FAASLE: Fan fic AsYa Part 19 pg 141 Jul 29 - Page 45

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

Haha careless zoya so cute update

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giee

@giee

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#442

Bheegi di...you are an awesome writer 👏

n trust me this is my FAVORITE FF on asya uptil now
I just love each n every word of it
every weekend I wait for you to update 😃

You know how to keep your readers asking for more n more
I loved how restless he was,when he couldnt find her
I loved how heartbroken she was when she thought he was using her for money
I loved how went after her
I loved how he cupped her face...n asked her if she trusts him
I loved how she asked him about his family

IN SHORT I LOVED ALL OF IT ❤️

Bheegi di update soon 😃

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karishma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

sangeeta ur an ace writer, love every update u give us!👏

the last part was so emotional!

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

I would say the best chapter so far in this FF.

He relented and nodded his head, 'let's make it clear right now Ms Farooqui. If there is only one bed, you will sleep in the bathtub, alright?"

I love this Asad 😆. Not that I do not appreciate chivalry, but if a woman is all strong and independent, she better share some burdens.

Finally, they have reached an understanding and even formed a fragile bond.

The scene on the beach was beautiful. Lashing rain and turbulent sea reflecting the emotions of our leads. You are great at setting moods for scenes.

Edited by Noe123 - 11 years ago

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: -DavneetKaur-
NICE update di...the emotional bonding shared by asad and zoya here was awesome...they both are unknowingly getting attached to each other..hmm lets c what happens next

Thanks Davneet. Yeah, they have a long way to go before the Faasle are conquered 😉

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: KBfanNo1
You are an amazing writer... i went and read all ur previous FFs... The bet, turtleneck girl.. etc.. they are awesome..

Pls contd soon.. we are waiting

Thanks for reading my old ffs. I wish I could re write them for AsYa one day...u are sweet 😊 the KYPH ones a bit melodramatic😆

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: Jassieg
Very beautifully written. Another night in a hotel...wow! Loved the way zoya trusted Asad. This story is simply amazing..I m always waiting for u to update this ff.

Thanks for the pm.😛

Thanks jassie. Yeah, the dynamics have certainly changed from one hotel room to another.

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: NVBGKY
Oh what a wonderful wonderful update... I'm so glad that Asad was able to clear up the misunderstanding about the reward, and Zoya is so sweet and naive that she believed him right away.
The last little bit about Asad family life was very well done, as always it's a treat to read your writing. Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for the PM.

Zoya knew she had acted impulsively and whenever she sees Asad, she gets a sense of confidence that he will take care of everything.

Yeah, there will be a lot of emotional connection as the story progresses. 😊

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bheegi

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Sangeeta Dii, i want an update now, i cant stay hanging like this. such a feel good update! 🤗

Hey ankie. Maybe weekend par agar time mila tho

Btw, I liked your post yesterday...loved the way you analyzed the current track.

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..
beautiful update di!!!
this ff has a realistic touch that the show lacks sometimes 😆
plz plz continue soon...can't wait for the next part now...

Thanks vidhi. We fans are always critical about things in the show, so have to make sure we don't make the same errors while writing our own stories. 😃

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