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Posted: 7 years ago
For chap 1...
Daljit...
Intriguing is what this story is buddy!!

Loved Dilshad and Asad's convo at the start.
Cutest Mother-Son duo ever!!!!

Dream of Dilshad...to meet Zoya?
And Asad Ahmad Khan is on a mission now...to fulfill his mother's dream.
Way to go Asad.

What a Jakkas first meeting Asya had.
Zoya seedhe Jail mein...Sassy Asad !!
Loved it!!

Spoil kid Zoya and her bitterness towards boys...hmm interesting.
Excited to know what had happened in her past that had changed her to this extend.

Tanveer...vaise Naam zyaada pasand nahi hai but I hope she is Positive here.
Lag to rahi hai baaki yeTanveer hai...kuch nahi keh sakte.

So finally Asad came to know about Zoya being Gaffur's daughter.
Excited me to know what happens next.

Wonderful work Daljit!!
Coming back after reading next part.


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Posted: 7 years ago
For Chap 2...
MU hereπŸ˜•

Tanveer is adopted and Zoya is real daughter of Gaffur and Zoya hates her father and thats why she uses Farooqui as her surname.

Gaffur is as usual arrogent and proud personality.
He cheated on his friend Rashid right?

Zoya hates her father but couldnt do anything about it.
Her hatred for her father turned her into a stubborn and spoil sport.

Poor Asad its Zoya not Tanveer...Plzzz!!
This is not fair.
But its needed for story to proceed ...so am ever so ready to see what happens next.

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Posted: 7 years ago
For Chap 3...
Wonderful chap Daljit.

Asya bickering is too good.
Asad sat in library just to woo Tanveer...Bad Asad.
Wrong person ya!!

Zoya and her stupid plans.
And Smart Asad here is a treat.
Poor goons...phokat mein hi dhulaayi ho gayi!

So Gaffur wants Zoya to marry someone of his choice...Dream on Old soul.
Tab tak Asad hoga Zoya ke saath.

Excited to know Asad's plan now.
So mai chali next chap read karne...Bbye!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Accha aisa kyun πŸ˜†


There are many reason!!

1. U r a punjabi are still far I know Punjabi's are quite daring people.
2. I don't know!πŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
For chap 4...
Again a lovely chap Daljit!!

Asad is such a ****
How could he...but what to do cant hate him as he is unaware of the truth...that his Ammi's choice is Zoya...that Zoya hates her father...that she isnt the way she shows the world around her but a complete opposite of it...that she is his actual life partner.

All this will be cleared and everything will be ok.
But am afriad of Tanveer here...hope that she doesnt fall for Asad now.
N then Zoya kahin balidaan ki murat na ban jaaye.

Lets see what happens next.
Really lovely story btw.
Keep it up Buddy.⭐️

Thanks for all the PMs.
Cont sooinsh now.

Lots of LoveπŸ€—
Nik
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Posted: 7 years ago
Dalijit Veere karte aa saare comments aithe.
Hun theek aa?

Teri dujii story te vi aauni aa jaldi hi.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Oh ok Se les ense en la escuela acerca de estos idiomas o los aprendi por su propia cuenta? Significa que tiene inters en aprender otros idiomas?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Daljit...


See I came.
Now I'll read and comment on each chap separately...to make it up to you.πŸ˜›

Aayeeien aapka intezar tha πŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Dalijit Veere karte aa saare comments aithe.

Hun theek aa?

Teri dujii story te vi aauni aa jaldi hi.

Shukria πŸ€— Haanji theek aa
haan aa jaayee
tu read nahi kiti poori?
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