AlZia SS 'The Malik's prisoner wife' Part 10 page 17 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ifians

Sonu seriously... its getting so interesting day by day...πŸ˜ƒ...
Ikhu and Razo... Too good...😳... So razo slipped the tongue accidentaly... koi kuch bhi kahein i know ki razo kee dil mein uska ikhu hi hain... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†...
i loved how u presented altu;s dilemma and insecurity regurding to razia... he can't even stand yaqut's name... obviously uss kaa halat samajh mee aa raha hain... apne pyar kee mooh see kissi dusre kaa naam sunte huye kitna dard hota hain yee sab jaan te hain...
waiting for more cont asap 😊
and gr8 work..πŸ‘

πŸ˜› the next part would clear razia's dil ka haal.
Yaqut ka naam to even i can't stand 🀒 πŸ˜†
Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
oh god . altu and razia kitna tadap rahe hai..
i can imagine unka dil rota hua aur tadapta hua !!
the update was amazing ..
lovely ...
aage kya hoga ??
jaldi update karna ..πŸ˜ƒ
btw may i know your name...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: dinazz

oh god . altu and razia kitna tadap rahe hai..

i can imagine unka dil rota hua aur tadapta hua !!
the update was amazing ..
lovely ...
aage kya hoga ??
jaldi update karna ..πŸ˜ƒ
btw may i know your name...😊

SOnu😳
Thanks

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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
First of all,Sorry Sonu for commenting so late.I hope that you will forgive me.😊
Second,I love it!!! Ikhu And Razo!!!😳 Awww,sooo sweeet.
So,Altu can't stand Yaqut.πŸ˜† Well,even I can't stand himπŸ˜‘πŸ˜†.Even after dying,he is a pain in the neck.
And last but not the least,my usual compliments for you.It was simply beautiful!!!Amazing,Fabulous and AWESOME!!!! πŸ‘
Lots of love for you my dearest Sonu who made my day with this brilliant piece of writing.πŸ€—
You must be getting bored with the same usual complimentsπŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Astoria

First of all,Sorry Sonu for commenting so late.I hope that you will forgive me.😊

Second,I love it!!! Ikhu And Razo!!!😳 Awww,sooo sweeet.
So,Altu can't stand Yaqut.πŸ˜† Well,even I can't stand himπŸ˜‘πŸ˜†.Even after dying,he is a pain in the neck.
And last but not the least,my usual compliments for you.It was simply beautiful!!!Amazing,Fabulous and AWESOME!!!! πŸ‘
Lots of love for you my dearest Sonu who made my day with this brilliant piece of writing.πŸ€—
You must be getting bored with the same usual complimentsπŸ˜†

Its okay as long as u comment πŸ˜›
Even i can't stand him🀒
No im not bored πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: overactor

Its okay as long as u comment πŸ˜›
Even i can't stand him🀒
No im not bored πŸ€—

Well,if you are not bored,then I will carry on with same old compliments.You are amazing,fabulous,splendid,awesome,etcπŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Behen comment bhi krliya kroπŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
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A maid appeared at their room's door

"gustakhi maaf ho subedaar sahab, par aapse milne k liye kuch khas log aaye hen" she said scared

Altunia nodded and left, Razia was in shock. Fatima and Chanda entered as Razia fell on the floor.

"kya hua aapko?" Chanda asked tensed

"wo..hum..ye sab kya..humen araam krna he tum log jao" Razia told them

After Altunia's meeting was done Zaroon came to him

"miyan, bhabhi jaan se apni maalish krwao, dekh lena mom ki tarah pighal jayegni" he said smiling

"Zaroon miyan tumhare nuskhe na tum apne paas hi rakho, wo hamari malish kyun krengi?" Altunia replied annoyed

"miyaan kehk to dekho"

"acha theek he"

Altunia went to Razia who was lying on the bed staring blindly at the ceiling, she was lost in thoughts, he removed his long cloak.

"hum bohot thak gye hen tail se maalish krdijiye hamari begum sahiba" he ordered her

Razia stoodup got the oil and sat down on the bed, Altunia was shocked, she was obeying him without arguing, he sat lay down on his chest, Razia looked at his back and then started the massage, she rubbed her oily hands on his back and shoulders. Altunia was still in shock, she was carefully massaging him with all her power but how? why wasn't she arguing. He was getting impatient so he pulled her down and towered her on the bed, he was leaning to kiss her when he shouted in pain, "aaah"
and moved to a side

"kya hua?" Razia got worried

"hamare pait me boht dard ho raha he Razo humse bardasht nahi hota" he explained

"acha hua, aur khao mirchi wali chatni, kitni baar humne tumhen roka he pr sunne ka to naam hi nahi, wo dusri chatni thi wo aapne le jaane ko keh diya aur mirchi wali daba ke kha li ab dard to hoga na" she was angry

"yahan hum dard se tadap rahe hen aur aap hamen daant rahi hen"

"hum bulate hen hakim sahab ko"

The hakeem gave a medicine and said he would feel better after having it and left, but Altunia refused to drink it.

"dekhiye bht hogyi aapki zid chup chaap pi lijiye ise" Razia was irritated

"ye kadwa hoga" he said making a face

"acha aur wo mirchi wali chatni to bht meethi thi, chup chaap pijiye ise" she was furios now, she held the glass close to his mouth , he drank it in one breath

"boht kadwa tha hum aapse naraz hen ab" he turned his face

Razia smiled, she hugged him from behind.

"Ikhu naraz he, ikhu razo se naraz hoga to razo bht royegi ikhu se bardasht hojayega?" she asked innocently

He turned and hugged her.

"Ikhu kabhi apni razo se naraz nahi reh skta" he said with love

Razia hugged him tight to never let go, until she realized that they were no longer friends, and were husband and wife, and all that had happened had affected their relation badly. She moved out of the hug and left the room.
She started crying as she was out.

"Kyun hum us se naraz nahi reh skte? kyun humne itni mohobbat ki k ab nafrat krna na mumkin sa hogya he kyun?" she sat down and cried heavily, "esa kyun kr hua, kyun hamari hi mohobbat ne hamare saath esa kiya kyun? kyun subedaar Altunia ne taaqat k liye hamare Ikhu ko maar dala, kya waqai hamari mohobbat bas ek tarfa thi, bas humne hi chaha aur unhone kabhi nahi?"

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Next update mein confess kara he do. Yaqut Ne mar ke bhi probs create kar rakhi gain.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: HaremSultan

Next update mein confess kara he do. Yaqut Ne mar ke bhi probs create kar rakhi gain.

πŸ˜† itni jaldi confession hua to kahani ka maza kya rahega
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