Kuch khas hai ShaNak SS pt 8,9 pg 9 updated 29 jan - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
yeyyy...

What i loved the most is RishabhKundra...

OMG...
Shaan to pehle se hi possessive hai... about Khanak too... thou he wont admit it now...

But I m super excited to see how the bond between RK n KK grows...😳

Shaan, my confused baby... go to Shimla soon... to see ur ur wife ignoring u big time...


Good, Shaan came to know abt Khanak doing everything for him... :)

Thanks for posting this ...


Loved the new Khanak n actual old Shaan...😛

Post the new update whenever u get time Ana :)

-Saroj


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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Hello everyody
after long time i am here and saw dis ss
Its awesome n took me in those old days when i was mad about shanak n till so
This ss is awesome thanx for writing
All parts are written very nicely
Shaan is so angry that khanak left without informing his lol and khanak now in shimla waitung for the twist now and khanak wil cm in new avtar.
Do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz


i can exactly imagine that thats why i m excited lolz

oh so u choose the name fom that RK hehhehe well i didnt watch tat show but SK & RK good combo naam me bhi competition ;)

Shan will be so jealous to see RK handsome than him 😆

waitinggg update sooonnnerrr

that RK was lethal..nobody would like to mess with him..I can never make him second or parallel lead...so...my RK is just same in name & looks but different...Haha...and yeah hotter Shaan needs an hotter competition...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ktymfan

yeyyy...

What i loved the most is RishabhKundra...

OMG...
Shaan to pehle se hi possessive hai... about Khanak too... thou he wont admit it now...

But I m super excited to see how the bond between RK n KK grows...😳

Shaan, my confused baby... go to Shimla soon... to see ur ur wife ignoring u big time...


Good, Shaan came to know abt Khanak doing everything for him... :)

Thanks for posting this ...


Loved the new Khanak n actual old Shaan...😛

Post the new update whenever u get time Ana :)

-Saroj


thanx for welcoming Rishabh Kundra...he's hott...lol fun times ahead for Rk and Kk...and SK..eat his own medicine now...he thinks he's,a God of smartness and looks..and khanak is,an illiterate bechari...ShaN be ready for a shocker... he he...RK is here... Haha...well see how there bond develops...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: heer_85

Hello everyody
after long time i am here and saw dis ss
Its awesome n took me in those old days when i was mad about shanak n till so
This ss is awesome thanx for writing
All parts are written very nicely
Shaan is so angry that khanak left without informing his lol and khanak now in shimla waitung for the twist now and khanak wil cm in new avtar.
Do update soon

hi heer... good to see old and new odhnians knocking back on forum door...Haha..welcome...thank for liking and commenting...ur entry will make all active odhnians happy...ShaNak we're a mad couple as nd we we're mad for them...still are...they are evergreen and too real to forget...
Yupp Shaan is angry and his ego is hurt...he doesn't like being ignored...and khanak. Is on way to discovering herself...let's see there journey...between I am never going to change khanak.. she will rediscover the lost self but change will be in people views and outlook about her... I loved this in show that they never changed khaNak really...she was very simple and same throughout.. it was others who changed...this was unique love...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Good going! Keep writing!

P.S: On one line comment..Sorry lost total interest in ShaNak now! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: poo_j

Good going! Keep writing!


P.S: On one line comment..Sorry lost total interest in ShaNak now! 😆

Its OK poo...ur Korean drama love is forcing me to watch one too ..so which one do u recommend...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Its OK poo...ur Korean drama love is forcing me to watch one too ..so which one do u recommend...😆

Boys Over Flowers! #MustWatch 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Hi guyz
If u guyz still interested here is,the new update. I was itching to write but family stuff really takes,toll and writing takes a lot of time. So here's the next update...enjoy..

PART 5

SHIMLA

Khanak wakes up with a start.She heard a crash somewhere..she runs towards the source if notice to check on what has happened. But what she sees is not some crash but some loud music being played and that guy from night...again shirtless..rolls eyes...doing some jumping hitting stuff. She finds it very irritating...coz neither does she understand a thing nor does she appreciate that it's so early morning...whole world is sleeping and this guy doesn't care about anyone..being disturbed by his foolishness. She feels like a crap already...not ever travelled so much has taken a toll on her. Plus the weather was so chilly.. due to this stupid guy..she forgot to wear something warm.
She just turned around to go back to her room when the guy..what was his name...ugh RK stopped her.

