AlZia SS 'The Malik's prisoner wife' Part 10 page 17 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
LOL The first part was so steamy and wonderful and the second part was shocking You are a great writer. It was nice imagining Rohit as Altunia and Pankhuri as Razia while reading..Update soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

LOL πŸ˜† The first part was so steamy and wonderful and the second part was shocking πŸ˜† You are a great writer. πŸ‘ It was nice imagining Rohit as Altunia and Pankhuri as Razia while reading..Update soon!!

thanks 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
yes it was actually a SWEET update πŸ˜›
finallly all misunderstandings would be cleared...πŸ˜ƒ
yipppeee!!!!!πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part_9

Razia moved towards Altunia in anger.

Razia: aap..aap ko laga ke hum

Altunia walked back

Altunia; dekhiye begum sahiba hamara matlab wo nhi tha

Razia; kya nhi tha? aap ne jalan me aakar..aap..aap Yaqut se jalte the

Altunia grabbed her from her arms

Altunia; us habshi ki hamare saamne auqaat hi kya thi, hum kyun jalenge us se, jalta to wo tha humse, najane aapko usme esa kya khas dikhta tha

Razia; Aap baat ko palatiye mat, jalne se hamara muraad tha, kya aapko bhi lagta tha ke hum..hum Yaqut se

Altunia turned away. Razia understood, she got furious and started hitting him.

Razia; aap ka dimag chutti pe tha kya? kisi ne keh diya to aapne maan liya? aap ne, aap to hamen humse behtar jaante the na..aur aap

she got tears in her eyes, Altunia held her close

Altunia; nahi Razo, esa nhi he..

Razia; kesa nhi he, haan? boliye? aap jaante hen 100 log hamare aur Yaqut ke baare me baat krte the, aur hum haste the un pe, ke kitne andhe hen log jo unhe hamari dosti kuch aur lagti he jabke jis se humne toot ke mohobbat ki uske aur hamare rishte ko us nazar se kabhi kisi ne dekha hi nahi, darbaar me bhi jab hum aapko dekhte the kabhi kabhi humare dil ki dhadkanen itni tez hojati theen k humen samjh nhi aata tha k kese sb sambhalen, sab ke saamne aapko pyaar bhari nasron se humne hamesha dekha, pr dunya ko kuch nhi dikha, hairani hti thi hamen, pr hum kya jaante the k jis se hum mohobbat krte hen usi ne..us ne bhi hamare baare me ye sb socha

Altunia laughed loudly., Razia was shocked, he started clapping.

Altunia; wah! wah! delhi ki Sultan darbaar me humen dekh k aahen bharti rahi aur kisi ne ghor nhi kiya pr Yaqut se nasdheeki sbko dikhi, ya to dunya walon ki ankhen khrab hen ya to aap k kaul o fail me tasaad he begum sahiba

Razia pulled him from the arm and stared into his eyes.

Razia; acha! to aapko lagta he hum jhoot bol rhe hen, theek he subedaar sahab, aap hi bta dijiye, aap jo humse mohobbat k bade bade daawe krte hen, btaiye hamen, kya aap us insan se shadi krenge jisne hamara qatal kiya ho?

"Razia!!!" Altunia shouted

Razia; sunna bhi gawara nhi na, to aap hi btaiye agar hum Yaqut se mohobbat krte to uske qatil se nikah kr paate, uske saath mohobbat kr paate?

Altunia lowered his eyes.

Razia; haan wo hamara acha dost tha, hamari baaten sunta tha, kuch apni sunata tha , haan hum sharmate the uske saamne, par wja tab bhi aap hi the, wo humen aapka naam le k chidata tha, kehta tha aap jab baarat le k ayenge to wo aapka istaqbaal khud krega, to bataiye apni shadi ki baaten sun k hum na sharmate? aapko dulhe k libaaz me soch kr hum na sharmate? boliye?

Altunia's blood boiled, he pulled her close, his eyes were burning

Altunia; aapko lagta he wo Yaqut doodh ka dhula tha? ke wo aapko hamare saath khush dekhna chahta tha? nahi razo nahi, usne khud hamare saamne qabool kiya tha k wo aapko humse cheene ga, marne k baad bhi aap k dil me wahi rahega, hum to use qaidi bna kr rkhte pr usne hamen jo kaha wo humse bardasht na hua isiliye qatal kiya humne uska

he left her. Razia fell on the ground, she recalled all the moments she had ever spend with Yaqut, and suddenly she realized that he had always mentioned altunia slowly but made sure it was infront of people who could talk, her blush that was for Altunia was mistaken for him, she never in her wildest dreams thought that she was being fooled.
She wiped her tears and stoodup.

Razia; dunya jo bhi kahe, Yaqut ne jo bhi kiya..pr aapne bhi to humen hi galat samjha na, aapne ye socha bhi kese k hum aap se nahi kisi aur se mohobbat krenge

Altunia; (fake laughing) to phir aapne kabhi izhaar kyun nahi kiya?

Razia looked at him without words
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww another cute sa update...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
yeh yaqat ...(my blood boils whenevr i hear his name)
sorry for the bashing!!!
saare fasaad ki jar yeh hi hain...
cute update...πŸ˜†(esp shaadi waali😳😳 baat pe sharmana )😳😳😳
waiting for the nxt parts update soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sonu,first of all,This was as usual AFSAW!!!!!πŸ‘
Loved their confrontation!!!πŸ‘
My fav line was'Aap ka dimaag chuti par tha kya??🀣
Sorry,sorry,itne passionate update ke baad comedy soojh rahi haiπŸ˜†
On a serious note,this update has bewitched me.
PS:I hope that the usual AFSAW doesn't bore youπŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Astoria

Sonu,first of all,This was as usual AFSAW!!!!!πŸ‘

Loved their confrontation!!!πŸ‘
My fav line was'Aap ka dimaag chuti par tha kya??🀣
Sorry,sorry,itne passionate update ke baad comedy soojh rahi haiπŸ˜†
On a serious note,this update has bewitched me.
PS:I hope that the usual AFSAW doesn't bore youπŸ˜†

no it doesn't πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
yar is marriage crisis mein ek hot update de do. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: HaremSultan

yar is marriage crisis mein ek hot update de do. πŸ˜†

is ss ka last part hi bacha he, hot update k liye kuch aur sochti hunπŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: overactor

is ss ka last part hi bacha he, hot update k liye kuch aur sochti hunπŸ˜†





okay then write a new ss, jab tak marriage drama khatam nahin hota ye ss he mera sahara hain.πŸ˜†now i know how you felt when i mentioned shazia, but i could bear shazia as she is a girl and i love to see any girl drooling over altu but razia getting married to another man is not acceptable. i hope in the end shazia marries balban. illtu had married his one daughter to balban though i don't know if she was shazia or not.
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