Destiny of love. #CHAP-14, 10 April - Page 22

finally got a chance to read it

Amazing update😃

Shruthi I loved the update so so so so much

so asad had purchased zoya from red light area
im sure she must have been in trouble so he saved her..
but reminding her n treating one as a prostitute😡
i thought he would get jealous or react in some other light upon hearing abt zoyas marriage😡
i didnt like the stuff asad said to zoya😡
i want to know asad's pov..hes surely been through a lot
and zoya should certainly go for the marriage..so asad realizes her worth over time😵
plz give longer updates shruthi😳
enjoying reading ur story😛

Maha

Nice update dear
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

The update was good...but short..plzzz give longer updates...I am really feeling bad for zoya..she wants to give herself to him completely without money...but he is hell bent on making her feel like prostitute... that's so bad that he purchased her from red light area...what does he think of himself... continue relation after marriage..zoya should at least say one time that I don't need your money...if she gives service then he fulfill her requirements.. if she will not or get married then he won't pay money... fair and square...what type of condition is this... and I truly hate asad family...plzzz show more about asad...what's his personality... and why does he wanted zoya like this...I think he know that zoya has fallen for him...but he doesn't accept that he is in love too..why??? Update soon..

Hi Shruthi...

Well,you've written stories before..and I didn't even know

Okay first of al the banner is sizzling

The prologue is well ...intriguing..

I read all three chapters and I can't tell u how much I luved them...Asad is so indifferent yet so charming
I loved Asad's character the most...he dies has feelings for Zoya but he's going to great lengths
To conceal his feelings..not only from Zoya..even from himself..

The shocker was that he bought Zoya..but isint Zoya's Abbu there..
Y couldn't he protect his daughter

Zoya wants marriage...Asad doesn't ..it's sad how he gives her money..

I liked Asad's reply to Zoya's marriage..obviously no guy would agree to his condition

Asad is A man of passion but he doesn't display his deep luv for her..

I found mumani very cheap...like convincing her own daughter to pursue asad..She'z sick..

Like Ayaan n humi though.. :)

What I couldn't understand his prologue fits in this story..

Would luv to see how Asad becomes that expressive...

I love this story..



Continue soon se bhi zyaada soon...

Luv
Sara

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Need update pretty soon pls

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