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DI! I can't believe I hadn't read this until now. I swear, I'll have to stalk this thread more seriously now😆
*reserved*
-Raina
Originally posted by: mamathasridhar
That's a super story sangeetha, u left us with so much imagination,hope u find time to update soon 👏 BTW u r an awesome writer
Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
yasyayayayyaya Sangeeta dii you finally updated! I was going to pm you today ki please please please give me an update and haiyee meri wish puri hogayii
I find Zoya's stay in Asad's room thing very unrealistic.. Zoya is immature.. wo jo karey, samjhe.. wo kam hai but how come a mature mother can let a young female stranger to use her bachelor son's room and his belongings.. this is really WEIRD.! 🤔
Dilshaad or Zoya ka bond to hona hi tha. Dilshaad hates lies and liars, so that is where Rashid's back story lies. Zoya also has lied a little to get entry in house. Will Asad also lie when he comes home for Eid? Too much of lying ho gaya 😆
Phone scene was good. Glad that you could update!
Lovely update! 😃 Loved Dilshad-Zoya's bond. And whenever Zoya says there is nothing in this world that she can't do that is always a sure shot sign of her landing up in trouble. 😆 She put salt in tea.
Update soon, please!Eagerly awaiting the next chapter and AsYa meeting 😊
This is such a beautiful script...very different from the real track,,,,yet the characters are the same natured...especiallly zoya the musibat and azad the tahzeeb + tameez kaa follower...
I read all he 14 chapters in one go and I am so eager to read it further tooo...I have sent a buddy request,,,plz accept and take the pain to PM me with ur future updates...
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