FF: A CINDERELLA STORY: (Chp.57; pg113) Dec 10th - Page 82

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Posted: 14 years ago

Ur FF is wonderful and u r doing a great job dear..Everyone definitely enjoys reading ur FF..It is just that we sometimes forget to pen down our appreciation..Ur frustation is perfectly normal, but please be cool..I guess many members are out of town enjoying their vacation, once they r back they will definitely send in their comments..

Keep up the good work..I hope Rudr is just acting to be conspiring with his mother..I cant see him as a bad guy in ur FF..Hoping that he just wants to know his mother's moves and ensure that YuRa are in no way affected by CR's schemes..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally I'm done with it! How dare you threaten us like this? - I hate emotional attyachar!😛 Better continue writing!

@Chapter 53: 😭 I really didn't want that to happen! It was really really so emotional to see Dadi die- the only relative Rani ever had in her life..now all alone! I loved the way Yudi promised and never let her alone. Did I ever mention this? - I love this Yudi!😳

@Chapter 54: I like her bonding with Saksham! I somewhere think a drama is going to happen! Please Tia, I don't want Rani to be shattered upon knowing the truth! That really would be disastrous!😭 You changed the charming Rudr too?😲

@Chapter 55: OMG! I really can't believe this! Rudr completely changed, he hated Yudi now! but at some point, I liked CR's story..better than than the story! But....Rudr...OH God! NO! Don't do this Tia! Please!

Do continue soon!😡😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
Tia this part is wonderful... I just hope Rani accepts her love for Yudi without any guilt..... And about Rudra, I am still not convinced he is with CR
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sujji0609

that was too good Tia... loved it... you really make me drawn towards your update.... every character's feelings is so mesmerising.... still can't believe you turned your Rudr negative... please please show him faking.... continue soon eagerly awaiting your next update....



and please don't ever think of discontinuing... i would really miss your update... it's too good... please please continue...




Thanks Suj!

Your comments are soothing! I'm happy that you're so attracted to my writings. Rudr, I don't know... I'll do something about him. Meanwhile, keep reading and commenting!


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Jenifer.

Great update. Tia. A heart wrenching story from CR, very different from the show and much more appreciated by me. Hope her plans foil soon though, and foiled by none other than Rudr.


BTW -You dare stop writing then I'll tell everyone about the cake thing here *smirks*.




Thanks Partner!

Yeah, I thought there should be something more intense than unrequited love for CR to turn this nasty! Her plans need to be foiled but who'll do the honors, we've yet to find out!

Are you gonna threaten me wid the cake thing everywhere?😲


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wa3002g4

Write more about YURA plz.And the part is also good😊



Thanks Abbe! Will try to!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Tia!! Surprised?? Me too!!

I have been reading ur updates,hun.... & liking them a lot too. I was really heartbroken when Daadi died!! Poor Rani has no other relative in the world....but apna Yudi hai na!! I just loved the way he consoled her & was always there for her!! He's so simple & awesum despite being a prince!!


But the other shocking thing was Rudra!! I mean, pray tell me Tia, that he's just faking it!! I can't bear to see an evil grin on such a handsome guy!! 😉 😉 I wonder what does he have up his sleeve....


Ahem..... cuming to the million dollar question u happened to ask at the begining of this update.....the answer is a big 'NO'.... u just can't hun; coz I won't let u stop this amazing FF.


Now that I am a bit more active 🤔 , i mean to follow this & all the other FFs to the last letter....


👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: andromeda_kia

Hey Tia!! Surprised?? Me too!!

I have been reading ur updates,hun.... & liking them a lot too. I was really heartbroken when Daadi died!! Poor Rani has no other relative in the world....but apna Yudi hai na!! I just loved the way he consoled her & was always there for her!! He's so simple & awesum despite being a prince!!


But the other shocking thing was Rudra!! I mean, pray tell me Tia, that he's just faking it!! I can't bear to see an evil grin on such a handsome guy!! 😉 😉 I wonder what does he have up his sleeve....


Ahem..... cuming to the million dollar question u happened to ask at the begining of this update.....the answer is a big 'NO'.... u just can't hun; coz I won't let u stop this amazing FF.


