FAASLE: Fan fic AsYa Part 19 pg 141 Jul 29 - Page 47

Its great.do pm me whn u cont.

Awesome part Sangeeta... Are they gonna sprnd another night in a hotel at the next port as well? Looks like they love spending nights in a hotel room together all the time...😳

Beautiful story xx luved it xxx luv hw asad iz always der 4 zoya xxx plzzz update soon xxx

Brilliant part . I guess Asad is going to babysit her till her destination.. She is so immature and ziidi. Please continue soon

loved the update Sangeetha..really very well written..i'am liking the connect that is getting formed between Asad and Zoya..it is very heartwarming to read about Asad Zoya's budding relationship...they both are just too adorable...the fanfic is progressing very well..keep it up... good going..i'am eager to know how the fanfic will progress further...please do update soon..waiting for the next update very, very eagerly...thank you for the PM..😊

amazing bheegi..👏 loved the update..although there are less fights between them..its soo interesting..loved your envision of characters asad and zoya..😳 they're much better...asad didnt think twice to go after her..to stop her and protect her..and zoya also sometimes she is mature and understanding.. unlike her usual blabbering..though i love it...😆 thank u so much the PM... plzz update quickly...cant blame me im a fan...😆 eagerly waiting..

its awesome... pls pls contd soon.. like u used to do earlier... this one is amazing...😊

Originally posted by: Shell16

That was amazing as always. I really like your writing style, the story and character development. Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: Starrydee

Wooow di wat an update

I'm in love wid this FF 😳

N I'm in love wid ur writing 😳

U take me too Asya dreamland always 😃

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

and thats why you've always been my favourite writer since KYPH time xD You are amazing yaar!!! you write in such a beautiful way that you just get lost in the story itself!! The part was AWSOME!! I totaly loved how Zoya felt betrayed and how Asad made her believe that he doesn't want to ' sell " her for money. The last bit was just AWWW!! I nearly had tears in my eyes T____T!! poor kids!!! I hope to see them getting closer xD
Hats Off to you seriously *clapping*
Continue soon,
Love,LAiba