New Asya ss~Mai Tera Hero~Part 10 is updated on page 128 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Haha accha
don't know I just wanted to make him like that 😉
Yes prologue hints that only
Really you want him to go back 😲
Try to imagine maybe you find it good 😆 But still they have to na 🤢

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Yes you should 😉
hahq you will hate him more I promise 😆
yes he had admitted infront of her as a challenge
well she is zoya who can't hurt anyone more than needed but asad is asad
everyone hate her except me according to sweetu 😆
let see whether your guess is right or not
😉
Zoya already wanted to murder him
thank you Maina
they will surely don't worry
thanks again

thank u fr the pm dear...
amazng story nd amzng update...
it didnt left my mind when i read the last update...i thought about the possibilities of rest of the story...silly me !!!!
i really hate when heroine alwys cries...ths one much different and trust me i'm luvng it !!!!!
the way zoya is with her father , with Asad ,orph...everythng, luv her more nw !!!! innocent as alwys nd yeah badass too !!
and asad, well i really lukng fwd to see what 'll he do when he knw zoya better nd i really really want him to fall fr zoya first...just my wish( bt i 'll luv wherever the story is going accord to ur thought, cz writers are best to create their's ...) nd trust me u r gud wit ur creative mnd !! way better !!
actually i'm just ...just luv ths story really !! bt last time i fgt the title yeah, and tried to rem nd checkd the recent arrivd stories , whch are nt so much bt still...nd i'm very happy tat u r contg the story
Dnt disappear na...nd really cant wait to see what 'll zoya do to take her revenge and yess, the rest of ths story !!
i thnk u will nw get tat hw much i'm luvng ts story by seeing ths lengthy comm, which is rare, fr me to do ...
update sooon as u can dear,...waiting very much, impatiently !!

Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra

res mine.

Aanchal,

Shweta,

Soumya,

Addrita and

every reader of this story!😊

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Asad!!😡😡

I hate him! Honestly I just hate him!!

I just want to kill him!

Tanveer I hate her also!!

Nice update but this Asad is going to be dead soon by my hands!!

Asad is such a🤬!!

Well Zoya is going correct with him!!

Well written and of course you were correct I am hating Asad more and more!!

I think Zoya isn't the way she shows herself!!

She is a soft-heart person but with her soft heart have wounds!!

I loved the way you showed Zoya meeting with the kids!!

Thanks to God there is Anwar here!!

Hey who is the guy Zoya is getting married to?

Is it Ayan? AKram?? NOOO!!

We shall see it!!

Nice update!

Well written!!

Do cont. soon!!😊

Omg starting pe itna gussa 😆
happy to see your love for him 🤣 and Tanveer
how will you kill with your hand? 😆
of course zoya will teach him lesson for sure but right now asad's time is powerful
Haha I knew that's why I told you
😉
yes she is not
she is soft hearted but is not showing this side of her to anyone
I am glad you liked it Maina
yes Anwar is here but I made him little old I guess
😆
well you will know soon who is the person?
thank you so much Maina for this lovely comment
😃

Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra

Why??😭😭😭

Yes I want him to go back!!I just hate him here!!

See I got fine by much difficulty I can't be ill again by thinking of Asad and tanveer's romance!

I will die puking!

Even I myself don't know 😆 bas movie dekhi aur likh diya
I promise you will say the opposite when he will be going back 😉
no no don't fall sick again
you can think about asya after all story is their only 😉
no I will not let you die 😆

Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra

Ok then I wish that Asad began's to hate Tanveer and love Zoya!!

I hate him already!😡

I HATE ASAD AND TANVEER!! they are just eating up my brain!!

I wish Zoya murders him soon other wise I will kill her sister!!

Welcome!!

P.S: My anger is just the irritation and fun here!! Don't think that I doing criticism or not liking your story!