Now that I am a bit more active 🤔 , i mean to follow this & all the other FFs to the last letter....


👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼




PURVA!!!🤗

So you finally commented, eh? About time!😉

Well hun, thanks! I do not wish to end this FF but the response to it just leaves me heartbroken! I mean, come to think of it, I put so much effort into these updates and people hardly read and hardly comment apart from the handful few who also tend to forget at times. I feel if people are NOT READING and are not interested the what's the point of the whole exercise? Why simply FORCE someone? And then it is highly demotivating! As compared to this, my MaanEet FF has such an overwhelming response, it just leaves me elated!

I might update this tomaz!😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey RKABians!

It's been a long, long time. Hope everyone's doing well. It's been ages since we had some real YuRa stuff anywhere and due to the lack of enthusiasm of my dear readers, I'd put this FF on hold but now lately I've been thinking of putting up a few chps and ending this FF. So, here's the next part, hope you guys'll see this FF till it's end!
Love.

Chp. 56 Reality bites

Yudhishter awoke at the break of dawn and turned off the alarm in his cell phone. He looked at the wallpaper and his lips curved into a smile. Rani. A pic which he'd managed to get stealthily without her knowledge.

"Good morning, Lady love. Will my patience bear fruition today or do I still have to wait for your answer?"

Yudhishter laughed at himself. He couldn't believe that his life -or rather he himself- had undergone a transition from Yudhishter-the-no-nonsense-I-don't-believe-in-love-business-guy to Yudhishter-crazily-and-insanely-in-love. How could a girl bring about such a change in a man? He hadn't even in the wildest of his dreams thought of falling in love, let alone so crazily. But now he realised the beauty of the feeling and the joy of having that special person in your life. He now understood how his father had felt after his mother's accident and what had changed him so much. He walked to the window and stared at the mural of a sky painted in vivid shades ranging from deep midnight blue to cold steely gray flecked with light pink and creme. A cold wintry breeze whirled around signalling the advent of monsoon. The city was yet to rise and the calm of early dawn always filled Yudhishter with a sense of peace. His gaze drifted back to Rani and then the date caught his eye. Damn! Two weeks later was the day and date he really didn't care much about and he wished he could say the same about his family - 14th February.

He'd never really felt happy about celebrating his birthday even in his childhood days. His mother's traumatic accident -and later the turn of events in Niharika's life had assured him that there was little to celebrate in life and- had wiped out any boyish fantasies or dreams he'd ever had in life distancing him from his father. Over the years the relationship had become more formal than bonhomie and Yudhishter soon realised that his father treated all his children in the same manner. His wife's accident had changed him. Yudhishter had had parents, but not in the real sense but instead of being affected by it, he'd used it to his benefit. He had learnt not to depend on anyone, trust very few and indulging himself in work had always been preferred. The more engrossed in work he was the less time he had to waste on lost affection. His early start had given him an advantage and at 26, he'd handled more million-dollar business deals than his father had in his entire life. He'd created an empire which could be associated with his name alone. In the process however, he had become a person whose life had no room for intimate feelings.

Marriage in the Shishodiya clan was always an early affair but Yudhishter had managed to evade it for three years now and then had finally given up and agreed to tie the knot with whoever his father and choti maa selected -because attending a bridefest and choosing a bride was something he couldn't even think of- and he'd been ready to live the relationship till the grave carefully steering away of all feelings in the process until Rani waltzed into his life and rocked his world off its axis. Waltzed. Yes, that was the word. With merely a smile and those expressive eyes, she'd managed to crumble his carefully erected defences and made him believe that love did exist. It was only a matter of time before one found it. She'd filled in a void in his heart that had never seen real affection carving herself into his heart and soul in the process in a manner which made it impossible to think of a single day without her. He wondered how he'd lived without her for the past 25 years.

