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Sophia

@sophie420

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Beautiful update!

Such an emotional part!

Love how Zeenat and Anwar were so caring!

Update Soon!

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tinkerlove

@tinkerlove

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#532

Hey!!!!!!! NO!!! not fair ...u just leave us hanging there...!!!!!

I love ur writing!!!! amazing

The way their emotions were shown...everything

But u need to update soon

I was supposed to be doing my hw right now bt this story totally

Made up for the scolding :p

Anyways loved it!!!!!!! keep writing

Have marvelous skills!!!!!!!!

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Devi Karishma

@DKB532

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#533

Omg!!! Why didn't he look back! Plz update soon! The anticipation is killing me!!!

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Now, this is the best part in this FF so far and it is getting better and better. Asad and Zoya covered miles in this part both literally and figuratively.

Zoya's straightforwardness when she admires Asad is refreshing and sign of a very pure, innocent heart.

So, no more mishaps and they have reached Istanbul. Zoya first time praying for others and not for herself. First sign of her growth?

Rashid is dead in this FF, then why did Asad stiffen talking about him? Is it just his way of expressing his grief?

Scene in the car was the best and very touching with their fingers doing the talking.

Zoya's trust in Asad is heartwarming. Almost like a very young child's trust in a parent. I don't meant to compare with a parent-child relationship, but the level of trust is very deep - absolutely no room for doubt. I said few days ago that in the show Asad reveals his softer side only to Zoya which I believe would make her feel very special. Same way here, if someone trusts you like Zoya trusts Asad that also would make someone feel really special and Asad seems to feel the same. And, it will also make one very responsible, and already responsible Asad is doing just that and backing out.

A turning point in the story. Who will reach whom first? I can't decide. In a way, Asad would get in touch first, because Zoya asked him to. But, his self-control is admirable, so it can be Zoya, too who lands in Mumbai knocking at his door. Nice touch of connecting them via Anwar. At least they will know each others' whereabouts. We will see. Eagerly waiting for the next phase of the story.

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: Msash
u r amazng writer..i felt i am actualy there watchng them.. I literaly had tears n ma eyes..when i read d last portion...dnt separate dem..i cant bear it..its lovely dat zeenat and anwar is so understandng. Thanks 4 pm

Thanks msash. They can't be separated for too long😉

Zeenat and anwar will always help

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: Starrydee
Diii
Ye Kya tha 😲
I tell u it was a masterpiece 😳

Everything was so beautiful
But the end was perfect
I was crying 😭
And the song made me more emotional

I would like to know wat happens next
Will they actually separate n dream about each other
Or this time Zoe will go to Mumbai to meet asad n his family
Update jaldi 😳

Thanks Tanya...u know u are good at guessing..I won't say anything more

Yes, that song always works wonders for me too...

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: penfriend28
excellent update...
car scene and airport scene are fab...
ur writing makes me speechless...
story is getting more interesting with each update...

give next update soon...dont make us wait for days...

Thanks penfriend...will try to update sometime during the week. I am glad u liked both those scenes. They are close to my heart also😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
main roo rahi thi :'(

Sun rahi hoon main😭

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..
beautiful update di!!!!
the last part was so sad nd the song u used always makes me cry 😭
continue very soon!!!

Thanks vidhi. Yes, that song has always been magical and still does the trick.

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kiran khurana

@.Kiran.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#540

UPDATE SOON PLEASE! I cannot wait any longer. I have already read it 50 times! Waiting for more...

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