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bheegi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: hsvs
Great update, Sangeeta! Now want to know what happens next...

So finally they start connecting on the emotional level. Zoya is very immature - but yes, she will mature by the end of the story. thats her growth curve this story. And as for Asad, he is more likeable than the one in the serial!

Thanks Harini. Yes, you are right about the characters in this story. Asad is def more balanced here

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-DavneetKaur-

@-DavneetKaur-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

NICE update di...the emotional bonding shared by asad and zoya here was awesome...they both are unknowingly getting attached to each other..hmm lets c what happens next

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KBfanNo1

@KBfanNo1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

You are an amazing writer... i went and read all ur previous FFs... The bet, turtleneck girl.. etc.. they are awesome..

Pls contd soon.. we are waiting

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

Very beautifully written. Another night in a hotel...wow! Loved the way zoya trusted Asad. This story is simply amazing..I m always waiting for u to update this ff.

Thanks for the pm.😛

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Nila

@NVBGKY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Oh what a wonderful wonderful update... I'm so glad that Asad was able to clear up the misunderstanding about the reward, and Zoya is so sweet and naive that she believed him right away.

The last little bit about Asad family life was very well done, as always it's a treat to read your writing. Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for the PM.

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Sangeeta Dii, i want an update now, i cant stay hanging like this. such a feel good update! 🤗

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..vidhi..

@..vidhi..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#437

beautiful update di!!!

this ff has a realistic touch that the show lacks sometimes 😆

plz plz continue soon...can't wait for the next part now...

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Livingfree

@Livingfree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Loved this part. The last bit was beautiful when Asad discusses about his mother and sister with her. That was so heartfelt and sweet. 😊

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Ranee Bhattacharya

@raneeb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#439

Fantastic as usual Bheegi! Thanx

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etmartian

@etmartian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#440

unbelievable

how do you do it

i had read 7 of your chapters

earlier

and

had made a mental note to follow it.

but then i lost track

and now when i was checking the forum i just opened your ff

(i read each and every ff and therefore i forget titles )

when i opened and saw the first lines i at once recognized and again read the remaining chapters .

i was spellbound... mesmerized..

how can you write so well

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