FAASLE: Fan fic AsYa Part 19 pg 141 Jul 29 - Page 98

This was nice. Najma and Asad are very cute. So, now detective Zoya will be at work to find out what else is bothering Asad other than their financial status and geography. Dilshaad ke letters give a feeling of doom - she is not going to be here for long or what?

Always the best have asya... moments... just love it..

continue soon

i jst love this part..asad want to gift smthing different...

Loved it!! Asad's struggle to keep distance from zoya is very painful..loved bro and sis love for each other and ofcourse Dilshad' unconditional love to all three.

Sangeeta beautiful update, loving the anticipation and excitement feelings. Chupaana bhi nahi aata bataana bhi nahi aata..

I loved her tracing her name with his and Asad's "Gift de raha hoon, rishta nahin jodh raha hoon.", aag dono jagah baraabar ki hai..

I love the fact that you Asad prefers tea over coffee...

Loved Tamatar and Dilshaad parts, wish we have more of these on screen. Hope QH writers bits of your writing..

Zoya is a sweetheart, always eager to make him comfortable and uncaught, knowing well she is reason of his uncomfortableness..

Loved terrace scene, ankahi baatein saamne aa hi jaati hai when two people start communicating..

"Unless the lines decide to change their directions a bit. Kabhie na kabhie tho milengi na phir?" This has to be best line of all

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Waiting impatiently, how phoophi's past unravels. And can you please do it faster PLEASE😊

Superb update !! Hope family differences

Wonderful update. Please keep it up

Awesome update...so zoya in detective mode it seems...asad trying really hard to pull zoya away from himself...plz continue soon...

Loved the update!!!

Wonderful update di !!
loved it...