FF Everything Burns Thread II Link in Index!! - Page 12

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

'Everything burn & turn to ashes'

this sounds intersting
continue soon
thanks 4 pm

Thank u...m glad u liked the intro's...will reveal the title soon😉

Originally posted by: akaswan

Sounds very nice continue soon please and very good part😃

thank u so very much for commentin😃

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Ah it's quiet confusing but then again its just the character sketch. I hope i'm able to use my intelligent brain here too 😆

waiting for the next part

O ur'e confused how come...Damn..I dont want ur intelligent brian to be disrtacted by confusion..so get set...to use ur brians..cos I know u will n unveil all the mystrey..😉😃

Originally posted by: -Aditi.

Unexpected treasure n rewards?
Or...everything burns n turn into ashes?

Well continue it...n disclose the suspense soon

Thanks for commentin...u'll know the title soon..ur at it..😉

Originally posted by: Dragon_Aries

I guess the title is 'Everything burns and turns into ashes'

u'll know sooon😉..thanks for commentin😃

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Intrstng ckncept..continue soon..thnks

thank u..I hope u like it😊

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

continue soon

Thank u very much for commentin😊

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

wonderful character sketch...more interesting coz it's in first person...
so we have two akdus here...perfect!!!
we've a sadistic story...but we'll get some romance na???
as for the title- "It's Love That Lights The Fire" i guess!!!

thank u thank u thank u...m glad u enjoed the intro..n I hpe u like the story even more..n hey..its not sadistic..a lil dark..for sure though...stay tuned n u'll know..n as for the tittle...soon 😉 O ya..u'll get romance...for suree😉

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

u have to give the first chapter really fast!!!!
or else i will be on hunger strike!!! 🤣
really curious to know more...
continue soon

will try..but hey no hunger strike..instead..spam all u can..that'll workk😆😉

Now that we both have sighed..n enjoyed our smiles...

let me get to responding to ur comments..after so long...Eeep😃

Thank u for ur comment...

I am glad u enjoyed the characters introducing themselves..me too😳😃

As for the tittle..yest its has something to do with fire..but u already know that by now😆

and yes..I am gonna do all that I can to keep u glued...Hell i am sitting here with a baalti of fevicol..to glue all of u readers in 1 place...n read my story..😆

N yiee...I am looking forward to all ur comments yet to come..

o n here comes the hug...I'll take it..(wont run away just this once)😛😆

Originally posted by: elenaa

Heloo again!

Dilshaad and Zeenat lovely mothers as always:)

Their introduction was as interesting as their children leaving me all the more confused as to wat d story will be but it has got me hooked.

I would love to read more of Zeenat:)

Update soon!!!

Silent readers please comment yaar! we want an early update:p

A BIGGG HUGGG FROM ME TO YOU DI!

P.S Already made my guess in my previous comment...cant think more song nameee...well lets see.

Once again...loved readin ur comment...the story of the story is a mystrey..but its about love..so I hope that it keeps u readin...

n here we go again...u tryin ppl to like n comment...yieee😃🤗

so I guess I already took another hug...wat r u doin to me gal...😲😆

Yiee so I have another reader bagged...** way to go Aashna** Ya it is kinda a dark story..not sadistic though...n I hope that as much as u enjoyed the character sketch..u like the story as well...

Rashid is dead,,Dilshaad is still alive...

N ya NY is going to bring forward all sorts of secrets..fun times..n all the love, passion and romance..

so stay tuned..

ZOya here is going to be all that n more...her character is going to have a gr8 graph...

n gal thank u for ur compliment...i'll keep u posted..n I guess i already know the tittle now...😉

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

Hey a wonderfull intruduction...

They are the total opposite of each other...

Tis is really going to be very interesting...

Well i guessbthe title could be burnt to ashes or unexpected treasur...

Eagerly waiting fr the update...

Thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Heya..thanks for commenting..n m glad u liked the intro...their characters are goin to be a lil different..but not very opposite..just different ways..n as for the tittle ..u already know by now...😃

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

good start...

thank u very much😊

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

amazing amazing amazing

Thank u so very much😊

Originally posted by: aman93

interesting...waiting for it

Thank u so very much..I hope u like the story..😊

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

Firstly a BIG CONGO 4 the new story... N Do I need to tell u again n again that how well u write...!!! N Yes waiting 4 u to start this dark AsYa story in ur ISHTYLE... Loved how u introduced d characters to us... Good going dear... There characters r very different n shady... Nw cm bck here soon to update Chapter 1... LOVE ~JAZ~

thank u thank u thank u...for the comment ...for the congo...n for ur compliments...

I hope u enjoy this story...and the twists n turns n all the love and romance...stay tuned..n hopefully hte striy will be liked as much as the intro..😃

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Love Dilshads and Zeenats...

Though losing a lot in life..Dilshad is full of hope..

Zeenay ka nazariya nahi badla...

Zeenat is within zoya and us...

Sitting up there guiding her..towards life ans love...

They are the focal point of asad and zoyas existence...

Awesomeness personified...

Looking forward to have a gala time..

Thanks aton for the pm..

O ya..both the mothers are strong driving forces in Asad and Zoya's lives...and u will see that as the stroy progresses...so I hope u like it as it goes...

HUn..wait up...the story needs a lil brewing before I can serve its updates...so please be patient n do read as it goes..n dont worry I dont plab to do all the intro's before the story...it will come as it goes..😃

Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome

thanx for pm

do pm me for next part

continue soon

thank u very much...😃

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Awesome intro...

M looking frwrd fr story nw

thanks..I hope u like the story..😃

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

As fr guessing title..

Vl dfnlty let u knw...if sumthng strike to my mind

no worries...u already know by now😆

Originally posted by: Chahanya

A mother can take the place of anyone but no one can take the place of a mother.

very true...n hey I like ur jerry DP..its very cute😃

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

love dilshaad & zeenat's character
plz continue soon

thank u very much😃

Originally posted by: aashiqua

bring in d fathers soon

Yup will do😃

Originally posted by: Asya_KaJen

lovely

THANK U😊

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Nice...

THANKS😊

O thank u very much...n all the characters will have their place in the story...n the next set of characters will be interesting too hopefully😳

Both the mothers are a strong driving force in Asad and Zoya's lives..n they will guide them rite.. as per ur question..their is a connect there..but no back story...no past that is connected...this story..I am trying to explore...umm...a lil bit of..shadiness in characters...but the main characters have none..they are straight forward..they are just trying to deal with wat life gave them..Asad..has his set of things he needs answers for and Zoya needs herself to accept a lotta things and look with open eyes..so I hope this story keeps u involved..😃

Tittle dont worry bout it...u know it by now😃

I am not reading Dilshad and Zeenat or any one else any more. But don't mind me.

I have had enough appetizer tastings now, I need the actual meal.

So I will comment when I read your fist chapter.

But you know I am always there and I love you🤗