Haha asad will not hate Tanveer 😆
he will love zoya but still whom he will marry is a mystery
you know I really laughed reading this line in each comment
my poor Asad
all hate him 😆
I am glad that there is someone who eats your brain 😉
like you she wanted to kill Asad but not her sister
P.S -oye why would I be angry or think like that when I am totally enjoying everyone's hate and irritation towards Asad
😆 its giving me satisfaction that the story is going the way I thought and I want you to criticize it yr bcs if someone make me realize the weak point of my writing I would be more happy and will try to make them correct

Originally posted by: anuv6

thank u fr the pm dear...
amazng story nd amzng update...
it didnt left my mind when i read the last update...i thought about the possibilities of rest of the story...silly me !!!!
i really hate when heroine alwys cries...ths one much different and trust me i'm luvng it !!!!!
the way zoya is with her father , with Asad ,orph...everythng, luv her more nw !!!! innocent as alwys nd yeah badass too !!
and asad, well i really lukng fwd to see what 'll he do when he knw zoya better nd i really really want him to fall fr zoya first...just my wish( bt i 'll luv wherever the story is going accord to ur thought, cz writers are best to create their's ...) nd trust me u r gud wit ur creative mnd !! way better !!
actually i'm just ...just luv ths story really !! bt last time i fgt the title yeah, and tried to rem nd checkd the recent arrivd stories , whch are nt so much bt still...nd i'm very happy tat u r contg the story
Dnt disappear na...nd really cant wait to see what 'll zoya do to take her revenge and yess, the rest of ths story !!
i thnk u will nw get tat hw much i'm luvng ts story by seeing ths lengthy comm, which is rare, fr me to do ...
update sooon as u can dear,...waiting very much, impatiently !!

Originally posted by: anuv6

thank u fr the pm dear...
amazng story nd amzng update...
it didnt left my mind when i read the last update...i thought about the possibilities of rest of the story...silly me !!!!
i really hate when heroine alwys cries...ths one much different and trust me i'm luvng it !!!!!
the way zoya is with her father , with Asad ,orph...everythng, luv her more nw !!!! innocent as alwys nd yeah badass too !!
and asad, well i really lukng fwd to see what 'll he do when he knw zoya better nd i really really want him to fall fr zoya first...just my wish( bt i 'll luv wherever the story is going accord to ur thought, cz writers are best to create their's ...) nd trust me u r gud wit ur creative mnd !! way better !!
actually i'm just ...just luv ths story really !! bt last time i fgt the title yeah, and tried to rem nd checkd the recent arrivd stories , whch are nt so much bt still...nd i'm very happy tat u r contg the story
Dnt disappear na...nd really cant wait to see what 'll zoya do to take her revenge and yess, the rest of ths story !!
i thnk u will nw get tat hw much i'm luvng ts story by seeing ths lengthy comm, which is rare, fr me to do ...
update sooon as u can dear,...waiting very much, impatiently !!

You are welcome Anuv
thank you
I am glad that you liked the update
Haha even I always do that when I read story
you are not the silly one dear bcs I am ahead in this silliness
Really! but I like the crying heroines and the reason I myself don't know
😆
glad you love this Zoya
yes zoya is different girl in real from the way she is showing to the world
don't worry Asad will fall only for zoya and he is behind tanveer just bcs his mother want this not for love
thanks for the sweet words dear
no problem I know it happens
yes I took a break bcs of exams
I will not disappear without any note I promise
you will see her reveng soon and the story will took a u turn after their patch up
true your long comment says all 😃
I will surely try to update soon
Tgank you so much for this long and lovely comment dear
it made my day
thanks again

Originally posted by: -jass-

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Thank you so much dear 😃

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Omg starting pe itna gussa 😆
happy to see your love for him 🤣 and Tanveer
how will you kill with your hand? 😆
of course zoya will teach him lesson for sure but right now asad's time is powerful
Haha I knew that's why I told you
😉
yes she is not
she is soft hearted but is not showing this side of her to anyone
I am glad you liked it Maina
yes Anwar is here but I made him little old I guess
😆
well you will know soon who is the person?
thank you so much Maina for this lovely comment
😃

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Even I myself don't know 😆 bas movie dekhi aur likh diya
I promise you will say the opposite when he will be going back 😉
no no don't fall sick again
you can think about asya after all story is their only 😉
no I will not let you die 😆