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Ya they r not married..but all will go in the rite direction...so keep readin..n thanks for commentin😊
Ya they r not married..but all will go in the rite direction...so keep readin..n thanks for commentin😊
Well who cares if unconfused is a word or not...I knw wat u mean n m glad things got cleared off in ur head...n ya..ZOya felt the spark with a stranger...n so did Asad...its gonna be an interesting story to write...esp wat goes on between the 2 of them...n ya Asad is Zoya's business partner...n ya life is about to change for the 2 of them..for the better...thank u for ur lovely comment...n keep reading😃Originally posted by: rajnid68
Finally..I am unconfused (is this a word in the dictionary) now..
Story heading on...after the collision...Zoya poured all of her into the kiss..Asad stunned..Though reciprocating...to the kiss..He comes out of it..or did he..Will the kiss linger in his dil and dimaag...Zoya too stunned..At her boldness...her feelings fluctuating...Rihaan...Asad is the patner...With the kiss inthe background...His life has indeed taken a 180 degrees turn...Awesome post..Thanks for the pm..
You know, with every update, you leave me more confused than before!😆
Let me get my thoughts together and work it as I think through what I think I have understood!Zoya is married, just not to Asad.Zoya kissed him, and enjoyed it! 😆Asad kissed her back!Her husband has arrived!So, basically she is screwed? 😆I am taking your word for that it does not involved spousal adultery! This looks like a very different story and I am eager to read it.So Rihaan is Asad's partner? Will Rihaan turn out to be a good guy (self-sacrificing for the love and all that) or a meanie?You say that Asad and Zoya's pasts are not connected, but I have a feeling that Rihaan has a great deal to do with Asad's past?Its all wild guessing at the moment! I am hoping that the next update will provide me with some answers to all the questions that I have about what the heck is going on, and not leave me more confused than ever, like this update did! 😆I just have a teeny tiny suggestion. I realize that this is your style of writing, and of course you are entitled to have it, but perhaps you could put the active voice in quotes or in bold letters?As a reader, I tend to get lost in the inner thoughts versus the actual conversation lines!You don't have to do it, its just a suggestion! 😃
You got me good with the update! Man, Asad sure fits the bill, but apparently the bill is full at the moment? You married her off to someone else! 😆
Originally posted by: jazsidhu
wow tis is fabulous...
luv it...so zoya is not married to asad ...asad is rihaan partner n rihaan is zoya husband...wow zoya kiss asad n pour out all her feelings n he kiss her back...n nw her husband is back n asad is his partner n zoya is in trouble...wonder will asad n zoya remember about the kiss or try to forget it...eagerly waiting for the next part...totally addicted to tis story...its marvellous...thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
OMG !! a new ff , after turnaround i was sad , coz i wouldn't get to read your writings !!
but im soo happy you started this one.im also soo sorry i didn't comment before , but after reading the 1st chapter i was super confused so i didnt know what to say.but after reading the second one , i was amazed by your writing , if i thought a kiss was something simple omg! your description of the emotions and sensation that occur was just marvelous.Coming to the story , pls go ahead of it even if Asad and Zoya are not married I can guaranty Im going to continue reading it , i love your writing style.I cant wait to see their reactions once they are in their senses , and the pull they are bound to feel after the mind-blowing kiss.And Zoya and her husband , i want to know how did they get married ???I can't wait to read the rest !!!Pls. do continue soon and as you have planed.and last but not the least i still have to comment the last chapter of turnaround , will do that soonHappy New year !!!!
wow I read this update lat nite
and had to reread this morning
was totally confuse totally though
zoya was married to asad but she is not
so she totally end up kissing a stranger
and what a kiss it was she poured everything
into to it and asad couldn't stop it he responded
wonder y ...connection?
glad to hear it will not be any infidelity/cheating
bcuz is not something in my books
I will be waiting for more cant wait to see what happens
between them
continue soon
Originally posted by: starslinedup
Hey Kalyani...
Wat m I cookin...LOL...a Mysterious love story...lets c how that goes..I wish I could tell u more but cat as of now...maybe after a few more updates...As for the kiss...she didnt know...It was meant to be...her destiny is steering her in the direction she should be going towards..n now for ur ques...So Zoya is the owner..cos her dad is the actual owner of the company...she is running this particular branch in NY...n I guess no harm in telling u..that she and Asad are the partners...more on that in the next chapter...n no there's no back stabbing here...the story will catch up once all the characters are introduced...so maybe by the 6th CH...N ya no cheating...it will be justified..wen they do accept their feelings in the future..as of now they r 2 diif ppl..with seperate lives..their work...creating situations to put them together...n all that follows...fun times ahead...for sure😆N as for the twist...I have 2-3 more characters to inroduce..n u'll get into the story...n start understanding by the next story for sure...so keep readin...n commentin..😊
hi aashna,
so u going to make us think hard till chapter 6... pretty bad isnt...
thanks for the verification, now they are partners... nice to see u have everything planned up and then write...
yeah looking forward for more
enjoy
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