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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
sonu prolouge πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ aapi ki level of writing bada sonu
i was 😲 seeing it
u made me post a comment on ur prolouge before reading story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: sparkle2985

sonu prolouge πŸ‘ πŸ‘ aapi ki level of writing bada sonu

i was 😲 seeing it
u made me post a comment on ur prolouge before reading story

tum to mere ffs padh chuki ho kai baar phir😲 hone ki kya baat heπŸ˜†
chalo baqi parts padh k lamba wala comment krnaπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Great update. you always give teasers.make them together immediately.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: HaremSultan

Great update. you always give teasers.make them together immediately.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Sonu superb yaar 😊
excellent writing πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
and hot update 😳
I felt like watching the show
Sonu those urdu words which i use to hear in hyderabad made me nostaligic πŸ˜ƒ
hyd ki yaad diladi mujhe tu😭
Abb jaldi jaldi update karo and my like button not working i couldnot like the updates😑
i loved loved ur updates πŸ˜›
cont dear
Dekha Likdi lambi comment u know me i cant write more than this πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkle2985

Sonu superb yaar 😊

excellent writing πŸ‘
and hot update 😳
I felt like watching the show
Sonu those urdu words which i use to hear in hyderabad made me nostaligic πŸ˜ƒ
hyd ki yaad diladi mujhe tu😭
Abb jaldi jaldi update karo and my like button not working i couldnot like the updates😑
i loved loved ur updates πŸ˜›
cont dear
Dekha Likdi lambi comment u know me i cant write more than this πŸ˜†

haan abhi kr rhi hun updateπŸ˜›
ambi πŸ€— i really missed mere purane wale readers, tu sbse awal walon me se ek thi love u😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Part_7

Altunia entered the room smiling and gestured at Chanda to leave, she left without a word, Razia was getting ready, she was busy with her hair.

"Chanda kahan gai sukhao na hamare baal" Razia ordered

Altunia took the steaming iron and started giving steam to her hair.

"acha chodo ise, hamari baali padi hogi zara utha dena to"

Altunia took her earing and instead of giving it to her, he came close to her and carefully put it on her ear, Razia got alarmed at his warm breath and the feeling of his strong hands, she looked up in the mirror and saw him looking at her neck.

"aap...aap kab aye?" she asked shifting her eyes to the opposite side.

"aap hi ne to kaha tha aap hamara intizaar krengi, lijiye hum agaye" he replied in his husky voice

Razia smiled, "haan hamara matlab tha ke hum aapka nashte ki maiz pe intizaar krenge"

"kya?" Altunia moved away, "wo..aap hamen..nashta? matlab"

Razia stood up and faced him, "jee nashta aur kya..aap kya samjhe?" she made a curious face, a faint evil smile appeared on her face

"hamen laga aap wo..." he stopped in between, Razia raised one eyebrow.

"hum kya subedaar sahab?" she teased him

Altunia understood that she was trying to pull his leg. He walked slowly towards her and then pulled her close, holding her from her waist he traced her face.

"to aap ko bas naashta krna he?" he said slowly

Razia lowered her eyes, she blushed heavily, her heartbeat raced.

Altunia came close to her ear and whispered, "Begum sahiba aap sharmate huye bilkul achi nahi lagti"

Razia looked at him in shock, she got furious, she pushed him, "kya kaha aapne? hum sharmate huye ache nhi lagte? aapki jaan lete huye hi ache lagenge aapko hum" she pushed him hard and he fell on the bed.

"haaye hamari zaalim begum sahiba, esa keher na barsao hum pr, hum janat nasheen hogye to bewa aap hi hongi, hum to janat ki hooron k saath aish krnege" he teased her

she sat beside him and started hitting him, "kya kaha aapne? janat me jaane laiq kaam hi kab kiye hen aapne, hoor to kya aapko toor tak naseeb na hoga, aur haan aapko itni asani se marne nahi denge hum"

"acha jee, aur kitna tadpane ka irada he aapka jaane man" he teased her again, she looked in anger.