There was another reason 14th February hadn't held much appeal to him before because it was asssociated with St. Valentine or with love for that matter. But now the day suddenly seemed welcome. If Rani was not successful in providing him an answer by then, she had a surprise coming her way. The thought was sufficient to strike up a grin. He replaced his wallpaper with a formal one as usual and dashed into the shower. Then his normal routine followed. Swordfighting in the swordsroom, horseriding in the forests or around the sprawling Shishodiya lands and archery in the gardens. Breakfast at eight and then off to the office.

***

Niharika had taken it upon herself this year to organise her brother's birthday bash. The excellence and grandiose of the engagement party had left her awed and so Niharika decided to let Garv handle the arrangements with a few inputs from her side. The royal banquet hall was totally entrusted to Garv and the preparations of the party had begun. Niharika made a mental note of warning her brother away from this place for the next two weeks. Niharika walked in and was impressed by the pace of work. She had been provided by a few themes and was yet to give her final approval on the final one but the basic stuff was already in progress.

"Garv, a moment please," she called out to Garv who was busy discussing some designs with Afra.

"Hey, Niharika! Join us," he called motioning her to their table.

"Hey Afra, what's up?" Niharika asked as she took a seat beside her.

"Just discussing a few designs for the upcoming shows," she replied with a smile.

"Inputs from Garv?"

"Yeah, for a few accessories and brooches," Afra grinned.

"Oh, I was wondering if Garv had suddenly taken to designing Hijabs," Niharika mused.

Garv chuckled and shook his head, "Oh, no no, that isn't my cup of tea. That's best left with Afra, I'm happy with planning and desgining events and parties."

"Which reminds me," said Niharika, "Here, I've finalised this theme for the party."

An eyebrow jerked up in surprise, "So you like incorporating the Valentine idea with the birthday theme?"

"Sounds interesting to me. Besides, I want this day to be a memorable one for Bhaiyya," Niharika chuckled.

"Cool. That'll be done. Is his valentine gonna turn up for the party?" Garv asked. "I want a grand entrance for her."

Niharika sighed, "That, I doubt, will be possible."

Garv and Afra's eyebrows shot up in surprise.

"Long story, guys. But I'll give it a try, will talk to Saksham and let you know. Meanwhile you can proceed with the other stuff."

"Sure," Garv smiled.

"So since that's settled, I'll leave. Have some other issues to attend to," Niharika said, "I'll be around."

"Hello guys," a familar voice greeted.

"Ryan! A pleasant surprise."

"Have a seat."

"Thanks."

"Afra, where are your upcoming shows being held?" Niharika asked.

"Delhi, Bangalore, Ahemadabad and Mumbai," Ryan answered for her.

"Good luck with those but I hope that you don't miss the birthday party," Niharika said hopefully.

"Oh no, not a chance. Her shows shall keep her busy from the 20th Feb till around mid-July," Ryan said.

"Afra, Ryan seems to be your walking-talking calendar," Niharika teased.

Everyone laughed.

"Well, it's my responsibility to stay updated with the schedule of this beautiful lady," Ryan explained.

"Yeah, right," Afra rolled her eyes and hit Ryan playfully on the shoulder.

"Niharika, before you leave I want you have a look at a few things," Garv said.

"Sure," she said and followed him.

"I'll join you too. Afra, you coming?" asked Ryan.

"Um, no, I'll need a moment before I finish these desgins."

"Alright, then."

Ryan joined Garv and Niharika while Afra worked to complete her desgins. Ryan looked around taking in the sight of things. Suddenly an idea struck him.

"Garv, how about if the party is held in the palace grounds?" he asked. "Um, I know it might be a bit difficult but overall it would be fabulous."

"Sounds good to me. In fact, the Shishodiya grounds have lured me since the moment I stepped on the property," Garv replied with a grin. "What do you say, Niharika?"

Eyebrows raised, eyes twinkling Niharika asked, "Why did it not occur to me? But Garv, would it not be tedious? I mean, you guys have already started working here and moreover the theme has also been finalised, so..."

"Well, no issues there. A few changes will have to be made in the theme and plan but the desgin wouldn't be difficult to incorporate. So it's agreed then, the palace grounds. Thanks buddy," he said giving Ryan a pat on the back.

"Welcome," he grinned.

