AsYa SS: |Busted| (Epilogue, Page 54, Complete) - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
i just read all chapters ..your writing is just amazing ..thumbs up to you 👍🏼
finally Tanveers plans are revealed
the way they revealed it was so nice and evil hehehe ..😈
i hope i get to see Asads hate towards Tanveer in the actual series that will be great 😈
your SS is a stress buster !
am enjoying every little bit of it ..its so funny and romantic
well now am expecting more romantic and hot scenes between ASYA since tanveer is out of the picture 😛
what i like most about your updates is that they are full of Asya you dont get to miss them 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant update...there's nobody like zoya...najma is so cute..."love feast"???the way both of them confronted tanveer in front of ammi and najma as a unit was real good...tanveer never actually stood a chance against the two of them... now really hope zoya is alright...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG this is sooo good thanx for the PM and waiting for your next one eagerly :):):):):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved loved loved the update!

That Tanveer was soo busted today!!! U know even before i read your note below, the phineas and ferb's busted came into my mind! I was a P&F freak!!! 😆

Loved the whole part where zoya was getting that chip into tanveer's phone! Poor Asad.
Then the aww moment when Zoya fixeed Asad's button! <33

The end was amazing. Your assurance relaaxed me that nothing will happen to Zoe! 😆

Cant wait for the next chap! Continue soon ! <3

Faiza
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Girl,
Thank you for the pm and the beautiful story.
I am addicted and can't wait for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome lovely, finally tahazeeb ki dukan out of the house.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
please dont do anything to zoya
n make him confess his love for her to her
please please please

loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update dear
finally billo is out but still zoya suffer i know nothing will happen to zoya, waiting for next update
Thank u so much for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb part!!👏 Hope Zoe stays safe.
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Posted: 11 years ago
With every chapter you amaze me! This story is beyond amazing and your writing is beautiful. You portray all the emotions so perfectly, I'm speechless. The romance, intensity, cuteness and of course busting is all so perfect! This chapter was beautiful with their team work, intense love and the ending was great! I love those words that came out of his mouth finally!

I'm not sure if I commented on your other works, but I've read all of them and each one is beautifully written. I love the various concepts you used and the way you depicted each. Absolutely amazing <3
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