"aaye haaye, yehi ghusse wala namkin chehra pasand he hamen" he gave her a flying kiss

Razia stood up. "jee nahi ghusse me koi khoobsurat nhi lagta, aap k dimag k keel dheele hen, Yaqut ne kitni baar kaha, hum sharmate huye bht khubsurat dikhte hen" she turned away

Altunia lost his smile when he heard his name, his blood started boiling the moment he heard his mention and the fact that she blushed and got shy around him made him so angry that it was like a volcano about to burst. He stood up and came to face Razia, his eyes burning.

"kya kaha aapne? aap us Yaqut ke saamne sharmati thi?" he was so hurt his voice cracked, there was alot of evident pain in his eyes, Razia got worried she tried to reason, "nahi wo hum" but he silenced her with his hand and moved away, he started breaking things and yelling in anger.

"kyun marne k baad bhi hamen chen se jeene nahi deta wo..kyooon!!!!" he yelled and broke a vase.

"hamari hasti khelti zindagi me aag lag gai, pehle wo iltutmish ne hamari Razo ko sultan bna k hamare sapne tod diye, aur phir us Yaqut ne " he broke a table.

Razia got furious at the mention of her fathers. She pulled him from his arm.

"aap ko abhi bhi sirf aur sirf ...chee..najane wo konsi manhus ghadi thi jab aap hamari zindagi me aye..humse hamara sab kuch cheen liye aapne, hamara sukh chen, hamare wafadaar, hamari sultanat aur hamari mohobbat bhi" she yelled

Altunia put his hands on his ears now, "mohobbat mohobbat sun sun k hamare kaan pak gye hen, konsi mohobbat kesi mohobbat? do din me aapko mohobbat hogai? "

"do din? sach me hum hi bewaquf the jo do din ki mohobbat k peeche apna sab bhula bethe, kisi ki nahi sunni humne aur aapse jung krne chale aaye" she was having tears in her eyes.

Altunia came close to her and grabbed her from both arms, he looked into her eyes, both could see the pain they were going through but couldn't see the reason behind it. Razia blinked and a tear ran down her cheek, but before it fell down Altunia put a finger down her cheek and the tear landed on it. He cupped her face in his hands.

"agar aapne ek aur aansoo bahaya to hum sab kuch jala ke raakh krdenge, aap jaanti hen na aapke aansoo hamari kamzori hen" he said with love.

Razia looked at him with love, she could never understand him, was he really the guy she always loved or was he her betrayer, but in an outflow of emotions she couldn't resist but hug him tightly, she rested her head on his chest, directly where his heart was, his heart ached and raced. He held her close to his heart and closed his eyes.

"Ikhu" she said slowly

"Razo" he replied taking a sigh of relief

"tum yahin ho na?" she asked

"Ikhu kabhi Razo se door tha kya?" he replied

"nahi Ikhu aur Razo kabhi door nahi the, par shayad..Razia aur Altunia ke beech Ikhu aur Razo kahin kho gye" she said in a heavy voice.

Altunia moved her and looked into her eyes.

"Ikhu bhi yahi he, Razo bhi to kya is pal me Altunia aur Razia ko bhula kr Ikhu aur Razo ek nahi ho skte" he asked with sincere love

Razia nodded
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
nice update πŸ‘
Sonu aww thanks for such a nice reply πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
miss tat forum
miss those tom and jerry fights
and criticizing char and all the fun and masti
our CC toh gumnaam hogaya
urs reached 100 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkle2985

nice update πŸ‘

Sonu aww thanks for such a nice reply πŸ€—
miss tat forum
miss those tom and jerry fights
and criticizing char and all the fun and masti
our CC toh gumnaam hogaya
urs reached 100 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

πŸ€—πŸ€—
miss the old days too😭 kitni haseen yaaden judi hen hum sbki saath
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Posted: 9 years ago
So,So,So,Our Hubby Dearest missed breakfast with WifeyπŸ˜†.Very bad of himπŸ˜†
Loved their sweet nok jhok when Altu was ironing her hair😳
And Sonu,now I realise how you felt while reading about Yaqut in my TS😑🀒
You were absoulutely right about him!!😑 That guy is the Sultan of KMHs.😑
Loved Altu's angry,passionate outburst at the mention of Universal kmh's name.I cannot imagine his pain😭

Lastly,loved your updateπŸ‘ It was completely AFSAW!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
The Star Of This Update was ofcourse our dearest Altu⭐️

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