hai... patience rakho ...😳

HOT vm bhi aa raha hai... 😈Nek Dil Zaalim's first ever vm just for my Innocent readers 😛

PS - Thanks for ur lovely comment

Love
Shopau
Edited by Shopau - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Arrey ab humse aur patience nahi rakha jaata zaalim
aapka update itna hawt jo tha...
bas jaldi se kal parso hii update karlo...
aur raat ko khatam karke hii chodna...beech mein khatam karke phir rula mat dena😳

waiting for the VM too😃

hugsss
waiting !!
🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: arshia200

Arrey ab humse aur patience nahi rakha jaata zaalim

aapka update itna hawt jo tha...
bas jaldi se kal parso hii update karlo...
aur raat ko khatam karke hii chodna...beech mein khatam karke phir rula mat dena😳

waiting for the VM too😃

hugsss
waiting !!
🤗


Started writing it already 😆
Just for you🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Aww it was just so hawwt
Loved it
You've penned it down very well
Altunia's passionate and Razia's shy site was revealed perfectly
Looking forward to upcoming parts
Keep writing
Thanks for PM
-Manu-
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
it was too hot !! i can't belive u now i've again read it before commenting and belive me it made me smile broadly when the cozy sences started but made me cry double when the update came to an hault without the night ending !!! jaldi jaldi jaldi...upadte soonish aab wait nahi hota😭😭😭
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