FAASLE: Fan fic AsYa Part 19 pg 141 Jul 29 - Page 46

Originally posted by: s120

Loved this part. The last bit was beautiful when Asad discusses about his mother and sister with her. That was so heartfelt and sweet. 😊

Originally posted by: etmartian

unbelievable

how do you do it

i had read 7 of your chapters

earlier

and

had made a mental note to follow it.

but then i lost track

and now when i was checking the forum i just opened your ff

(i read each and every ff and therefore i forget titles )

when i opened and saw the first lines i at once recognized and again read the remaining chapters .

i was spellbound... mesmerized..

how can you write so well

That was amazing as always. I really like your writing style, the story and character development. Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: giee

Bheegi di...you are an awesome writer 👏

n trust me this is my FAVORITE FF on asya uptil now
I just love each n every word of it
every weekend I wait for you to update 😃

You know how to keep your readers asking for more n more
I loved how restless he was,when he couldnt find her
I loved how heartbroken she was when she thought he was using her for money
I loved how went after her
I loved how he cupped her face...n asked her if she trusts him
I loved how she asked him about his family

IN SHORT I LOVED ALL OF IT ❤️




Bheegi di update soon 😃

Wooow di wat an update

and thats why you've always been my favourite writer since KYPH time xD You are amazing yaar!!! you write in such a beautiful way that you just get lost in the story itself!! The part was AWSOME!! I totaly loved how Zoya felt betrayed and how Asad made her believe that he doesn't want to ' sell " her for money. The last bit was just AWWW!! I nearly had tears in my eyes T____T!! poor kids!!! I hope to see them getting closer xD
Hats Off to you seriously *clapping*
Continue soon,
Love,LAiba

Wonderful part dear. Perfect. Zoya , zoya zoya.. She is such a bewakoof.. I mean she is so impulsive.. Thank god she has Asad for her in her life. They are again together. Loved it. Do continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

sangeeta ur an ace writer, love every update u give us!👏

the last part was so emotional!

Originally posted by: Noe123

I would say the best chapter so far in this FF.

He relented and nodded his head, 'let's make it clear right now Ms Farooqui. If there is only one bed, you will sleep in the bathtub, alright?"

I love this Asad 😆. Not that I do not appreciate chivalry, but if a woman is all strong and independent, she better share some burdens.

Finally, they have reached an understanding and even formed a fragile bond.

The scene on the beach was beautiful. Lashing rain and turbulent sea reflecting the emotions of our leads. You are great at setting moods for scenes.

sweet update...zoya is so impulsive...