Hello SamiOriginally posted by: LuvurselF
Haiii di... 😃
I'm here.
So first part up .
Good starting.
So Asad is going to Mumbai in search of some girl.
Maybe Zoya .
Asya first encounter ended in a bad note.
Zoya's very rude in this part .especially with Asad.
Zoya had a painful past nd she's like this bcz of that only.
Tanveer is Zoya's sister.
Like Seriously di .i was shocked when I read this.
Nd then suddenly Shwetu di ki yaad ayi .
Badly wants to see her reaction after reading this part 😆
She gonna kill u for this
Hope she's good nd won't turn evil in upcoming parts.
Asad got to know abt Zoya indentity nd shocked .
Many things happened in first part.
But I'm doubt is still there .
If asaad know Zoya nd was searching for her .then why didn't they recognized eachother on their first encounter 😕 .
Hope u will give the answer soon.
Continue soon .
Thanks for pm. 🤗
Thank you dearOriginally posted by: Jasleenkaur01
Interesting start
Loved asya fight scene.Soo tannu n zoya r sisiters ...N asad is may be looking for zoya as gaffur daughterContinue soon dear
Ye kya koi comment hai 😡Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
Unres
Finally a nice update .But agar tune bilii or asad ko love show Kia toh dekh Lena .
Originally posted by: Always_asya
Ye kya koi comment hai 😡
I will do that definitely now
ek Accha sa comment nahi likh sakti tu 😡
I know readers write what they felt but tera no issme nahi hai bcs tu kabhi comment deti hi kahan haiOriginally posted by: shweta_yadav
Comment reader he maze se hote hai ..thy write WHT the felt .Jabaradasti comments krnwayege Billi ke lover
thanks for ur wishes di .Originally posted by: Always_asya
Hello Sami
glad to see you here
Yes finally first part up
😛
maybe or may not be Zoya
😉
Yes she is rude
she has a past but not much painful
Yes she is zoya's elder sister
Arre shocked Kyun I have already tell that in character sketches that she is zoya's elder sister
Haha Sweetu Ki yaad aana lazmi tha
you will see her reaction only if she give a comment
😡 Abhi tak comment nahi kiya ussne
let see whether she turned into devil or not
they do not eachother before and you will know how
you will get your answer soon
will try to update soon
thanks for such a lovely comment Sami
and best of luck for exams
🤣 🤣 🤣Originally posted by: Always_asya
I know readers write what they felt but tera no issme nahi hai bcs tu kabhi comment deti hi kahan hai
Sabke comment alag hai aur tu always finding fault that for the part which I have not written yet 😡
jo read kiya usska review de na
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You are welcome SamiOriginally posted by: LuvurselF
thanks for ur wishes di .
Haan actually read this long time ago na . So forgot billi is zoya's elder sister . 😳
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