Rk: OMG...so much early morning and instead of a hot sexy beauty what do I see a chudail...ufff...
K: kya kaha tumne? Phir se koi gaali di...he bhagwaan kya din as gate mere subah subah is kabootar se papa pasha. Uff...
RK. : hello chudail ji.. zara idhar dekhkar baat kariye...don't talk showing ur back..got it.
K: tum kitney battameez ho..Nina kapde pehne khade ho or kehte ho mujhey dekhkar baat Karo...par Mai tumhari tarah nahi noon..samjhey..
Rk goes and stands in front of her..." what??? R u serious?? Meri is body pe toh kitni ladkian Marti hain...kaho toh pant bhi utar soon...mera ghar.. meri marzi.. Tunney mujhey battameez,kaha na...ab dekho...
K blushes and feels embarrassed. Instead of some lose body...he had a very captivating body. She wasn't used to seeing men barebody...even shaan had never been shirtless in front of him..and now this guy was threatening to even remove his pants...she felt so scared and awkward.. she couldn't think of giving back any retort and just ran away from there..hearing loud laughter of Mr. Rakshas.
Back in her room..she took a deep breath...safely locked her door in case that maniac followed her...and went back to sleep on her bed. It was still 5:30 in morning. She couldn't hear the noise anymore. May be he had gotten some sense and left to his own room. Sleep had escaped now. She kept staring at the ceiling and thinking of Rk. He was so different from Shaan..chalk and cheese. She and shan had never had much Congo after marriage. In fact they had surprisingly bonded well when unmarried. But now he was may be worst person...nope change it..Rk was,worse than him. She was wondering..if shah would wake up by time for office...he never knew she was the one who made his breakfast and set his alarm. She wondered if he was now very happy with her gone...and must have already signed the divorce papers. Khanak felt too lonely that moment. She felt she was wanted no more in anyone's life. She had become a liability and dadi was right..she had to learn and change herself to live this long lonely life. She decided she would dedicate her life to her village and suraj parents. She knew nobody would ever Iove her like suraj did or even want her. And she was sure she too could never love anyone else like suraj. Thinking of her time with suraj brought a huge smile on her face along with happy tears...and then suddenly her pre marriage moments with shan started coming to her mind..overshadowing suraj...the way than was mithaiwala..the way he fell from camel..how stupid he was..how innocent..she couldn't stop recalling the bond they unknowingly developed and the fun they had. Suddenly she was back to thinking about suraj shan suraj shan ..both had started mixing in her mind. She couldn't understand what was happening and why. She sat up with a start. She was very confused. Since sleep eluded and no one was awake so early yet..she decided to have some tea and went downstairs to make some tea...still totally confused about her thoughts suraj meeting into shah and vice versa...she had to take things off hy er mind and tea would surely help her..as,suraj used to say sometimes...

MUMBAI

Shan still hadn't slept. He tried too hard to sleep but sleep eluded him. He was feeling a lot guilty for cancelling his date with natz. He knew natz was very upset. He didn't even have courage to face her..so he had dinner in his room and kept himself locked in there only. He was wondering y did he even cancel it. Too confused to understand. Why was he being so cranky from few days. Y was he even angry. It was yet very early. He thought to do some syrenous exercises to calm himself...and release all his frustrations whatever was bothering him..which evenvhe didn't know...he wore a vest and went to his gym when he remembered that khanak was no more in the house and he could move barebody as he likes and workout. He knew loud music disturbed her..he had heard when she was talking to grandma about headaches coz,she wasn't used to loud music..from that day he had taken care of to ing down the music while working out and he knew she wasn't used to seeing men barebody..and he respected that and never since he married her did he be without even a shirt...but he was free now..but somehow he was used to these changes now and he likes them...thinking about khanakbtook him back to Dhulwadi where he had first met khanak and she thought he was a mithaiwala...OMG...she was so hungry and crazy for mithais. Thisvmemory brought a big smile on his face. Shan rem her loud laugh when he fell off from camel...or there cute little fight for the bangles...her kiddish anger...and that smile...she had the best smile in world even more beautiful then natz...she had intrigued him so much then..and then her smile vanished completely...only if we warent married...we r no match to each other...she's,so naive..unworldly..innocent...what if anything happens to Ger and dadi...shan was so confused..every time he wanted to forget her she came haunting him..why..why even his mind played those trick when it knows she means nothing to him and that he could love nobody other than natz..he decided to jog away and shut out his mind totally..coz he had no answers to his thoughts..h pi w contradictory his mind had become...and he was tired trying to by understand his own mind...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 6

