Originally posted by: -hotsauce-
Congrats on the new thread!
Loved the update!
But no AsYa :(
update the next part soon please!
Originally posted by: -hotsauce-
Congrats on the new thread!
Loved the update!
But no AsYa :(
update the next part soon please!
Originally posted by: nilusoni
Congratulations for new thread
teaser is making me curious what had asad doneExcited for updatesPlz pm me for updatesContinue soon
Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
First of all congrats for the new thread 👏👏
So so so well deserved.I wish this story could see many many more threads like this.But sadly it is coming to an end.😭But again happy for the new thread...👏
Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Now now
I wasn't aware of the new thread or the teaser...Soo this comment for the teaser...Teaser is scaring me.What happened with asad n humi...Waiting to know what Asad did.I'm sure it won't be that bad..Waiting for chapter 16.
Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Now coming to the update..
Well no Asya except the opening scene.But still it was well written and very very cute.Full part from humi's entry in the "palace" to mali kaka to parent's meeting to them sending her in AAK room was nice and hilarious too.Also the wicked plan of atif's mom to sudhrofy him was awesome.The proposal was a dream proposal.Liked her answer too.In all every part was well written.Dream house is beautiful..But missed Asya too.So please continue soon.P.S. Actually u have given us a bad habit of long long updates n 2 -3 updates together so itne me maza nahi aaya 😉Please update soon.
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