Bhavyata was standing at the door taking in the playful scenario. The easy banter among the group struck a chord of disappointment within her. She took in the sight of everyone. Niharika in her plain, white, boring salwar kameez, Afra in a knee-length coat, jeans and a headscarf, Ryan in jeans, a white figure-hugging t-shirt and a brown leather jacket and Garv in a black polo neck, full sleeved t-shirt, black trousers and an emerald green scarf around his neck. She didn't like being left out. Afra was working alone on the table so Bhavyata decided to join her.

"Heya," Bhavyata took a seat beside Afra.

"Hi, working for bro's b'day?" queried Afra.

"Hmm," Bhavyata lied. "Garv's working really hard for this party."

"Yeah, what's success without hardwork?" Afra smiled.

Bhavyata rolled her eyes, "What are you doing here?"

Afra shot her a quizzical look.

"Um, I mean..."

"Niharika asked me to be here," said Afra.

Silence. A long moment.

"When's Garv's birthday?" Bhavyata asked.

"Hey, I thought you liked Ryan?" Afra teased.

Afra was just teasing her casually but the pang of jealousy was too big to ignore so Bhavyata couldn't keep her pretense of being friendly and suddenly lost it, "And I thought you liked Garv but you keep juggling the two! When I think you're interested in Garv and I can be in peace with Ryan, you appear out of nowhere pretending as if Ryan has always belonged to you. And when I think about Garv, then you're there too, making your presence felt in people's talks and thoughts! It's like you dominate their thoughts. Tell me girl, who is it that you want? Why can't you just pick one and leave the other for me? Or is it that you want both?"

Afra blinked, "Bhavyata, why do you have to always read between the lines even when it's blank? You know, I really pity your mentality and also your knowledge about the social circles. You're so engrossed in your own life you don't know what's happening in the world around you. You see and hear only what you wish to. Ever heard of Esperenza di Castilo, the famous Spanish designer? The sister of Alejandro di Castilo, the renowned movie-maker. Garv and Esperenza got married a year ago and Esperenza's even expecting."

"Oh, so since Garv's outta the picture, you now want Ryan, huh? You *****!"

That was a little too far and before Bhavyata knew it, Afra hit her hard across the face. The sound seemed to reverberate in the hall because suddenly the whole place was silent. Niharika, Ryan and Garv stood stunned.

"Isn't that Princess Bhavyata?" Garv asked in a whisper.

Niharika nodded.

"Boy, what was that about?" he asked.

"Dunno. Must be something grave because Afra doesn't lose her temper easy," Ryan supplied in an equally hushed voice.

"Your language doesn't go hand in hand with your social status, Princess Bhavyata. I really didn't wan't to talk about Ryan to you because I wanted you and Ryan to sort this out by yourselves but you've left me no choice. Ryan isn't single, he's engaged to Alisha Mirza and they're planning to tie the knot soon. Alisha Mirza, ring any bells?"

Bhavyata had hardly recovered from the shock of the first slap when the name felt like another slap across her face.

Afra walked away but stopped a few steps later.

"I know Bhavyata, words like 'friendship,' and 'siblings' don't exist in your vocabulary but do look them up in the dictionary sometime. It will really be helpful. And you know what, don't bother about me. Think about yourself," Afra flashed her hand and a diamond encrusted platinum wedding band dazzled on her ring finger. "Hey, for your information, Ryan is my cousin, 3 years younger to me. And talking about dominating people's thoughts, then its the personality and not the person who dominates the mind and thoughts."

Bhavyata's head was spinning as Afra walked away. Garv was married, Ryan was engaged to- to Alisha Mirza, of all people! Ryan and Afra were siblings. Even Afra was comitted! Bhavyata felt as though she'd been deceived, she felt sick. Her world suddenly looked like a fragile sand castle which was washed away by a single tidal wave.

***

Precap: YuRa moments.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful Tia... loved it... after a long time... i was actually wondering where were you...and whether you'll complete this FF because i have truly loved reading it... i truly loved Yudi's feelings... too good... and Bhavyata deserved that tight slap... but still felt sorry for her... continue soon dear eagerly awaiting your next update...
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