OH MY GOD. That was so hot. I absolutely loved it.❤️
The angst, the tension, the love... everything was there and oh man that kiss.🔥🥵 I'm sitting here fanning myself.
Looking forward to the next chapter already.
Thank you for the tag.
Originally posted by: Butterscotch11
Finally you updated, I can say that the chapter was worth the wait (though the wait was looooong).
This has become one of my favourite chapters of all your stories. It was so asya- coded. The passion , the angst, the tension b/w them🔥🔥🔥🥵 It's actually good you didn't show them having sex right away as though Asad has apologized, Zoya wasn't t really out with was she felt about his misbehaviour. That's why her stopping him was MUCH NEEDED.
About her slapping him, I think it could've been better if she would've slapped him when he said things like 'isiliye khuda ne aapko aapki ammi nahi di'. I'm not justifying Asad slapping Zoya but in some ways I know where he's coming from. But what he said to her afterwards was just ruthless and unforgivable if redemption is not done right. That's the worst thing you can say to someone who longs for her parents. I really, utterly disliked Asad (since hate is a strong word). That thing was executed terribly by makers.
Coming to the story, excited for the party and Asad being all smitten by Zoya cos it's given right😁😉
Also can you add a scene of him introspecting and regretting and then apologizing to her in a different way as here he was so high on passion that he clearly didn't realise how his words have affected Zoya, at least his actions here didn't signify so.
Update soon🙂
I agree with literally every point you made abt Asad 😭 Like now when I rewatch QH all that catches my eye is how toxic they initially made Asad! I mean, of course he had MAJOR character development later on which was much MUCH needed. And of course, I'll make him apologize a bit more, since to me he's always been one of those "I'll never forgive myself" kind of characters. Although since I don't want Zoya to become his manic pixie dream girl, I don't think Asad will go down a major emotional spiral and start being depressed Jahapanah again. He's already repented and apologized to her, that's why he can crash at her place ykwim ;D
Also sex is kind of an important part of most of my stories, so I want the anticipation and build-up to be there ;P
Love ya! ❤️✨
Originally posted by: minakrish
OH MY GOD. That was so hot. I absolutely loved it.❤️
The angst, the tension, the love... everything was there and oh man that kiss.🔥🥵 I'm sitting here fanning myself.
Looking forward to the next chapter already.
AAAAHHH THANK YOUUU!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️✨✨✨
Well Asad's behaviour towards Zoya and his thought process was a red flag but what disappoints me more is Zoya's reaction towards his behaviour during bnhh and after that track specially because during the beginning till Mangalpur fiasco, she so fiercely used to give it back to him.
I agree with literally every point you made abt Asad 😭 Like now when I rewatch QH all that catches my eye is how toxic they initially made Asad! I mean, of course he had MAJOR character development later on which was much MUCH needed. And of course, I'll make him apologize a bit more, since to me he's always been one of those "I'll never forgive myself" kind of characters. Although since I don't want Zoya to become his manic pixie dream girl, I don't think Asad will go down a major emotional spiral and start being depressed Jahapanah again. He's already repented and apologized to her, that's why he can crash at her place ykwim ;D
Also sex is kind of an important part of most of my stories, so I want the anticipation and build-up to be there ;P
Love ya! ❤️✨
Everything went downhill after that slap incident. She no longer used to behave in a dignified way when Asad was concerned. So damn forgiving without any major repentance from his side😡
And don't even get me started on that Tanveer track🙄
So more than Asad's toxicity, what got me mad was Zoe's reaction to that. To think that so show was made by a woman🙄😐 But then, most of the ITV shows are like that. Zoya was at least a lot better and not mahaan and there was a kinda power balance between them.
Hi to everyone who's still here 😅
So I finally found the courage to start writing again! I know I'm horribly inconsistent but personally I don't think I'll be happy with my stories if I keep putting out chapters I haven't written with my whole heart, it seems like a ripoff to me. Quality matters to me a lot. A lot happened in my personal life for the last few months so I had a complete writer's block and just couldn't get my writing to flow as I wanted to. I even tried visiting the site daily to try and jumpstart writing a chapter but in vain. Well, anyways, this was just a memo to you guys that I'll slowly start updating my stories asap! Starting with this one :)
Hi!!!!!!
I've been trying to get back into habit of writing again as well. I've had a rollercoaster of last 8 months ever since this year started and I just cant seem to want to write anything romantic anymore. Thank god for posts like yours, it makes me feel like we're not alone in this tough journey and makes me want to write again reading your beautiful words. So much love to you ❤️
Loved the chapter, hopefully Zoya's insecurities and misunderstanding about Asad is resolved and they both evolve and work on the relationship ..
Can't wait for the date <3
Hi guys, I'd like to apologise for leaving my stories incomplete for the last year. The reason I rarely logged on was because I was in rehab. My mental health was very concerning, I kept wanting to give up on life. I was in a really bad place and with my mother's help, I decided to do something about it. I took a break from basically everything this year including writing, especially committed writing because I kept doubting myself every time I posted a new chapter. I have mostly recovered now, and I'm planning to start writing again, but please forgive me if I ultimately end up stopping, because I'm not sure if I will be able to commit like I used to.
Thank you, and love y'all ❤️
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