SHIMLA
Khanak dragged herself towards kitchen. It's just been a day at a new place but strangely she actually felt comfortable here. She felt it like her home and aunty like her family. The way she made her comfortable was unlike anyone from her so called khandelwal family in Mumbai. But only difference being this boy Rishabh...she had just met him yesterday night and he irritated her like hell.He was such a matlabi,ghamandi,akdu,bevakoof,battameez insaan. She didn't know till when she could remain silent. How dare he call me a chudail??? Well next time...he will see the khanak from dhulwari. Yes..I think my new life begins back from going to being old khanak. . She moves towards kitchen and stands shocked at the door seeing the devil himself making something hot. She couldn't bekeive her eyes...the devil in kitchen...she was suddenly scared that he might kill her and himself and burn the whole house down. will someone ever teach him to wear something...rolls eyes..
K: Are u crazy rishabh. I don't wanna die so early...y do you want to burn the whole house...or r u planning to murder me? AND FOR GOD SAKE ITS SO CHILL AND U JUST WEARING A GANJI...U WILL FALL ILL U IDIOT..WHAT THE HELL OR U DOING HERE.??? IN KITCHEN...
K PICS,A pan FOR HER SAFETY...LOL...( just imagining it is making me laugh hard...scared khanak ready to save herself..hahaha...yashu and her Fab expressions)In CASE SHE NEEDS IT AGAINST HIM...HAHA..
R: so finally u are down. I knew it. Chill babe...just making some tea..for myself and for you too..
K: hold on...rubs her eyes...u r making tea..u?????
R: kyon?? Y can't I?
K: Y can't u?? U r a boy...upar se rakshas,akdu...you have so many servants...I haven't seen anybody in big houses even getting a glass of water be it women even...and u doing it surprises me. Am sure u r making poison to kill me. And how did u even know I will come to make tea..????
She's staring at his almost bare back... unbelieving what she's seeing...for her kitchen was only women forte...be it suraj, in dhulwadi or even at khandelwals where even women didn't do kitchen..she was staring at him with suspicion..ready to attack in her defence...and y wasnt he feeling cold. She wondered what this rishabh was actually...he had floored her with surprise...he making tea for her was totally unexpected..suspicious
R: I don't know you but I know myself...after meeting me nobody remains sane..how can you than...Mai hoon hi itna interesting...and what best way to begin such cold morning with a hot cup of tea...the devil and chudail...superfunn ...
AHAAAN...WAISEY actually u look so funny and interesting in otherwise this boring place...I would rather not even dare thinking of killing u for my own entertainment...common we began on a wrong footing...let's begin afresh...Hi I am Rishabh kundra...RK...and you...????? OK first have some tea..it will get cold...
K: STILL OBSERVING HIM OPEN MOUTHED AND SHOCKED CONFUSED HOW TO REACT LOOKING AT HIS OUTSTRETCHED HANDS...
R: I don't bite...comeon am pretty harmless..I swear it's just a tea..mom says I make very tasty Indian tea..try it..u might get addicted too..common..he moves forwards and pulls her towards the chair and seats her.
K: She's taken aback again by Rishabh and his behaviour.He's looking so innocent this moment and the devil..yeah they actually got on wrong foot...should she trust him or not...she feels weary but then thinks about shan..his insults.. about dhulwadi and it's people...she trusted them but what she got...so why not trust him too...
K: OK..Hi Rishabh...I am Khanak...and I know u r the devil...but actually this tea is indeed very very tasty.
Rk: didn't I say...mom loves tea made by me. I sometimes make it for her when am here. KHANAK..
what a pretty name...for a chudail...oops sorry no more teasing..and sorry for yesterday night...I was too down,and grumpy...and u made me more...it wasn't ur fault..u r new here. Where r u from?? And u may be right..that people nowadays are too dependent on servants...but am not...I love cooking and prefer doing my own work..coz here I am a,prince but back in Mumbai...I live all alone...so..am used to doing it.
K: am sorry..I meant that way coz am from a small village dhulwari and have never seen any man working in kitchen...it's duty of women...so I was shocked...u actually are not so bad and am not a chudail either. I too am sorry for yesterday... was too tired with long journey...am not used to travel...so I was also grumpy. So it's OK.
They both started talking cordially...khanak may be making her first ever friend..out of dhulwadu...or may be more...than a friend...stay tuned to know what happens further...in this new journey of khanak...

MUMBAI

S: made his protein shake and was thinking about his recent past months of life. A life which now looked too confused. And all because of khanak. Had she left when she said...he would have been leading a happy life with his Natz. This was unfair to both him and Natz. He realised all this had started taking toll on his and natz relation. He was suddenly having some new outlooks at things which scared him. He had started judging people which he hadn't before...was he actually changing. This thought scared him...he wanted to be as carefree Luke before...as happy and free...he didnt like being tied up...so he decided to forget about a certain someone and be back with the girl he loved a nd belonged too...his Natasha...he decided to go on a break with Natasha...soon after this project completes in a month...they both needed it to sort things out...they both needed time..beginning with today..they would begin back with the dinner..meanwhile he will know about khanaks whereabouts too..good for khanak too she too needed this break to decide for her life and move on from this relationship..she must be doing some puja with dadi now..hope she accepts this divorce and goes back to her village and let me live happily with natz. This city life is not at all for her. She's too naive..too innocent..only if suraj hadn't died...she would have been smiling the way she was imprinted in his mind...he did really want that khanak back..coz this silent,crying,scared,aloof,khanak was an alien to him..and y she couldn't move on was a mystery for him..but that was her to think..he needs to bear her for only 6 months..and then it will be just Natasha..and him and there happy life..
So finally shan too is back on square one...or is he really...is he actually changing or will be the same...keep reading...and smiling...destiny and fates are very cruel..gives heartache when one least expects it...some move on and make new stories...some stuck there like history never to create new ones...


Forgive me for late update...and please awaiting ur comments...

Edited by dreamyjennice - 8 years ago
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