Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hey Aditi... π
Well Finally we got an update to this story...and Iam Thankful to you for that...π³
The Update was long due...And I deliberately ignored your earlier post..π because I don't believe in that...π³
This Update was Wonderfully writtenπ , Fantastic... βοΈ and a Very Good part..π
Zoya's fear and state in which she was found was very horrible..and painful..
I feel anger rush through me...when I read such news in real life also.. about molestations...then anger at myself...ki Iam just wasting my energy commenting on that subject not doing much about the issue... π‘
But the whole first part was a very well written scene...AsYa's confrontation , Hug...then Zoya telling about this incident.. Asad's rage...Ayaan's advice and then the ride back home...very good executed part... π
Ayaan seemed quite matured...here but he still have that innocent mischeviouness in his thinking... π
Zoya's monologues about Asad's behaviour were funny to read...but right also... π³
All and all a brilliant comeback chapt for this story Aditi... π
Loved and enjoyed reading it... βοΈπ
Continue soonish... π
# Update ArSh's also...soon.π
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