Beautiful update, Sangeeta...π
Thanks hariniLoved the dipping-finger-in hot chai wala waking up scene. Reminded me of a similar scene in that old film Aandhi where Suchitra Sen wakes up Sanjeev kumar that way!Yes...I guess we date ourselves with these moviesπThe car ride on the way to the airport was again very touching. Frankly this Asad is so much better. Can we ask Gul to change that Akdu's character now and make him more like this nice guy here?yes, this Asad is more grounded and less judgmental...he just has some other issues that we will find out soonZoya has some growing up to do here...but is definitely younger and more innocent than the one in the show. But I guess comes with the protected life that she has led...yes, her protected background has shaped her personality so far...let's see how tis trip changes herAlso, loved the Anwar-Asad connection very much. It will be important for sureOf course I know that writing on top of work and home is such a big thing, please do try to update soon!thanks for understanding...writing is my stress busterπ
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Again another amazing update, yeahhh!!!
I do not care how long I have to wait for an update, because at the end it's all worth it and I just know that you will never let down your fans/readers. I used to read your FF's on KYPH too and ever since I am fan of your stories. This FF again proves that you are one of the most talented writers on the forum. Everything is just perfect: dialogues, describing the setting, character sketch, romance and much more.Special mention for the fact that you write in Hindi, I just love that because writing in Hindi gives more feeling to the dialogues and also the characters. ππΌWhat more can I say..?! I JUST LOVE YOUR WORK!π€Keep it up and waiting for the next update π
Do, pal ruka, khwaabon ka kaarvaan
Aur phir, chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
Do pal ki thi, ye dilon ki daastaan
Aur phir, chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
'to be contd'
Originally posted by: ipkfan38
Oh how I wish the real story was written by you, in one word "AMAZING" ! I have read a lot of FFs, but this has no equal. You have captured the characters so perfectly, used logic where appropriate and told us such a wonderfully romantic story. Any praise from me will be inadequate to describe how wonderful your writing is... I just happened to read the first part today and could not stop until I read them all.. Thank you for this and please continue.
Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-
all the parts are totally amazing...
loving the whole series...
please update soon ππΌ
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