Destiny of love. #CHAP-14, 10 April - Page 48

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update ⭐️
His possessiveness and how he stops her 😳
His unspoken love ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyy...Shruthi... 😊
Thanx for the P.M...
Well this was pretty gripping and well written part 👏 ⭐️
And i must appreciate your writing here 👏 and now i can get some of Asad's POV here...though whatever he did to stop Zoya was wrong and even slapping her 😡 was not good but still i think there is something going on in his mind , he has some feelings for Zoya i guess but still he want to protect her from the outer cruel world and if for that he himself has to be cruel , dark and heartless he is going to be just that...
Zoya...well i don't know what this girl has done to land herself in such a situation that she is being safeguarded by a Dark Man like Asad in here...😆
Who was on the Phone ? 😕
But well written part...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shruthi🤗
Nice update😃
Can't understand Asad's behaviour
Poor my zoya!!
Who was on the phone😲
Plz continue asap😳
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey... Nice update...
He love her, why can't he admit that...
And who is that creepy man, from place where zoya was hostage... Asad is still paying him...?
And zoya... She's so miserable...
Why this is happening with them...
None the less, it was an interesting chapter...
Please update soon...like the surprise update BTW..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved the update

Asad's feeling are becoming more visible,he's displaying more of them now that Zoya is somewhat fighting back, hope this keeps on going I would like to see Asad acting more human like😆

Still feel sorry for Zoya though, but the chapter was very AsYa-filled so I loved that

Probably my fave chapter so far,

Update soon:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
just read last 2 parts,...
loved it,..
want to read Asad's POV,..
it would b interesting to read too,..
waiting fah the next update,..
update asap,.❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

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Unres
Can't believe m the first to comment on the chapter...
But more happy with the chapter...full of asya...
It was a wow chapter...both characters are full of emotion
Zoya- hurt, sad and asad- possessive, caring insecure
He cares so much try to make her eat, protecting her from sun and drying her hair were my favourite parts
He is so possessive, don't ready to even hear that zoya wanna be with someone...so slap her n prove his possession on her...he made love to her all night...
That pimp is still asking for money...this left me with so many questions...how come he call the next day after asad return zoya's father without her, what is the name of her father...as you never mentioned it...becz it is going to reveal something in future...
Awww shruti...when I m going to get another surprise...already curious to read next part
Pls continue soon...

congratz sweetheart.
Yes i had planned to give one asyalicious soon. So herr it goes.
Both characters are broken and yes as you said she fears of what he can do rather than what he does.
He is greatly possessive and i think i like this one.
His slap just showed his emotioms.
The pimp name os Billal.
He called him without a clue on fathwr asad fight. He needed money he called simple.
I dont intent to give zoya's father any name. Let it be mr farooqui for less confusion.
Very soon. As next what to do is already running in my brain 😆
Aww..thanks for such a big commemt. I like it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SimplySmile



I'm a new reader to you story, loved the story line, very angsty but I love it all the more

I hope to see some character development in Asad by the end of the story, he's very sadistic right now but I guess he has his reasons,

I feel so sorry for poor Zoya,

Please update soon, and please PM me when you do, I won't always have the time to maybe comment but I'll try when I do:)

welcome in this post.there will be development soon.
Please buddy me for pm.
Welcome once again 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

Asad may do things his way which some may not view as right
But he is Asad Amhed Khan and zoya belongs to him
Well we know he bought her her freedom
But in a way I believes he loves her but he don't want to get attached because of what he saw his ammi went through he may sleep with her everyday and pays her in the morning
But he does good things too for her like helping her cousin etc
Like the update before this he was like a concern partner
He knew something was bothering her and he give her all opportunity to come clean
Glad tht zoya abbu support her and want the best for her but I hope he was not influenced by rashid
Make he is making this decision
He still see his zoya she is not tarnished and she is not Asad is the only man she has been with
So zoya stays but did she stay from fear of her abbu being hurt or because she loves him
She loves him she would be so happy If he marries her
So her abbu and Asad face off nice
He will take his daughter
But Asad challenge she will never leave him he knows y
Continue soon

this is Amazing. I love this comment.
Yes he loves her and dont want to ahow emotions.
She wants to marry him bit its asad who is opposing.
Father os ready tl get his daughter but asad is set to never let her go.
Its goimg to be fun 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update 👏 asad took care of her it was beautiful but he would have to behave soft with her which is not in his history i thing anyway continue soon 😃
Edited by shailu143 - 9 years ago
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